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CGM FF: Ehsaas...Kuchh Naya Sa (complete) (Page 95)

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Posted: 18 January 2013 at 3:35am | IP Logged
ekdum thrilling update.poore update ke samaye mera dil dhak dhak kar raha tha.

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Posted: 18 January 2013 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Fab upd aru :D
Aambhik's part was..LOL
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Posted: 18 January 2013 at 10:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ridzzi

oh ho part was too good...awesome...Thumbs Up
ha ambik uloo ka patha...he thought that he will present dhara and tell the lie that he saved her but uski toh sabke saamne googly ho gayi...maza a gaya...LOL
bada aya tha kallu ko punish karne wala...ab apni hi copsi hui maza aya beta ji kiu...?????????????...Tongue
n last scene sabko ek ek karke *jhatke* lag rahe the...Shocked...like this...
1.Shocked
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4.Shocked
n the last which dhara gave was like...5.Shocked
*LAGA LAGA LAGA SHOCK LAGA*...Wink...ROFL.ROFL.ROFL.ROFL.ROFL
but finally they both were back safely...Smile
now let's see in which way these revelation will lead this all characters...
update soon...
luv u...Smile




lol thanks radhika ..yeah even i was laughing imagining everyone's situation there...even i was thinking..ye sab main likh kya rahi hun??LOL

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Posted: 18 January 2013 at 10:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by machinegun

ekdum thrilling update.poore update ke samaye mera dil dhak dhak kar raha tha.


thanks nivi
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Posted: 18 January 2013 at 10:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chand1234

Fab upd aru :D
Aambhik's part was..LOL


thanks riu
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Posted: 18 January 2013 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by FairyDreams

PART-30

Palace of Rajpur

Digvijay entered into the Palace with a rush...listening to the news of his reaching..King and Queen ran to him..

Queen : Putra hamari Dhara ki koi suchna mili??

Digvijay bent his head

King Avisara : putra nirab kyun ho?? kaho Putra hamari putri kahan hai??

Digvijay gave them the piece of Durdhara's dupatta

Digvijay : suchna k naam pr Hindukush se humein keval ye vastrakhand hi prapt hua

Queen started crying vigorously taking the piece.
"Dhara"..
she becomes senseless..King ordered maids to take her in the room

Avisara : ye sab tumhare mitra Chandragupt k karan hua hai...

"Humne to tabhi kaha tha..us tuchha vanvasi ko itna mahatya na do...dekh liya na uska parinaam "

Ambhik comes closer...

Avisara : aap kadachit satya keh rahe hai Gandhar Naresh...

Digvijay didn't say anything..he was not in position of talking...

Ambhik : Chandragupt ka suchna to aaj nhi to kal mil hi jayega..hum sampurn Gandhar sena ko uske sandhan hetu preran kr chuke hai..kintu hum janna chahte hai rajkumari ko haran mein jo Chandragupt k sahayata kiya unke vishay apne kya nirnay liya...

Avisar : vo log Digvijay k viswasbhajan the..aur Digvijay k viswasbhang kiya hai unhone..isi karan unko dand dene ka adhikar bhi yuvraj Digvijay ko hi hai..

Avisar leaves...

Digvijay rushed to the hall where their friends were kept..Ambhik smiled..his plan is going to be successful..he also followed Digvijay..

Digvijay entered into the Hall..everyone stood to see him..

Shashank (eagerly) : Digvijay..Chandragupt aur Durdhara k koi suchna prapt hua??

Digvijay (fuming in anger) : tumhare jihva se hamari Dhara ka naam na lena..nhi to is jihva ko hum khandit kar denge..thik usi taraj jis tarah tumne hamare viswas ko khandit kiya..

Ambhik : dekha Shashank.hamari paksh chorke us vanvasi k paksh lene ka kya phal mila..

Aditya : dekho Ambhik...

Ambhik : Gandhar Naresh kaho..Aditya...tum ab hamare mitra nhi ho..tum hamare ek tuchha sevak k putra ho..

Digvijay (shouting : chup ho jao sab..yahan keval hum kahenge aur tum sab sunoge..
tum sab ne hamare sath chhal kiya..yadi humare sthan pr koi aur hota to abtak tumhe mrityudand de diya hota..kintu hum aisa nhi karenge...kyun k kabhi tum sab humare mitra hua karte the..isi karan vas hum tumhare pran to nhi lenge..kintu tumhe ajeevan k liye aise sthan pr nirvasit karenge jahan se tum kabhi laut na sako

and then he announced

yadi Suryoday k purv humein hamari Dhara na mili to tum sabko Magadh Naresh Dhananand k nikat prerit kiya jayega..

everyone stunned..Ambhik gave an evil smile..

Ambhik : sampurn uchit sidhant hai...Dhananad apne virudh shadyantra karne walo ka kya dasha karte hai tumhare acharya chanakya ne ye to tumhe bhalibhati gyat karwaya honge na??

Digvijay turned to the girls..Maya was crying ..Chitra was trying to console her..Subhadra and Dakshita was sitting silently..

Digvijay : hum chahe jitna bhi kathor kyun na ho nari k asamman nhi kar sakte..isi karan hum tumhe Dhananand k nikat prerit to nhi karenge..kintu ajke paschad tum sab Rajpur mein sadharan dasi k bhati jeevan vyatit karohe...aur Subhadra tum is mahal mein kalse dikhai nhi doge...aur tumhare pita ko bhi hum amatya pad se barkhast karenge

girls didn't say anything...Sukant was about to say something but Subhadra stopped her by gaze..

