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PART-32

The Royal Palace

Digvijay and Chandragupta gathered all his friends secretly in the garden of Andarmahal so the plan could remain secret .Durdhara , Subhadra , Kalyani,Dakshita, Maya, Chitra..also were present there..Chandragupt informed the friends about their plan of rescuing Sreemati..everyone including Durdhara remained shocked to hear Digvijay's secret love towards Sreemati..

Durdhara (making face at Digvijay) ; bhrata aapne humse kyun nhi kaha k aap Shreematidi se vivah karna chahte hai??

Digvijay : Paristhiti aise nhi tha Dhara

Chandragupt : rajkumari tum ye prashna Shreemati k agaman k paschad puchna..yeh samay is alochana k liye upayukt nhi hai..

Shashak : satya kaha is samay humein Massaga aviyan k yojna pr dhyan dena chahiye..

Chandragupt : dhyan se suno Mitra..hum aj ratrikal mein hi yatra aramv karenge..Massaga yahanse aswaprishtha mein do divas k path hai..hum samay nast nhi kar sakte..Maharaj Avisar ko humare aviyan k sambad humare yatra k uprant hi milna chahiye..isi karan humare sath koi sena nhi ayenge..smaran rakhna humare uddesya yavan se yudh karna nhi keval Sreemati k udhar karna hai..

Sukant : kintu hum un dust yavan se yudh kyun nhi karenge??

Aditya : han unhe shiksha dena bhi to avashyak hai

Chandragupt : paristhiti k vichar karo acharya ne humein suchit kiya hai k Sikandar k vishal avinashi sena se yudh karke pran k ahuti dena Nirvudhita hai ..isi karan val k nhi vudhi ka proyog karna hoga

Airavat : jaisa tum thik samjho..tum humare neta ho..tumhara nirnay hum sabka nirnay hoga..

Durdhara : bhrata aap chinta na kare hum  apne bhabimata ko swayam mukt karke avisar le ayenge.

Digvijay : nhi Dhara tum abhi sampurn swastha nhi ho..aur yadi hum dono hi chale gaye to mata aur pitashree atyant chintit honge..

Durdhara : kintu

Chandragupt : Durdhara , Digvijay thik keh raha hai..tumhe to humse adhik mahatyapurn karya karna hai..humare jane k paschad maharaj ko Digvijay aur Shreemati k sambandh k vishay me suchit karna aur .aur avisar k suraksha sunischit karne k dayittwa bhi tumhare hai

Subhadra : han Dhara aur humein maharaj se yuvraj k vivah k vishay mein anumati bhi to prapt karna hai..

Durdhara unwillingly agreed...Chitra felt relaxed

Chitra (in mind) : iswar ko dhanyabad k rajkumari is bar Chandragupt k sath nhi chal rahi hai..ab Chandragupt k dhyan sare samay un pr nhi honge

Dakshita : kintu tum humein tumhare sath jane se na rokna..tumhare suraksha k dayittwa acharya ne humein saupa hai..

Shashank : han yadi baran karein to bhi to tum sunogi nhi..

Dakshita : avashya hi nhi..

Airavat : acha acha thik hai..to kaun kaun ja rahe hai??

Chandragupt : hum aat Digvijay , Sukant , Aditya , Shashank , Ghanghor , Airavat  Dakshita aur hum

Akshay : ye kya vandhu tumne humara naam nhi liya??

Aditya : karan yodhao k bich mein baloko k koi karya nhi hai

Chandragupt : Akshay tumhe rajkumari k sahayata karna hai Avisar k nirapatta hetu..aur hum mitro me se kisi na kisiko to Abhisar mei rukna hi hai..

Akshay remained silent ..he was not happy with the decision but Chandragupt was leader..so he had to obey him..

Durdhara : Chandragupt hum to nhi ja rahe hai kintu tum humare Aswaa Rangini ko le jao..vo sada yudh mein tumhare sahayata karenge..

Chitra felt irritated ..

Chitra (in mind) : ya to rajkumari swayam ya phir unke aswa..kabhi to Chandragupt ko akele chodo..

Chandragupt (turning to Kalyani) : rajkumari aap kal hi panchnad k liye yatra kare.aapko maharaj parvatatesar ko yavan k vishay mein suchit karna hai..

Kalyani : avashya

Maya comes and hugs Chandragupta.

Maya : bhrata dhyan rakhna apna...

Chitra comes closer

Chitra : Chandragupt hum tuhare safalta k liye prarthana karenge

Chandragupt : avashya..aur tum sab bhi..apna dhyan rakhna..

Digvijay (tensed) : kintu hum ek atyant mahatyapurn vishay to bhul hi rahe hai..humein hindukush k dusre paar jana padega..vo sthal atyant durgam hai ..aur us durgam parvat pr bayu k beg mein chalne k upyogi aswa humare aswashala mein atyant swalp hai..aur yadi hum unhe le gaye to Abhisar k nirapatta mein sankat utpann honge...

Chandragupt : to kya tum aise kisiko jante ho jinse hum aswa prapt kar paye??

Digvijay : aisa to ek hi hai..Shreshthi Subahu..is anchal mein Ashwa k sarvsreshtha byapari..unke nikat vo uttam aswa hai jo kadachit Magadh k nikat bhi nhi honge..

Airavat' got embarrassed with mention of his father-in-law..

