Dil Se Dosti (AR version) - Page 4

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Rapunzzel


hey nandini congrats for the new ff
loved CS and the part 1
thanks for pm
cont soon

thanx sooo much dear
u r most welcum
will update soon
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by gupta.aditi20


hey nice start...

it waz totally role reversal of characters...

it waz so nice to read...

n i am sure the car on the wrong side waz of ridz...


thanx sooo much 
yup thought of experimenting in a new way
so just changed the roles 😃
lets c whose car it is 😉

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by AR-kash


nice start
would love to read more


thanx sooo much

will update soon
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by princess14


loved the start!! looking really forward to reading this FF!! Do PM me when you update next!

thanx sooo much 
will surely pm u

Posted: 12 years ago
hai. amazing one👏. luvd it totally. all the characters are totally new.atul and arroogant?😕.plzzz cont soon. waiting for ar"s frst meet
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by frumaan


hai. amazing one👏. luvd it totally. all the characters are totally new.atul and arroogant?😕.plzzz cont soon. waiting for ar"s frst meet

thanx sooo much dear 😳
yup thought of experimenting 😉
will continue soon.

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by frumaan


hai. amazing one👏. luvd it totally. all the characters are totally new.atul and arroogant?😕.plzzz cont soon. waiting for ar"s frst meet

thanx sooo much dear 😳
yup thought of experimenting 😉
will continue soon.
Posted: 12 years ago
wow! amazing start!
AR in different avatar!
waiting eagerly 4 their meeting...
cont soon
thnx 4 pm
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by hotKaJen


wow! amazing start!
AR in different avatar!
waiting eagerly 4 their meeting...
cont soon
thnx 4 pm

Thanx sooo much
 ya thought of changing AR's roles
will be updating soon.
u r most welcum.
Posted: 12 years ago

The front door of the black car opened and a young man stepped out from the driver's seat. He was dressed in a light blue denim jeans and a round neck black t-shirt. He took off his black sunglasses in anger. His handsome face was burning with anger. A slow breeze gently ruffled his jet black hair.

He shouted addressing the driver of the blue car: "Oye andhe ho kya? Dikhayi nehi deta kaha ja rahe ho? Driving aati nehi hain toh car ghar se bahar kyun nikala? Marne ka shaukh hain kya?"

The blue car had already stopped and now pushing the front door open, the person inside the car came out. She stepped out of the car. She's a very beautiful girl clad in gorgeous blue dress and wearing high heels. She's wearing a bracelet in which the letter 'R' is engraved. As she came out of the car a gentle breeze passed by making her hair flow backwards.

The girl: "What did you say? Main andhi hu? How dare you? Mujhe acche se dikhayi deta hain ki main kaha ja rahi hu aur main acche se janti hu ki main kya kar rahi hu. Got it? Mujhe kuch bhi sikhane ki bhool se bhi koshish mat karna."

The boy: "Ya sure, mujhe saaf saaf dikh raha hain ki aaj se pehle kisine bhi tumhe kuch sikhane ki koshish bhi nehi ki hogi jaise baat karne ka dhang ya fir maafi mangne ka tarika jab galti apni ho. Chinta mat kariye Ma'm, jo kisine kabhi karne ka socha bhi nehi wo karne ke mood mein main abhi hargeez nehi hu kyunki main bekar mein waqt barbaad karna nehi chahta aur tumhe kuch sikhane ya samjhane ki koshish karna matlab waqt aur energy ko bekar hi barbaad karna."

 

The girl (now fuming with anger): "Kya kaha tumne? Mujhe kuch sikhana ya samjhana matlab waqt ki barbaadi? Tumhari himmat kasi hui mujhe yeh kehne ki? Ho kaun tum? Kahi ke raja maharaj ho ya saadhu sant jo mujhe lecture dene aa gaye."

The boy: " Ji nehi main ek aam insaan hu par sach muh par hi bolta hu. Tumhare dimag mein akar itni bhari pari hain ki use hatake koi bhi aur baat toh ghusne se rahi. Ek toh galti ki upar se galti manne ke badle mujhi pe charhi ja rahi hain. nakchari billi kahin ki."

Girl: "Mere dimag mein akar bhari pari hain? Aur tum kya ho? Ek no. ke kharush ho, aur' aur'. nimchara ho. Muhjala pipa. Aur meri galti kaise hui? Galti tumhari thi, tum mere raste mein aaye. Toh fir main tumse maafi kyun mangu?"

Boy (taken aback at this sudden and baseless accusation): "Meri galti? Aur meri galti kaise hui? Galat tarike se  car  tum drive kar rahi thi, galat direction se tum aayi, toh galti meri kaise ho gayi? "

Girl: "Sab tumhari galti hain. Tum mere raaste mein aaye. Warna toh main nikal jaati. Isliye kasoor tumahra hain mera nehi. Aur fir tum aur politeness toh ek dusre se crosso dur ho aur tum keh rahe the ki mujhe baat karne ka dhang nehi pata. Kya baat hain wah!"

Boy: "Oh God! What utter nonsense! Tumse baat karna bhi waqt ki barbaadi hain."

Girl: "Jaise ke main mari ja rahi thi tumse baat karne ke liye. Mujhe sach mein yaad"

Boy: "Accha ho agar aisa hi ho, matlab tum sach mein mar jao."

Girl: "Agar main marungi toh tumhein saath lekar marungi. Pehle tumhara khoon karungi uske baad."

The boy was by now fuming with anger but as he was about to say retort a sudden beep from his cell phone attracted his attention. He hastily took out his mobile and was utterly shocked to see the time. It was just 10 min. to 11.

Boy: "oh no! sirf 10 min reh gaye. Mujhe abhi bhagna hoga warna main late ho jaunga."