Ambhik : aur rajkumari Kalyani k liye kya nirnai hai??

Digvijay : vo tumhare shatru putri hai..isi karan unke vishay mein nirnay tum hi loge..

Digvijay leaves...

Ambhik : to ye naya vyavastha pasand aya na mitro??

none felt any need to answer him..so he also left
and then a question arises in his mind

"Rajkumari Kalyani kahan hai??"
Digvijay is good.Ambhik is bad. And the others are so tensed.

The Way of Rajpur

Chandragupta and Durdhara were more surprised to see the soldiers of Gandhar in their capital than they were to see those Greek soldiers in Hindukush..

Chandragupta : Gandhar k sena yahan??kahin yeh Ambhik ka koi shadyantra to nhi??

the soldiers were surprised to see a girl in greek attire with Chandragupta

one soldier : humein to kaha gaya tha Chandragupt k sath rajkumari Durdhara hogi..yeh yavan kanya kaun hai..

another soldier ; kuch bhi ho humein inhe vandi banana hi padega

Durdhra (whispering) : ab kya hoga??inse yudh karte huye to baht samai jayega

Chandragupta (whispering) :  koi shabd na karo..humein inke sath chalna hoga..nhi to Ambhik k shadyantra ka gyan nhi ho payega..

Durdhara : kintu

Chandragupta : sshhh..jo keh raha hun suna karo..

soldiers : chupchap hamare sath chalo...

Chandragupt and Durdhara didn't say anything and followed them..
  the soldiers took them into their place ..in a small house...and closed the door..

Durdhara : Chandragupta ye chal kya raha hai?? kabhi yavan k hatho Vandi ho rahe hai to kabhi Gandhar senao k hathon..hum prasad kabhi pohuch bhi payenge ya nahin..

Chandragupta :ab tumhare bhabi swami ne aisa shadyantra racha to hum keh bhi kya sakte??

Durdhara (shocked) : bhabi swami..tum kiske vishay mein baat kar rahe ho..

Chandragupta : are Digvijay ne kaha tha k Ambhik ne tumhe vivah ka prastav rakha hai aur tumhare pita us pr vichar kar rahe hai..hum bhul gaye the k Digvijay ye baat tumse gopniya rakha tha..karan vo tumhare kundli k dosh k bahane is vivah mein vilamb karwana chahta tha..

Durdhara (fuming in anger) : us deshdrohi se hamare vivah k prastav..!!..hum mar jayenge kintu aisa kadapi nahin hone denge..us Ambhik ka itna duhsahas..aur humare mata-pita is prastav pr charcha bhi kaise kar sakte hai

Durdhara was almost shouting..Chandragupta got tensed..

Chandragupt : acha acha ye krodh prasad pohuch k dikhana..ab shant aho..Gandhar sainik hamare nikat hi hai

Durdhara : kintu tumne unse yudh kyun nahin kiya..hamare rakt uttapt ho rahe hai inse yudh hetu..Bharatvarsh k aise sankat mein ye sare rajya apne aap mein pratiyogita aur  yudh mein vyast hai..

Chandragupt : tumhare vichar dhara acharya chanakya k shiksha se sahmat hai..acharya tumse milke prasanna hote

Durdhara : hum bhi acharya se milke apna jeevan dhanya karna chahte hai..aur avashya hi hamare sakshat honge..

Chandragupt : Durdhara tumhe vishram k atyant avashyakta hai..un yavan se yudh hetu tum atyant shrant ho..ab tumhare liye yudh karna uchit nahin hoga..

Durdhara : kintu

Chandragupt : koi kintu , parantu nahin...kabhi to humare baat bina virodh k mana karo..hum tumhare hit mein keh rahe hai

Durdhara : thik hai jaisa tum chaho..

suddenly they heard a sound..and they got shocked to see that someone is coming out from the corner of the room...Chandragupt charged his sword

"Chandragupt talwar mat chalana hum Kayani hai "

both Chandragupt and Durdhara were astonished..

Chandragupt : Rajkumari Kalyani aap??

Durdhara : Kalyani tum yahan yodha k ves mein??

Kalyani narrated all the story what happened in Palace after Chandragupta and Durdhara went..and then stated Ambhik's plan

Chandragupt : hey iswar humare karan humare mitra itne sankat mein hai ab hum kya kare??

Durdhara : Subhadra ko bhi humare karan kitna sehna pad raha hai..

Kalyani : iswar ka dhanyabad hai k vo gandhar sena tum logoko achetan karke yahan nahin laya...

Chandragupta : unke kathan se pratit hua tha k vo humein balak samajhte hai ..isi karan humein achetan nhi kiya..kintu Rajvaid ko to unhone achetan karke rakha..humein unko inke karagar se mukt karna padega..

Durdhara : kintu Kalyani tum yahan praves kaise kiya??

Kalyani : humare nrityakala mein humein nihshabd chalna bhi shikhaya jatte hai..humne andhkar mein chupke yahan tab pravesh kiya jab sablog tumhe vandi banane ke liye gaye the..keval 2-3 sainik yahan tha..aur humne rajvaid kahan hai us kaksha ka bhi sandhan kar liya.aur phir gandhar senao ko lautte dekh is kaksha mein atmagopan kiya..aur soubhagya se tum dono ko yehin laya gaya.Chandragupt jao rajvaid ko bachao vilamb na karo..hum tumhe us kaksha ka varnana dete hai..

Chandragupt : kintu tum dono kya karoge??

Kalyani : Durdhara tumhe dekhk aisa pratit hote hai k tumdono yavan o se milke a rahe ho..

