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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 12:03am | IP Logged
hi guys i have got a thought of writing an ff since the day i joined in if and now i am free to write it as these are my holidays
don't throw tomatoes at me if u found any thing wrong in my ff
and as i am very poor in english you will surely find most of my words in hindi

     HERE BY MY FF IS NAMED AS INTEZAAR

LINKS FOR PARTS AND PAGES

PART 1 - PG 1
PART 2A - FLASHBACK -1 PG 2
PART2B-FLASHBACK-2 PG 4
PART3-FLASHBACK-3 PG 5
PART4-BROKENHEART-FLASHBACK 4 PG 8
PART5-VRINDAVAN TRIP RADEV MEETING PG 10
PART6-SILENT LOVE-PG 11
PART7 DEV-DAADI CONVERSATION ON RADHIKA-PG14
PART8 RADEV FIRST CONVO-PG 17
PART9-CHANGED PEROSN-PG18
PART10-"Hi! I am here"-PG 19
PART11-VISHAKA'S TRUTH-PG22 
PART12- MISS U - PG 25
PART13- DEV SURPRISE FOR RADHIKA - PG 28
PART14-RADEVBATTLE-PG30
PART15 - RADEV IN COLLEGE- PG 32
PART16- "KYA TUM DEV SE PYAAR KARTE HO"- PG 35
PART17 - " RADHIKA-AMMAJI ENOUNTER" - PG 35
PART 18- SHOCKS-PG37
PART19-ZINDAGI KA KHEL-PG39
PART20- DEAR DEV- PG42
PART21 - DISCOVERED TRUTHS - PG46
Part 22-My family-pg 47
PART 23 - RADHIKA GETTING ALONG WITH HER FAMILY - PG 50
PART 24- ATTATCHED HEARTS - PG 52
PART25-U ARE MY STRENGTH-PG56
PART 26: FIR MIL GAYE- pg 57
PART 27; Bringing up together- pg 59
Part28-Khatam hua radev ki intezaar??-Pg59
Part 29-clouds are clearing-pg63
Part 30 - Her hero always stand for her - pg65
Part 31 Love re returned - Pg 67
Part 32- Clouds are cleared-PG69
Part33-Vishaka gonna see hell. Radhika in full form - pg72
Part 34- Vishaka doing work, A responsible Radhika, Asmi back - Pg 75
Part 35 - Radhika slapping Vishaka - pg 78
PART36- Radev fun, chenna  becomes China - PG80
PART 37 - Kiss and Fun - PG 83
PART 38 - Jorka thappad laga - PG 88

Part 51- Post Mrriage -Pg119
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CHARACTER SKETCH -PG23
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Edited by harianjana - 13 September 2013 at 7:30am

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 12:57am | IP Logged
nice one hari..keep it up...waiting for part 2..

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 1:00am | IP Logged
great start--looking forward to part 2

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 1:07am | IP Logged
PART 1

the scene starts with a early morning clear sky with the birds singing in
in the purohit house.,,,,,,,,

 mr.rajpurohit woke up listening the cute voice of a girl singing aarthi song

and went up to the mandir side

at mandir place,

there was a girl wearing red colour anarkali with dupatta on her head with aarthi thali in her hand and singing the aarthi song(her back was shown to us)

daima, vaishali ,mrinalini,vivek every one stood up there listening to the aarthi joining their hands together and closing their eyes

raj purohith freshened and went there by the time aarthi completed.

the girl turned back and went to rajpurohith giving him aarthi.

it was radhika

rajpurohith:(took aarthi and smiled at her,she touched his feet in order to take his blessings.purohith caressing her) beta aj mujhe maaf kariye kyun ki i woke up late in morning.kal
raat kaam karne mein jyada der huyi aur isliye subah nahi uthpaya

radhika:aisa koi baat bahi hai chacha ji, work comes first than any other.

