Posted: 03 June 2011 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
guys this is my very first FF in this forum
.but i ll do my best .hope u peple will like it
this one is a simple LOVE STORY .inspired frm a telugu movie GODAVARI .ita a mythological one but suits our ARJUN and AROHI
index-page 1-1st scene
page 2 -scene 2
page 3 - part 2
page 4 -part 3
page 11- part 6
page 14-part 9
page 16 - part 10
PART 11-PAGE 17
CHARECTER SKETCH ;
ALLUWALIAs ; is a small middle class family .frm chandigard
mr sudhiir ;manajer in a bank -arohi's father
mrs amrit ;house wife -arohi's mom
miss shafali ;fire brand .student inter 1year - arohis sis
and now entering
AROHI ALLUWALLIA ; a simple girl ,in a dreamy world .wanted to b independent .attitude ,proud ,funny ,sensitive ,loving and a modern girl with romantic ideas .just like our arohi
SINGHANIAs ;a bussiness family
mr rudr;buisness man - arjuns uncle
mrs lali ; house maker - arjuns aunty
miss gauri ; - cousin (beleived to get married to arjun one day )
ARJUN SINGHANIA ; a passionate man ,live in the world ,a good citizen ,little political minded wanting to serve the world .mostly unlucky
aluwalias daily rotinue ;
morning ;7 o clock
amrith ; in her kitchen .with some wrk
shefali ;shouting loud her answers to tell everyone she is syuding
sudhir ;gets up .and cmes out the room .sees the calender and then again slips under his blanket to sleep .bcoz it was sunday .and his wife wld force him to take her to the temple ,after a long head bath and it was tooo coool outside.
arohi ;maaa cofee jaldiii.bits her tongue and thinks fr a while"aaj sunday ,coldwater head bath ,halfsarii ,temple,marriage ki liye lecture .nahi arohi behatar hoga ki tum b dad hi taraha soojaaa"
amrith ;uuth jaa puthar ,naha lo mandir janna hai jaldi kar arooo
arohi;gets up walks to her "dekh mei abbhi bol rahi hu ,tumhi mandir me drop karlithi hoo.likin head bath ,halfsarii sab nahi cheleGA anna hai tho aa"
amrith ;cooly aroo ajj date 1st hai patha hai na ??sotch loo.tumhari koyy zaruurathe hongiii.
arohi on the scooty in her half sari .looking gourgous in troubled mind .
reach the mandirand aroo starts covering her bare stomach .her mom giggling and scolding her
arohi ;"hai bhagvan ,muji batcha lo ,mari choti choti dreams hai ,meri collectin sabbi ko pasand aajai aur meri shopki collections world famous hojaii aur main akk achhi designer banjau ,mein lakhoo kamauu aur accha hansom ladki se mari shaadi hojayy...aur... nahi nahi ye bohath hogaya .meri collection uss paagal manager pasand karle aur muji ithna paise mile ki mein 550 / watchman ko do ,aur akk 1000/ vo punam ko du .aur 5000 uss kiraya dedu bass ithna dedoo plzz bhagvan ithna kardoo"
in her shop
punam sails girl ; caleder dekhate .mam ajjj ...
arahi ;punam jaa .dekha na
arohi;ha meri maaa abhi lathi hoo teri paise ,abb ja bhii on her scooty ;thinking "ab kya hoga ,maa ke saamni gidgidana padega aur paise maangna padega .aroo tu too gay ajj phir se lecture .
taaffic police ;ye larki gadhi rukh
arohi "ab e he batch gaya tha"
traffic police -licence dehka .rc book bhi .
arohi - uncle vooo
arohi -sir nahi hai ,phir deka thi hai "milgaya "
tp -. accaha helmet kaha hai .arohi bit her tongue and "uncle ,sorry .vo sir ghar me muje dekhne kileye larki vale aa rahe hai tho agar me helmat lagali tho meri baal ki kyahaalath hajayeji aapko patha hai na ??muji aur meri aisee baal dekh kar kon muji se shhadi kereaga ??bhaliye na sir " tp- lekin ...
aroo -sir 200 /- dungi .(starts corrupting attitude)
tp- nahi 300/-
aroo- nahi sir voo... cing his face
tp -baghna chathi hai .tum muji uloo nahi banasakthi
aroo- sir bag dekhi mein hai
starts her scooty and runs away tp izzath bachane kiliye chup rehajatha hai
arjun has no parents but he had only one person who lover him like his parents DADI
arjun was in love with gauri
but gauri is confused as always
arjun was intrested in politics .wch no one liked .everyone frced him to take up a job and if he earned his uncle wld marry her daughter to him
this is the situation there ...
how did u all like this??anything to change or any expectations??let me know
Edited by phoo_12 - 27 November 2012 at 11:12am