Durdhara : satya hai..kintu ye kahani hum samayantar mein sunayenge..

Kalyani : nahin hum ye keh rahe hai k tum humare is yodha k poshak ko dharan karo aur humein ye vastra de do..

Chandragupt : kintu is yavan vastra ko dekhtehi Ambhik ko gyat ho jayega yavan nikat hi pohuch chuka hai..yadi vo unse mil jaye to??

Durdhara : koi baat nahin humare nikat apne vastra hai..Helen ne hamari vastra bhi humein is potli mein de diya tha..tum ye vastra le lo..kintu un Gandhar senao ne to humein yavan vastra mein dekh liya tha..yadi vo Ambhik ko kuch kahe to??

Chandragupt : chinta na karo..jo 5 Gandhar sena humein yahan laya vo Ambhik se vet karne k liye apne gyan mein nahin hoga.

he smiled confidently..and then knocked the door and asked for water..as soon as two guards opened the door Chandragupt and Durdhara made them senseless..and Chandragupt wore a guard's dress on his own and tied those soldiers and dragged them towards a dark corner of the roo , discovered by Kalyani...and he leaves

here Durdhara wears the warriors attire on gown..and Kalyani wears Durdhara's princess attire..

Kalyani : Durdhara tum jao..aur dhyan rakhna..Gandhar k patravahak pohuchtahi hoga..tumhe uske Patra Ambhik k nikat pohuchne se rokna hoga

Durdhara : avashya...acha hum chalte hai.. apna dhyan rakhna Kalyani

and she leaves...

Chandragupt at last found the small room which Kalyani told about..a guard was guarding it..Chandragupt asked the guard to take rest for a while..for his Gandher soldier attire the tired guard was convinced and went ..he entered into the room

 and then he felt someone is sleeping in the room..he came nearer to him..and got stunned to see its none other than the old Rajvaid
Chandragupt tried his best to bring him in sense..Cornelia gave him a bag of water..he applied some water on his face..after few times at last the old man came back in sense...

Rajvaid : aahhh..hum kahan hai??tum kaun ho??

Chandragupt : bhai mat kijiye..hum Chandragupt hai

Rajvaid : Chandragupt..woh hum jab Rajpur aa rahe the..to Path mein kisine kaha k uske patn aswastha hai..humse sahayata k bhiksha yachne laga..humne uski baat manke uske sath chalne k liye tayar hogaye..kintu kuch durtak chalne k paschad hum ek nirjan sthan pohuche..kuch aparichit vyakti ne humein gher liya vo sab muh dhake huye the..unmese kisine behons karne k oshodhi ka dhumra humein agrat karwa diya..usi ghran se hum achetan ho gaye...kintu vo kaun the?? aur tum yahan kya kar rahe ho Chandragupta..

Chandragupt : ye hum yahanse bahar jake kahenge ..ab shighra chaliye..

.he brought Rajvaid out of the room..a guard tried to stop him but he heat on his head..thus he 1 by 1 made all the guards senseless..and from the backside of house he came out and got united with Durdhara..they avoided the front side of the house as maximum soldiers were there..but Chandragupta managed to make senseless all the soldiers inside the house who say Durdhara in greek attire...

Rajvaid couldn't recognize Durdhara in warrior's attire but didn't ask anything as he was still in shock..Chandragupta managed to grab a horse from Gandhar soldiers and Durdhara got back her Rangini as horses were staying outside with only 1 guard..

Durdhara : Chandragupt tum Rajvaid ko leke prasad jao..hum us patravahak k pratiksha karte hai..

Chandragupt : nahin hum tumhe akele chodke kahin nahin jayenge..tumhe swastha karke prasad lautana humare dayittwa tha..

Durdhara : tumne apna dayittwa nibhaya hai..dekho ratri samapt hone ko hai..tumhe apne mitrata k daittwa bhi palan karna hoga..hum is yodha k vesh mein unke sammukh nahin ja sakte..jab tum rajvaid ko leke uhan jaoge to sabka dhyan tum pr hoga..hum tab apne mahal jake vastra parivartan kar lenge..

Chandragupt : kintu

Durdhara : kabhi to humare kaha bhi suna karo..jao Chandragupt..apne mitron ko sankat se mukt karo..

Chandragupt (keeping hand on Durdhara's shoulder) : apna khyal rakhna..

Durdhara : nischint raho Chandragupt humein kuch nahin hoga..

Chandragupt leaves with Rajvaid..
Chandragupt - Durdhara- Kalyani part was awesome.

Palace of Rajpur

the eastern sky started being faded..yet there were no trace of Chandragupt and Durdhara..so all the boys were taken towards the ground again...where a big cage was set on a Chariot..

Digvijay : Suryaday mein ab kuch hi kshan baki hai..yadi Chandragupt aur Durdhara samay tak na pohuche to in sab ko is pinjar pr bandh karke Magadh bheja jayega..

Ghanghor : lagta hai hum sabka antim samay a chuka hai

Shashank :humein ab bhi viswas hai Chandragupt ayega

Airavat  : kintu humein sankat mein dalne mein jiska sabse adhik yogdan hai vo Ambhik kahan hai??

Aditya : rajkumari  Kalyani bhi ab tak nahin lauti..kahin vo koi sankat mein na pad jaye..

Girls were standing and crying...Dakshita in painful eyes watching Shashank..she never wants him to get in trouble...

Chitra : Chandragupt laut ao..hamare dil baitha ja rahe hai..