Chandragupt : kintu vo Maharaj k agyat mein humein Aswa bikray karenge??

Digvijay : yehi to chinta k vishay hai..Subahu shreshthi pitashree k mitra hai.humein sandeh hai k vo humare anurodh sweekar karenge..

Airavat (determined) : sweekar karenge..avashya karenge...hum swayam baat karenge unse..

Digvijay : Airavat tum??

Airavat : hun mitra..hum in dino isi chinta mein the k unke samne kis muh se jaye.aaj humein unse aur Sumitra se kshama prarthana ki marg mil hi gaya..humne tayar kiya..k hum Sumitra ko purn maryada mein apnayenge aur apne rajya apne dharampatni k sath hi lautenge..

all the boys : sadhu sadhu..

Chandragupt : to aur vilamb na karo aur jao..hum sab nagri k dwar pr tumhare aur aswa k pratiksha karenge..(turning to other friends)..aur chalo hum sab bhi chalke yudh yatra k prastuti karte hai..

everyone leaves..

Durdhara (to Chandragupt) : hum jante hai tum safal avashya honge..asha karte hai k tumhare sakshat sikandar se ho..take yavan samrat ko yeh gyat ho k bharatvarsh veer yodhabarjit nhi hai

Chandragupt looks at her..her determined voice grew his confidence..he approvingly smiled and left


Durdhara ( to Digvijay) : bhrata hum Shreemati k baran swayam karenge..aap shighra bhabima ko le ayiye..

Digvijay (hugging Durdhara) : han behna..bas ma aur pitashree se baat karna aur unhe shant rakhna

and he leaves ..Durdhara went to her room..

Sukant comes near to Subhadra

Sukant : hum kisike prem k raksha karne ja rahe hai..humein shubhecha nhi dogi??

Subhadra looked at his eyes..a blushing smile came in her face...she only nodded ..Sukant leaves..

Subhadra (in mind) : vijayee banke ana Sukant..
and she follows Durdhara

Subahu shreshthi's Home in Rajpur

Airavat hesitated for a while and then knocked the door..the door opened and he stood speechless to see Sumitra to open the door..Sumitra took a moment to recognize him as the person she met on Saraswati riverside..

Sumitra : are aap to wahi haina jinhe hum saraswati nadi k kinare mile the..aap yahan??pitashree se milne aye hai kya??

Airavat only nodded.

Sumitra : aap asan grahan kijiye..hum pitashree ko suchit karte hai..

Sumitra went inside and after a while Subahu shreshthi comes..but he couldn't recognize Airavat as his son-in-law..he remembered that he has seen him with Digvijay..

Subahu : are aap yuvraj k mitra hai na??aap yahan?? koi avashyak karya hai kya??

Airavat touched Subahu's feet..Subahu got astonished..

Subahu: kalyan ho batsya..kintu aap aise humein pranam kyun kar rahe hai??

Airavat : hum aapse kshama yachna karne aye hai..

Subahu (confused) : aap kya keh rahe hai humein kuch samajh nhi a raha.kshama humse..kintu kyun?? aur kaun hai aap??

Airavat took a while to gather courage..and then looked at Subahu's eyes determinedly..

Airavat : pita hum vo hai jinke karan aapke kanya ko pichle paanch varsho se vina dosh..sabse kukatha sunna padta hai..hum vo hai jinke karan aapke man mein shanti nhi raha..hum wahi Rajkumar Airavat hai..jo vivah k paschad hi Sumitr ka tyag kar diya tha...aur aj aapke sammukh kshamaprarthi hoke dandaiman hai..

Subahu stood stunned...Sumitra was bringing water for guest ..out of shock glass fell from her hand..she looked at Airavat unbelievably and left the room with teary eyes..

Subahu (getting back his voice) : Rajkumar Airavat!!!..humare sunam , sukh , shanti..humare putri k jeevan sabkuch nasht karne k paschad ab tumhe humse kshama chahiye??..tumhe lajja nhi aya yahan ane mein??

Airavat : aya tha baht lajja aya tha..isi karan to aapke sammukh ane k sahas nhi ho raha tha..kintu ek vises proyojan humein yahan ane mein vivash kar diya..humein aapke uttam aswa k avashyakta hai..pitashree humein bimukh na kijiye


Subahu : .tum ja sakte ho..tumhe dene k liye humare nikat kuch nhi hai..na kshama aur nahi aswa

Airavat : kintu ekbar humare baat sunto lijiye..hum aapne dharampatni ko punah maryada mein aapne rajya le jana chahte hai..kintu is samay humein aapke sahayata k atyant avashyakta hai..yeh humare mitra k jeevan k prashna hai..humein aswa de dijiye

Subahu : tum yuvraj Digvijay k mitra ho..tumhe hum apman nhi kar sakte..kintu tumhare liye yehi uchit hoga k tum is samay humare griha se chale jao..hum tumhare kisi bhi tara k sahayata nhi kar sakte

and he himself disappeared into house

dishearten Airavat stood stunned for a while and then turned to leave thinking how to arrange horses ..suddenly he stopped to hear a maid is calling him

Dasi : suniye aap humare Aswashala se aswa le ja sakte hai..aapko koi badhadan nhi karega

the maid was looking at the inner door of the house..so Airavat understood someone instructed the maid to say so..he guessed who the person could be.

