Fan Fictions

   

Maneet FF - Journey called life - Thread 1

Post Reply New Post

Page 1 of 151

Page 1
Page   of 151
Page 2 Page 151

Vaidhumom

Goldie

Vaidhumom

Joined: 08 January 2011

Posts: 1112

Posted: 05 June 2011 at 4:58am | IP Logged

Hello Everyone

You all know me thro my first FF on Maneet ' GEETIKA (Link given below)

Now, I have another story...inspired by  Tamil movie... "Rhythm".  imagining Maneet in it in a different way. There are hundreds of Maneet FFs in IF and I am sorry if my FF story line matches with any one...if it does, its mere due to a coincidence.

Please note that this FF will be my second priority till I finish my first FF GEETIKA. 

May change the name of this FF...but just sharing the concept as of now.
 

Giving a simple prologue. Please read and comment if I can go ahead.

JOURNEY  CALLED LIFE:

No body knows what comes next...what lays ahead

We expect a lot out of LIFE but life always gives us surprises...some time sweet, some time bitter, Some times cruel.

LIFE doesn't have one definition...it has millions...and every definition is apt for it.

It's strange as you never know what happens next moment of LIFE...It makes you laugh sometimes...makes you cry many a times...hurts you and at times brings you to a situation where you don't know the difference between life and death...But LIFE goes on...

 

PROLOGUE:

At Delhi Airport...

Dev: Shona...Rothe Rothe vidha karogi?

Geet: Aur main kya karoon? Have you come across any newly wedded couple separated before even they get to start their new life together?

Shona...Do you think I want to leave you like this and go? I have got some emergency in office and hence I  have been asked to visit our Katmandu branch...Its just a matter of two to three days...and I am here right on the New year's eve to celebrate a new year and a new beginning with my beautiful wife.

Maanna padega...my wife is lucky for me...This is the first ever time I am going to board a flight and also, this visit to Katmandu will prove to be a turning point in my career.

Ab hans bhi do na please (Please smile now)

Geet blushes

Remember...Not only me, Komal is also waiting for you...so, dont disappoint us

Dev smiles and kisses her forehead... I will never disappoint you both

On the other side of Airport...

Maan: Jaan...is it necessary to attend your friend's wedding that's happening all the way in Katmandu? She is going to arrange for a reception in Delhi anyways...

Neha: Jaanu...try to understand...She is my close friend and none of our friends have agreed to attend this wedding as its happening in Katmandu...Agar main bhi nahin gayi tho bechari bura maanjayegi (If I  too didnt attend the wedding, then she will get upset). And she will not attend our wedding which his going to happen in next 2 weeks.

Main Yun jaaongi aur yun aajaongi (I will go and come back soon)...dont worry jaanu... smile now.

Maan smiles and kisses her forehead.

The flight was scheduled to depart on time...and announcement made...

Dev still looking at Geet

Neha still looking at Maan

Geet: Eise kya dek rahe hain Dev?

Dev: Bas Apni shona ko aakhri baar dekh raha hoon...Mera matlab hain,2 din ke liye jee bhar loo.

(I am looking at my sweet heart for the last time...I mean, to fill my heart for 2 long days)

Maan: Eise kya dek rahi ho Jaan?

Neha: Bas Apni Jaanu ko aakhri baar dekh rahi hoon...Mera matlab hain,  2 din ke liye jee bhar loo.

 (I am looking at my sweet heart for the last time...I mean, to fill my heart for 2 long days)

Both Dev and Neha board the flight.

The flight lands in Katmandu Airport...

Dev He calls Geet Immediately after landing...

Geet cries non stop

Shona...please don't cry and make my life even more difficult...its just a matter of 2 more days...I promise to be with you before the New Year eve begins.

Neha on the way to the wedding venue calls her family and Maan to inform about her safe arrival...

Jaan...please come back...I am not liking to be here without you.

Jaanu...I promise to be there with you before the New Year eve begins

Dev gets busy with his office work...Frequent Calls/SMS from Geet...

Dev replies back to one of the SMS and replies... "sweetheart...this is the hundredth SMS in last 2 hours"

Neha is fully involved in her friend's wedding...Frequent Calls/SMS from Maan...

Neha replies back to one of the SMS and replies... "Jaanu...enough...I guess that was the hundredth one" and blushes...

Two days were normal for any other human being but for these two love-pairs...it was worse than two hundred years...least did they know what comes next...

Dev and Neha board the same flight again from Katmandu to Delhi...The flight scheduled for early in  morning hours of 31st of Dec.

Their journey comes to a disastrous end in the mid air just before landing in Delhi Airport...YES...A PLANE CRASH which mercilessly took away all the lives of its passengers and flight board team.

LIFE never takes pity on anyone...it doesn't spare any one...

What happens to Geet? She is all waiting for a new start of her newly married life with her Dear Husband.