Subhadra : rajkumari kahan ho tum??

the Sun rises..and the boy's hope sets gradually...king Avisar ordered soldiers to put them in cage..Digvijay though announced the punishment but couldn't bear to see his friends got into trouble..so he closed his eyes..

and then only a voice comes...

ruk jao...

the familiar voice turned everyone's eyes to the gate and a breathe of relaxation blew all over the palace...

Chandragupt came down from horse's back...but the relaxation again changed into tension again to see no trace of Durdhara around him..

Chitra : Chandragupta..

she was about to run towards him but Dakshita held her hand..

Dakshita : kuch samay prateksha karo...

Avisara , queen and Digvijay ran towards him...

Digvijay : Chandragupt Dhara kahan hai? kahan hai hamari bhagini?

Maharani : kahan hai hamari putri??

Avisara : yadi tum rajkumari ko le gaye the to ekaki lautne ka sahas kaise kiya??

"Durdhara humare sath hai"

everyone got shocked again to see Ambhik coming with a girl whose dress was undoubtedly of princess Durdhara's but her face was covered with veil..

Ambhik gave a proud smile of satisfaction...

Ambhik : rajkumari Durdhara ko dasyuon k hathon se bachake humne surakshit mahal le aye..

Avisara : Gandhar naresh aapko koti koti dhanyabaad..hum aapke sada avari rahenge..

Shashank : ye Durdhara Ambhik k sath??

Aditya : kintu Chandragupt aisa hasya kyun kar raha hai??

everyone sees Chandragupta is trying to control his laugh...

Digvijay : Dhara..kahan chali gayi thi hamari behna..tu thik to hai..

the veiled girl nodded..

but Digvijay had some doubt..he removed the veil of the girl..and everyone got stunned again..it was Kalyani under the veil

Digvijay and other people confusingly stared at Ambhik...but Ambhik seemed lost his words..

everyone was truely confused..none was getting what was going on here??

Shashank noticed Rajvaid..and goes closer towards him..

Shashank : vaidji humein aapse kuch avashyak baat karna hai..

and he narrated all the things about Sanjivani pushp

Shashank : yahan upasthit vaid mein se Sanjivani pushp k vishay mein kisiko gyat nhi..sab humein mithyavadi samajh rahe hai.

Rajvaid : Maharaj , yuvraj..ye balak Shashank ne sanjivani pushp k vishay mein jo bhi kaha vo satya hai..satya mein aisa pushp hai..

Chandragupt : isi karan hi hum Durdhara ko le gaye the..

Digvijay : yadi ye satya hai to Durdhara kahan hai?? use kahan chod aye ho??
(turning to Ambhik) : aur Ambhik dasyu k hathon se Durdhara ka udhar kiya to phir Durdhara kalyani mein parivartit kyun ho gaye..
koi humein samjhane ka kasht karega ke yahan chal kya raha hai??

Ambhik looked at Kalyani as if he would turn her into ash by gazing..

Kalyani didn't dare to look at him..

Subhadra goes closer to Sukant

Subhadra : tumne to aswast kiya tha k Chandragupt Durdhara ko le ayega..kahan hai Durdhara??

Sukant bent his head down

in the meantime some lady gurds or Pratiharin almost dragged a person in warrior's attire there.

Pratiharin : Maharaj ye yodha rajkumari k mahal mein pravesh karne k chesta kar raha tha..

Chandragupt got shocked..as he knew who the warrior was..but now how can he say where is Durdhara?? because if he says Durdhara's secret will be revealed in front of everyone..

now so many things were happening that all people were really confused..including Avisara and queen..

Digvijay (completely annoyed) : ye rajprasad hai ya natyashala..ho kya raha hai yahan??
(turning to Chandragupt) : hamari sehnshilta ka aur pariksha na lo Chandragupt..kaho k Durdhara kahan hai?? nahin to hum tumhe Magadh samrat Dhananand k nikat preran karne mein vivash ho jayenge..

Chitra : is rajkumari ko hamari Chandragupt ko sankat mein dalke anand a rahe hai kya??

Dakshita : chup bhi karo..Chitra..har samay Rajkumari ko dosh dete rehte ho

Chandragupt looked at the warrior again..but didn't utter a word...

Digvijay waited for a while..but when he didn't get answer he got furious..

Digvijay : Sainiko..Chandragupt ko bhi us pinjar mein dal do apne sathiyon k sath

all the guards surrounded them..Chandragupt could fight but as he was concerned for his friends and the girls safety as Chitra and Maya can't fight so he also didn't try to escape...the soldiers dragged them towards the cage..

and then again a familier voice ranged

"Ruko"!!

everyone again turned to the source..and the last shock was waiting for them..the warrior who was caught in the hands of lady pratiharins uncovered his face..and the face was of none other than but who the whole Rajpur was longing for..

Rajkumari Durdhara...
Hmm...ekei bole Ati Chalaker galai Dori. Ambhik finally trapped by Kalyani. But I am trying to imagine Chandragupt and Durdhara's condition during this whole turbulance. And I loved what Digvijay said yeh Prasad hai ya Natyasala??

Chandradi you are great.
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Posted: 18 January 2013 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
thanks rimi ..actually i was feeling same as DigvijayLOL
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PART-31

Royal Palace

as soon as Durdhara revealed herself everyone forgot to react for a while..the princess who was unconscious in Illness is found in warrior's attire..people were unable to understand what is happening was a mere dream or reality..Chandragupt felt bad as only to help him and his friends Durdhara had to reveal her secret in front of the whole capital..

watching Durdhara at first King Avisara , Maharani and Digvijay forgot everything and ran to her..
Maharani hugged her tightly and started crying


Maharani : meri putri..Iswar ko koti koti Dhanyabaad k tu thik hai

Abhisara (putting hand on Durdhara's head) : Chinta mein to hamare pran nikal raha tha putri..aaj hi hum Vishnu bhagwan k mahayagya bulayenge..

