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Awesome update as usual! Thank you so much for the pm Smile

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awesome nice part
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oye kidhar hai aru ki bachi!!Angry
itna late pm q diya...!!
main toh ab tak part 4 tak hi ja payee hoon!!Stern Smile
 
hmm...itni asani se main comment nehin denewali!!Big smile
wese kya sudh hindi hai by god!!Embarrassed...and dhurdhara v...!!Tongue...moi like it!!WinkLOL
ok let me finish...thoda time toh lagega naa!!LOL


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are khushi haha sorry main tujhe cgm forum pr dekha nhi to socha tu ye shw nhi dekhti...usdin tune kaha k tu dekhti hai isiliye pm kia...acha baba take your time to read..aur fir aramse cmnt krna

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haan...sahi hai...main ati toh thi yaahan but silent thi...
 
..but ff main v notice nehin kiya tere...varna...bina pm ke hi comment de deti!!LOL
 
yeh shashank and dhrashita ki kya jodi hai...main imagine kar kar k...haas rahi hoon...specially the fight scene!ROFL
ok part 7 finished...they met...!!Big smileStar
baaki comments baad main!Big smile


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ok...i read all parts!!Big smile
i love part 9...!!
i can easily imagine the scenes...very well written...!!
yeh ambhik kumar and his banvasi dialogs...D'oh...mujhe toh uske back ground music v sunai de rahe the..LOL
 
very nice aru...keep it up!!Smile

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PART-12

...in the evening Durdhara was getting ready for the puja held in Vishnu mandir..the next day is birthday as well as coronation of prince Digvijay...and according to the tradition the princess will do the tilak of yuvraj...so she has to do puja in previous evening...Subhadra and Drakshita were helping her to get dressed...Pratiharin entered..

Pratiharin : rajkumari ek vises atithi apse vet krna chahte hai

Dhara : parantu humare liye abhi kisise bhet karna samvab nahi hai ...humein puja ke liye samay pr mandir pohuchna padega..

Pratiharin : shama karein rajkumari parantu gandhar naresh ambhik apke liye bahat samay se pratiksha kar rahe hai...

Durdhara and Subhadra stared to each others face and Drakshita's face got darkened..

Dhara : acha unhe suchit karo ke hum a rahe hai...

Pratiharin left

Dhara : Bhadra ye wahi hain na jisne apne matrabhumi ke sath viswasghat karke yavan raja ke liye bharat ka dwar unmukt kia hai...

Drakshita : han rajkumari ye wahi deshdrohi ambhik hai...in par to apne pita ambhiraj ke hatya ka arop bhi hai q ke gandharraj ek deshbhakt the unhone yavan sikandar ke sath ambhik kumar ke mitrata ka virodh kie the

Subhadra : bharatbhumi k kalank hai ye Ambhik..

Dhara : parantu aise neech vyakti humse q bhet karna chahte hai...hum puja karne ja rahe hai..aise samai hum us desdrohi ke ashubh chehra dekhke is shubh karm mein badhayein utpann nahin karna chahte..pehle vo uddand vanvasi ab ye pitrihanta desdrohi..pata nahi aj kiske chehra dekhe the hum..

Drakshita (thinking) : iska arth rajkumari ko ye gyat nahi hai ke ambhik ke sath unkr vivah ke prastab pr vichar kia ja raha hai...hey ishwar pata nahi kya hai vidhata ke man mein..

Subhadra : parantu rajkumari yadi aap unse bhet na kare to ye gandhar naresh ka apman hoga..is samai abhisar rajya gandhar ke sath mitrata sandhi mein abadha hai ..humare pita kehte hai ke gandhar baht hi shaktishali hai yavan ke sahayata se..is samai apki ye sidhanth avisar rajya ke liye ashubh sanket ho sakta hai...humare kheyal se apko ekbar unse bhet kar lena chahiye

Dhara : teri vichar sahi hai Bhadra tu sahi arth mein hi mahaamatya ke kanya hai...acha to tum bhi hamare sath chalo ...aur Drakshita tum hamarein rath ko taiyar hone ke liye kaho..hum kuch i samay mein prasthan karenge

Drakshita : ji rajkumari

Ambhik was waiting anxiously in the garden of princess's mahal...its the waiting place of male visitors and guests ...as they don't have permission to enter in princess's place..even if he is a king or prince...Subhadra and Durdhara entered into the garden...Ambhik became spellbound to see Durdhara's beauty...and thought acharya Shukdev didn't commit any mistake by sending his the marriage proposal...

