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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 3:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayurlover4eva

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sorry i took time to comment but what can I say?
every word in every sentence had my heart hooked. All that pain? to put it into words? thats really something and im telling you, you have a gift. pree yaar this was so amazing, so touching. i dont know what to say about which bits i liked because the truth is i loved all of it. you captured her emotions so well! and everything that really describes how it feels to lose someone so close to you. all her memories and things which remind her of him everywhere. seriously yaar this is one magical OS Heart

Thank you Simran. I'm speechless after reading your comment. Thanks for appreciating my work.

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 3:51pm | IP Logged
OMFG! Sweetheart, this was so freaking amazing, i swear! <3
I've never read such a beautiful OS before, i'm serious! :))
It brought tears to my eyes, seeing sharon in such a character, i'm not reading your FF though, but now i think I'll have to read it man! You are a beautiful writer, you have portrayed the emotions so beautifully<3
Hats off jaan! <3

Loads of love!
Do PM me about any further OS and yeah PM me the Link of your FF now!

-amna-


Edited by amnaM - 15 June 2011 at 4:01pm

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 4:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by amnaM

OMFG! Sweetheart, this was so freaking amazing, i swear! <3
I've never read such a beautiful OS before, i'm serious! :))
It brought tears to my eyes, seeing sharon in such a character, i'm not reading your FF though, but now i think I'll have to read it man! You are a beautiful writer, you have portrayed the emotions so beautifully<3
Hats off jaan! <3

Loads of love!
Do PM me about any further OS and yeah PM me the Link of your FF now!

-amna-

Thanks a lot Amna... Smile

I've PMed you the link.

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 8:48pm | IP Logged
awww that was sooo sad :( but really well written! 

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 9:43pm | IP Logged
Pree u made me cry...CryI mean like I cnt stop myself...u have put in all yr emotions in this OS...plz always PM me I dnt wanna miss even a part of it...y cnt I stop crying???CryCry

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 11:58pm | IP Logged

Pree this is was your best work so far! Freaking beautiful! I think you should continue with Swayam-Sharon OSes, you have a way with their emotions! This part was my favourite!

I wish just once you could read these letters I write to you every year. I want to see your eyes boring down on each word I write, your fingertips tracing the bumps on the paper, and the smile on your lips when you'll look at me after you finish reading, the warmth of your hug when you'll embrace me never to let go.

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 1:48am | IP Logged
 Cry oh my swayam... preee yaar its amazing... n really touching... i almost cried... i hope this never happns coz i cant see my shuweet swayam dead... its really lovely,,, loved it.. thnx for this wonderful post Hug

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 6:37am | IP Logged
Pree!
We already know that you're an awesome writer!
Till now in the Kriyansh FF I had seen the love, fun side of your writing and in that already you're a boss mate! Wink
But this sad/emotional side of your writing is amazing! I mean it's difficult to portray one's feelings through writing and you are one talented writer you know!
And You know you and Rafi should team up more often i mean she has amazing skills of portraying feelings through her VMs and you through your writing!
I loved Rafi's VM and i super-loved this OS Clap

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