radhika went to daima to give her aarthi and took her blessings

daima:bhagwan isse duniya ki saari kushiyan dedo

next radhika went to the other family members and gave them aarthi

radhika turned to vaishali and asked her
"maa birju bhaiyya aur shalini kaha hai vo yaha kahi par nahi dekh raha tha"

vaishali:beta aj shalini ka excursion hai na vuse bus tak chodne ke  liye birju gaya

radhika: mai tho bhooli gayi aj vuski excursion hai na

               lekin maa abhi kaha hai vo kahi nahi dekh raha tha
mrinalini:abhi ab tak vuta nahi hai radhika. aaj se vuski vacation holidays hai na,he will wake later

radhika:thik hai didi
               mai vuske pass jakar vuse vutaungi(think radhika is mrinalinis sister)

mrinalini:thik hai

radhika went upstairs to abhi room and tried to wake him up

abhi:massi aj se holidays hai na mujhe sone do

radhika:if u didn't wake up now then u will miss a gift from massi

abhi: GIFT his eyes sparked listening it
         kya hai massi vo gift he just wake up and sat on his bed

radhika: pehle tum fresh karke aao mai tujhe batadungi

abhi:thik hai massi and he went to bath room
 
radhika came down stairs...,
 
mrinalini:kya radhika tere kaam huyi kya

radhika:ha didi apka beta vuth gaya

daima: radhika ajse tujhe bhi holidays hai na tere college par

radhika:hi dadi ma

dadi: tho aj hum kahi bahar chalenge kya mrinalini

mrinalini: thik hai to hum vrindavan jayenge mai aur radhika mama ji se miilna chahte hai

dadi:thik hai
         vaishali raj beta aur vivek beta ko office jane ke baad hum vrindavan chalenge
        office ke kaam katam hone ke baad raj aur vivek bhi waha aayenge

vaishali:thik hai ma

just then phone rings...,

vaishali receives the phone
and shouts that "ma dev ne call kiya"

dadima rushes to phone and take it from vaishali
daima:helo dev beta kaise ho tum?

dev:i am fine dadi mai kal india wapas aa raha hun

dadima:sach
               mujhe toh ab bhi yakin nahi ho raha tha
                toh
              tum seeda vrindavan aa jao
               hum sab log vrindavan apr jane wale hai vacation ke liye

dev:ok my dear darling

dadima:chup raho badmash
                acha mai rakhti hu

(she keeps the phone and says to every one that dev is returning
 every one feels elited except one person
its radhika)

radhika sees at mrinalini but mrinalini is just happy in talking with vaishali and goes to her room

radhika lying on her bed with her dupatta over her head remembering about her past

bas its enough for today
precap:
             radhikas past
...
hey hey guys i know that u were confused why radhika was here and why she is worried about dev nothing is wrong and its a positive character sketch of radev okay guys will be updating soon
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Edited by harianjana - 10 July 2012 at 7:55am

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 1:15am | IP Logged
Drag and drop meyaar superb start...love it me also waiting for your next part...want to know what happened in the past...

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 1:41am | IP Logged
okay its cool that i didn't get any tomatoes till now
i will just wanna give a precap of next episode
precap:
             "mrinalini and radhika are sisters.radhikas dadi was reading some news paper.just then she got a phone from sharada(devs dadi)
rdadi:(lifts phone)hello
d dadi:hello sheetal mai sharada bol rahi hu
r'dadi:ha sharada bolo
d'dadi:mai tum se ek important baat karna chahti hu tum dev aur mrinaini ko bhi kal ghar me rehne ke liye keh do
hum sab ghar wale vaha aa rahe hain
r'dadi:sharada radhika aur mrinalini vuske friend ki shadi par gayi
            aur kal subah vapas ayenge
d'dadi:okay sharada rakhi hu

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 1:52am | IP Logged
hey yaar harianjana do you want tomatoes ha ha ha...Drag and drop me
here is some carrots Drag and drop me just teased
really lovely update yaar coolll love itDrag and drop me

Edited by anu17 - 11 June 2011 at 1:54am

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 3:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anu17

hey yaar harianjana do you want tomatoes ha ha ha...Drag and drop me
here is some carrots Drag and drop me just teased
really lovely update yaar coolll love itDrag and drop me

anu di i don't want tomatoes at all and made my self a bit relief by not getting tomatoes
any way ur carrots are um very tasty i loved eating them

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