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PART-38

Dining Hall of Royal palace  of Kamboj

a Royal supper had been arranged in Royal Palace in the honor of Digvijay , Chandragupt and their brave friends..King and Queen were on the center..Digvijay was sitting on King's right side and Shreemati was sitting on queen's left side..Chandragupt was sitting beside Digvijay..Shashank was beside him..Dakshita was sitting beside Shreemati..Airavat's father and Subahi shreshthi were sitting opposide of king Abhisar..Airavat was sitting beside his father..Aditya was also sitting with his parents..Sukant and Ghanghor were beside Shashank , Akshay was beside Dakshita..other guests and members of royal family and palace were also present there..
  the entire royal supper was arranged in Durdhara's supervision..so she was in the charge of serving..Subhadra , Sumitra ,Maya ,Chitra were helping her also Ketki had joined in serving...
 
Abhisar : Digvijay humne Sikandar se mitrata to kar liya kintu humein bhai hai iske karan Panchnad k mitrata se banchit na hona pade...

Digvijay : pitashree ye bhai humein bhi hai..kintu us samay Abhisar ko raksha karne k liye Chandragupt aur humare nikat aur koi marg bhi to nhi tha

Chandragupt : humne acharya ko suchna preran kar chuke hai Sikandar aur humare bhet k..unke uttar ane k paschad hi hum panchnad k vishay mein Abhisar k uchit nirnay pr alokpat kar payenge..

Abhisar : Sikandar k ek kshatrap bhi to humare rajya mein niyukt honewala hai na? to kya Kamboj apna swatantrya rakh payenge..??

Digvijay : Sikandar swayam humein Kamboj k shashak niyukt kar chuke hai..humen nhi lagta koi bhi kshatrap unke nirnay k virodhita karenge..aur kshatrap k ane mein abhi vilamb hai..uske paschad hi hum kuch chinta kar payenge

Chandragupt : jhelum k tir mein Panchnad naresh Porus apne vishal sainyavahini leke Sikandar ko vadhadan karne k liye pratiksha kar rahe hai..us yudh k phal pr Bharat k suraksha aur vabishya nirvarshil hai..aur Acharya aur humare deshprem k pariksha bhi..

Airavat's father : Chandragupt to kya hum bhi yavan k vashyata sweekar kar le?? humare rajya atyant kshudra hai..yadi hum yavan k virodhita karne k spardha kare to hum vinasht ho jayenge..

Chandragupt : paristhiti k vichar karke is samay vashyata sweekar hi uchit hoga jab tak Sikandar Panchnad tak pohuch na jaye..

Maharani : aap
ye rajnaitik alochana kuch samay k liye stabdh bhi karenge.humare putra k vivah asanna hai..kya hum is samay isike ayojan mein manoyog nhi de sakte??

Maharaj : avashya..

Digvijay looks at Shreemati..Shreemati blushed..all friends giggled..

Durdhara : aur humare vichar mein is samay bhojsabha mein dhyan dena sarbadhik avashyak hai..to kripaya bhojan k atirikt sabhi alochana kuch bhojsabha k samapt hone k uprant hi kare..is bhojsabha k karndhar hone k karan ye humara adesh hai..

.Chandragupt stole a glare at her..she immediately lowered her gaze..she herself couldn't understand why she is feeling shy to look into his eyes..

Digvijay : aur jab ye adesh Rajkumari ka ho to uska palan na ho aisa to samvab hi nhi hai..

Chandragupt (smirks) : avashya

Chitra again feels irritated...Durdhara along with other girls started serving..Chitra seemed to take over the duty of  serving to Chandragupta..she ..Subhadra came to serve vegetables but Chitra took the bowl from her..

Chitra : Chandragupt ko pariveshan main karti hun..karan usko kaunse aharya pasand hai aur kaunsa nhi vo keval hum hi bata sakt hai..hai na Chandragupta

she looks at Chandragupt for approval..Chandragupt nods without knowing that Chitra is trying to show her possession over him..Subhadra feels annoyed and moves to Shashank to serve..and her bowl almost became empty after serving him..she comes to Sukant..but Sukant was busy in staring at her..

Subhadra : hum aur tarkari le ate hai..

Sukant : uske avashyakta nhi hai..(whispering) .yadi tum sammukh raho to humare kshudha aapne aaphi shant ho jayenge..