Airavat : hum aswashala k nikat avashya ayenge kintu hum tab tak aswa leke nhi jayenge jabtak jinhone tumhare dwara hum tak ye sambad pohuchaye vo swayam ake humein anumati na de..

he looked at the door and went where horses were kept..and kept waiting for someone..not much time he had to wait to see the person he was looking for is coming..

Airavat looked at her..Sumitra kept her head bent..

Airavat : humein kshama kar do Sumitra..hum jante hai i varsho mein nispap hote huye bhi kitne dukh se tumhe gujarna pada mere karan...kintu hum kya karte Sumitra..jis samay humare vivah hua us samay hum vivah k liye prastut nhi the..humne tumhare sath baht anyay kiya Sumitra..kintu aaj hum tumhe Patni k maryada mein apnana chahte hai..tum humein jaisa chahe waisa dand de sakte ho..yadi humaein kshama karna tumhe sweekar na ho to..kintu hum aapne rajya tumhe aapne sath leke hi lauteng..warna mrityu tak apne rajya mein wapis nhi jayenge..

Sumitra hurriedly put her hand on his mouth ith teary eyes..

Sumitra : nhi swami aise ashubh baat karke humein paap k bhagi na kijiye..in varsho mein hum aapkee deerghayu k liye vrat rakhte aye hai..mrityu ko aapke purv hum pr se jana hoga..

Airavat held her hand..

Airavat : to tumne humein kshama kar diya??

Sumitra (blushingly nods) ; aap aswa leke jaiye..aapke mitra aapke pratiksha kar rahe hai..

Airavat : hum shighra hi laut ayenge..aur tumhe apne sath le jayenge..yadi tumhare pita ne asweekar kiya to hum avisar raj k sammukh yeh prastav rakhenge..

Sumitra : pitashree k chinta na kijiye..vo dukhi hai..kintu vo adhik samay rusht nhi reh payenge aapse..aap nischint hoke aswa le jaiye..

Airavat held Sumitra's face on his palms..Sumitra bent her eyes out of shyness..he pulled her to him..and hugged her tightly..Sumitra's eyes got teary again she hugged him back ..after few moment Airavat felt the need to go..
he kissed on her forehead..and bid a good bye to her..
then he left with horses..

Sumitra prayed for his success and turned back and found her father standing there

Sumitra looked at him teary eyes..Subahu felt no need to say anything..he kept hand on her head..he was only upset with Airavat..but now there is no cause left for not to forgive him..

In The Gate Of Rajpur

everyone was waiting and was becoming worried for Airavat.

Shashank : aur kitne samay lagayega Airavat

Ghanghor : humein chalke dekhna chahiye
.

Digvijay : humare dil baitha ja rahe hai yadi Subahu shreshthi ne asweekar kiya to??

Chandragupt : humein sampurn viswas hai Airavat avashya aswa leke ayenge

and then only he was seen to come with horses..veryone got relieved ..

Shashank : Airavat iswar ko ashesh dhanyabad k Subahu shreshthi tumhare kshama sweekar kiya..aur aswa de diya..

Chandragupt sudedenly noticed a red mark on Airavat's throat ...what was actually Kumkum of Sumitra's forehead

Chandragupt : are ye kaisa daag hai airavat??

Dakshita (recognized it and embarrassed) : Kumkum?? Airavat pratit hote hai k tum Sumitra se milke a rahe ho

Airavat only smiled...everyone started laughing..Chandragupt felt a bit thrilled..coz he realized something happened which he is having an indication but is not getting properly..

Digvijay didn't take part in the laughter..he was becoming impatient..

Digvijay : acha acha ab to aswa prapt ho chuke to yatra aramv kare??

Chandragupt : avashya..aur vilamb karna uchit nhi hoga..

everyone rides on their respective horses and started for Massaga..

Massaga

the capital town of Assakeneya was an ancient city in modern day Afganisthan..Assakenayas were most powerful race of Kamboja ..they were democratic in policy..and so they had a disliking For Abhisara as Abisar was the only monarchy of Kamboja..Assakeneya's created most powerful resistance before Sikandar's army..where all men and women perticipated in the battle..after a month of resistance at last Sikandar's army captured Massaga and imprisoned thosands of Assakeneya's including children and aged..and women are made sex slaves of greeks and beautiful girls and women had been caged to give prize for the generals of Sikandar ..Sikandar  didn't involve himself in this plunder but he didn't prohibit his armies to do so..because he knew if he wouldn't allow his soldiers for plunder and rape then they will not find pleasure and will want to go back to Masidonia to their family and they canrevolt against him so he let his generals and soldiers for having sadistic pleasure like this..
   Chandragupta and his friends reached Massaga in two days ..they found except some dying old men and women Assakenays were just devasted..either they were killed or got imprisoned..their wealth had been looted , their houses had been caught fire ..from those old men they came to know that the leader of Assakenaya and his wife were killed in battle..his daughter Sreemati was imprisoned with many other young beautiful girls of Assakeneyas..as virgin young girls with beauty were gifted to higher level army generals not to the ordinary soldiers..they reached to the place wherethe girls were imprisoned..but they couldn't go openly in search of Sreemati..they would have caught then..so they had to hide in bush..to have an eye on the tents..
    Digvijay was being restless..if Chandragupta wouldn't hold him he would have run to the tent..
  
Digvijay : Chandragupt humse raha nhi ja raha hai..vo dust papi yavan hamare Sreemati ko hani na pohuchaye...

