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PART-10

...Chandu remembered acharya...with his blessing he managed to escape safely from that mad girl...otherwise don't know what would be happen to him...but he failed to understand why was he feeling so strange with her touch...he used to play with girls as well as boys in pippalivan...even Drakshita is his good friend...sometimes all of them makes fun with her too...but this girl seems different from all...and what a sweet smell he got today...the smell is completely new to him...he thrilled by remembering that moment but failed to understand the cause..

'parantu hum us kanya ke liye itne chinta kyu kr rahe hai...na jane kya samasya hai use dekhne mein to bilkul swasth lagti hai parantu hai sampurn unmad'

he thinks..suddenly he noticed Drakshita walking and he ran to stop her... Drakshita became shocked at first as she couldn't recognize Chandu..because all of his cloths.body and even face were decorated with spots of various colours...Drakshita started laughing...

Drakshita :ohh Chandragupt tumhara ye dasha kisne kiya??aisa pratit ho raha hai jaise vasant k agaman se pehlehi vasant utsav manake aye ho...

Chandu : ye parihas ka samai nahi hai Drakshita..hasya samvaran karo...

Drakshita : Chandragupt tumne to hume vaibhit kr chuke the...yodi main atmaraksha hetu tumhe kat leti to??

Chandu : to acharya ko puno magadh yatra krna padta ek aur Chandragupt k talash mein..parantu uske purv tumhe samshan chor kar ate...

Drakshita : parantu tumhare ye dasha kaise hua??aur tum rajkumari k mahal mein kya kr rahe ho??kya tumhe gyat nahi hai ke idhar purush ka ana mana hai...

Chandu : are to mujhe kaunsa yahan ana tha ??Digvijay ne mujhe kaha ke tum mahal ke andar jaise chahe bhraman sakte ho koi nahi rokega...mujhe kya pata tha ke main andarmahal ke disha mein a jayunga..kisine to roka hi nhi mujhe...aur fir vo kanya...

Drakshita : kanya??kaunsi kanya??kya baat hai Chandu han??

Chandu : pata nahi hogi koi dasi..sampurn unmad...

Drakshita : acha??(with a mischievous smile)
(and suddenly a chaos was sounded)

Chandu : aisa pratit hote hai ke pratiharin mere khoj se isi disha mein a rahe hai...tum shighrata se mujhe yahan se nikalne mein sahayata karo...baad mein jitna man chahe has lena...

Drakshita : avasya Chandragupt...tum sammukh mein jo dwar hai use unmukt karo..ek marg milenge jisse tum rajmahal ke piche wale puskarini mein pohuch jaoge..udhar koi nahi ata...udhar pehle nahake apne purane abastha mein ao..fir uske dusre taraf ke marg pr chalna atithi shala pohuchoge...

Chandu : parantu tum yesab kaise jante ho...

Drakshita : are rajkumari ki sakhi Subhadra ne bataya mujhe...ab shighra karo anyatha tumhare sthan atithigriha mein nahi karagriha mein honge...jao..

Chandu left...and after some moments pratiharin reached there

Pratiharin : kya apne kisi vanvasi balok ko yahan dekha??

Drakshita : vanvasi??nahi to..q kya hua??

Pratiharin : koi anupraveskari rajkumari k mahal mein pravesh kiya..aur rajkumari ke chitra ko nast kr diya...usne rajkumari se uche awaz mein baat krne k bhi duhsahas kiya...rajkumari itne krodhit hai ke vo aswasth mehsus kr rahe hai..Subhadra unki seva mein vyast hai...hume us dust ko kisi bhi haal mein bandi banana hai...

Drakshita (thinking) : kahin vo kanya jiske bare mein Chandragupt bol raha tha vo swayam rajkumari hi to nahi??...hey ishwar raksha karna...

Pratiharin : chup q hai aap??kahiye kya apne kisi ko dekha hai??

Drakshita : nahi maine kisiko nahi dekha...parantu aap kya kar rahe the...andarmahal ke suraksha to aap ke hah o mein hai na..to vo apke hote hue idhar praves kaise kiya??

Pratiharin (feeling ashamed) : vo ek vises atithi ke agaman hetu hum bas unke swagat karne gaye the...

Drakshita : kaunse vises atithi ??

Pratiharin : wahi jinke sath rajkumari ke vivah ka samvabna hai...gandhar naresh Ambhik Kumar...

Drakshita : kya???????????????????????????????




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ROFL zor ka jhatka! Hey jhum dialog are good.

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wow...this story is getting more n more interesting day by day Clap ...nice dialogues of cg and drakshita Tongue ...hindi is very nice aru Star u r improving a lot Big smile and that too fast Wink keep the gud work up aru Thumbs Up...eagerly waiting 4 d next part Tongue

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@jhum - hindi dialogues are really good..par wo doosri baat hai ki bohot saare wrds mujhe
samajh hi nahi aayeLOL vasant utsav dialogue was vry nice...thank god ambhik kumar
 aagaye ...meri jaan me jaan aagayiLOL keep updating dear!

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peihu samajh kaise ayega main to bishudh bengali sanskrit se tadvab shabd istemal kia uska hindi pratishabd nhi ata isliye


Edited by jhum_86 - 09 August 2011 at 11:23am

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Bahut mazaa aaya padhke Aru ! Your story is increasingly getting us more and more crazy asking for more !!!Thumbs Up
    AND your Hindi has also vastly improved.One tip Aru,if you want to improve your Hindi,think about the pronunciation of those Hindi words,and then write them,so that your Hindi will improve magically !Embarrassed

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wowww fantastic 
loved it aru
continue soon

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thanks abhi...will follow your suggestion...and khushi thanks for this awsome siggi

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