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FF M&G"KHOOBSOORAT HAI ZINDAGI" pt24@120 31/1/2013 (Page 120)

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                  Part 24    
            Maan is going to kiss geet when a knock on door disturb him he groan in frustration want to kill that who dare to disturb him now . First geet is not with from morning and now when she atleast back someone is hell bent to annoye him . Seeing maan's condition geet giggle softly and stand up from maan's lap who is stil not ready to leave her but she make a baby pleading on which maan have to left her . Adi come inside with a file after waiting 5 minuts at the door but maan's angry glare make him abruptly stop in his track "  wo ... wo sir main baad mn ata hun " adi said hurriedly and turn to leave when geet stop him and she recieve a glare from maan but she ignore it completely Adi sir rukiye or btayie kya kaam tha Geet asked ever so sweetily giving a mini heart attack to maan . Who is now planning kick this Adi out . Adi very reculantly come to maan side to show him file . Maan check file as soon as he could and give it back to adi ordering him not to disturb him again . 

      Adi noded and left the room closing door behind as soon door is close maan again pull geet in his lap who is standing with open mouth in shock . She is dumb struck at maan's audacity and landed in maan's lap without any protest . But as maan in circal around her waist geet try to jump off only to make maan hold her more tightly . Geet make a baby face trying to remove maan's hand but no use maan choriye na koi a jaye ga she said trying to put some sense in maan's brain . Koi nahi aye ga mn ne bol diya sabko Maan said with ever so innocent face making geet pout and maan who is looking at geet's lips with so much desire could not himself more so he take her pouting lips in his giving geet another shock but soon this shoke turn into heavenly pleasure . Geet close her eyes in this bliss her hands move on their own accord holding maan bring her more close to herself . And for maan like got his breath back that is lost with her anger and now he is no where to stop . He is relishing every bit of her sweet supple lips nibbling them making geet moan with new wave plaesure that is covering her body . Both loose their sense long before Geet whimper for breath but maan is no where to stop . He leave her for a momant only to capture her lips again for not ending passionat kiss . 

       After like eternity both broke apart panting heavily geet hide herself in maan embrace who held her more tightly bring her more close to himself with content smile closing his eyes to live this moment praying for this moment stay like this forever . After sometime maan's phone ring but he is no mood to pick his call or even have a look on caller id Geet who is still hiding herself in maan's embrace ask Maan phone dekhiye na koi impotant call be ho sakti hai . But maan make a face and did not bug to see phone but the caller is more dheet then him and his phone buzzed again this time geet sat straight and threaten maan to recieve call if not then she is leaving . Poor maan how can he let his jaan go so half heartedly recive call . 

      After that maan stay in conference room only with geet doing his office work that is very important as they have very little time left behind . but in no way he let geet away from him for a moment and geet has nothing to do only to drool over maan's evey gesture let it be his anger on employes or his attitude with his client or his adorable smile on adi's sily mistaks everything about her maan is diffirent so special so divine and she is in love with her maan again and again Ye HER MAAN ONLY HER MAAN . 

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       Both maan and geet come back in mansion after tiring day altough its normal for maan but its first day of geet and its too much for her fragile body to bear . She almost sleep on chair with tiredness when maan deside to go back mansion and he can work from their also . 

      When they both enter in mansion they left all surprised with the decoration . Whole haal is illumining with candals and diyas and a beautiful path with flowers and candals . They looked at eachother the again towards hall where Daadi and vicky are standing witha big smile . Daadi ask then to step in but when they about step in vicky stop them saying today they have put their feet togather with holding hands . Geet looked down blushing hard Maan looked at his daadi who shrug it off saying she can't to do anything so Maan held geet tightly yet with care promsing her for a happy life geet looked in maan's eyes and next moment both step inside still looking at each other and how can vicky leave this moment with out capturing it forever . 

      Maaneet walk on roses with holding hand Daadi have tears of happiness in her eyes she pray to ALMIGHTY for their happiness forever . Maaneet took blessing of daadi and hugged vicky who also have tears in his eyes . Today he did all arrangements without anyone's help he want yo make this day special a memorable day for his bro and Bhabhi . And Daadi make all food for her childrens .