Chandragupt : kintu hum aise nhi ja sakte uhan..humare karya suru hone se purv hi samapt ho jayenge..

Sukant : kintu hum kare kya??

Chandragupt : wahi jo Chitra aur Maya ko raksha karne k samaykiya tha..Dakshita ko bandini banke un kanyao k bich jana hoga..

Dakshita : is karya k liye to hum sada prastut hai..

Shashank : han kintu dhyanse ye yavan dhurt hote hai..

Dakshita : kintu ek vishkanya ko vandini baana kisi ke vash k baat nhi hai..

she leaves...

when the greeks found her wondering..they easily caught her and took to the tent where girls were kept...after one hour Dakshita was seen to come...

Sukant : na jane kitne yavano ko upar pohuchake a rahi hai..

Shashank : han yehi to uske visesta hai..

Dakshita comes and Digvijay almost ran and held her arms

Digvijay : Sreemati mili??

Dakshita : nhi..vo use

Digvjay ( shaking Dakshita) : kya hua kuch bolo

Dakshita : use hamare pohuchne se kuch hi kshan purv Sikandar k ek senapati Sairus ko puraskar swarup de diya gaya..vo Massaga Nagri k dusre prant mein uske shibir k disha mein rawana ho chuke hai..

Digvijay stood stunned..Chandragupt and Shashank held his either side..

Chandragpt : chinta na karo hum Sreemati ko koi kshati nhi pohuchne denge hum abhi us disha pr prasthan karte hai..

and that time a chaos was heard from the tent

Dakshita : prateet hote hai yavano ko un do dwarpal k mrityu k sambad mil chuke hai jinhe humne danshan kiya..isse purv unke dristi hum pr pare..humein prasthan karna hoga..

Digvijay : han shighra chalo..us dust yavan ko hum apne Sreemati ko sparsh nhi karne denge..

and everyone rided on horse and ran to the direction where that Greek general went with Sreemati ..by any means they have to save her..




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PART-31

Royal Palace

as soon as Durdhara revealed herself everyone forgot to react for a while..the princess who was unconscious in Illness is found in warrior's attire..people were unable to understand what is happening was a mere dream or reality..Chandragupt felt bad as only to help him and his friends Durdhara had to reveal her secret in front of the whole capital..

watching Durdhara at first King Avisara , Maharani and Digvijay forgot everything and ran to her..
Maharani hugged her tightly and started crying


Maharani : meri putri..Iswar ko koti koti Dhanyabaad k tu thik hai

Abhisara (putting hand on Durdhara's head) : Chinta mein to hamare pran nikal raha tha putri..aaj hi hum Vishnu bhagwan k mahayagya bulayenge..

Durdhara : ma , pitashree ap logo ko chinta karne k koi avashyakta nhi..hum sampurn swastha hai

Digvijay (taking her face in palms) : meri Dhara ek pal k liye to laga tha jaise humne tujhe sada k liye kho chuke hai

Durdhara : nhi bhrata..hum aapse dur kabhi nhi ja sakte..

and brother and sister hugged each other...then only king realized Durdhara is in warrior's attire..

Abhisara : putri kintu tum yodha k vesh mein mahal mein pravesh karne k chesta kyun kar rahe the??

Digvijay : aur kya ye satya hai k Chandragupt tumhare rog upchar hetu tumhe Hindukush le gaye the??

Durdhara (bit her lips for a while and determined herself to speak the truth) : bhrata , ma , pitashree aur sampurn rajyavasi k sammukh aj humein ek satya sweekar karni hai..vo satya jo aj tak humne gopniya rakha hai...

and then she narrates the truth of her being warrior princess..all her frustration and pain for being caged in mahal for her sickness and then growing determination within herself to be honored as warrior..all her struggle , her suffering but reaching to the goal, the rescue of Chitra and Chandragupt's knowing her secret , her effort to stop Chandragupt from saying the truth and to fight with him and falling sick..and Chandragupt's redemption and saving her life by keeping his own life in danger and then being confronted with Ambhik's Gandhar soldiers and Kalyani's help to run away..and then her attempt to enter into her room and changing her dress but being caught in hands of lady guards ..
    she only avoided the part of meeting with Greeks as Chandragupta asked her not to say that in public because it will not only create panic but also make Ambhik aware of Greek's presence and he might try to join them..so he didn't utter a word about Greeks...
neeed to read the history..and I am little lazy to that.LOL
Durdhara : hum aapne is mityachar ke liye apradhi hai..humein is apradh k liye koi bhi dand sweekar hai..

after knowing all the story everyone's eyes got teary..and heart became full of sympathy and respect and pride for this 12 years old little princess Abhisar , Maharani and Digvijay lost their words to find out the true self of their beloved princess..Subhadra wiped her tears

Dakshita : Rajkumari Durdhara laksha rajkanya mein ek hai

Chitra : han unhi k karan to hum aj surakshit hai

everyone amazed to see Chitra praising Durdhara

Durdhara goes near Chandragupt and looked at his eyes..Chandragupt's eyes were full of pain for her..she held his hand and turned to Digvijay

Durdhara : bhrata Chandragupt aur unke mitra sampurn nirdosh hai..unhone keval hamare prano k raksha hetu apne apko sankat mein dala
(she again looked at Chandragupt) ..yadi aaj Chandragupt na hote to hum jeevit nhi hote..