at first he opposed Shukdev's decision for the first time...he was not ready for marriage he is busy to satisfy his thirst for power..after the treaty with sikandar Ambhik helped Sikandar to attack the kingdom of puskalabati in west gandhar...as he wanted to rule all over Gandhar...and now Sikandar is on the way to get victory over Puskalabati..in this moment Ambhik was not willing to leave Gandhar and to come Avisar...but Shukdev made him go..he made Ambhik understood that to make Abhisar as Gandhar's friend is necessary if Abhisar king would accept Sikandar's supremacy..then it would be easier for Sikandar to enter into India and lead war with panchnad king Parvateswar (Purus)...Abhisar for its location is not easyly defeatable...so if Sikandar has to fight battle with them then his entrance into india would be delayed...and his army would become more exhausted..and may be Sikandar will return without fighting with Purus..and Ambhik's purpose won't be served..that's why Shukdev sent the marriage proposal to Abhisar king ..and by sending details of Sikandar's huge undefeatable army he somehow managed to convince him to send his acceptance to Sikandar..and made him thinking about Ambhik and Durdhara's marriage...but Abhisar raja is not ready for his daughter's early marriage..so Shukdev sent Ambhik in Digvijay's coronation to convince him about the marriage..but still Ambhik was not satisfied with Shukdev's step

and now by watching beauty of princess..Ambhik felt Shukdev took right step

Durdhara looked at Ambhik for a moment then shifted her eyes..as she was not willing to see a traitor's face

Durdhara (thinking) : to ye hai vo desdrohi gandhar naresh..chehre se hi pratit ho raha hai ye ek nehayat hi ahankari vyakti hai jo apne aham ko tust karne ke liye koi bhi ghrunit karya kar sakta hai

Ambhik : rajkumari Durdhara hum hai Gandhar naresh Ambhik...humare naam to sune hi honge...

Subhadra (thinking) : rajkumari ko abhibadan bhi nahi kia...chehre se jitna ahankari dikhta hai vastab mein usse kai guna adhik ahamkari hai..

Durdhara (without looking at Ambhik) : han jante hai ab to sabhi janpadon mein kebal yehi naam ka charcha hai...

Ambhik couldn't get the real meaning of Durdhara' word so thought she is praising for that..and thought Durdhara is also impressed by him

Ambhik : dhanyabad rajkumari hum itna vikhyat hai ye to humein bhi gyat nahi tha...

Dhara : humein puja ke liye bilamb ho rahe hai..isiliye hum shighra apke humse bhet karneka uddyeshya janna chahte hai

Ambhik : hum aap ke liye uphar leke aye hai...ye gandhar ke bahumulya uchakoti ke heerak alankar ...hamare taraf se gandhar aur abhisar rajya ke sambandh ke chinha swarup...

and he ordered his servant and he removed the velvet cover from a huge plate..where the diamond jeweleries were decorated...there were all types of luvastrating  ornaments made of diamonds...Durdhara uninterestingly looked at that...and shifted eyes again...Subhadra smiled once...

Dhara : parantu hamare liye ye uphar kisliye??janamtithi aur rajyabhishek hamare bhrata ka hai hamari nahi

Ambhik : hum jante hai rajkumari Digvijay to hamare param mitra hai..unke liye hum kuch vises uphar laye haye..parantu hum ne suna hai ke rajkumariyon ko heerak alankar baht hi priya hote hai..to humne gandhar ke shrestha swarnakar se ye alankar prastut karwaya.apke liye...

Subhadra(smiling at Ambhik's ignorance) : parantu jo har rajkumari ko pasand aye vo Abhisar rajkumari ko bhi pasand aye ye avashyak to nahi..hamare rajkumari ko heerak aur heerak alankar mein koi ruchi nahi hai

Ambhik : parantu kyu??heera to har kanya ko pasand hai..aur tum kaun ho jo itne nischitrupse  ye keh rahe ho

Dhara : ye hamare sabse priya sakhi aur mahaamatya putri Subhadra hai..aur ye hume humse bhi adhik  janti hai...ye satya keh rahi hai..humein heerak pasand nahi..ye baht hi berang hai...

Ambhik : to phir apko kya pasand hai rajkumari

Dhara : vo aap nahi samjhenge...parantu ap hamare rajya ke atithi hai isiliye apke uphar grahan karna humara kartavya hai..Bhadra grahan karo ise

and Subhadra took the plate of diamonds

and then pratiharin entered

Pratiharin : kshama chahte hai rajkumari..parantu Panchnad ke rajkumari apke mahal mein apke pratiksha kar rahe hai...