Subhadra blushes and hurriedly moves from there.

.Aditya was not able to observe Ketki more in the presence of their parents..he was stealing glance at her from corner of his eyes..Sumitra was pouring water on Airavat's glass..Airavat in an acting of drinking water touched Sumitra's hand which was holding the glass..Sumitra blushed and scold Airavat by eyes indicating her father and father-in-law..but Airavat didn't leave her hand..she then requested through her eyes..Airavat winked and leaves her hand..
Maya was serving cereals to Dakshita and then moved to Akshay..and she was putting second serving...Akshay stopped her

Akshay : bas balika humein aur nhi chahiye

Dakshita (irritated) : Akshay tum ekbar aur Maya ko balika bulao..hum satya mein tumhare banprastha jane k byabastha kar denge..

Ghanghor : humare balak Akshay Maya ko balika sambodhan karke aapna bayask hone ka praman dena chahta hai..ye to samjho..

everyone laughed...Maya giggled.Akshay becomes silent..

Chandragupt : mitron Akshay ko aise padesaan na kiya karo.Akshay krodhit na ho..humare rehte koi tumhe balak nhi kahenge..kintu kripaya tum bhi humare bhagini ko naam se sambodhan karo..uske naam balika nhi Maya hai..

Akshay (happy) : thik hai.. Maya..
Maya becomes satisfied..

Durdhara comes to serve with a bowl of ghee ..Chitra moved to take next menu for Chandragupt..in the meantime Durdhara comes near Chandragupt..he became lost looking at her..Durdhara poured Ghee on his rice..Chitra comes back and almost screamed..

Chitra : are rajkumari yeh apne kya kiya?? Chandragupt ghrita k sevan nhi karta..uske patra mein bhul se bhi ek bindu ghrita pad jaye to vo bhojan ka parityag kar deta hai..ab uska sampurn ahar nasht ho gaya..

Durdhara (confused and shocked) : vo..humein ye gyat nhi tha..humein laga ghrita se anna swadist hote hai..to..

Chitra (in a tempered voice) : aapko pariveshan k purv anumati to lena chahiye tha..ab use samast aharya punah pariveshan karna padega

everyone  got shocked to see this unnecessary rudeness of Chitra to princess Durdhara..Subhadra was about to give a response but Durdhara stopped her..

Durdhara : hum kshama chahte hai..hum abhi dwitiya patra k vyavastha karte hai..

Chitra : rehne dijiye rajkumari Chandragupt b hum pariveshan karenge
she was about to remove the plate..but Chandragupt stopped by holding hand..

Chandragupt : rehno do Chitra ..aj hum ghrita k sevan karenge..

Chitra (confused) : kintu Chandragupt tumhe ghee se ghrina hai..

Chandragupt : Chitra acharya kehte hai k jeevan mein har ek avigyata hona avashyak hai..aur phir yeh to sabhi jante hai k ghrita se shareer mein bal brithi hote hai..
he mixed the ghee with rice and eat a morsel..and he relished the taste of Ghee
Chandragupt : avut..hum kitne murkh the so is swad se abtak aapne apko banchit rakha..
(turning to Durdhara) : rajkumari thora aur ghrita milega?

Durdhara gave a beautiful smile of pleasure that made Chandragupt almost hypnotized and his eyes were glued at her face
she poured almost all ghee from bowl to his plate lookind at his shining eyes full of some feelings which she had also come to understanding....Chitra couldn't bear the scene any more and turned to other corner of hall

Shashank (tensed) : are bhagini ghrita to humein bhi atyant priya hai..to humare liye bhi to kuch rakho..

Dakshita : Shashank tumhe nhi lagta k tumhe ghrita ka sampurn parityag karna chahiye?? ghrita keval bal hi nhi med bhi bridhi karte hai..aur humein nhi lagta tumhe aur adhik med k avashyakta hai ..

Shashank gets offended but knowing Dakshita was right he chose to remain silent..but other friends laughed at Dakshita's joke..Chandragupt and Durdhara finally become conscious..

Durdhara (in mock anger) : aaj humare bhrata ko koi kuch nhi kahega..vo jitna chahe ahar kar sakte hai..

and she continued serving ghee to Shashank and then others..and everyone concentrated in eating..

