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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
Hey everyone, Tina here Smile

I'm a massive fan of Arnav and Khushi - like all of you LOLand have had an idea for an FF in my mind for a while. My story will be based on their characters but and may bear some resembalance to IPKKND but will follow a very different path. I'm including a little prologue to try and garner how much interest there will be in my story so please leave me your comments so I can see whether or not I should continue. Smile


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It was a dark night - a monsoon night actually, one of Khushi's favourites. She loved the rain - its sound, its smell, its feeling - everything! She had just been running some errands for Umma and was walking the short distance back from the market to her home. She had forgot her umbrella on purpose as she loved getting drenched in the wonderful rain so she was completely soaked. She had on her favourite salwar-kameez - bright red with green and gold embroidery which complemented the fair tone of her skin extremely well. Her long hair was tied in her trademark plait. Her wrists were adorned with bangles, small 'jhumkas' dancing in her ears, payals humming along to the rain lay on her ankles and a small bindi added immense grace to her face. A small smile was playing on her lips and Khushi was happy, content. Everything was perfect.

Little did she know - that small smile would be the last time Khushi would feel happiness for a very long time.
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So...how was it guys?! Please review and comment and let me know if you would like me to continue - please - I really want to write this story for all of you! Embarrassed

Love always


Tina Big smile

 

 
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Edited by queenofhearts01 - 08 January 2012 at 1:25pm

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 3:14pm | IP Logged

Its really nicely written and the whole intro has gotten me interested especially the last line of khushi being happy...

Dont tell that our Lard Governer is going to enter... but pls do continue
really like the concept :)
Luv
Vishy

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 0711rokxoxo


Its really nicely written and the whole intro has gotten me interestedespecially the last line of khushi being happy...


Dont tell that our Lard Governer is going to enter... but pls do continue

really like the concept :)

Luv

Vishy

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hey Vishy!


you're my first reviewer! so a massive thank you Hug


i was getting a little worried as I had view but no comments :( so you made my day :)


haha Lard Governer - liking the name LOL


even if youre my only reader I will defo continue :D


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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 4:13pm | IP Logged
1st viewer tina???
u pmed me before posting it LOL
joke

great start
i want more to get hooked to it so that i dont go to my current forum Saathiya 
great update soon 

Big smile



Edited by ayesha_78 - 13 June 2011 at 4:13pm

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 4:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ayesha_78

1st viewer tina???
u pmed me before posting it LOL
joke

great start
i want more to get hooked to it so that i dont go to my current forum Saathiya
great update soon

Big smile




Haha Ayesha no I posted it first then thought it would be a good idea to pm but you can be my joint 1st reader too - how's that? :P

Will defo update later on today - maybe you'll even be lucky enough to see the entry of our Angry Young Man Day Dreaming

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 6:09pm | IP Logged
Hi Tina!!
Zeba here.
I loved the prologue. Its certainly got me hooked. The descriptions you've used are great and you've left it on a cliffhanger!!!!
I really hope you continue this FF, it looks very promising.
All the best hun!!
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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by queenofhearts01

Originally posted by 0711rokxoxo


Its really nicely written and the whole intro has gotten me interestedespecially the last line of khushi being happy...


Dont tell that our Lard Governer is going to enter... but pls do continue

really like the concept :)

Luv

Vishy

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hey Vishy!


you're my first reviewer! so a massive thank you Hug


i was getting a little worried as I had view but no comments :( so you made my day :)


haha Lard Governer - liking the name LOL


even if youre my only reader I will defo continue :D
 
 
Hug Aww your a sweetheartt!!
No worries yaar.. It just I am a fan of reading things especially ffs Embarrassed
Also I am so glad someones starting a ff around here Approve about time...
And dont worry...theres alot of pple reading they prbbly dont want to reply or
a bit to lazy...u knw na how mondays kinda get Sleepy
hehe... thts khushi's name for the angry young man WinkLOL
But now I dont think i m your only reader...we got ayesha di and zeeba WinkEmbarrassed
Keep writing..even if i m the only one to review (i knw tht wont happen) Hug

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 6:06am | IP Logged
Hii!
The proglogue's very intriguing...esp. the last line...
I loved how you described Khushi..so simple, so happy...so sweet <3
Do continue...
 

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