Durdhara : ma , pitashree ap logo ko chinta karne k koi avashyakta nhi..hum sampurn swastha hai

Digvijay (taking her face in palms) : meri Dhara ek pal k liye to laga tha jaise humne tujhe sada k liye kho chuke hai

Durdhara : nhi bhrata..hum aapse dur kabhi nhi ja sakte..

and brother and sister hugged each other...then only king realized Durdhara is in warrior's attire..

Abhisara : putri kintu tum yodha k vesh mein mahal mein pravesh karne k chesta kyun kar rahe the??

Digvijay : aur kya ye satya hai k Chandragupt tumhare rog upchar hetu tumhe Hindukush le gaye the??

Durdhara (bit her lips for a while and determined herself to speak the truth) : bhrata , ma , pitashree aur sampurn rajyavasi k sammukh aj humein ek satya sweekar karni hai..vo satya jo aj tak humne gopniya rakha hai...

and then she narrates the truth of her being warrior princess..all her frustration and pain for being caged in mahal for her sickness and then growing determination within herself to be honored as warrior..all her struggle , her suffering but reaching to the goal, the rescue of Chitra and Chandragupt's knowing her secret , her effort to stop Chandragupt from saying the truth and to fight with him and falling sick..and Chandragupt's redemption and saving her life by keeping his own life in danger and then being confronted with Ambhik's Gandhar soldiers and Kalyani's help to run away..and then her attempt to enter into her room and changing her dress but being caught in hands of lady guards ..
    she only avoided the part of meeting with Greeks as Chandragupta asked her not to say that in public because it will not only create panic but also make Ambhik aware of Greek's presence and he might try to join them..so he didn't utter a word about Greeks...

Durdhara : hum aapne is mityachar ke liye apradhi hai..humein is apradh k liye koi bhi dand sweekar hai..

after knowing all the story everyone's eyes got teary..and heart became full of sympathy and respect and pride for this 12 years old little princess Abhisar , Maharani and Digvijay lost their words to find out the true self of their beloved princess..Subhadra wiped her tears

Dakshita : Rajkumari Durdhara laksha rajkanya mein ek hai

Chitra : han unhi k karan to hum aj surakshit hai

everyone amazed to see Chitra praising Durdhara

Durdhara goes near Chandragupt and looked at his eyes..Chandragupt's eyes were full of pain for her..she held his hand and turned to Digvijay

Durdhara : bhrata Chandragupt aur unke mitra sampurn nirdosh hai..unhone keval hamare prano k raksha hetu apne apko sankat mein dala
(she again looked at Chandragupt) ..yadi aaj Chandragupt na hote to hum jeevit nhi hote..

Kalyani : han aur yahan pohuchne vilamb hona inki bhul nhi Gandhar Naresh k shadyantra the..vo chahte the k Chandragupt nhi Durdhara ko prasad tak wahi pohuchayenge take Gandhar Avisar rajya ko yavan k sahayata karne ke liye aapne paksh mein kar paye...tabhi jab hum Durdhara k vesh mein the to humein inhone satark kiya k yadi humne ye nhi kaha k dasyu o k hathon se Gandha Naresh humari raksha kiya to unke Gandhar Sena Avisar pr akraman kar denge.. yavano ke sahayata se aur Kamboj ko nasht kar denge

Digvijay turned to Ambhik with red eyes..

Digvijay ; Gadhar Naresh hum asha karte hai k aap aur ek muhurt bhi Kamboj pr byatit na karenge..anyatha hum bhul jayenge k aap humare atithi the..

Ambhik : humein bhi yahan rehne k koi icha nhi hai..hum to tumhare aur is abhisaar rajya k shubhakankhshi the..isi karan chahte the k tum Gandhar k bhati yavan k vashyata sweekar kar lo..Sikandar tumhe puraskrit karte...kintu tumne hamare prastav na manke yavan se shatruta mod liya..aab vinash k liye prastut rehna..Sikandar k sena k age nato tumhara Kamboj tik payenge aur na hi (turnig towards Kalyani) Panchnad...

Chandragupt (stepping towards Ambhik) : Bharatvarsh mein deshbhakt nagarik ka astitwa abtak vilupt nhi hua hai..jab tak Bharatmata k ashirbad se  aur acharya Chanakya jaise shikshak janam lete rahenge tab tak tum jaise hazaro deshdrohi bhi humare desh ko videshi shatru k nikat samrpan nhi kar payenge..ab jao nhi to ek Deshdrohi ko dand dene mein humein atyant anand hoga

Ambhik didn't dare to say anything more as he understood that whole situation is against him..he leaves the place giving an angry look to Kalyani

Digvijay comes to Chandragupt with folding hands..

Digvijay : Chandragupt samajh mein nhi ata kis muh se tumse kshama mange..tumne mere bhagni k liye apna pran sankat mein dala aur humne tum pr sandeh kiya??tumhe Dhananad k nikat preran karne ka chinta kiya??hum tumhare mitrata k yogya nhi hai Chandragupt..humein kshama kar do

he tried to touch Chandragupt's feet but Chandragupt held his hands

Chandragupt : kya kar rahe ho mitra..mitra se koi kshama yachna karte hai kya??mitra ko to hriday se lagaya jate hai

he hugged Digvijay tightly

hum jante hai Durdhara tumhare hriday ka ansh hai..tumhare sthan pr koi bhi bhrata aise hi acharan karta..