The Royal Court

after the supper ended..members of royal family and guests were gathered to the royal court ..for necessary announcement..king Abhisar stood on dais and addressed all

Abhisar : upasthit sudhijanok shubhakanksha k sahit aaj hum humare putra yuvraj Digvijay aur assakeya pradhan k putri Shreemati k vivah k ghoshna karte hai..rajjyotishi ne asanna purnima tithi mein vivah k lagna ghoshit kiye hai..aur isi upalakshay mein sampurn ek mas sampurn abhisar men utsav manaya jayega..

everyone clapped ..

Digvijay (turning to Chandragupta) : tumhare karan humare vivah sampann hone ja rahe hai..is vivah anusthan k mukhya atithi tum hi banoge vandhu..

Chandragupt (hesitantly) : humein kshama karna mitra kintu hum is vivah mein upasthit nhi reh payenge..

everyone present there were stunned..

Digvijay (shocked) : kintu kyun mitra?

Chandragupt (taking a rolled paper out from his pouch) : acharya ne parabat k madhyam se humein gurutyapurn suchna preran kiya hai..humein kal ushakal hi sakala k liye prasthan karna padega..acharya ab wahi humare pratiksha karenge..

everyone got shocked that none could speak a word for sometimes..Chitra felt happy at last Chandragupt will be away from princess..she felt relaxed..but Durdhara suddenly felt world had been snatched from her..she knew it would happen one day but so soon??..she slowly moved from there


Digvijay (at last managing himself) : yadi acharya k yehi agya hai to uska palan avashya hoga..hum kal hi prasthan karenge..
he gave a painful look towards Shreemati..and his parents.

Chandragupt : nhi mitra..tum yehin rehke Kamboj aur Bharatvarsh k prati dayittwa palan karoge..acharya k yehi nirdesh hai..aur keval tumhare liye hi nhi pratyek shishya k liye prithak nirdesh hai..

King
, queen and Shreemati felt relaxed..Digvijay felt happy but at a time sad too for not being able to give company to Chandragupta

Dakshita : Chandragupt hum sab k liye kya nirdesh hai??

Chandragupt ; jaise Digvijay Kamboj mein rehke is rajya k nirapatta aur rajnaitik sthiti k sandesh acharya ko preran karte rehne ..waisehi Airavat bhi apne rajya jake Yavan k gatibidhi paryabekhan karenge..karan uske rajya ko paar karke hi yavan Kekaya (Panchnad) tak pohuchenge..
Airavat's father , father-in-law and Sumitra felt relieved..Airavat also had mixed feeling like Digvijay
Chandragupt : Aditya apne parivar k sath Gandhar wapis jayega aur Takshshila aur Gandhar k sthiti paryabekhan karke acharya ko suchna dete rahenge
Aditya's family felt releaved..Aditya looked at Ketki and then gave painful gaze to his friend
Chandagupt : Ghanghor ko Malli jana padega..Gandhar rajkumari Alka wahin pr ashray liya hai karan vo apne bhrata ko samarthan nhi karti..Ghanghor Malli k rajkumar aur Alka se milke acharya k parvarti nirdesh k pratiksha karna padega..aur Sukant ko Panchnad jake Maharaj Porus aur Sikandar k yudh k sabistar barnana acharya ko dena padega
Ghanghor felt sad for leaving his friends..Sukant knowing that he has to go away from Suvadra..looked painfully at her..Suvadra bent her head down and left the place

Shashank : aur humare liye kya aadesh hai??

Chandragupt : Akshay , Shashank aur Dakshita humare sath Sakala chalenge..Takshshila ab surakshit nhi hai..Chitra aur Maya bhi humare sath chalenge..uske paschad acharya unke vishay mein nirnay lenge..

Chitra considered that this is the happiest news for her..she felt like dancing but controlled herself..Akshay , Shashank and Dakshita got relieved to know they are accompanying their leader and will be in direct touch of Chanakya

King Abhisar : jab acharya Chanakya k yehi icha hai to hum kaise badha de sakte hai..hum isi kshan tum sab k yatra k pravandh aramv karte hai..aajke liye darbar samapt hua..

he leaves..others also left the court..

Royal Garden

Digvijay , Airavat ,Aditya ,Sukant ,Ghanghor , Akshay ,Shashank , Dakshita and Chandragupt meets in the garden to bid adeu each other for years..they don't know when they will again come back together and will spend friendly time or ever will be able to do so or not..they hugged each other with teary eyes..