What happens to Maan? He was preparing himself for the most happening turning point of his life...his wedding with Neha.

Their own Life never bothers to give an answer to them.
 
The promisses made by Dev to Geet and Neha to Maan...purest and genuine from heart with true intensions to full fill it...but life has an upper hand on every promise a human being makes

(Authour's note: I think about the families and friends during such event than the person who dies...what goes on to their mind? )

Is this the end of a journey or a beginning of a new journey.

Where do they stand 3-4 years later...lets see.

My other FF:

Maneet FF ' GEETIKA -



Edited by Vaidhumom - 04 July 2012 at 2:13am

The following 110 member(s) liked the above post:

pyarisahelidpurvainlwgeetgeetno1shadow-girlangeljyotineetugarg123mishtikhuranaaprajitamadrafatiya52110fizza25gagsydurga1000asmi123ariz2000bhakbhartifanshansukGemmTinkJiamans22Yellowtullipskhansangelmamatha.maureen84rosesanasurbhijn106BkhasThugAngelpiyushikshubhangiprincess_mimipreetymaaneetshrutizlyfetrikamounacutykavya.sravyasweety.2yashviagarwal-eiya-Lola13avani_9AmElOdIkar1538amalu123lallulal2010Mina420raj_202cyum321amzu32Iqbal Neha19staroneserialsgangesegblove4allangel_smilySayaneeH.LecterJeba.Rahmansanum23_Jyothi_fffan123ambeernritzy09ammu5_AngelSonu_nehakapoor7maaneetsangelpaponecon-Veritaserum-Speechlesssmj1977.shrutikrati5ambbihaajennsanu3108mrk-1hermoso-Prithi-shah10hinal_maaneetHansaNaamirkhanfansweet scorpiomitzi11swetha10-DamnedDrooler-preethiNorzmonikasethkooliio-afsha-namita25millie_maaneetpreethiaseemamaryzaara2212_BlackPearl_6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6Shruthejasraj123punam2712vrinda22Craziest_MGRemya_PillaiTyroDesigirls12goldenmoonspvdNeelambari..IsleOfCapriKrishna_Sourav-Orchid-

Dear Guest, Being an unregistered member you are missing out on participating in the lively discussions happening on the topic "Maneet FF - Journey called life - Thread 1" in Fan Fictions forum. In addition you lose out on the fun interactions with fellow members and other member exclusive features that India-Forums has to offer. Join India's most popular discussion portal on Indian Entertainment. It's FREE and registration is effortless so JOIN NOW!

Vaidhumom

Goldie

Vaidhumom

Joined: 08 January 2011

Posts: 1112

Posted: 05 June 2011 at 4:59am | IP Logged

CHARECTERIZATION

MAAN SINGH KHURANA:

28 Year old Business Entrepreneur, MD of Khurana Constructions.  Born Rich. He has anything and everything that Money can buy. But still missing the true happiness in his life. A Tough personality by nature.  He was a different person all together...soft, caring and loving nature... but one tragic incident in his life that happened almost 3-4 years back and it changed him completely. All he loves now is to be involved with his office work and that's the only way he can keep his mind busy.

Maan lost his parents at a very young age. His Daadi is the one who took care of him and his brother Vicky and sister Anvesha. Daadi has been his strong pillar of support throughout his life.

Vicky: 23 years old. Just completed his MBA and is willing to do something challenging on his own.

Anvesha: 20 years old. Undergraduate. She has been the youngest and most pampered kid.

 
GEET HANDA:

24 years old. Young widow of Dev Sharma. Has been into Middle Class bracket through out her life. A jovial and fun loving girl...till the time she lost her husband in a tragic flight accident 3-4 years ago. Geet  and Dev fell in love  and got married, much against the wishes of both their families.

That one accident in her life has taken away everything...everything what belonged to her. Her husband...her family relations...but she is still alive and trying to be happy for the sake of her daughter...Komal the one and only reason for Geet to stay alive.

She never went back to her family nor Dev's family nor they bothered to support her when she needed them the most.

Dev's Picture

 
Neha's Picture
 

 
More details to be revealed as the FF progresses. Will upload more photos later.