Girl (Seeing her watch): "Oh no!"

And she too sprinted after the boy who had already reached the door to the main building and soon they both dissapeared behind the door.

(Inside Sanjeevani)

The conference hall was beautifully decorated with flowers and leaving back its monotonous professional look, for a change, it had the apt appearance of a place to welcome the newcomers who were going to become a part of Sanjeevani.

The hall consisted of a dias situated on a high platform. In front of the high stage there were rows of chairs on the floor of the hall. On the dias, the board of directors of Sanjeevani including Dr. Shashank Gupta, Dr. Subhankar and Dr. keerti. Other senior doctors had taken their seats in the rows below the dias.

Now its 3 min to 11. Each and every person was waiting for another grand welcome of the new interns. Anjali,Muskaan, Abhimanyu,Nikita, Atul and Rahul were already there. Anjali and Muskaan had occupied the first seat of the row which was for the interns. Abhimanyu and Nikita had occupied the 2nd and Atul and rahul the 3rd seats respectively. At the moment entered the boy and girl who had been fighting in the parking zone in a great haste and advanced towards the seats. They sat in the 4th  and 5th  seats respectively. The boy turned back and glared at the girl who glared back at him.

However, before they could start on each other again, their attention was caught by the calm yet imposing voice of Dr. Shashank Gupta and both of them, like the rest, turn to look at him.

Dr. Shashank Gupta: "A very good morning to all. Jaisa ki aap sabko pata hain aaj ek bahut hi khaas din hain Sanjeevani aur hum sab ke liye. Aaj hum swagat karne ja rahe hain aath naye interns ke, is desh ke aath best mefical students jo ab Sanjeevani ka hissa banne ja rahe hain. Unke bhabhisya ke liye meri subhkamnaye unke saath hain aur ab main saare interns ko stage pe bulana chahunga t5aki wo apne introduction de sake."

All the interns got up from their seats one by one and with hearts full of hope and happiness for a glorious future, they advanced towards the dias through rounds of applause from the senior doctors, nurses and the board of directors. One by one they started mounting the steps leading to the dias. The boy was in front of the girl and as he was about to climb the first step, someone stamped hard in his foot. Wincing in pain, as he turned he saw the girl standing there.

Boy: "ouch! Yeh kya tha?"

Girl (smirking naughtily): " Tumhe apne raaste se hatane ka raasta."

Saying this she crossed him and started climbing the steps without glancing back for even once.

Boy: " Tum'''.main tumhe chorunga nehi."

And then muttering under his breadth and wincing in pain, he climbed the steps, limping slightly.

All the 8 interns stand in 2 small rows ' 4 at each row.

Unfortunately, the boy and the girl stood side by side. Both looked dagger at each other and then turned away to look forth.

Dr. Shashank: Hello doctors. 

Interns (2gether): "Hello sir."

Dr. Shashank: " It's a great pleasure meeting u all. Aaj se ek safar suru hota hain, dedication  aur hard labour ka, jaha apki knowledge aur skill ek jindagi bacha sakti lekin apki ek choti si bhool bhi ek jindagi khatam kar bhi sakti hain. Aasha hain aap log shikayatn ka mauka ehi denge mujhe. All the best for ur future."

Interns: "Thank you sir."

Now Dr. Shashank turned to DR. Subhankar: "Dr. Subhankar if you please."

DR. Subhankar got up from his chair with a cute smile: "Sure Sir"

Subhankar came forward and took charge of the mike while DR. Shashank retreated and settled back in his chair.

Subhankar (in his usual casual tone): " Hi docs, welcome to Sanjeevani."

Interns: "Thank you sir."

Subhankar: "come on now. Itna formal hone ki koi jarurat nehi hain, kamsekam mere saath toh hargeez nehi. Aap log mujhe DR. Subhankar ya DR. Basu keh sakte hain. But don't try 2 call me DR. Subhankar Basu coz that'll kill half of your energy which you very much need to save for your drudg''(Keerti clears her throat meaningfully) I mean your internship."His cool and casual tone brings a great relief to the interns who have been nervous till now and also brings a warm smile on their faces.

Subhankar (smiling back): "Yeh hui na baat. Main kaafi bakbak kar chuka hu. Ab bolne ki baari aap sabki hain. So come on and introduce yourself."

Shashank whispered to Keerti: "He's always the best in making one feel at home."

Keerti smiled sweetly and nodded affirmatively.

One by one all the 6 interns introduced themselves. As the introduction was going on the boy was engrossed in doing something without catching the attention of the girl. As he had finished a wicked smile crossed his lips and he moved at a little distance and stood there with an innocent look. Now it was his turn to introduce himself. He advanced towards the mike.

The boy (in a calm and composed tone): "Hello everyone. I'm Dr.Armaan. Sabse pehle main shukriya ada karna chahunga Sanjeevani board of directors ko mujhe is desh ki sabse behtar hospital ka hissa banne ka mauka dene ke liye. Main apni taraf se puri koshish karunga unke emmidon par kare utarne ka (The girl rolls her eyes). Aur ab main pehle se hi apne senior doctors ka shukriya ada karta hu jo humein is safar mein sahi raasta dikhane ja rahe hain. Thank you."

The girl said 2 Muskaan who was now standing next to her: "Lagta hain peechle 3-4 mahine se yaad kar raha tha yeh speech aur aaj aake ugal diya." (And both the girls giggled)

Now it was the girl's turn to introduce herself, but as she was about to move forth she shrieked: "ouch!!" 


Precap : Some more fights and introduction between the gang. Beginning of a new journey of love and friendship. 

Edited by sweetshera - 12 years ago

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