Chandragupt : mitron hum sab sharirik rup se ek dusre dur avashya ja rahe hai..kintu sada ek dusre k hriday mein rahenge..Digvijay aur Airavat aur Adirtya tumhare aur tumhare patniyon k liye humare shubhkamna tumhare sath rahenge..

Aditya hugged Akshay..and Shashank
Aditya : humne aajtak tumlogo k jo bhi parihas kiya uske liye humein kshama karna..kintu Shashank k bhojan priyata aur Akshay k saralta..sada humare smriti mein rahenge..

Shashank : aur tumhare parihaspriyata..

Chandragupt : Kamboj mein bitaye gaye ye panchdas divas hum sab k jivan k sumadhur smriti banke sada humare sath rahenge..

Digvijay : aur kambojbasi bhi tumsabko sada sarvada smaran rakhenge..aur us din k pratiksha karenge jis din veerta k misaal Chandragupt k hast acharya Chanakya k Akhand Bharat k sapna poora hoga..kamboj basi k shubh kamnaye bhi ab Chandragupt k sath hai..

everyone hugged Chandragupt together..

In The Midnight

Airavat , Aditya and Ghanghor had already left for their destination...Chandragupt and his friends will leave at dawn..but Sukant has to leave in the dark of night..as Panchnad is a very crucial place and he can't risk to any agent of gandher to see him..but for the last time he came to meet Subhadra before leaving..he knew she will come in garden..he sent a letter to her in hand of a kid of palace
he was not wrong..Subhadra was waiting for him..but Sukant got amused to see Subhadra's dress..it was the same cloth he bought for her and handed her forcefully the day before the competition when he brought Chandragupt to meet with Durdhara in disguise of warrior..Sukant smiles in relief he knows now Subhadra also loves him..

Sukant : Subhadra..

Subhadra didn't look at her.but Sukant understood that she is crying..he held her arms..and pulled her to him..Subhadra silently continued weeping keeping head on his shoulder..

Sukant : Subhadra tumne aj mere uphar sweekar karke humein humare uttar de diya..ab hum shanti se apna kartavya palan kar sakte hai..keval tumhare mukh ko smaran karke..

Subhadra : hum tumhare pratiksha karenge Sukant..hum rajkumari se prithak nhi ho sakte kintu apne man ko tumhare chinta se prithak nhi hone denge..

Sukant : hum jante hai rajkumari tumhare liye kitna mahatyapurn hai isi karan hum tumhe humare sath chalne k liye kadapi nhi kahenge..kintu tum dekhna prem karne walo ko iswar milwate avashya hai..hum nhi jante kab kintu humare punarmilan avashya hoga

Subhadra : hum tumhare liye kuch laye hai..jo tumhe sada mere smaran karwate rahenge..jaise tumhare diye gaye ye vastra humein tumhara smaran karwate rahenge..
and she gives her portrait which was the cause of their meeting..

Sukant : aur tumhare ye chitra ko hum sada humare hriday se lagake rakhenge..

and he hugged Subhadra tightly and kissed on her forhead and cheeks..

Subhadra : apna kheyal rakhna Sukant..

Sukant : tum bhi..aur humare smriti mein ashru nhi hasya byay karna

and he gently pecked on her lips..and leaves the place..Subhadra wipes her tears and kept staring at him until he disappears from sight...

In The Twilight

The darkness of the night hadn't wiped out fully..the eastern sky just started to change colour from deep to light blue..Chanragupt entered into Durdhara's room through window..he confronted with himself for thousand of times for entering here like a thief but he just couldn't restrict himself..after the meeting of royal court he didn't see Durdhara anywhere and then he had to be busy in the arrangement of leaving at dawn..and had to meet a no. of people who came to show their gratitude before he leaves..but for a second he couldn't keep himself away from Durdhara's thought..he desperately wanted to meet her before leaving but Durdhara didn't come out from her room..so he had to come this way..he knew entering into a girl's room at night that too of a princess's room is wrong and none will allow him to come without permission and as Durdhara was in her room so he couldn't ask for her permission and also he wanted to meet her privately without letting the guards know so he was forced tio enter this way..it was impossible for any one to enter into room without Pratiharin's notice but Chandragupt knew to crack security as he earlier entered nto Dhananand's and Karvinath's chamber in Lokhandi too..