Dhara : humein ab jana padega...chalo Subhadra

and they left behind Ambhik with his darkened face..Ambhik realized the princess is different from others...he thought princess would be easily impressed by his valubale gift but the result was unexpected to him...and another thing striked him was that the news of Panchnad princess's coming...that meand Abhsar rajya is maintaining good relation with Gandhar's enemy Purus too...he was not prepared for that news..he didn't understand how to react

Durdhara reached to andarmahal..where Panchnad princess Kalyani, daughter of king Purus was waiting for her...Nandini was 13 years old beautiful princess with a smiling face..her smile was so innocent that people always say that she can win her enemy with this smile...she has got a soft heart and friendly nature..and never shows proud ever..unlike other princess including Durdhara too( as Durdhara reserved by nature but Kalyani is talkative)


Durdhara and Subhadra entered where Nandini was waiting for them ..Kalyani was sitting but watching Durdhara She went and hugged her though it was their first meeting but Nandini behaved as she knew Dhara for years...

Kalyani : to tum hi ho Durdhara...main panchnad k rajkumari Kalyani hun.hum shama chahte hai..apne rajya k suraksha ko chhodke hamare pita Parvateswar nahi a paye isiliye humein akelehi ana padha apke amantran ka maan rakhne .maine tumhara naam baht suna hai apne sakhiyon se...parantu jitna suna tumte usse bhi jyada sundar ho...

Dhara : ap humein lajjit kar rahe hai rajkumari..sundar to aap hai..hum apke aur apke pita ke bare mein baht suna hai...

Kalyani : are are ye ap ap kya hai?humse agar tum kehke baat nahi kiya to hum bhi tumse baat nahi karenge...

Dhara : acha Nandini humein tumse milke baht khushi hui...

Kalyani : ye hui na baat..dekho hum tumhare liye kuchh uphar laye hai...suna hai ke tumhe rangon se aur kala se baht prem hai to hum Panchnad ke prasidha murtikar se tumhare liye ye ratnakhachit natraj murti prastut karwaye haii..dekho...

and she streched her hands to Dhara with a beautiful Idol of Nataraj decorated by various colourful and valuable stones ( like chuni,panna.etc.)...as soon the lights of lamps fell upon him the idol started glowing and the room became full of magical colours..Durdhara and Subhadra became mesmerized

Kalyani : ye humare taraf se hamare preet ka nishani

Dhara : dhanyabad Nandini iska soundarya advut hai...

Kalyani : aur pata hai ye jis ke paas rehte hai vo jeevan ke har yudh mein vijay prapt karte hai..

Subhadra : sach??

Kalyani turned towards Subhadra she was putting the plate of diamond jewellaries on bed..

Kalyani : tum Subhadra ho na??Durdhara ke priyo sakhi??humne tumhare naam bhi baht suna..

and she hugged Subhadra too..Subhadra's hand was still on that plate..so when she also hugged nandini the plate's cover was removed by her hand...and Kalyani looked at those jewellaries..and she becomes excited

Kalyani : are kitna sunadar heerak abhushan hai...tumhe ye uphar mila Durdhara..

Durdhara : tumhe heera pasand hai??

Kalyani : heera to mujhe sabse priyo hai...kise heerak pasand nhi honge??

Durdhara : ye sare alankar tum rakh lo..ye mere taraf se tumhare liye uphar hai...

Kalyani : parantu

Durdhara : koi parantu nahi..ye mere taraf se mere sakhi ke liye uphar hai...nahi loge to hum bhi tumse baat nahi karenge

Kalyani : tab to humein ye swikarna hi padega...pata hai Durdhara humare yahan ane ke ek aur bhi karan hai..hum apne desh ke us veer suputra ko bhi dekhna chahte hai jinke bare mein hamare pita aur mantri indurdutta ji humesha batein karte rehte hai...

Durdhara : tum kiske baat kar rahe ho??

Kalyani : wahi mahan acharya chanakya ke  shishya Chandragupta...vo to tumhare bhrata kumar Digvijay ke mitra bhi hai na..aur is samai yehin upasthit

Durdhara (thinking) : uff Chandragupta aur Chandragupta..aisa kya hai usmein jo charo taraf usike charche hote hai...

Kalyani : tumne mila usse??kaisa dikhta hai??suna hai ke humse jyada bada nahi hai...

Dhara: honge..humein gyat nahi..humne nahi mila usse...

and then Drakshita enters,,

Drakshita : rajkumari apke rath kabse pratiksha kar rahe hai..puja ke liye bilamb ho rahe hai

Dhara : humein Visnupuja ke liye jana padega Nandini..tum yadi shranti bodh na kar rahe ho to a sakte ho...

Kalyani : avashya Durdhara ..chalo

and four of them left for temple...








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