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FF M&G"KHOOBSOORAT HAI ZINDAGI" pt24@120 31/1/2013 (Page 3)

shah10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
nice intro,
do continue plz,

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Hy sweetie
looking forward 2 ur ff
cant wait 2 read it
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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mahimak Goldie

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 7:21pm | IP Logged
really interesting.. do continue soon n pm mee

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Do update soon

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 8:55pm | IP Logged
A very good intro. looking forward to reading more of it. Thanx a lot.

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lalitha.. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 1:06am | IP Logged
lovely introduction...looking 4ward 4 story 3 start...cont soon...thanks 4 pm...

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 1:07am | IP Logged

                                  KHOOBSOORAT HAI ZINDAGI
                          PART 1

     She sat in car and thinking about her life how its change but why, why only she, she never did any thing wrong in her whole life but what is this why she has to pay all this why she has to bear all pain alone by her no one is there to sooth her pain to company her when she need most she lost her Papa ji and now also her Maa and friends. Her trail of thoughts disturb when someone shook her shoulder she come bake from her thoughts and look at the site where a person and a girl standing 

person - choti malkin hum dehlli puhanch gaye hn 

     She just noded and come out of the car she look around her both side big banglose laid this is a posh area of dehlli her next destination she dont know where to go she just has adress in her hand wich her mom give her that there is her frnds house where she can find shelter for some month or so she wear a black shawl to cover her face and body. She look at both who standing in front off her with teary eyes they want to scream to cry loud but they can nothing just see her helplessly. they want to help her but cant. She control her self gather some courge too speak 

Geet - kaka ab app log jaye wapis bohat der ho rahi he mn theek hun ab mn ghar doond loon gi app jaye or jaa ker maa ka khyaal rakhiye ga or unko tssali dijiye ga k mn theek hun or nimi tu maa ka bohat khyaal rakhna unko meri yaad mat any dena un se kehna bss mery liye duaa karein mujhy kuch nahi hoga 

     When geet said those word all of them broke in tears and sobs nimi just hug her tight she is not willing to leave her di her friend she loves her so much 

Nimi - di mn ne app ko chor kr nahi jana please mujhy apny saath rakh lo mn pehly k jesy app k saary kaam karun gi ap k saath rahun gi mn ne nahi jana please di bss mujhy apny saath rehny do 

   Geet cover her mouth dont want to listen anything else she know very well if she said any thing alse she will loose her control she gather herself

Geet - nahi bss ab tum jao tm ne un logo se b bach kr jana he ab or der mat karo kaka issy ly jao 

    he just noded and come forward to take nimi with his she is his daughter thy jst come here too leave geet and they have too go back to HP before anyone notice. he also dont want to leave his nanhi pari, his doll, he loves her more then his own daughter from the day first he is with her he carried her every where she just wish for once she is only daughter of his malik. He worship his malik. he come forward and put his hand or her head and said in shakie voice Rabb sohna apki hifazat kary meri saari duaayein apke saath hn app ko kuch nahi hoga . he said and turn too leave with nimi she is not willing to go. they go and before siting in car they turn to see their shoti malkin for last time they dont know that they can see her in their lives again or its a last time. Geet put a brave face too let them go. When they leaves from there she broke into tears they r last companion of her. 

   She shook her head and see the time its 1:00 am no one in road that she can ask for the adress she start walk to find her next destination she not eat in proper way from last too days they locked her in a dark room in the way of dehlli kaka brought some food for her that she eat. she is feeling week but this is not a right time so she keep her journy on. now it going to two hours bt she cant find any right way she still roaming in street with a hope she felt thirsty but no water. 

    suddenly  in a bike  two goons type man come and start to tease her she is now more scard dont know what to do they r full drunk she gather her strength and push them on road and start to run to one side with her full speed

                                         - <3 - <3 - <3 -

    On the other side Maan in a party on sameera's place he lost track of time in the party and when he see time his eyes widen in a shock its nearly going 3:00 am he is now sure that Dadi maa going to kill him its too late as Dadi maa told him that he has to came back in KM at 1:30 but what he can do so he rushes to sameera to say bye and rush to porch. He dont know what to do now he just want to fly his BMW to reach KM as early as hi can. 

    But his luck on the way back when hi take a turn a girl who come in front running badly going to hit with his car he just press break but its late girl hit with his car and land on ground. He come out running then he saw two goons also come behind the girl but when they saw him they leave the place . He bent down to see girl she has no wound as such to see but she is unconscious he dont have time to go hospital. 

    He carried her in his arms and put her in back seat and drove towards KM its an hour  drive to the KM when hi reach KM its 4:00am he dont know what to do he just pick her up and carried her to in KM at that time nakul is there he ask him to call a doctor 
she is still unconscious he jst carried her to the room next too his lied her on the bed and grab some water to sprinkle but no use 

     He see her first time in light her whole body cover with shawl. In black shawl her face looking like a full moon in black night she is pale and week but its her angelic beauty is something he cant deniey she is so beautiful he never want to see her but it seems that its not in his control.

    He just set beside her looking at her face drinking her angelic beauty with his eyes. Her eyes at that time he did not want that she open her eyes what if she open her and he fail to ramove his gaze what if he drawn himself in her eyes No he snap out what he was thinking.

      he is going insane he crushing nakul now. he called him

Maan - what the hell is why is doctor is not here till now its going to a half an hour now 
he roared at nakul who stood there more pertified not know what to say or what to do . After listening maan's voice Dadi maa come from her room to see what is hapning why maan is angry at that time

Precap :- Daadi maa's reaction Shocked LOL


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lalitha.. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 1:37am | IP Logged
nice part.
interesting...cont soon...thanks 4 pm...

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