INDEX

Prologue - Page 1
Charecterization - Page 1
 
Part 1 - Page 8
Part 2 - Page 10
Part 3 - Page 14
Part 4 - Page 19
Part 5 - Page 24
Part 6 - Page 31
Part 7 - Page 38
Part 8 - Page 45
Part 9 - Page 51
Part 10 - Page 61
Part 11 - Page 69
Part 12 - Page 79
Part 13 - Page 87
Part 14 - Page 100
Part 15 - Page 105
Part 16 - Page 114
Part 17 - Page 119
Part 18 - Page 128
Part 19 - Page 136
Part 20 - Page 143



Edited by Vaidhumom - 04 July 2012 at 2:18am

The following 47 member(s) liked the above post:

pyarisahelidpurvainlwgeetmadhiarshe.madineetugarg123aprajitamadragagsythendral_111mans229290860623maureen84avani_9fariya20amalu123aksnangelarafkiran99raj_202jazzerettesridevi_nlove4allnats0101smj1977.shrutiritzy09sanu3108mrk-1-Prithi-Speechless-Veritaserum-anjucoolkooliiosweet scorpiomitzi11HansaNswetha10-DamnedDrooler-pop776n6s6k6i6r6a6n6_BlackPearl_--Ratna--hinal_maaneetTyromillie_maaneetpunam2712goldenmoonspvd-Orchid-

_BlackPearl_

IF-Sizzlerz

_BlackPearl_

Joined: 30 October 2010

Posts: 24154

Posted: 05 June 2011 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Dancing

Beautiful concept ...looking forward!!!

The following 3 member(s) liked the above post:

asmi123Vaidhumom-DamnedDrooler-

Vaidhumom

Goldie

Vaidhumom

Joined: 08 January 2011

Posts: 1112

Posted: 05 June 2011 at 6:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -dia-

Dancing

Beautiful concept ...looking forward!!!
Thanks Dia Darling Smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

_BlackPearl_

_BlackPearl_

IF-Sizzlerz

_BlackPearl_

Joined: 30 October 2010

Posts: 24154

Posted: 05 June 2011 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Vaidhumom

Originally posted by -dia-

Dancing

Beautiful concept ...looking forward!!!
Thanks Dia Darling Smile

U r welcome di ...Hug

me looking forward to read Maaneet as Karthik & ChitraTongue

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Vaidhumom

Vaidhumom

Goldie

Vaidhumom

Joined: 08 January 2011

Posts: 1112

Posted: 05 June 2011 at 6:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -dia-

Originally posted by Vaidhumom

Originally posted by -dia-

Dancing

Beautiful concept ...looking forward!!!
Thanks Dia Darling Smile

U r welcome di ...Hug

me looking forward to read Maaneet as Karthik & ChitraTongue
Karthik & Chitra? someone from your family?Wink

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

_BlackPearl_

_BlackPearl_

IF-Sizzlerz

_BlackPearl_

Joined: 30 October 2010

Posts: 24154

Posted: 05 June 2011 at 6:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Vaidhumom

Originally posted by -dia-

Originally posted by Vaidhumom

Originally posted by -dia-

Dancing

Beautiful concept ...looking forward!!!
Thanks Dia Darling Smile

U r welcome di ...Hug

me looking forward to read Maaneet as Karthik & ChitraTongue
Karthik & Chitra? someone from your family?Wink

LOL ...Arjun is Karthik & Meena is Chitra ...but u came up with Plane-crash instead of TrainLOL

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Vaidhumom

Vaidhumom

Goldie

Vaidhumom

Joined: 08 January 2011

Posts: 1112

Posted: 05 June 2011 at 6:31am | IP Logged
LOL
Originally posted by -dia-

Originally posted by Vaidhumom

Originally posted by -dia-

Originally posted by Vaidhumom

Originally posted by -dia-

Dancing

Beautiful concept ...looking forward!!!
Thanks Dia Darling Smile

U r welcome di ...Hug

me looking forward to read Maaneet as Karthik & ChitraTongue
Karthik & Chitra? someone from your family?Wink

LOL ...Arjun is Karthik & Meena is Chitra ...but u came up with Plane-crash instead of TrainLOL
Ha ha ha ha ROFL...I was assuming it to be the name of your two kids...I didnt know your marrital status...sorryLOL. So, you remember that movie so well...interesting...didnt even know Arjun and Meena were known as Karthik and Chitra...Thanks for reminding meROFL

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

_BlackPearl_

Post Reply New Post

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Topic Starter Replies Views Last Post
FF.manneet-**ANIMOSITY** Thread 1 pt 16 new thread

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 152 153

FireSafireFiree 1219 245451 25 August 2013 at 7:55am
By PoojaSheth
MG FF:Limitless -Thread 3- NEW THREAD LINK PG1

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 147 148

maan-ki-sanjana 1176 101443 25 November 2012 at 12:42pm
By FairyAngel12
FF-M&G-**ANIMOSITY** THREAD 3- link to thread 4

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 146 147

FireSafireFiree 1174 179353 29 November 2011 at 6:23am
By jafrin
FF-Enigma- THREAD 7 (thread 8 link on 1st page)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 140 141

FireSafireFiree 1127 99699 05 July 2011 at 3:55am
By khwaishfan
-kashish-maaneet ff THREAD 2..link new thread add

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 159 160

muskanp 1276 183522 15 March 2011 at 7:54pm
By preethia

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category

Active Forums

Limit search to this Forum only.

 

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.