Kalyani : han aur yahan pohuchne vilamb hona inki bhul nhi Gandhar Naresh k shadyantra the..vo chahte the k Chandragupt nhi Durdhara ko prasad tak wahi pohuchayenge take Gandhar Avisar rajya ko yavan k sahayata karne ke liye aapne paksh mein kar paye...tabhi jab hum Durdhara k vesh mein the to humein inhone satark kiya k yadi humne ye nhi kaha k dasyu o k hathon se Gandha Naresh humari raksha kiya to unke Gandhar Sena Avisar pr akraman kar denge.. yavano ke sahayata se aur Kamboj ko nasht kar denge

Digvijay turned to Ambhik with red eyes..

Digvijay ; Gadhar Naresh hum asha karte hai k aap aur ek muhurt bhi Kamboj pr byatit na karenge..anyatha hum bhul jayenge k aap humare atithi the..

Ambhik : humein bhi yahan rehne k koi icha nhi hai..hum to tumhare aur is abhisaar rajya k shubhakankhshi the..isi karan chahte the k tum Gandhar k bhati yavan k vashyata sweekar kar lo..Sikandar tumhe puraskrit karte...kintu tumne hamare prastav na manke yavan se shatruta mod liya..aab vinash k liye prastut rehna..Sikandar k sena k age nato tumhara Kamboj tik payenge aur na hi (turnig towards Kalyani) Panchnad...

Chandragupt (stepping towards Ambhik) : Bharatvarsh mein deshbhakt nagarik ka astitwa abtak vilupt nhi hua hai..jab tak Bharatmata k ashirbad se  aur acharya Chanakya jaise shikshak janam lete rahenge tab tak tum jaise hazaro deshdrohi bhi humare desh ko videshi shatru k nikat samrpan nhi kar payenge..ab jao nhi to ek Deshdrohi ko dand dene mein humein atyant anand hoga

Ambhik didn't dare to say anything more as he understood that whole situation is against him..he leaves the place giving an angry look to Kalyani

Digvijay comes to Chandragupt with folding hands..

Digvijay : Chandragupt samajh mein nhi ata kis muh se tumse kshama mange..tumne mere bhagni k liye apna pran sankat mein dala aur humne tum pr sandeh kiya??tumhe Dhananad k nikat preran karne ka chinta kiya??hum tumhare mitrata k yogya nhi hai Chandragupt..humein kshama kar do

he tried to touch Chandragupt's feet but Chandragupt held his hands

Chandragupt : kya kar rahe ho mitra..mitra se koi kshama yachna karte hai kya??mitra ko to hriday se lagaya jate hai

he hugged Digvijay tightly

hum jante hai Durdhara tumhare hriday ka ansh hai..tumhare sthan pr koi bhi bhrata aise hi acharan karta..

Digvijay : Chandragupt tum jaise mitra pake hum to dhanya ho gaye..

Chandragupt : humne to keval aapne manavta k dharam nibhaye hai..rajkumari k aswastha k liye hum bhi uttardayi the..yadi hum rajkumari k upchar na kar pate to hum apne aapko kshama nhi kar pate
yadi tumhe prasansha karni hi hai to apni veerangana bhagini ki karo..keval manobal se koi shareerik vadhayen kaise dur kar pate hai rajkumari uske pratyaksh praman hai

Avisar and Maharani hugged Durdhara again..

Avisaar : putri humein tumhare peera k koi avas hi nhi tha..hum to keval tumhare shareerik aswastha ko leke chintit the..tumhare man k vedna se hum anaviggya the..kintu ab tumhe yudhshashtra k shiksha hetu gopiyata rakhne k koi avashyakta nhi hai..

Durdhara : arthat hum ab shashtra shiksha grahan kar sakte hai..

Digvijay : avashya behn..hum to ab tujhe aryavart shreshtha yodha o mein tera naam dekhna chahte hai..

Chandragupt : aur hum chahte hai k acharya Chanakya k akhand Bharat k sapna pura karne mein tum bhi hamare sahyodha banogi..

Durdhara : avashya

everyone shouted Rajkumari Durdhara ki jai ..Veerta ki misaal Chandragupt ki jai..Yuvraj Digvijay ki jai..Maharaj Avisaar ki jai

Chandragupt's friends came closer..

Digvijay (turning to Shashank) : humein kshama kar de Shashank..humne tujhse na jane kya kya keh gaya..kitna apman kiya..jab ke hamari Dhara ki jeevan raksha ki marg tune dikhaya..hum kaise tera dhanyabaad kare

Shashank : Digvijay tune koi anyay nhi kiya..aur Durdhara hamare bhi behn jaisi hai..to na keval ek vaid k haisiyatse apetu ek bhrata k haisiyat se bhi Durdhara ka upchar karna hamare kartavya tha..aur humne apna kartavya nibhaya...

Digvijay hugs Shashanka..and all the friends hugged Chandragupt...Maya also runs to him

Maya : bhrata aap thik ho na..

Chandragupt : han behn
..teri prarthana jo mere sath tha

and he hugs Maya ..then all the friends picked and carried him on their shoulder..