       Vicky lead them towards dining table for dinner as he is also hungry from morning so they deside to have dinner first . The dinner is again a happy afair Vicky is chiriping most his happiness know no bound . As dinner come to an end vicky quickly run at one direction and on the music he caome back clapig at the musice start He pulled daadi with his singing . 

          Aye dil laaya hai bahaar Apnon ka pyar kya kehna 
dadi dance with vicky and sing 
          Milein hum Chalak utha Khushi ka Khumaan kya kehna 
she come towards maaneet and cup their face lovingly and sing 
          Khily Khily chehron se ajj Ghar hai mera Gul-e-Gulzaar 
                                        Kya kehana 

 then four sing in union 
          Khily Khily chehron se ajj Ghar hai mera Gul-e-Gulzar
                                        Kya Kehna 

   Daadi signal vicky and they pull maaneet for dance first geet is shy but then she leave her shyness and dance with maan and sing togather . 

          Aye dil laya hai bahaar apnon ka pyaar kya kehna 
geet sing looking at maan 
        Milein hum chalak utha khusi ka khumaar kya kehna
 Maan sing holding geet's hand 

both looked at each other got lost in each other eyes they forgot every thing around them maan pull her more close to himself talking with eyes . 

               Hum tum yoonhi milty rahein Mehfil yoonhi sajti rahy 
      Geet sing looking at maan with pure love 
               Bas pyaar ki yehi ek dhun har subah shaam bajti rhy 
    Maan sing telling his wish to geet 

           Gale mein mehekty rahein pyaar bhari baahon ke haar kya keha   
     Geet sing telling maan her forgetting daadi and vicky . its when daadi held geet cheek and she blush hard and they togather 

         Khily khily chehron se aaj ghar hai mer Gul e Gulzaar 

    Geet looked at Her parents pic that hanging in haal . She want them to be here with her watcjing her happiness . She want to share her happiness with her parents first but she can't . She took a deep breath controling her tears when a hand come wiping her tears . 
             Aye dil laaya hai bahaar apnon ka pyaar kya kehna 
    Maan sing for her with a smile signaling her towards daadi who come forward 

            Milein hum chalak utha khusi ka Khumaar kya kehna 
            Khily khily chehron se aaj ghar hai mera Gul e Gulzaar 
  Daadi kiss geet's forhead with happy tears teling her they are togather now  

           Khily khily chehron se aaj ghar hai mera Gul e Gulzaar 
vicky come and join then and All sing togather huging each other sharing their love and happiness . 

     As the song end They all come and sit haal enjoyig their full family moment . When daadi remove her Kangan and gave it to geet saying now its her right to wear these kangans . Before geet said a word vicky speak Dadi app sab kuch bari bahun ko de rahi ho meri wife k kuch nahi rakhna kya Vicky said all lost in his own world but soon he curse his big mouth when he recieve angry glate from his bro and poor daadi still in shock Daadi i think hum pehly vicky k liye larki dhoond lety hein bohat juldi hai isko Maan said gritting teath and vicky said ( Vicky beta aj tu gya ) he try to say some thing when daadi ask him to come in her room with very setrn expression and poor vicky know he is gone now . He looked at geet for help but she did not looked at him for once . Daadi mein sony ja rja hun Vicky said and run in his room without looking back even for once . As soon vicky locked his room all brust in laghter uff they could not controle any more Vicky's face is worth watching Geet said clutching her stomach . and they start laughing again . 

  Precap :- Geet talking to rano 

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Edited by love4all - 31 January 2013 at 5:07am

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lovely update...

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@love4all: Nyc story!!!!Smile

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vicky's surprise was fabulous

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lovely update di Embarrassed
very well written Clap
love vicky's dialogue " Dadi app sab kuch bari
bahun ko de rahi ho meri wife k
kuch nahi rakhna kya " LOL
continue soon di Big smile

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 6:24am | IP Logged
maaneet moment broke adi agayaLOL.maan not going leave geetEmbarrassed.dadi nd vicky surpraise them Tongue.all r dancing .vicky ki leg pullingLOL

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Awesome updates..
awww vicky's surprise was gud..
luved it.. continue soon

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