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FANTASY

CHAPTER-20

 

Everyone gathered around the mandaap, as Vicky and Pari finally started the sacred rounds of their wedding. Daadima had tears of happiness in her eyes, while Geet and Maan looked immensely happy. Geet looked at Maan who winked at her, and she blushed. She stole the night yet again, in her elegant lavender saree, a very simple necklace and outcurled hair, while Maan looked dashing in his off-white shervaani.

As the wedding neared its end, with Vicky and Pari seeking the blessings of Daadima, the newly-wed couple were quickly ushered to their bedroom, where they changed and got ready for their honeymoon flight. It was a trip for two to Venice, wedding gift from Maan and Geet and Maan had chosen the wedding night itself, so that the couple were able to begin their new lives with beautiful memories in the very romantic city on water, Venice. As they left for the airport, with everyone cheering and clapping for them, Daadima called Maan and Geet to her room.

" Bete, Bhagwaan ki kripa se Vicky ki shaadi bohut acchi tarah se hogayi.. Aur Geet, thank you so much.. aapne bohut kaam kiya hai iss shaadi ko kamyab banana keliye!!"

" Daadima, aap yeh kaisi baat kar rahi hain. Vicky toh mere chote bhai jaisa hai, aapni chote bhai ki shaadi keliye itna karna toh mera farz hai!!" Geet said, sitting down on the bed and holding Daadima's hand.

" Bete, hum kal Vishnu-Devi jana chahte hain. Iss parivaar ki khushi aur such ki prathna karne!!"

" Ha Daadima aapki tickets saari book hai, aur saare arrangements bhi ho chuke hai. Kal subha 10 baje aapko nikal na hain." Maan said.

 

The next morning, Maan, Geet, Adi, Pinky, Tasha, Sasha, Meera and Yash came to see off Savitri Devi. She hugged everyone, and gave them her blessings. Before leaving, she held Maan's hand and said, " Bete, Geet ka khayal rakhiyega. Humare aane tak woh aapki zimmevaari hai."

" Aur Geet, aap bhi Maan ka khayal rakhna!!"

" Ji Daadima"

" Ji Daadima"

Daadima left, and the staff also got ready to leave for office. Meera came to Geet and whispered, " Geet, mujhe tumse kuch kaam hain. Mujhe Yash ke liye anniversary present lena hain. Tum mere saath shopping ke liye chalo na!!"

" Ha thik hai… Waise bhi ghar betkar kya karungi. Maan toh abhi pffice chale jayenge, aur Daadima bhi nahin hain. Main Maan ko kehkar aati hoon, tum yahi rehna okay?"

Geet entered her room, and saw Maan getting ready for office. He smiled warmly, seeing her and she said, "Maan, mujhe Meera ke saath shopping ke liye jana hain. Main jaun?"

" Ha Jaan, jao. Isme mujhse poochne ki kya baat hai?"He said, fixing his tie, and coming close to her, kissing her on the forehead.

" Thik hai, toh main chalti hoon, Meera niche wait kar rahi hai. Aap jaldi ghar aa jana.. aur ha.. lunch thik se karlena, okay? Main phone karungi. Bye. Love you." She said, grabbing her purse.

" Ek min. Geet, tum shopping karne jaa rahiho na? Toh yeh lo, jitney paise chahiye, nikaal lo!!"

He took out his wallet from his pocket and handed it to her. Geet stiffened immediately, feeling the very heavy wallet in her hands, and returned it to Maan slowly, saying, " Nahin mujhe aapke… mera matlab, mujhe paise nahin chahiye!!"

He looked at her in surprise, while she stood there with lowered eyes.

" Lekin Geet, kuch toh rakh lo. Agar tumhe kuch pasand aa gaya toh? Waise bhi bohut dino se tumne aapne liye kuch bhi nahin kharida!!" he said, shoving the wallet towards her again.

" Nahin.. mujhe nahin chahiye.. mere paas hai.. mera matlab Meera ko Yash ke liye kuch gift lena hai.. baas, mujhe kuch nahin kharidna hain… main…. Main jatii hoon"She almost ran out of the room, leaving a stunned and bewildered Maan behind.

" Isse kya hogaya? Pehle toh kabhi mana nahin karti thi.." He was still lost in her thoughts,as he opened the dressing table drawer to take out his watch. He saw a chain lying there, and as he picked it up, he realized it was the waistchain he had given to Geet on the engagement day.

" Yeh yahaan kya kar raha hai? Geet pehenti nahin hain kya? Shayad use pasand nahin aaya… Aaj raat ko puch lunga!!" he thought to himself.

 

It was already afternoon when Maan finished all his work for the day. He sat back in his chair, closing his eyes and immediately thought of Geet. He picked up his cell and called her, but her cell was switched off. He tried the house phone which she picked up.