"Chandragupt ki Jai, Chandragupt ki jai"

Sukant (coming to Subhadra) : kyun kaha tha na..Chandragupt Durdhara ko le ayega.
he smiles indicatingly

Subhadra smiles back but felt embarrassed to remember how she was crying keeping head on Sukant's chest..she didn't answer anything and followed Durdhara and king and queen to andar mahal

Chitra : hum to Chandragupt se mil hi nhi paye

Dakshita : to kya hua ab to vo mahal mein hi hai..baad mein mil lena

and everyone enters into Palace
well Ihave read this earlier...I love the entire sequence, Durdhara was awesome. And finally she get the permission to take lessons about war strategies.
And others are just fantastic.
In The Evening

after Chandragupt and Durdhara's return the whole palace as well as capital went into festive mode..Chandragupt was worried whether Durdhara was able to get that letter or not..he also wanted to know about how she was feeling now but in the whole day he didn't get opportunity to meet her..he also was confused why is he still worrying about her..in the evening he was sitting with his friends in Atithigriha..but still he was unmindful..his friends got to know about the greeks from him..so they were discussing about that..

Ghanghor : ye yavan Kamboj k seema tak a pohucha hai..acharya ko to is vishay mein suchit karna hoga..

Airavat : uske avashayakta nhi hoga..acharya is samay panchnad mein hai aur patradwara Chandragupt ko suchit kar chuke hai k vo yavan k kamboj agamn k vishay gyat hai

Sukant : kintu ye yavan itne shighra Avisaar k sima tak pohuch jayenge iske apeksha to nhi kiye honge

Akshay (observing Chandragupt's silence) : Chandragupt tum chup kyun ho? kya tum yavano k vishay mein chinta kar rahe ho??

Chandragupt was about to say something but before that he noticed Shashank and Aditya to enter with tensed faces ..Chandragupt seemed to be waiting only for them..he ran to them

Chandragupt : Shashank tumne osodhi prastut kar liya??

Shashank : han parantu..

Chandragupt : parantu kya..humne tumhe sare avashyak pusp aur lata lakee diya tha na ..kya kuch aur vastu k avashyakta hai.
God...then what you want me to do?
Shashank : nahin Chandragupt vishay itni saral nhi hai..vo phul tum sangrah karne k paschad ek sampurn divas atit ho chuke the ..isi karan jab vo pusp hum tak pohucha uske kuch gun nast ho chuke the..
what?

Chandragupt : yadi aisa hai to hum punah Hindukush jayenge

Shashank : nahin Chandragupt ab vo pushp punah agami vasant mein hi ayenge..kintu hum aur Rajvaid ne milke oshodhi bana liya..asha karte ye rajkumari k liye upkari sidh hoga
wow great then where is the problem????

Chandragupt : to tum aise chintit dikhai kyun de rahe ho??
hmm

Aditya : karan hum Rajkumari k janam k grahakal r punah vichar kiya..unke jeevan mein ek nhi do sankatkal ka astitwa hai..ek dwadash varsh k ayu mein jo k tumhare karan atit ho gaya..kintu astadash varsh k ayu mein ek aur sankat k astitwa hai..yadi ye sankat atit ho jaye to rajkumari deerghayu labh karegi
respected Madam.eta medicine na astrology?? R astro mene challe...AngryNo comment.

Chandragupt (without thinking anything else) : hum Dhara ko kabhi kuch hone nhi denge..
amar Neeler katha mone pode galo...CryCry

everyone got stunned to hear Chandragupt taking princess's nick name which is taken by only her family members and dearest people..
Chandragupt also felt his reaction was quite unexpected to his friends ..so he left the room..
Aha.Lajja
Aditya : mitron tumlogoko aisa prateet nahin hota jabse Chandragupt Hindukush se pratyabartan kiya kuch parivartit ho gaya hai..
tate tomader Lakshyapurti te kono samasya hobe na bandhura...
Airavat (with a meaningful smile) : humein ye pratit hote hai k Chandragupt ab balak se purush mein parivartit ho raha hai..
hmm...very funny.
everyone started laughing except Akshay.

Akshay : arthat??
e abar r ek jon.

Shshank : hey iswar hum to bismarit ho gaye the k yahan ek aur balak bhi hai jiska parivartan ana abtak sesh hai
maran...
everyone continued laughing..
Very bad

In The Garden

Chandragupt was moving aimlessly..he knew perhaps the next day they are starting for Takshashila..but he doesn't know why he feels he has something left to do..some task is incomplete..he doesn't know what..for some unknown reason he wants to meet Durdhara once..want to talk to her..but what should he talk?? he again says to himself no Durdhara will be fine..but couldn't make his mind understand that..because after six years no garranty that he will meet Durdhara again..how will he save her from upcoming danger??then he will be probably busy in fighting with Dhananand..then??..he realized he can't keep away Durdhara from his mind..the one night changed everything..again and again he reminds the moments when Durdhara was so close to him..she was resting on his shoulder..the touch of her lips is still on his finger.he got thrilled..the unknown feelings occupied whole his mind..all he wants to see Durdhara again..
achcha unknown feeling ta era feel korbe thik kobe???Ami bujhte parchi r Samrat parchen na???
"Chandragupt"

Chandragupt was so lost in his thoughts that he didn't notice someone's arrival..so he got astonished with the voice..he turned back and found Chitra with some unseen expression on her face..

Chandragupt : Chitra tum yahan??