Digvijay : Chandragupt tum jaise mitra pake hum to dhanya ho gaye..

Chandragupt : humne to keval aapne manavta k dharam nibhaye hai..rajkumari k aswastha k liye hum bhi uttardayi the..yadi hum rajkumari k upchar na kar pate to hum apne aapko kshama nhi kar pate
yadi tumhe prasansha karni hi hai to apni veerangana bhagini ki karo..keval manobal se koi shareerik vadhayen kaise dur kar pate hai rajkumari uske pratyaksh praman hai

Avisar and Maharani hugged Durdhara again..

Avisaar : putri humein tumhare peera k koi avas hi nhi tha..hum to keval tumhare shareerik aswastha ko leke chintit the..tumhare man k vedna se hum anaviggya the..kintu ab tumhe yudhshashtra k shiksha hetu gopiyata rakhne k koi avashyakta nhi hai..

Durdhara : arthat hum ab shashtra shiksha grahan kar sakte hai..

Digvijay : avashya behn..hum to ab tujhe aryavart shreshtha yodha o mein tera naam dekhna chahte hai..

Chandragupt : aur hum chahte hai k acharya Chanakya k akhand Bharat k sapna pura karne mein tum bhi hamare sahyodha banogi..

Durdhara : avashya

everyone shouted Rajkumari Durdhara ki jai ..Veerta ki misaal Chandragupt ki jai..Yuvraj Digvijay ki jai..Maharaj Avisaar ki jai

Chandragupt's friends came closer..

Digvijay (turning to Shashank) : humein kshama kar de Shashank..humne tujhse na jane kya kya keh gaya..kitna apman kiya..jab ke hamari Dhara ki jeevan raksha ki marg tune dikhaya..hum kaise tera dhanyabaad kare

Shashank : Digvijay tune koi anyay nhi kiya..aur Durdhara hamare bhi behn jaisi hai..to na keval ek vaid k haisiyatse apetu ek bhrata k haisiyat se bhi Durdhara ka upchar karna hamare kartavya tha..aur humne apna kartavya nibhaya...

Digvijay hugs Shashanka..and all the friends hugged Chandragupt...Maya also runs to him

Maya : bhrata aap thik ho na..

Chandragupt : han behn
..teri prarthana jo mere sath tha

and he hugs Maya ..then all the friends picked and carried him on their shoulder..

"Chandragupt ki Jai, Chandragupt ki jai"

Sukant (coming to Subhadra) : kyun kaha tha na..Chandragupt Durdhara ko le ayega.
he smiles indicatingly

Subhadra smiles back but felt embarrassed to remember how she was crying keeping head on Sukant's chest..she didn't answer anything and followed Durdhara and king and queen to andar mahal

Chitra : hum to Chandragupt se mil hi nhi paye

Dakshita : to kya hua ab to vo mahal mein hi hai..baad mein mil lena

and everyone enters into Palace

In The Evening

after Chandragupt and Durdhara's return the whole palace as well as capital went into festive mode..Chandragupt was worried whether Durdhara was able to get that letter or not..he also wanted to know about how she was feeling now but in the whole day he didn't get opportunity to meet her..he also was confused why is he still worrying about her..in the evening he was sitting with his friends in Atithigriha..but still he was unmindful..his friends got to know about the greeks from him..so they were discussing about that..

Ghanghor : ye yavan Kamboj k seema tak a pohucha hai..acharya ko to is vishay mein suchit karna hoga..

Airavat : uske avashayakta nhi hoga..acharya is samay panchnad mein hai aur patradwara Chandragupt ko suchit kar chuke hai k vo yavan k kamboj agamn k vishay gyat hai

Sukant : kintu ye yavan itne shighra Avisaar k sima tak pohuch jayenge iske apeksha to nhi kiye honge

Akshay (observing Chandragupt's silence) : Chandragupt tum chup kyun ho? kya tum yavano k vishay mein chinta kar rahe ho??

Chandragupt was about to say something but before that he noticed Shashank and Aditya to enter with tensed faces ..Chandragupt seemed to be waiting only for them..he ran to them

Chandragupt : Shashank tumne osodhi prastut kar liya??

Shashank : han parantu..

Chandragupt : parantu kya..humne tumhe sare avashyak pusp aur lata lakee diya tha na ..kya kuch aur vastu k avashyakta hai.

Shashank : nahin Chandragupt vishay itni saral nhi hai..vo phul tum sangrah karne k paschad ek sampurn divas atit ho chuke the ..isi karan jab vo pusp hum tak pohucha uske kuch gun nast ho chuke the..

Chandragupt : yadi aisa hai to hum punah Hindukush jayenge

Shashank : nahin Chandragupt ab vo pushp punah agami vasant mein hi ayenge..kintu hum aur Rajvaid ne milke oshodhi bana liya..asha karte ye rajkumari k liye upkari sidh hoga

Chandragupt : to tum aise chintit dikhai kyun de rahe ho??

Aditya : karan hum Rajkumari k janam k grahakal r punah vichar kiya..unke jeevan mein ek nhi do sankatkal ka astitwa hai..ek dwadash varsh k ayu mein jo k tumhare karan atit ho gaya..kintu astadash varsh k ayu mein ek aur sankat k astitwa hai..yadi ye sankat atit ho jaye to rajkumari deerghayu labh karegi

Chandragupt (without thinking anything else) : hum Dhara ko kabhi kuch hone nhi denge..

everyone got stunned to hear Chandragupt taking princess's nick name which is taken by only her family members and dearest people..
Chandragupt also felt his reaction was quite unexpected to his friends ..so he left the room..

