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plz update, eagerly waitng for elder chandu n dhara.

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PART-16

..Subhadra was waiting in front of the temple for Durdhara to complete her circle...but when time passed but princess didn't come she got so worried that she herself went to find her in the back of temple and due to tension she forgot to call Durdhara as princess and took her best friend's childhood name..'Dhara'...and then she found Dhara lying unconscious on the land..it made Bhadra so shocked that her voice became chocked..she ran to Dhara..took her head on her lap and started airing princess with her clothes...

Bhadra : hey ishwar ye kya ho gaya hai Dhara ko...Dhara ankhe kholo...hey visnu bhagwan raksha kijiye hamare rajkumari ka...Dhara utho...

 she took water from the tiny silk covered water-bag,always  tied with her waste ...and splashed water on Dhara's face...and at last Dhara opened her eyes.

Bhadra : dhanyabad Visnu bhagwan ka ..ap thik ho...apne to humein dara hi diye the...lijiye thora sa pani pi lijiye .ap swasth mehsus karenge...

and she made Dhara drinking water...

Bhadra : ab thik lag raha hai na rajkumari??

Dhara (getting up from Bhadra's lap) :han hum sampurn swasth hai...parantu..vo kahan gaya??

Bhadra : kiske baat kar rahe hai rajkumari..

Dhara : wahi jiske wajah se humari ye dasha hue...wahi uddand vanvasi...

Bhadra (confused): kya uddand vanvasi??

Dhara : han wahi jo subhah hamare mahal mein ghus aya tha...
(and she summarized what made her unconscious)

Bhadra : kya us vanvasi ka itna bada duhsahas k usne apko chua...ap chinta na kare rajkumari hamare sainik use avasya bandi banake apke charan mein upasthit karenge...parantu humein abhi mahal k liye prasthan karna padega..andhakar ho chuka hai...sab chinta kar rahe honge...

Dhara : ekbaar vo hamein mil jaye to hum use samjhayenge..rajkumari k apmaan karne ka kya parinam hota hai...parantu..hum abhi kaise jaye Bhadra hamara pradakshin abhi asamapt hai...

Bhadra : to chaliye rajkumari shigra pradakshin sampurn karte hai..parantu ab main apke sath rahungi...chahe kuch bhi ho jaye apko akele nhi chodenge apse...

and then Bhadra arrenged the plate again and made Dhara complete her circle by holding her tight...

..inside the temple when Digvijay heard the news he was just stunned..and couldn't speak for a while...rajpurohit considered his situation as an effect of unexpected happiness...and he went to give instructions to other priests for the preparation of next day's coronation...
...watching Digvijay...standing in a utterly shocked position Aditya went to him..

Aditya : Digvijay..

but Digvijay didn't response..then Aditya shaked him..and at last Digvijay regained consciousness...

Aditya : kya hua Digvijay...kis chinta mein khoye ho??...

Digvijay : is samay hum tumhe kuch nhi keh sakte Aditya..humein isi samay prasad k lie prasthan karna padega...tum jake sabko is vishay suchit karo...

Aditya : acha tum jaisa thik samjho...

and he went to call others...

Digvijay : pratiharin...pratiharin...

the female bodyguard of princess comes to him..

pratiharin : adesh kijiye yuvraj...

Digvijay : humein abhi isi samay mahal k liye prasthan karna padega...jaise hi rajkumari apni pradakshin pura karke aye..tum Dhara,Bhadra aur rajkumari Kalyani ko leke turant mahal pohuchna...

pratiharin : jo aggya

and she leaves...

Digvijay comes to his friends...he was finding Chandragupta..but Chandragupta was not there...

Digvijay : Chandragupt kahan hai mitron??

Sukant : o to abtak mandir mein pravesh hi nhi kiya...parantu tumhe kya hua Digvijay??..Aditya keh raha tha tum baht chintit ho...

Digvijay : hum baad mein bistar se batayenge..abhi sab log hamare sath mahal k liye prasthan karo...

Shashank : parantu Chandragupt??

Digvijay : tum aur Dakshita jake use dhundo...q k mandir k piche ek chota sa van hai..aur mandir k suraksha hetu kuch vishakt udvid hai uhan..yadi Chandragupt uhan chale jaye to tum dono k hi abashyakta padenge use..

Dakshita : thik hai rajkumar...

Airavat : inhe ye bhi keh do k apas mein ladke samay byatit na kare...

Dakshita : tumhe humko gyan dene ka avashyakta nhi ..hum apne kartavya vali vati jante hai...chaliye vaidji

Shashank for first time followed Dakshita without speaking a word...

Sukant (thinking): hey iswar itni nikat ake bhi hum unse mil nhi paye..hey Vishnu bhagwan daya karna...us soundarya k devi se shigra hamara vet karwana..

Digvijay : Sukant humein bilamb ho raha hai..chalo..

Sukant : han Digvijay chalo...

only few minutes after they left Subhadra with Durdhara entered into temple..and Kalyani ran to them..

Kalyani : are tum log itni derse kahan the?? sab chintit ho gaye the...

Bhadra : vo hum...

Pratiharin came to them...

Pratiharin : rajkumari yuvraj k adesh hai k hum ap sab ko leke mahal k liye turant prasthan kare..

Dhara : isi samay??parantu humari prarthana to abhi pure nhi hue...

Bhadra : nhi rajkumari..apko abhi bisram ki avasyakta hai...aap mahal laut chaliye...aur rahi baat prarthana ki to ap to vo apne man hi man puri kar sakti hai...abhi prasad laut chaliye...

