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Maria.

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 1:16am | IP Logged
hello FriendsHug
 
i wrote poem so thought to sharing it with you all..i hope you will understand emotions,feelings of a girl which i want to say you through my Poem
 
                                
before i write poems..i want to describe you some meaning of words as my Poem is in Urdu
 
Kanch means..Mirror
 
Guriya means...Doll
 
Alhar mutiyar...A young beautiful girl
 
 
"Kanch Ki Gudiya"
 
Choti si woh nazuk si
 
ik Alhar si mutiyar thi woh
 
khilte hue phoolon ki tarha
taroon ki chamak
aur hoonton ki muskaan thi woh
kehte the sab woh"Pagal"hai
phir
kyun us se maan behlate the
woh apne dil ka dard chupa ker
hoonton ko see leti thi
phir chupke chupke ansoo ko Daman main
chupa ker hansti thi
woh khilti thi
mehakti thi
aur phir se murjhati thi
woh lamha lamha har ke bhi
Auron ko jeeta ker jati thi
woh Nazuk thi
Sau toot gaye
Woh bikhar gaye
phir jur na saki
kehte hain sab
Woh
"Kanch Ki Gudiya Thi"


Edited by maria-soniarti - 16 June 2011 at 4:45am

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 1:24am | IP Logged
Really nice! You brought out the emotions very well..

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 1:36am | IP Logged
its really nice..!!

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 2:25am | IP Logged
Aww Very Beautifull Poem Sis Well done !!Thumbs Up

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 2:39am | IP Logged
i really loved it alot...Smile

tczz
loads of love

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 2:52am | IP Logged
Beautiful MariyaTongue
didnt know that u had so much talentBig smile
keep writing more dear

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 2:52am | IP Logged
awww Maria... it is sooo beautiful...
i love to read poems n u hav presented it soo nicely with all d emotions kept soo tight...
Its sooo lovely yaar... keep it up honey... Big smile

TULI

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beautiful oneBig smile

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