CGM FF: Ehsaas...Kuchh Naya Sa (complete) - Page 10

Posted: 12 years ago
hey jhum,of course you're a writer and dat too a very good one...πŸ‘
aur suggestions chaiye to mere bheje mein bohot hain...uchit samay
aane par doongiπŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
@ jhum:
       cummon buddy, u r a very gud writer indeed, den y u r getting such negative thoughts ?? we luv ur writings yar, so keep updating !!πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
hya update soon 


mere wala rajkumari

Posted: 12 years ago
@ radhi:   who is she ??😊
Posted: 12 years ago
iska kya parichay du. Shes an angel, a princess, raj kumari, fairy
.
Shes our lil Krishna,, as we knw her by this name only. Shes Dhriti Bhatia. Our heart.. Our baby
Posted: 12 years ago
PART-6

Rajpur Capital of Kamboj

after 3 days of journey Chandragupta , Digvijay and their friends reached to Rajpur the capital of Kamboj...here i need to say something about Kamboj..
      ..Kamboj was one of the 16 mahajanapadas of ancient India..but most remote among the all mahajanapadas...ancient kamboj is located in the Vally of hindukush ...its stretched to the pameer highland region...it was in the north-west of Gandhara...its location is in the present Afganisthan...being situated in such a hill region Kamboj never counted as powerful mahajanpad...actually the inhabitants of Kamboj were divided into different clans..so Kamboj never could represent himself as a united kingdom..some clans were of Iranian origin...as throughout the 6th-5thcentury B.C Kamboj and Gandhar region was the part of achaemenid empire of Persia
..established by Darayus ...after the fall of Persian power on the hand of Greeks in Greco-Persian war they became free...but unlike Gandhara ...Kamboja couldn't establish himself a united powerful kingdom because of its social structure...and for the geographical location there happened a mixture of indo-iranian culture...though Kamboj had a kshatriya king who ruled the capital Rajpur (modern Rajori) and nearby areas..but the clans specially of the iranian origin refused to accept him as their king..so most of the mountainous clans enjoyed republican govt. in their own area...though because of the peaceful nature of present king those clans show their respect to him and except 1 or 2 they took part in crowning ceremony of prince Digvijay in the capital Rajpur...
    Kamboja in spite of being situated in the border of Aryavarta was naturally protected by Hindukush..there was only one way to reach there which was through Gandhara...so only possibility of Kamboja's being attacked by Sikandar was only if Gandhara would be under foreign control as in the time of Persian reign..so king of Kamboja is worried about prince Ambhik's friendly behavior with the yavanas and this is why he is in dilemma to be  agree in the proposal of the marrital allignment of Ambhik and princess Durdhara...although Ambhik is also invited to this ceremony...like other neighboring princes...but Ambhik will reach on the day of ceremony...
 

In The Royal Palace
...in the Royal Palace Chandragupta and his friends have been given a grand welcome...the fame of Chandragupta's bravery has been spread through Digvijay's letter and the spies..so people were gathered to watch him as well as their own prince...the King and Queen accepted him with the love same as they showed to their own son...after all that welcome ceremony...Chandragupta and his friends have been taken to the Atithishala...only Drakshita has been taken to the Andarmahal..Shashank without wasting time concentrated in the food brought by the servants...Aditya , Airavat and Ghanghor went to watch the collection of horses..as traders of Kambojas used to import best quality of Iranian horse from persia...horse trading was one of the main source of income of Kamboj..Akshay and Sukant along with the children of palace went to the garden...and Chandragupta alone was roaming in the palace...from one Mahal to another...first time he is watcing the inner sides of a royal palace..otherwise in his experience of entering in a royal palace was only limited to the king's court and the prison...suddenly a smile flashed in his face by recalling some words long long ago..as if of another birth..when he was standing in front of the royal palace of Magadh..with a great astonishment in his eyes

...kya hum apne ma ke sath is mahal mein reh sakte hai??...

din mein sapney mat dekh valak...

no its not a dream anymore...its an oath now...may be one day it will be true...but he would still remain alone..what if he would live an ordinary life like then..no no he has to get control over his emotion..he has come here to take part in the happiness of his friend..he must not be emotional...
...suddenly Chandragupta realized he has reached to the terrace of the palace...and may be its either side of the palace...he noticed there are colors scattered here and there and brushes and papers are rolling...and there was a paper seems something has been made on it was under the brushes..he sat on his knees and gently tried to lift it..and suddenly a jingling voice shouted from his back

..kaun ho tum??aur kiske anumati se andarmahal mein pravesh krne ki duhsahas kiya??...

..the voice made Chandu thrilled and the paper slipped from his hand a gusty air flowed the paper...




 

Edited by jhum_86 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
sorry friends i was so weak to update my story...and still now i have no energy to update much...plzz do comment on it...abke bad update zaroor bada hoga...
Posted: 12 years ago
no worry aru,
tkcr.
N wow its lvly. Lv d wy u describe. Its so nyc. Aha! Ek lv triangle dik raha h. Gr8.
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by jhum_86


sorry friends i was so weak to update my story...and still now i have no energy to update much...plzz do comment on it...abke bad update zaroor bada hoga...



@ jhum:
   get well soon dear, & d update is gud as usual, & y do pm me saying " comment if u lyk it " ?? cummon yar, it's really gud !!
πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
so here cums our little princess 4 d wud b emperor of India !! πŸ˜ƒ

Rajkumari Durdhara ki JAI πŸ˜ƒ!!  Bharat ke bhavi Samrat ChandraGupta ki JAIπŸ˜ƒ !!

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