Dhara " acha thik hai...chalo...

Dhara, Kalyani and Bhadra left with pratiharin...

Shashank and Dakshita went in search for Chandragupta but before they didn't have to find much as Chandragupta himself was coming towards the temple.but watching his condition both of them remained spellbound for a while..Chandu's face and clothes are glued with flower petals of various colours and a garland is hanging on his chest...but it seemed he is unaware of his condition..he came and stood in front of them and both of them burst into laughter...

Shashank : hey iswar Chandragupt tumhara ye dasha kisne kiya ..hahahaha

Chandu (getting confused) : dasha kaisi dasha...hum to bilkul swasth hai...

Dakshita ( taking the garland away from Chandu's neck) : han vo to hamein pratit ho raha hai...

Chandu then realized what are they talking about..he was not aware that during the collision with that mad girl the garland from her plate came on his neck...he became embarrassed..and felt thrilled again by recalling the incident...without knowing the reason...

Chandu : are yesab us unmad kanya k karan..

Shashank didn't let him finish

Shashank : kya kaha kanya??..aho bhagya...ek kanya ne hamare Chandragupt ko varmala pehna diya...ye sambad utsav palan k yogya hai..hahahaha

Chandu(confused) : varmala!! ye kya keh rahe ho Shashank??..varmala to vivah k samay pehnaya jate hai...

Shashank (laughing at Chandu's ignorance) : han han vo to hamein gyat hai..parantu hum bhi to sunhe vo bhagyabati kanya kaun hai jise hamare neta unmad kehke sambodhit kar rahe hai...

Dakshita(confusingly thinking) : kahin ye unmad kanya swayam rajkumari hi to nhi...hey iswar yadi aisa hua to kal abhishek tak koi bipatti na aye isiliye ye alochana yehi samapt honi chahiye...

Chandu : are hum keh rahe hai na ye varmala nhi hai..us unmad dasi k sath sangharsh k samay ye uske patra se mere pass a gaya hoga...

Shashank : kanya se sangharsh haha...han tab hi to shastra ke sthan mein komol puspo pallav byabhar kiya gaya hoga..

Shashank perhaps continued further to tease Chandu..but Dakshita interrupted

Dakshita : bas karo Shashank..tum ayu mein chandragupt se jyesth ho..usse aise baat karna tumhe shobha nhi deta...

Shashank : Dakshita..tum sayad bismrit ho rahe ho k chandragupt hamara mitro hai...usse baat karne k liye tumse shiksha lene ki koi avashyakta nhi hai...

Dakshita : avashyakta hai..kyun ke tum shalinta k ullanghan kar rahe ho...

Shashank : acha hum shalinta ullanghan kar rahe hai??aur tum jo ek kanya hoke aise uchha sur mein baat karte ho vo baht shalin hote hai na...

Chandu : are shant ho jao tum dono.kabhi bhi kahin bhi shuru ho jate ho..humne abtak devta k darshan nhi kiya..marg chodo humarein

Shashank : are mandir se yad aya...Digvijay baht padessan dikh rahe the ..vo aur hamare baki sathi prasad k lie nikal chuke hai..aur Digvijay ne hum pr ye daitwa diya hai tumhe dhund k shighratishighra prasad pohuchne k liye

Chandu : acha??aisa kya vipatti an padi??

Shashank : vo to mahal chalke hi pata chalega..ab shighra chalo  ..devta darshan kal kar lena..

Dakshita : are ruko..Chandragupt is avastha mein jayega kya??..pehle usse in pusppallav se mukt to karo..

Chandu (became conscious and started shaking his clothes) : vo han abhi saf karti hun..subah rang..shamko phul..pata nhi aur kya kya milna baki hai..

Shashank : kya kaha tum??subah rang shamko phul ..iska arth??

Dakshita : are chandu ho gaya na..ab shighra chalo..baki baat mahal mein chalke karoge...

Shashank (unwillingly) : acha thik hai mahal chalo

three of them stepped towards the horses...and Chandu rided on his one.and started for palace .Shashank  was also about to ride but suddenly Dakshita stopped him...

Dakshita : suno Shashank ..

Shashank : ab kya hua..ab bilamb nhi ho raha hai kya...

Dakshita : nhi mahal mein pohuchte hi tum mahatyapurn alochana ko chhorke bhojan k sandhan mein na chale jao isiliye abhi se ye le lo..

and she gives him some sweets and fruits packed by tree liefes

Shashank : ye kya hai??

Dakshita : prasad hai..puja samapt hote hi le liya tha..
and without wasting a second she rided on horse and started for palace leaving Shashank confused

Shashank : ye kanya satya mein hamare samajh k bahar hai..
and he also rided on horse...











Edited by jhum_86 - 27 November 2011 at 9:06am

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Finalllyyy!!! an update after ages!! PartyPartyPartyParty
baba re!! ab mujhse yeh suspense saha nahi jaata!!!! Dhara n Chandu finally kab milenge!!!!!! Day Dreaming 
Awesome update re!! i know u r editing.. but mein abhi online thi, next kab aau pata nahi so itni update par hi comment kar deti hun!! Tongue

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Really It Made Me Laugh Till I Chocked !! LOLClapLOLClapLOL
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good part Clap loved it. do continue soon!




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Edited by vss08 - 31 October 2011 at 9:17am

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Nice update waiting ke aage kya hoga

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Nice update
Waiting ke aage kya hoga

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Please Update Soon

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