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Congrats on new thread

congrats 4r d new thread !!!!!!!!!
may u start many more like dis

Whoaaa!!!new thread!!congraatss honey!hope to see more&more threads of ths beautiful ff as i luv dis soo much and luv u for making ths possible!!

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Edited by .Lena. - 10 years ago

congrats for new thread

Hey Lena,

It was quite unexpected kind of update. though it's always different cause story is unique but yes it was totally  unprovided for.

Geet's summarizing the events was interesting & a little different from what was perceived from the start. 

Oh I hate Ashas 😡😡, double standard creatures😡😡Maaneet are going through so much pain cause of them

At the time only Maan's stubbornness & his control on Geet is the only harbor. But physically forcing her 😲😲😲

"I fell asleep with my lover beside me, until I would have to awaken to the catastrophe that anticipated my arrival."  this is the highlight 4 me. so many ideas are swirling in mind

Continue Soon

Edited by serenelove - 12 years ago

Congratz on the new thread
Amazing update
Beautifully written
Finally maaneet became one
Cont soon Xx...

OMG I am shocked. Can't wait to see wat happens next.

Tremendous!their first luv making!!it was as if maan needed ths for the confirmation that she is not going anywhere anymore!he was on the verge of losing his sanity on hearing dat geet is going away from him.his luv for her is soo huge that it is an ampossible concept for him to thin his lyf widout geet.so much passionate,soo much endearing.hats off to u for reflecting each and every emotion of geet so placidly.thanks for making ths soo wide and prosperous.they are one enchanting couple to say the least!!

You write so beautifully. Geet's P.O.V and emotions are written so well. You should be very proud of your self. I could feel the intensity of the moment. The violent passion and Geet finally giving was written wonderfully. Maan truly is a dark angel, his dark love is enthralling. You never fail to mesmerize me.  Edited by blahblablah - 12 years ago