Chitra : aj pura din tumse baat karne k absar hi prapt nahin hua..to hum tumhe bagicha k disha mein ate dekhk milne chale aye..Chandragupt jante ho jabse tum Hindukush k liye yatra kiya tabse pratyek kshan hum iswar se tumhare suraksha k liye prarthana kar rahe the..
hmmm

Chandragupt (smiles) : aur inhi prarthana k phal hai k durgam parvat , yavan aur gandhar senao se yudh karke hum aur rajkumari Durdhara surakshit prasad laut aye...
hmmm

Chitra's smile disappears as soon as Chandragupt takes Durdhara's name..

Chitra : hum baht anandit hai k kal hum Kamboj se prasthan karenge..

her voice is sounded relaxed as she expects to get more time to spend with Chandragupt whom in all these 11 years of age she knew as the only mate of her life.. if they leaves Kamboj..but Chandragupt didn't like the words as she was mentally not prepared for it..so he remained silent
Chitra comes closer and held his hands..
hmmm...
Chitra : Chandragupt humare anand ka koi seema na raha ye sochke k hum ab sada sarvada tumhare sath rahenge..
hmmm...

her voice was indicative...Chandragupt surprisingly looked at her eyes and found its also full of some unknown feelings...but why is he feeling that this expression he is expecting in someone else's eyes??
Oh for this...
"Sakhi bhabona kahare bole?
Sakhi jatona kahare bole?
Tomra je bolo divas rajani bhalobasa bhalobasa...
Sakhi bhalobasa kare koi?
Se ki kevali jatonamoi."
watching Chandragupt looking at her Chitra blushes as she was unaware of what is going in his mind..she moves more closer to keep head on his chest but before that a lady guard's voice made Chandragupt to move away from her..
wait wait...and wait. You guys are children I guess.


Pratiharin : Veer Chandragupt rajkumari aapse sakshat karna chahti hai..vo apne mahal mein aapke liye pratiksha kar rahi hai..

Pratiharin's words seemed pouring honey in Chandragupt's ears..he without uttering any word leaves for Princess's Mahal with Pratiharin
Chitra stood there stunned and hurt..
aww

Princess Durdhara's Mahal

Durdhara was walking around the room out of tension..he got relaxed to see Chandragupt entering with Pratiharin..Pratiharin left after bringing Chandragupt..she ran to him and held his hands

Chandragupt was surprised to see Durdhara called her in room not in garden under room..but he didn't ask any question as he was thrilled with Durdhara's touch on his hand

Durdhara : Chandragupt hum tumhare hi pratiksha kar rahe hai..hum baht chintit hai...

hayeee...
Chandragupt looked at her questioningly

Durdhara showed a rolled cloth which was used then to write letter

Chandragupt : kya yeh wahi patra hai jo acharya Shukdv ne Ambhik ko preran kiya tha??to tumhe vo patravahak mila tha??

Durdhara : han aur yudh karke use murchit bhi karna pada tha..

Chandragupt gave an admiring look to her and started reading the letter..but as soon as he read it his face got darkened with tension..

Chandragupt : hey iswar ye yavan  Pushkalavati aur Kath ko parajit karke bayu k beg mein Kamboj tak pohuch aur Aspaniya upjatiyo ko parast karke Assakaneya upjati k nagri Massaga mein phuch chuka hai..aur ek mahayudh k baad Assakaneya ko vo parast karchuke hai..Assakeya upjati ab Sikandar ka das ban chuka..unke lakshya ab Abhisar hai..aur Shikdev ne Ambhik ko likha hai k vo Abhisar ko parast karne mein Sikandar ko sahayata kare??..Iswar ko dhanyabad k ye patra Ambhik k nikat nhi pohucha..kintu ab Abhisar is sankat k liye apne aapko prastut kaise karega?? chalo hum maharaj ko suchit karte hai..humein ranniti bhi prastut karna hai..Digvijay kahan hai??
O eta sei letterta...ami bhablam love letter dichche Valentine's toh tai.LOL
Chandragupt was going to leave out of tension but Durdhara stopped him holding hands...

Durdhara : nhi Chandragupt pitashree ko ye sambad na do..bhrata ki baran hai..
Huh

Chandragupt (shocked) : Digvijay?? parantu kyun??
what?

Durdhara : Assakeya upjati se Abhisar ka sambandh baht jatil hai Chandragupt..Abhisar Kamboj ka ekmatra rajtantrik rajya hai..isi karan pitashree sampurn Kamboj k raja mane jate hai..kintu shaktishali Assakeya upjati pitashree ko apne raja sweekar nhi karte..isi karan pitashree aur Assakeya upjati k pradhan mein manomalinya ho chuke hai..
OH no again PoliticsAngry

Chandragupt : kintu is vishay k sath Maharaj ko yavan k agaman k suchna na dene ka sambandh kya hai??

Durdhara : bhrata atyant dukhi aur chintit hai Shreemati k liye..
hmm...meye bado hiye gache...

