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fri42911

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 5:07pm | IP Logged
awesome update.
please continue soon.
thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 6:17pm | IP Logged
Wow! Really nice update! I especially liked the cute Abhiya scene Smile Waiting for the next update! Update soon Smile

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
Fiza...that was so superb...Kabir and Angad are so funny...loved the whole kidnap part...well mein Sid ke liye nahi kahungi usse jo milna tha woh Misha ne hi de diya...update soon sweets

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 12:05am | IP Logged
awesum part fizaClap

i loved the update...  the kidnapping part was really nice, it was full of fun and mastLOLi... i loved the romantic and naughty moment between abhiyaEmbarrassed... sid deserved wat misha gave him... love ur ff and continue soonHug


Edited by minahil1997 - 12 June 2011 at 12:05am

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 4:56am | IP Logged

Hey . .
Great update !
The kidnapping scene was awesome. .
Pia chasing abhay wid a bailan and abhay calling her Rasgula. . . Awww ! So cute!
Thanks for the pm. . Dear!
When r u gona update. . Ur other two FFs .?
Continue soon . .
TC . .

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 10:59am | IP Logged
Gr8 update yaar.. Loved d Part at d Raichand's..it was amazing.. n d whole misunderstanding thing was awesome.. Sid's suprise thing was nyc bt later everything went bad.. Carry on..thanx for d pm..lol.

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 10:38pm | IP Logged

Ch5

In the room

Misha:Don't  you Dare  touch Me!

Sid has is hand on his face right where he got slapped    furiously he looks up at misha

Sid yelling : MISHA! tum ne muhje thappar  kyun mara  main ne  kya kiya?

Misha: cheekhne ,chilana se kuch nahi hota   main bhi cheekh sakti  hoon. Aur haan don't you try to act innocent  with me   Sid Kya kiya. Itne disgusting or cheap harkat ki hai  ki  muhje sharm aarey hai bolne bhi .  Prashant had called and you know what  he said  hey yaar Sid  so did my idea work I'm sure you'll get some action tonight if you know what I mean  and  then he started laughing 'today  you have really   hurt  me , how sick can you be 'how can you disscuss are personal matters with your friends.

Sid is so shocked: Dehko Misha  calm down  kyun itne choti si baat ko itna  baari issue banana.

Misha: Choti si baat Sid for you it might bhi choti si  baat for me bhot baari baat haan. Kyun aise  kya .

Sid: Kyun ki  tum kabhi muje tumhre  kareeb  nahi aane dehti  I mean itne dooriyaan hai humare beach.  For god sake  I'm your husband Misha  I have every right tumhre pass aane laken you never let  me itne dooriyaan kyun hai .

Misha: Kya kareeb  nahi aane dehti   how can u lie like that Sid ' I have always fulfilled the duties of a good wife  up in till today in fact yeh phele baar hai  ki  I have pushed you away from me  other then that     I have never   refused  you ' aur haan doori kyun your asking me this Sid you know  exactly why    even though I forgave you  I still can't forget  what ever happened 3 yrs ago  and that horrible night  and you know what Sid  you're the reason  the reason for the dooriyan   between us your  attitude, ego and  selfishness    has made it happened  not me.  You never have time for  me it's only work work  and  work' Every night I  cry  myself to sleep that one year  was the worst year of my life  because  it showed me your true colors  and who you really are and took away my dreams.

Sid:  You will never let me forget what happened  na ?I know it's because of me  and my attitude, ego and  selfishness  but   you  can at least cry yourself to sleep and  you are very lucky  u don't have to live with guilt I do.  I feel so guilty for  everything that  happened  3years ago I still can't face you or myself for what I did ,I know I don't give you any time  but I'm doing this for you so we have a good lifestyle Misha please try and understand me  what so wrong in what I did?  I love you that's why I did all of this.

Misha:I know  every single day you live with guilt and I always try  my best so you don't  feel it but It's not that easy to move on with life I have tried to the past 2 yrs  but I just can't . Aur tum kya bole that you love me that's why you did all this, no Sid don't lie yeh tum iss liye kare kyun  ki you wanted to fulfill  your needs.  I am your wife  once you start treating me like it only then your so called needs will be fulfilled.  End of discussion Understood! ( she takes out her night gown and is walking out of the room)

Sid blocking the door with his arm : Where do you think you're going?

Misha:  Guestroom(and walks out)

Sid bangs his hand on the wall in anger :!@#$%&*!

Angad's house

 Kabir is lost in his thoughts FLASHBACK: Misha jerks  her head up her hair hits  kabir's face .

He looks up at her she is starting to yell at him  but he is  so lost in her beauty. And   can't stop thinking about  Misha's  teary eyes.

angad snaps his fingers in front of kabir : yo Mr.cool  kya hua what are you thinking about?  

kabir:    huh oh um kuch'' kuch nahin.

