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Ek Chutki Jagya ka Sindoor !!!(My Poem )

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 2:16pm | IP Logged

Ek chutki Jagya ka Sindoor
aise asar kiya
ki lagaate he Dimaag ki band bajgaya !!

Tapak tapak kar padi balikaaye
Lagaane iske naam ka sindoor
Kya pata tha inko jaadu ka asar!!

Ek thi Gaon ki Chori
Dhoosri shehar ki Dactaraain
DOnon pe tha asar Same to same !!

Pehle Pehle Khoob hasaya
Pyar kiya same to same
Ghumaane leke gaya Mumbai fort Same to same !!

Jaise hi Beendni Banaake Haveli laaya
Donon ke Dimaag mein ek hee Sapna aaya
Samosa,Tamatar Chutney, Adrak chai !!

Dheere dheere asar aisa nikhla
Donon ke ankhon se Ganga Jamuna Nikhla !!

Ek thi Padi Likhi Doosri Gawar
Par Deekho na iss sindoor ka Consistency
Donon par Result Ek hi Nikhla !!

Ek ka Asar chootgaya sindoor ka
Ab doosra chaalu rakhi hai Sapnon ka
Dekh the hain Ki aage Kya hoga

Lajawwab  hai sindoor Jagya ka !!

Itni consistent results aaj kal ki tablets/ medicines mein bhi nahin hoga
ki jo bhi khaaye us pe asar ek hi Hoga !!


***** Its my small effortSmile ... Sorry if it has hasn't come out well
My Acknowledgements to many posts here from my Forum Freinds which inspired me to write this.
Ideas taken by these posts Smile

 



Edited by deep153134 - 15 June 2011 at 9:17pm

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Well try deep Clap Clap Clap
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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
funny!
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BAHAHAHAHAh man I love BV Forum now its aweeesomee

Wow Ankit BHai you did jadooo ...

Tera jadoo chal gaya..

all the deep deep talents umad umad ker aa rahi hai
vah ji vah

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Awesome job! Loved it Clap
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hahahahaha lolol so fiunny!!! awesome job!!
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Lol really nice
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Good Job Deep! LOLYou should write some more poems on the BV issuesSmile 

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