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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 4:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayurlover4eva

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sorry i took time to comment but what can I say?
every word in every sentence had my heart hooked. All that pain? to put it into words? thats really something and im telling you, you have a gift. pree yaar this was so amazing, so touching. i dont know what to say about which bits i liked because the truth is i loved all of it. you captured her emotions so well! and everything that really describes how it feels to lose someone so close to you. all her memories and things which remind her of him everywhere. seriously yaar this is one magical OS Heart

Thanks a lot. I don't know if it's a gift or just fluke, but thanks for loving it.
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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 4:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetapple2995

awww that was sooo sad :( but really well written! 

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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 4:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by _sana.Magic_

Pree u made me cry...CryI mean like I cnt stop myself...u have put in all yr emotions in this OS...plz always PM me I dnt wanna miss even a part of it...y cnt I stop crying???CryCry

I'm sorry to have made you cry. Really.
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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 4:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by .Anamika.

Pree this is was your best work so far! Freaking beautiful! I think you should continue with Swayam-Sharon OSes, you have a way with their emotions! This part was my favourite!

I wish just once you could read these letters I write to you every year. I want to see your eyes boring down on each word I write, your fingertips tracing the bumps on the paper, and the smile on your lips when you'll look at me after you finish reading, the warmth of your hug when you'll embrace me never to let go.


Thanks. I hope you've read my other works on SwaRon.
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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 4:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by yummoBB

 Cry oh my swayam... preee yaar its amazing... n really touching... i almost cried... i hope this never happns coz i cant see my shuweet swayam dead... its really lovely,,, loved it.. thnx for this wonderful post Hug

Thanks Yummo!!

I hope so too. Sorry for making you cry.
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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 4:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Roshni.x

Pree!
We already know that you're an awesome writer!
Till now in the Kriyansh FF I had seen the love, fun side of your writing and in that already you're a boss mate! Wink
But this sad/emotional side of your writing is amazing! I mean it's difficult to portray one's feelings through writing and you are one talented writer you know!
And You know you and Rafi should team up more often i mean she has amazing skills of portraying feelings through her VMs and you through your writing!
I loved Rafi's VM and i super-loved this OS Clap


Thanks for the compliments. Mean a lot to me.

It's sad me and Raf didn't team up much... I wish I could do it again.
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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 4:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by upeka

I'm speechlessThumbs Up
you are a amazing writerClap
this  really touched  my heart Heartyou  explained well, how it feels to lose someone so close to usCry  honestly  i loved itSmile


Thanks.

I don't know how it is to lose someone so close. I don't want to either. If this is even an ounce of it, it's still hurtful.
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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 4:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tabzy

omg.. i luuuvvv itt.. d way u wrote is jus beautiful... ur an awessoommee writer!!...

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