Aditya : mitron tumlogoko aisa prateet nahin hota jabse Chandragupt Hindukush se pratyabartan kiya kuch parivartit ho gaya hai..

Airavat (with a meaningful smile) : humein ye pratit hote hai k Chandragupt ab balak se purush mein parivartit ho raha hai..

everyone started laughing except Akshay.

Akshay : arthat??

Shshank : hey iswar hum to bismarit ho gaye the k yahan ek aur balak bhi hai jiska parivartan ana abtak sesh hai

everyone continued laughing..

In The Garden

Chandragupt was moving aimlessly..he knew perhaps the next day they are starting for Takshashila..but he doesn't know why he feels he has something left to do..some task is incomplete..he doesn't know what..for some unknown reason he wants to meet Durdhara once..want to talk to her..but what should he talk?? he again says to himself no Durdhara will be fine..but couldn't make his mind understand that..because after six years no garranty that he will meet Durdhara again..how will he save her from upcoming danger??then he will be probably busy in fighting with Dhananand..then??..he realized he can't keep away Durdhara from his mind..the one night changed everything..again and again he reminds the moments when Durdhara was so close to him..she was resting on his shoulder..the touch of her lips is still on his finger.he got thrilled..the unknown feelings occupied whole his mind..all he wants to see Durdhara again..

"Chandragupt"

Chandragupt was so lost in his thoughts that he didn't notice someone's arrival..so he got astonished with the voice..he turned back and found Chitra with some unseen expression on her face..

Chandragupt : Chitra tum yahan??

Chitra : aj pura din tumse baat karne k absar hi prapt nahin hua..to hum tumhe bagicha k disha mein ate dekhk milne chale aye..Chandragupt jante ho jabse tum Hindukush k liye yatra kiya tabse pratyek kshan hum iswar se tumhare suraksha k liye prarthana kar rahe the..

Chandragupt (smiles) : aur inhi prarthana k phal hai k durgam parvat , yavan aur gandhar senao se yudh karke hum aur rajkumari Durdhara surakshit prasad laut aye...

Chitra's smile disappears as soon as Chandragupt takes Durdhara's name..

Chitra : hum baht anandit hai k kal hum Kamboj se prasthan karenge..

her voice is sounded relaxed as she expects to get more time to spend with Chandragupt whom in all these 11 years of age she knew as the only mate of her life.. if they leaves Kamboj..but Chandragupt didn't like the words as she was mentally not prepared for it..so he remained silent
Chitra comes closer and held his hands..

Chitra : Chandragupt humare anand ka koi seema na raha ye sochke k hum ab sada sarvada tumhare sath rahenge..

her voice was indicative...Chandragupt surprisingly looked at her eyes and found its also full of some unknown feelings...but why is he feeling that this expression he is expecting in someone else's eyes??

watching Chandragupt looking at her Chitra blushes as she was unaware of what is going in his mind..she moves more closer to keep head on his chest but before that a lady guard's voice made Chandragupt to move away from her..

Pratiharin : Veer Chandragupt rajkumari aapse sakshat karna chahti hai..vo apne mahal mein aapke liye pratiksha kar rahi hai..

Pratiharin's words seemed pouring honey in Chandragupt's ears..he without uttering any word leaves for Princess's Mahal with Pratiharin
Chitra stood there stunned and hurt..

Princess Durdhara's Mahal

Durdhara was walking around the room out of tension..he got relaxed to see Chandragupt entering with Pratiharin..Pratiharin left after bringing Chandragupt..she ran to him and held his hands

Chandragupt was surprised to see Durdhara called her in room not in garden under room..but he didn't ask any question as he was thrilled with Durdhara's touch on his hand

Durdhara : Chandragupt hum tumhare hi pratiksha kar rahe hai..hum baht chintit hai...

Chandragupt looked at her questioningly

Durdhara showed a rolled cloth which was used then to write letter

Chandragupt : kya yeh wahi patra hai jo acharya Shukdv ne Ambhik ko preran kiya tha??to tumhe vo patravahak mila tha??

Durdhara : han aur yudh karke use murchit bhi karna pada tha..

Chandragupt gave an admiring look to her and started reading the letter..but as soon as he read it his face got darkened with tension..

Chandragupt : hey iswar ye yavan  Pushkalavati aur Kath ko parajit karke bayu k beg mein Kamboj tak pohuch aur Aspaniya upjatiyo ko parast karke Assakaneya upjati k nagri Massaga mein phuch chuka hai..aur ek mahayudh k baad Assakaneya ko vo parast karchuke hai..Assakeya upjati ab Sikandar ka das ban chuka..unke lakshya ab Abhisar hai..aur Shikdev ne Ambhik ko likha hai k vo Abhisar ko parast karne mein Sikandar ko sahayata kare??..Iswar ko dhanyabad k ye patra Ambhik k nikat nhi pohucha..kintu ab Abhisar is sankat k liye apne aapko prastut kaise karega?? chalo hum maharaj ko suchit karte hai..humein ranniti bhi prastut karna hai..Digvijay kahan hai??

Chandragupt was going to leave out of tension but Durdhara stopped him holding hands...

Durdhara : nhi Chandragupt pitashree ko ye sambad na do..bhrata ki baran hai..