   The room was not completely dark a lamp gave it a shadowed effect ..she found Durdhara was sitting on bed leaning on the bed post ..she was sitting with her back towards Chandragupt so she couldn't notice him..she was holding a paper and talking to it..Chandragupt stood silently and started observing what Durdhara doing a while..as he neared to her he got amazed to see that this paper on her lap contained his portrait only..

Durdhara (to portrait) : hum jante hai tum aapne matrabhumi aur ane acharya k prati dayittabadh ho..kintu humara man kyun nhi man raha hai..hum jante hai kekdin tumhe to kamboj se jana hi tha kintu jab vo samay a chuka hai to hum itna bichlit kyun ho rahe hai..kyun barbar ye shanka utpann ho rahe hai k kamboj chodtehi tum humein bhi bismrit ho jaoge...ye chinta bhi humare liye kitna kashtdayak hai..

Chandragupt (smirks) : aapne aapko vyarth kasht na do rajkumari

Chandragupt's voice made Durdhara shocked and shivered..the paper from her hand floated and fell on Chandragupt's feet..he picked it ..Durdhara turned back and became speechless for a while as she was confused whether she is dreaming or not..

Chandragupt : humare ye chitra to humse koi guna adhik sundar hai..aap is desh k sarbadhik pratibhashali chitrakar hai..mannahi padega..

Durdhara now became sure that Chandragupt is really standing in her room.
Durdhara (screaming out of excitement) : Chandra..
before she could complete his name he hurriedly put his hand on her mouth..

Chandragupt : are chitkar na karo yadi pratiharin a jaye to hum kal sakala k nhi karagar k marg mein honge..

Durdhara calmed down..Chandragupt removed his han from her mouth..
Durdhara : tum aise akasmik yahan aye to hum chakit ho gaye the..

Chandragupt : tum apne kaksha se bahar hi nhi a rahe the..to hum kya karte..tumse na milke to ja nhi sakte the..aur nahi kisiko ye keh sakte the k humein ratrikal mein tumse milna hai..ye ashobhniya hota na..

Durdhara(
smiles blushingly).. : to tum humse vida lene aye ho

Chandragupt : nhi Durdhara...hum tumse humare vo anubhutiyon k bayan karne aye hai..jiske vishay mein hum kuch din purv tak anaviggya the..aur ye anubhutiya tumse jude huye hai..

Durdhara (questioningly) : kaunse anubhutiyan??

Chandragupt : kaunse anubhuti vo to hum spasht rup se nhi keh sakte..bas itna kehna chahte k tums milne k purv humein nhi gyat tha k acharya aur apne mitron k atirikt koi aur humare chinta ko aise adhikar kar sakte hai.aur yeh chinta man ko ek hi sath shant aur ashant karte hai .kintu kadachit tumhare bhrata Digvijay aur samrat Sikandar k paribhasha mein ise hi prem kehte hai..aur yadi yeh satya hai..to han humein tumse prem hai Dhara..

Durdhara felt so shy that couldn't utter a word in response..just lowered her gaze..Chandragupta cupped her face with palms

Chandragupt : humein bhai tha k yadi hum apne ye sthiti tumse kahe to tum hum pr krodhit hogi..kintu na jane humare man humse kehte raha k hum tumse yeh baat kare..hum nhi jante tum humare vishay mein kya sochti ho..kintu aaj jab tum mere chira se baat kar rahe the to humein bhi ye gyat hua.k humare  jaisehi kuch anubhuti tumhare man mein bhi hai..Dhara kya hum satya keh rahe hai..

Durdhara (blushed and whispered) : uddand vanvasi..

Chandragupt (smirks) : unmad rajkanya..

both giggles coyly..

Chandragupt : viswas nhi hota..jab humare pratham sakshatkar hua tha..to aisa pratit hote the jaise hum janma janmantar k shatru hai..

Durdhara : aur hum ek dusre k mukhdarshan bhi nhi karna chahte the..

C
handragupt : aur matra panchdas divas mein paristhiti kitna parivartit ho gaye na...

Durdhara : Chandra..hum tumhe baht yad karenge..na jane ab kab humare sakshat ho.

Chandragupt : Dhara..humein viswas hai..k humara punah sakshat shighra hi honge..

