My Fortune A Misery UPDCh19/Pg35 - Page 3

Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear nice concept...
luking forward to ur ff..keep it up :D
Posted: 12 years ago
Diya di...
Awesome chaps...
Agle chap se mujhe bhi padna hai...
So plll Mujhe bhi PM kardena...
The 1st 3 chaps were ... Fabulous, fantastic and truly gr8
 
Posted: 12 years ago
update sooon!!!!!!!!The FF is just so awesome!!!!!!!! Please update fast...waiting...
Edited by Simran42 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by -Hina-


Wooaaw, Awesome one :D
Thanku for the Pm.

thnx...😊
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by silky_harshad


I hav just 1 word 4 ur ff
mindblasting
wen i was reading 2nd chap,i was lyk
'wen c is going 2 face onu,wen wen'
update soon n inform me also 😊

thank u...😊 sure i'll make u knw whn itz updtd...
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by RoKafan4eva


hey dear nice concept...
luking forward to ur ff..keep it up :D

thnx...😊
Posted: 12 years ago

Hi all..

Hw u all...here is the nxt chapter

I couldn't sleep the whole night. I could see his face when I close my eyes. The whole night I was think that what happen to him or what made him to be in such a condition. But I clearly remember this not the first time that he is suffering from a situation like this. At that time there was clear reasons; all these things came to my mind when I was walking towards his cell. He was sitting with plate of food in front of him. He was staring at food. I entered into the cell and looked into his plate it contained Matarshutir kochuri. He was very fond of Aloo Kuchori which I used to make.I went near to him.

"Onu":- I called out.

He didn't look at me.    

"Tu aaj yeh khale mein kal tumhe Aloo kuchori banakar lavoongi":-I said.

Still his eyes were in the plate. Then I took a piece from his plate forward my hand towards his mouth.

"Mera Onu hain pls yeh kha":-I requested.

He opened his mouth and ate that piece then I started to feed him. Half an hour went like that.

Then Dr.Gautam came to the cell.

 "Taani":-He called me.I turned looked at him with happy face.

"Yes Doctor":-I said.      

"What are your plans for him":-He asked to which I had no answer. I looked at Onu.

"Ok don't get tensed he will be alright":-He said as a tone of consolation

"Kya mein iss bahar leke javoon?:-I asked.

"Hmm":-He said unwilling because no patients are allowed to go out of asylum.

"Thanks":-I expressed my gratitude.

"You must reach her before lunch time":- He ordered

"Ok":I agreed to it.

"Take Raju attainder with you don't go alone.":-He said to which I nodded

 

He went out.

 

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I made Raju stay near the car and I took him to that to that place were we spent memorable moments of our childhood; our school. I do clearly remember our childhood days. Those days; which we used to laugh at and also it made our eyes wet when we grew up.

 

The most important thing of our childhood was that everywhere we both were together. Even it was fighting, eating, studying and in all other activities. Anurag was at the first position and me at last even if it was case of roll call or marks.

 

"Onu dekh iss jagah ko aur yaad kar unn sari palon ko joh humne saath mein bithaye the":- I said to which I expected a look from him but he didn't gave me that.

 

I held his wrist as he used to do mine in order to take to a place where I want to accompany him. I took him to our class. We sat on the 3rd bench in middle our favorite place for 3 continuous years. That particular place had uncanny power to turn the wheel of memory.

 

PAST…

 

OUR CHILDHOOD---------10 YEARS AND SIX MONTHS AGO

 

 Class room of Taani and Anurag.…..Teacher stood in between board and her table for distributing the answer paper.

 

Teacher: Anurag this is your answer. Very good keep it up you got 95 in maths.

After teacher gave all paper and last it was Taani who had left.    

Teacher:Taani  this is yours and now also you obtained  mark 40 our of 100

Taani looked at Anurag who was sadly hearing Taani's marks.

The bell rang all went out. Taani and Anurag stayed in their class. Anurag and Taani sat on same bench. Anurag moved more nearer to Taani.

 

Anurag:Taani tu na fikr math kar

Taani(cryingly):Tu ne joh bhi sikhaya mein voh sab bhool gayi Onu

Anurag:Hum final exam mein try karenge na and we'll win so be HAPPY.

Taani:Lekin Onu mein maa se kya kahenge

Anurag:Maa ko mein manaloongi.Ab chale…

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At Taani's house…..Taani stood bowing her

 

 

Laboni:Mein kya karoon iss ladki ko..?

Anurag:Laboni maa

Laboni:Tu ne usse kithna sikhaya lekin yeh kabhi pad nahi sakthi.

Taani:I'm sorry maa

Laboni:Kya tujhe patha hain tere baba ke jaane ke baath mein kithni mehaath karthi tujhe padane keliye

Anurag:Ab bas kijiye mein promise kartha hoon final exam mein mujhse zyada mark Taani ko milega.

Laboni:Tere wade kya hotha hain Onu yeh ladki padna bhi chahiye

Taani:Mein try karoonga please maa

Laboni:Hmmm… 

Anurag held Taani's hand. She looked at him.

Anurag:Ab tu kush hain na 

Taani smiled. 

Anurag:Toh chal mere ghar chalthe hain

Taani:Haan.

They ran in the rain to Anurag's house.Their house were opposite each other.

 Nilanjana was standing at doorstep waiting them.

 

Nilanjana Ganguly:- Anurag's mom. She was brilliant singer but none of her kids got her talent. Except Anurag she had two more children; Ananya Basu; who was Anurag's elder sister got married in her teenage to Rithesh Basu due to forcing from her dad and other one was Robindo who was two year younger to Anurag. She had given up all her wish to become a singer to look after her family. She never treated her children and children of Laboni separately because Laboni and she shared their relationship from year since she got married. All call her Neelu.

Neelu:Aagaye tum log.

She led them inside.  

Anurag:Maa mjhe mera markd mile

Neelu:Acha… zaroor axhe marks honge hain na

 

Anurag:Yes

Taani:Maa sab log kahan hain

Neelu:Bahar gaye hain haan Robi kamre mein hain

Anurag: Taani lets go 

Taani and Anurag climbed the stairs and reached Anurag' room. 

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In Anurag's room……. He opened the door.

Anurag:Robi tu…!!!

 

Robindo Ganguly:- He just 2 years younger to Anurag. He never accepted TaAnu friendship and used to tell some or the other way they would fall in love in his young age. Anurag love him by every inches of his heart but never poured his love on him. He used to make fun of Anurag 99 kilos.

 

Robi was sitting on Anurag's bed and playing Anurag's video game.

Robi:Dada

He stood up not because of respect but he feared of Anurag kick on his head. 

Anurag:Tu mere bed pe kya kar raha hain..? aur mera video game…?!!!! 

Robi hand it to Anurag he was going to hit on the head.

Robi:Pls dada agar aapka yeh dai kilo ka haath mujhpe padega toh.. 

Taani:Bas… bas Robi tu school kyun nahi aaya..?

Robi:Paav mein dard tha 

Anurag:Abey Joote

Robi 😃 

Seeing Robi expression Taani also laughs. Anurag was so happy to see Taani laughing after long hours.

Precap:

PRESENT… 

I noticed that Anurag running his hands above the names engraved on the desk. I saw my name underneath his arm.

 

 

 

Posted: 12 years ago
Nice Chapter dear!
Looking forward for next chapter allready! 👍🏼 
Posted: 12 years ago
aww so sweet chapter
vrryyy emotional 😒
update soon 
luv it
Posted: 12 years ago
very nice!!!! thxx for the pm\!!!!
love the story looking forward for the next chapter!!!:)

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