Chandragupt (shocked) : Digvijay?? parantu kyun??

Durdhara : Assakeya upjati se Abhisar ka sambandh baht jatil hai Chandragupt..Abhisar Kamboj ka ekmatra rajtantrik rajya hai..isi karan pitashree sampurn Kamboj k raja mane jate hai..kintu shaktishali Assakeya upjati pitashree ko apne raja sweekar nhi karte..isi karan pitashree aur Assakeya upjati k pradhan mein manomalinya ho chuke hai..

Chandragupt : kintu is vishay k sath Maharaj ko yavan k agaman k suchna na dene ka sambandh kya hai??

Durdhara : bhrata atyant dukhi aur chintit hai Shreemati k liye..

Chandragupt : Shreemati??

Durdhara : han Assakeya upjati pradhan k kanya Shreemati..bhrata aur unke balyakal k mitrata the..vo dono Kamboj k prasidha Gurukul mein padhte the...kintu hamare pita aur Assakeya k matbhed k karan unke mitrata dirghsthayi nhi ho paya..do varsh purv Kamboj mein ek prasidha utsav mein yogdan hetu Shreemati se bhrata k punah sakshat hua..aur bhrata k anurodh se humne uski ek chitra banayi
she shows a portrait of a beautiful girl


ye Chitra sarvada bhrata k nikat hi rehte hai..na jane kya asakti hai unhe is Chitra se..humne dekha hai unhe is Chitra ke sahit samay byatit karte huye..humne to karan bhi janna chaha..kintu unhone kaha k hum ab bhi ye anubhuti samajhne k liye balika hai..

Durdhara made face...Chandragupt feels strange ..in his subconscious he feels he knows what is in Digvijay's mind..but he couldn't recognize it consciously...

Durdhara : Chandragupt humse bhrata ke dukh dekhe nhi jate ab tum hi hamare sahayata kar sakte ho..tum karoge na sahayata??

Durdhara asked beggingly holdin Chandragupt's hand..Chandragupt had no power to refuse her request...he kept his hand on her shoulder..

Chandragupt : Chinta na karo hum apne mitra aur tumhare bhrata Digvijay ka sahayata avashya karenge..

Durdhara (smiles) : tumse yehi apeksha tha..

Chandragupt feels he can do everything to see this smile

Digvijay's Room


Digvijay was standing near the big window..watching the darkness of the night..it seems his eyes is searching something in darkness..his painful gaze was expressing his inner sorrow..he didn't notice Chandragupt is standing near him

Chandragupt : Durdhara ne humein vo patra dikhaya..

Digvijay got his consciousness back with Chandragupt's voice..

Digvijay : kaun vo Chandragupt tum..hum kuch aur vishay mein chinta kar rahe the to tum pr dhyan nhi diya..

Chandragupt : kya tum Shreemati k vishay mein chinta kar rahe the??

Digvijay (shocked) : Dhara ne tumhe ye bhi bata ya??

Chandragupt : vo bas utnahi bataya jo vo janti thi..hum sampurn kahani tumse sunna chahte hai..

Digvijay (giving a painful smile) : Chandragupt tum hamare neta avashya ho kintu ayu mein humse anuj ho..jeevan k baht sare anubhutiyon se tum anaviggya ho..aur unmese sabse sundar anubhuti hai prem..jo ek anatmiya purush aur nari ko ek adrishya bandhan mein bandh dete hai..aur vo bandhan man k hote hai..aur yehi sambandh hai hamare aur Shreemati ka..kintu Abhisar aur Assakeya k bich matbhed k karan hum apne anubhutiya gopan rakhe the..kintu aj jab Assakeya k upar yavan akraman k vishay gyat hua to Shreemati ka vabishya chinta karke hamare antaratma kampit ho rahe hai...tum to jante ho bandini nari k sath kaisa acharan karte hai yavan..Durdhara ko to tumne raksha kiya aur sada k liye humein  rini kar diya..kintu hum Shreemati ko un narilobhi yavan se raksha kaise kare?? karan hum jante hai k pitashree Assakeya k sahayata hetu sainya kabhi preran nhi karenge..karan isse Abhisar nirbal ho jayega..aur tum to jante hi ho yadi Sikandar k vishal sena ko pratirodh karne k kshamta yadi sampurn Bharatvarsh mein koi rakhta hai to vo keval Magadh hai..

tears rolled from Digvijay's eyes..

"hum aapne aapko baht asahay bodh kar rahe hai..yadi vo yavan Shreemati pr atyachar kiya to hum jeevit nhi reh payenge..is glani k sath k hum apne prem k raksha na kar paye.."

Chandragupt couldn't understand everything what Digvijay said..but he somehow could feel Digvijay's pain..coz a similar feeling was growing within him too..

Chandragupt comes closer to Digvijay and put hand on his shoulder..

Chandragupt : hum mitra kis karan hote hai?? hum samast mitra milke tumhare prem k suraksha karne mein tumhara sahayata karenge..

a ray of hope comes on Digvijay's face..he was well aware of Chandragupt's ability

Digvijay : satya Chandragupt..tum karoge hamare sahayata Shreemati k raksha karne mein..

Chandragupt : han keval hum sab..maharaj ko is vishay is samay gyat na hon dena..anyatha hamare yatra mein vilamb utpann ho sakte hai..hum aj hi Massaga nagri k liye prasthan karenge..chinta na karo tumhare Shreemati ko kuch nhi hoga

Digvijay hugged Chandragupt tightly in response..







Edited by FairyDreams - 06 April 2013 at 1:54am

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