Chandragupt : Shreemati??
Ekta gaan " he Prabhu ami noi Shreemati.ami Parvati"LOLLOLLOLya but Shreemati hok ba Parvati...pratyeker husband ba lover rai dayitwa r kartabyaoashe abaddha.Confusedmane kartavyabaddha ba bartakyatavya.dhur ki bole amie jani na...orai bhalo bolete parbe.Angry

Durdhara : han Assakeya upjati pradhan k kanya Shreemati..bhrata aur unke balyakal k mitrata the..vo dono Kamboj k prasidha Gurukul mein padhte the...kintu hamare pita aur Assakeya k matbhed k karan unke mitrata dirghsthayi nhi ho paya..do varsh purv Kamboj mein ek prasidha utsav mein yogdan hetu Shreemati se bhrata k punah sakshat hua..aur bhrata k anurodh se humne uski ek chitra banayi
eri naam prem.
she shows a portrait of a beautiful girl


ye Chitra sarvada bhrata k nikat hi rehte hai..na jane kya asakti hai unhe is Chitra se..humne dekha hai unhe is Chitra ke sahit samay byatit karte huye..humne to karan bhi janna chaha..kintu unhone kaha k hum ab bhi ye anubhuti samajhne k liye balika hai..
aww baby...
Durdhara made face...Chandragupt feels strange ..in his subconscious he feels he knows what is in Digvijay's mind..but he couldn't recognize it consciously...
WHat?Confused DIgvijaya's mind?? Or his??

Durdhara : Chandragupt humse bhrata ke dukh dekhe nhi jate ab tum hi hamare sahayata kar sakte ho..tum karoge na sahayata??
Hayee

Durdhara asked beggingly holdin Chandragupt's hand..Chandragupt had no power to refuse her request...he kept his hand on her shoulder..
Wow...

Chandragupt : Chinta na karo hum apne mitra aur tumhare bhrata Digvijay ka sahayata avashya karenge..
Why fear? I am here.
Durdhara (smiles) : tumse yehi apeksha tha..
"you are my strength"
Chandragupt feels he can do everything to see this smile
hmm..."your smile drive me crazy"Wink

Divijay's Room


Divijay was standing near the big window..watching the darkness of the night..it seems his eyes is searching something in darkness..his painful gaze was expressing his inner sorrow..he didn't notice Chandragupt is standing near him
"wahan jahan tu he tera libash hai/ wahan jahan tujh he pe khatam ash hai/ wahi shuru.wahi pe dafn jaan hai..."
Chandragupt : Durdhara ne humein vo patra dikhaya..

Digvijay got his consciousness back with Chandragupt's voice..

Digvijay : kaun vo Chandragupt tum..hum kuch aur vishay mein chinta kar rahe the to tum pr dhyan nhi diya..

Chandragupt : kya tum Shreemati k vishay mein chinta kar rahe the??

Digvijay (shocked) : Dhara ne tumhe ye bhi bata ya??

Chandragupt : vo bas utnahi bataya jo vo janti thi..hum sampurn kahani tumse sunna chahte hai..
aww
Digvijay (giving a painful smile) : Chandragupt tum hamare neta avashya ho kintu ayu mein humse anuj ho..jeevan k baht sare anubhutiyon se tum anaviggya ho..aur unmese sabse sundar anubhuti hai prem..jo ek anatmiya purush aur nari ko ek adrishya bandhan mein bandh dete hai..aur vo bandhan man k hote hai..aur yehi sambandh hai hamare aur Shreemati ka..kintu Abhisar aur Assakeya k bich matbhed k karan hum apne anubhutiya gopan rakhe the..kintu aj jab Assakeya k upar yavan akraman k vishay gyat hua to Shreemati ka vabishya chinta karke hamare antaratma kampit ho rahe hai...tum to jante ho bandini nari k sath kaisa acharan karte hai yavan..Durdhara ko to tumne raksha kiya aur sada k liye humein  rini kar diya..kintu hum Shreemati ko un narilobhi yavan se raksha kaise kare?? karan hum jante hai k pitashree Assakeya k sahayata hetu sainya kabhi preran nhi karenge..karan isse Abhisar nirbal ho jayega..aur tum to jante hi ho yadi Sikandar k vishal sena ko pratirodh karne k kshamta yadi sampurn Bharatvarsh mein koi rakhta hai to vo keval Magadh hai..
What is love...
Don't know.
Why people fall in love...
Don't know,
Only thing I know Veer...
Two individual People suddenly feel the same thing...
In the same way.
Instead of so amny differences between them.
They start care for each other...
Without knowing the fact...
May be they won't be able to saty with each other.
May be this is called Love...
As per I know my Love.


tears rolled from Digvijay's eyes..

"hum aapne aapko baht asahay bodh kar rahe hai..yadi vo yavan Shreemati pr atyachar kiya to hum jeevit nhi reh payenge..is glani k sath k hum apne prem k raksha na kar paye.."

Chandragupt couldn't understand everything what Digvijay said..but he somehow could feel Digvijay's pain..coz a similar feeling was growing within him too..

Chandragupt comes closer to Digvijay and put hand on his shoulder..

Chandragupt : hum mitra kis karan hote hai?? hum samast mitra milke tumhare prem k suraksha karne mein tumhara sahayata karenge..

a ray of hope comes on Digvijay's face..he was well aware of Chandragupt's ability

Digvijay : satya Chandragupt..tum karoge hamare sahayata Shreemati ka raksha karnemein..

Chandragupt : han keval hum sab..maharaj ko is vishay is samay gyat na hon dena..anyatha hamare yatra mein vilamb utpann ho sakte hai..hum aj hi Massaga nagri k liye prasthan karenge..chinta na karo tumhare Shreemati ko kuch nhi hoga

Digvijay hugged Chandragupt tightly in response..
Hmm...May you win Veer.







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