Poem"Kanch ki Gudiya"

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hello Friends

i wrote poem so thought to sharing it with you all..i hope you will understand emotions,feelings of a girl which i want to say you through my Poem

before i write poems..i want to describe you some meaning of words as my Poem is in Urdu

Kanch means..Mirror

Guriya means...Doll

Alhar mutiyar...A young beautiful girl

"Kanch Ki Gudiya"

Choti si woh nazuk si

ik Alhar si mutiyar thi woh

khilte hue phoolon ki tarha

taroon ki chamak

aur hoonton ki muskaan thi woh

kehte the sab woh"Pagal"hai

phir

kyun us se maan behlate the

woh apne dil ka dard chupa ker

hoonton ko see leti thi

phir chupke chupke ansoo ko Daman main

chupa ker hansti thi

woh khilti thi

mehakti thi

aur phir se murjhati thi

woh lamha lamha har ke bhi

Auron ko jeeta ker jati thi

woh Nazuk thi

Sau toot gaye

Woh bikhar gaye

phir jur na saki

kehte hain sab

Woh

"Kanch Ki Gudiya Thi"

Edited by maria-soniarti - 16 June 2011 at 4:45am

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 1:24am | IP Logged

Really nice! You brought out the emotions very well..

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its really nice..!!

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 2:25am | IP Logged

Aww Very Beautifull Poem Sis Well done !! Thumbs Up

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 2:39am | IP Logged

i really loved it alot... Smile

tczz

loads of love

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 2:52am | IP Logged

Beautiful Mariya Tongue

didnt know that u had so much talent Big smile

keep writing more dear

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 2:52am | IP Logged

awww Maria... it is sooo beautiful...
i love to read poems n u hav presented it soo nicely with all d emotions kept soo tight...
Its sooo lovely yaar... keep it up honey... Big smile

TULI

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 3:45am | IP Logged

beautiful one

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