Angad: kuch toh hai kya  whats up' if you think I 'still made at u I'm not, you did all  this for me so it's ok.

kabir: yaar you might forgive me but I feel so bad for making her cry  she had tears in those beautiful eyes of hers. You know something she seemed very sad not because of all this that happened but   because of something else  there some kind of sadness in them . wish only if I could make her smile  just once I would feel so much better for what I did.

angad: Oye! What are you saying  it seems that  there is more to what you are saying , I feel it just excuse so you can meet her again. By the way you have already done enough and haan you are forgetting a few things 1. Your married 2. She's married 3. She won't want to see your face after what you did so there no use just stay away from her and she will be happy . 

kabir: no yaar it's not an excuse  I want to say I'm sorry  and you will help me otherwise I will go tell ruhi that I lied and this was all your idea. Smiling his mischievous smile

angad: but it was your idea I didn't even know you were going to do all this you wouldn't lie to her

kabir: yes I will if you don't help me' you will help until she forgives me then Ruhi will also be happy because her friend is happy got it.

angad: no one can win with you what will I have to do ?

kabir: now that's what I'm talking about first of all find  out basanti's  name  then  go and get as much info about her  where she lives her number and what all she likes meaning fav flowers chocolates anything then get back to me ASAP. I better be going Panchi will be back from her shoot soon so I will c  you later.

Later that night

kabir is  in bed wide awake think about what happened today  and Panchi is fast asleep 

Panchi turns  on her side looks up and sees kabir awake

Panchi : kabir  you still haven't gone to bed kyun are you feeling ok is something wrong? u are acting really weird today I mean you only act like this if you have done something stupid.   What did u do now?

kabir:Panchi babe you are  calling your pati stupid'it's nothing of the sort I just have some work related tension. 

Panchi: work related whats up kya hua ?

kabir:  yeah um  ek clinent kay saath confusion hogaya tha  gaalti se wrong package got delivered to them and big humgama happened that's all I will sort  it all out  lets  go to sleep.

Early next morning

Panchi is at the park jogging with IT

Panchi: T  you know your bro was  acting so weird last night ,I asked was up but he said  it was work related do me  afavor a find out whats up ok

T: sure will do aww look at that puppy

Panchi: what dog    I hate dogs (she starts to hide behind T  then  sees the puppy looking at her she starts running and puppy runs after : T help me!

She is running and keeps looking behind her to see how far the puppy is from  behind when she suddenly bumps in to a guy who catches  her from  falling (just like abhay always cathes piya ) they have a eye locking session. T is watching all this from far

 After a few min of eye locking guy still has Panchi in his arms  : Are you  ok where were going in such a hurry

 Panchi:  stupid kutta !

Sid :What ( upset at fact of being called stupid kutta ! he lets go of Panchi which makes her fall flat on her butt!

Panchi: Ouch! (looking up at him from the ground ) you idiot why did you let go of me like that

T comes running to Panchi after she falls on the ground

Sid :mind you how dare you call me a stupid kutta ! after I helped you .

Panchi  pointing her index finger at him :  main tum ko (suddenly she sees  the puppy grueling  at her  she jumps on to his bike with both feet up ) main tum ko nahin yeh stupid kutta ! kay bare main baat karereh thi  point to the puppy that's barking at her .

Sid:what oh I really sorry listen plz don't be scared  come down (he gives her his hand)

Panchi: what the hell do you think of your self learn to control  your anger  naak pe gussaa   

T whisper to Panchi kya hot hai  yaar  : walks by the guy  um excuse me but do u belive in love at first sight or should I walk by again?

Sid on his bike : not interested and drives off.

T:  but I am interested uff kya style hai but I think I have seen him around some where but where?

Panchi:  t  why  were you flirting with mr. angry young man by way who is he  not sure.

kabir is in his car he  sees Misha at a bakery he runs in there and orders a cake and tells the sale guy to give it  to her with all her other packages

Misha  checks all the boxs before leaving the store and opens the boxes of sweets and sees in one box is a chocolate cake with abig smile on it saying I'm sorry : yeh mera box nahin hai

Sales guy: no the guy over there told me to give it to you (points to kabir)

misha takes the box and is walking to kabir: what is all this

kabir: cake you don't like cake? Dehko I'm sorry  for what happened (he turns to give her the box when he slips and the box opens and  cake falls  allover  Misha .

That's I t for now hope you all like it  do comment press the like button



Edited by lalmirch28 - 23 June 2011 at 12:09am

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
That was an enjoyable update Fiza...
Chocolate cake all over MishaLOL...
SidChi met in classic girl in boys arm styleLOL...
T is really cute with her flirting and all and nice to see her like this without her usual bi****nes
So the couples have all met...lets see what happens next...
Continue soon...
Love youHug

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