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Bhavanab

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 1:53am | IP Logged
Finally finished reading this and must say it is one story in IF I'll never forget .. for many reasons !! Anyways ... I loved the way you handled the plot. It was simple and the whole story was in a flow ... you held Abhijeet's character perfectly and I could really imagine him feeling guilty ... I even was able to imagine himself meeting the parents and also the expression on his face. I really appreciated the 'reality' element you decided to concentrate on ... and not even for a single moment did you divert from it or go OTT ... it was a nice simple story .. I really liked it .. Thanks for presenting such a nice story on IF Smile

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 2:16am | IP Logged
How sweet... Thank you Bhavana Blushing

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Awesome story astonish...loved it...emotional part was very nice...and so was the end...ClapClapClap waiting for more stories from you...Big smile

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 8:13pm | IP Logged
sorry 4 being late ASTONISH...
 
ur STORY is AWESOME...

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Posted: 14 May 2013 at 5:18am | IP Logged
I want to read this story once again, so pushing up.

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Posted: 14 May 2013 at 5:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by visrom

I want to read this story once again, so pushing up.


Haww... this is my first... non-contest story !!! Embarrassed

But you know.. since last year.. i don't feel like writing stories... may my stories and ideas were/are not good Ouch

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Posted: 14 May 2013 at 5:33am | IP Logged
You are not in the right frame of mind to sit and think peacefully
...to write a story you need...fursat ke raat din...

It's important...to get that relaxed frame of mind. even I am trying...hopefully in June I'll be able to get a couple of days to myself...jab main or meri tanhayi baat kar sakenge.

ROFL

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Posted: 14 May 2013 at 6:03am | IP Logged
wow asto, nice one! will read, and gv feedbk sn!

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