Durdhara : Chandra hum tumhe kuch dena chahte hai..
She goes to her chest and takes out the idol that was given by Kalyani..the colourful Natraj idol made by multi coloured precious stones

Durdhara : Chandra ye murti sada apne nikat rakhna Kalyani ne kaha ye soubhagya k pratik hai..ye tumhare raksha bhi karenge aur humare smaran bhi karwata rahenge...jaise tumhara ye chitra humein tumhare smaran karwate rahenge..

Chandragupt ties the idol in his pouch tied on his waist
Chandragupt : hum is murti ko kabhi apne se dur nhi hone denge Dhara..aur nahi tumhare smritiyon ko..

Durdhara couldn't control her tears any more..Chandragupt to console her pulled her in his arms...for a while they stood in the position embracing each other..he wiped her tears..she got lost in his innocent eyes..both realized that at last they had entered into the world of maturity
  the darkness wiped fully..eastern sky turned into red..birds started chirping..

Chandragupt : Dhara.ab humein chalna chahiye..nhi to yatra aramv karne mein vilamb ho jayenge..

Durdhara knew she can't stop him..so she noddded silently..

Chandragupt : Dhara. Helen ne tumhe uske taraf se kuch dene k liye kaha tha..jo hum aapne taraf se jane se purv tumhe dena chahte hai..

Durdhara : kya Chandra.

Chandragupt hesitantly held her face in his palms..and placed a kiss on her cheek..Durdhara's was not prepared for this..her cheek tured into red in colour with blush..she lowered her glare..

Chandragupt was about to leave..Durdhara held his hand..

Durdhara : Chandra hum tumhare pratiksha karenge..

Chandragupt (smiling sadly)  : hum bhi..
though he didn't want but he had to leave  through the window..before pratiharins comes and sees him..Durdhara leaned from her windo and without blinking kept on watching him..

On The palace Gate

after taking everyone's wishes the chariots along with Shashank ,Dakshita ,Akshay ,Maya and Chitra were waiting for Chandragupta to come

Akshay : Chandragupt ane mein itna vilamb kyun kar rahe hai..

Maya : bhrata ko kuch hua to nhi..

Shashank : are chinta na karo vo kadachit rajkumari se vida lene gaya hai..
after saying that with Dakshita's annoyed look he understood he did something wrong

Chitra was happy that she is finally getting rid of Kamboj and its princess and at last getting opportunity to spend time with Chandragupta..but she was a bit worried..that after that dinining hall incident Chandragupta didn't say a word to her..now Shashank's words almost burnt her ears..

Chitra : hum jake Chandragupt ko bulake late hai..itna vilamb hona uchit nhi hai
she was almost getting down from chariot..Dakshita stopped her holding hands

Dakshita : Chitra itna bechain na ho Chandragupt samay k mahatya humse adhik samajhta hai..vo ate hi honge

and then only Chandragupt was seen..Chitra was about to go down..but didn't dare knowing perhaps Chandragupt is perhaps upset with her

Chandragupt silently got into chariot..but  his eyes were glued on the roof of the palace as if was searching someone..but was failing to find her

Akshay : kya hua mitron kiske sandhan kar rahe ho??

Chandragupt (bemusedly) : kuch nhi..sarthi yatra aramv karo..

Shashank and Dakshita knew whom he was searching for..they remained silent..Chitra also knew..she felt sad but didn't say anything
the chariot just started to move..and then only Maya shouted

Maya : vo dekho rajkumari Durdhara ..prasad k prakar par..

Chandragupt immediately stood up..his eyes shined with joy and it met with two wide beautiful eyes..Durdhara waved her hands in air..his hands waved in response..both kept gazing into each other's eyes till the palace from chariot and chariot from palace were seen
..after both disappeared from each other's sights their heart kept carrying each others gaze along with the new feelings called love for each other... forever


THE END
 

 

 




Edited by FairyDreams - 17 April 2013 at 7:51pm

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Finally read ll the part waiting for the 38th cant wait!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pallo2504

Finally read ll the part waiting for the 38th cant wait!!!!!!!!!!


thanks pallavi
i didn't update 37th part yet
hey u read all the part atodin kothai chili?? was missing u..ya this will be last update
ektu bado comment dis na

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 1:13am | IP Logged
As usual awesome update really liked it ...

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 1:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pallo2504

As usual awesome update really liked it ...


thanks

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:48am | IP Logged
OMG this FF's gonna end? :o 

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