" Geet, ghar aa gayii tum?"

" Haa.. kab ka… Meera bas abhi abhi gayi hain. We had lunch together and then she left."

"Hmm.. Jaan, tumhara cell kyun off hain? Maine wahaan pe try kiya tha, lekin…"

" Uumm.. woh woh..actually battery low tha, toh shayed off ho gaya…"

Just then Adi came into the cabin, and Maan hung up, saying that he will be leaving the office in 15 mins. " Ssiirrr… yeh kuch bills baaki reh gaye the Vicky sir ki shaadi ke.. Kuch cheques issue karne parenge!! Aapke signatures chahiye.."

" Hmm… main sign karke tumhe bulata hoon…"

" Ji Sir!!". Maan looked at the checks on his table after Adi left, grabbed the pen and started reading and signing them. They were the remaining payments of lighting, catering, parlour bills for the "saalis" of Vicky. Maan stopped as he realized that there were no bills for Geet. No saree, no jewellery, no parlour expenses, none of the checks showed any of her spendings. Maan picked up the phone and asked Adi to come to his cabin.

" Adi, yeh saare checks maine sign kardiye hain. Lekin Geet ke nam ke jo bhi kharche hain, unka hisaab yahaan nahin hain. Woh kab doge mujhe?"

" Geet maam? Lllekinn Sir, these are the last bills which have to be cleared. Aur kkkoiii bills nahin hain."

" Are you sure?"

" Jjjiii Sir.. BBBiillkul…."

"Thik hai tum jao!!"

Maan stood up with a puzzled look on his face. Geet didn't spend a penny on herself for Vicky's wedding. She never bought any new sarees, or jewellery, or make-up, neither did she pay visits to parlours to get ready for the functions. And he had been so busy in all the arrangements that he failed to notice that his wife was wearing old stuff at his brother's wedding. She had still managed to look the best looking female in the room, maybe that's why it didn't occur to him.

" Mujhe Geet se baat karni hogi. I have to talk to her."

 

 

Sasha sighed in relief as she threw her head back on the bed contently. Finally, she had succeeded in planning the Murder of Geet Khurana… the obstacle in her way to Maan. She smirked widely, as she lay in bed going through the layout of her plan again and again, looking for any kind of flaw or mistake!! But it was a full-proof plan.. Nothing could go wrong…

" Parso ka din tumhaari zindagi ka aakhri din hoga Geet… Its time you leave me and my Maan alone!!" she said out loud, laughing hysterically.

 

 

 

 

PRECAP: Tum  mera diya hua kuch nahin chahti na, Geet? Toh ek kaam karo, yeh sindoor mita do, yeh bhi toh tum mere nam ka hi lagati ho na?

He lifted his hands to her forehead, when Geet grasped hold of it and whispered roughly with tears, " Nahin Maan, aisa nahin karte, yeh ab shagun hota hain!!"

 " Zyada se zyada kya hoga Geet, main mar jaunga na? Toh thik hai, wohi sahi. Waise bhi, iss guilt ke saath main jee bhi nahin paaraha hoon!!"


Okay, I know, aap log mujhe joote, chappal sab kuch marna chahte hain for the late update,( I know its almost been 24hrs since the updating status!!Confused)

But, I was caught up in real work, and then there were many power failures, each lasting an hour, so, I, well fell asleep..Embarrassed

Anyways, I AM SORRY!! * Chalo kaan bhi pakar li, baas?*LOL

Thank you everyone, for liking and commenting on the last chapter. I'm about to hit a 100 pages on this thread, and lets hope, its with this update!!Wink

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Love you all

Sarzah


 

 

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geet is not using anything belongs to maansurprise smiley, male smiley, shock smiley, stun smileyesa kiun?? is she still hurt what maan said to her when they foughtscratch smiley, head03 smiley, idea smiley, animated smiley, animation smiley
omg smiley, omg smileySasha planned to kill Geetbully smiley, animated smiley, animate smiley, bully smileyi hate her


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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 11:41am | IP Logged
Lovely update darling..
but precap sounds scary...almost like...sasha's plan will hurt them...
pls scare is enough..but no hurt or torture to our most lovable couple..

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged
amazing update darling but bahut chota tha...sachi...
 
lekin aaj sab maaf...thanks to the dreamworld i am in after watching today's epi

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 11:49am | IP Logged

Chapal tumhe late update ke liye nahin balke uss stupid precap ki waja se pare ge!!!

OMG i really dont like the last few paragraphs...

First of all Sasha is an idiot and i hate her!!

And WTH is wrong with Geet???

Why wont she spend Maan's money

The precap has left me in a bad mood :-(

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 11:50am | IP Logged
lovely and awesome update
precap is scary
cont soon

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 11:55am | IP Logged
awesome update loved it
precap is scary

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