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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 9:48am | IP Logged
hii..gyz ..!! dis is my 2nd OS
 
so here it starts ...
 
nandini + dev , maan + geet were coming back to delhi after so much time...
dev and nandini were married...
dey get married in a temple and dadima knows about deir maaraige...but has not attended it ...
dev has already told nandini about naintara ...and the ad deed he did wid geet ...
he has told her everything about his past...
but nandini still agreed to marry him..as geet tell her dat she have seen dev changing... he is gud from heart but did alll dat bad deeds in the pressure of her x- wife nainatara but dey have get divorced now...
nandini agreed to maary dev as she was completely agreeed wat geet geet said about dev ...
biji's family has completely accepted nandini and dev's and maan and geeet's realtion and have forgiven maan and geet...
dey were too present in the marraige of nandini and dev... and has accepted dev as deir chota damaad...and maan as deir bada damad...
all four of dem were in dere flight ... and the flight landedd ...
maan and geet were ahead wid deir bags ... and behind were dev and nandini wid dere bags ...
dey checked- out and came outside the airpoort ...
many guards came and surrounded dem and nandini got scared ...
nandini to dev - dev yeh sabh koun hai...
dev to nandini- ghabrao mat nandini yeh sab humare guards hai ... taki media yahan na aaye ...
dey were moving towards deir car ...2 guards came ..took deir bags from dem ..and moved ahead of dem ..and kept deir bags in the dikki of the car...
maan took the keys from the driver ... and was about to sit in the driver seat ...
when media came ...
M1 - mr. maan singh khurana ..humne sunna hai ki apke chote bhai ne dusri shadi kari hai amritsar mai kya yeh sach hai ..??
maan - apne bilkul sahi suna ..dev ki shadi hui hai nandini se...
M2 - yeh arranged marraige hai ya luv marraige hai ..
maan - yeh luv maarraige hai ..
dey were about to ask deir next question... when some guards came and shooed dem away ..
while maan was answering deir questions...dev sat in the seat next to the driver seat and geet and nandini sat behind ...
after the guards shooed away the media maan too sat in the car and started driving ...
on deir way.. maan called adi put the phone on loudspeaker and said ..- adi mai aur dev kal se office ayenge ..ek naya cabin taiyar karva dena ... aur sabh ko bolna ki hum kal se ayenge..aur kal tum romeo manisha tasha pnki pandey ji ko lekar ghar aana..  ...
adi - ok ..sir ...pir ir kyun ..??
maan- adi pehle jitna bola hai utna karo ..tumhe sabh kuch apne aap pta chal jayega ...
when maan was talking ... on the phone wid adi romeo and manisha came from behind..and shouted woo .. !!!
here becoz the phone was on the loudspeaker geet and nandini got scared ...
geet - maan ... yeh ...apke ..office mai bhoot kaun hai ..?? and laughed loudly...
maan - geet yeh tumhare do partners romeo aur manisha ..
on the other side romeo and manisha did not know dat adi was talking to deir handsome hunk boss ...
manisha came and hugged adi and said aap aaj kuch zyada hi hot lag rhe hai ...
adi stepped back and in his scared style said-yeh aap kya kar rhe hai manisha ji...
romeo caught manisha and said - adi sir aap kiss se baat kar rhe the ...
manisha - lagta hai kisi hot hot client se baat kar rhe hai ...kyun adi sir btaiye na aap kis se baat ka rhe the ..
on the other hand geet laughed aloud ... maan was about to cut the call ..when geet said - rukiye maan phone mat katiye... mujhe hphone dijiye ..she snatched phone from maan's hands and again said aap car chaliye ..in sabh se mai baat karti hun ...
adi very slowly said dem to be quiet or else dey r gone ..
romeo - aree aap baar baar hume chup hone ke liye kyun keh rhe hain ...
manisha wid his emotional expression said nahi aisa nhi ho sakta aap kisi aur ke nhi ho sakte adi sir ..aap mere hain sirf mere hain...
adi again got scared ... wid his expression of scaredness dey got to know dat he was talikng to maan ..
dey both said together - maan sir...
geet said adi to put his phone on loud speaker ...adi kept his phone on loud speaker ..
and geet said - manisha , romeo ab tum dono gaye ... laughed aloud and said maan ne sabh kuch sun liya .kal aap dono ke watt lagne wale hain..apke maan sir kal wapis aa rhe hain ...apne aap ko bachane ka koi rasta dhundiye ...
romeo and manisha got scared for a moment and said in unsion - geet tum ho na ..maan sir ka gussa thanda karne ke liye ... tum plz..hume bachaogi na ...tum humari acchi dost ho na ...
geet laughed angain and
romeo - ab aacha hai tum wapis aa rhi ho ... poora ghar tumhare bina khali khali lagta tha ... aur dadima..bhi badi mushkil se apni davayian leti thi .aur annie din bhar roti rehtit hi ...voh toh aacha hua arjun humare saath tha ..usne hum sabh ki bohot help ki...
on listening arjun's name ..geet's maan's and dev's face colour faded ...
manisha - geet baby ab aap hi maan sir ko sambhal sakti hai ..plz..humme bacha lo...
geet - vaise manisha kya tum sach much mai adi sir ko pasand karte ho ...
manisha- han voh bohot acche hain ...
geet - par sorry manisha mujhe lagta hai adi sir kisi aur ko pasand karte hain...kyun adi sir ..??? aap uss ladki ka naam btayenge ya mai btaun..
manisha - nhi aesa nhi ho sakta ..mai apne aap ko maar dalunga ...
romeo - oye mansiha etena melo dramatic mat ho ...vaise adi sir voh ladki hai koun .???
geet - mai clue deti hun ... uska name ka first letter P hai ...guess kariye koun hai voh ..
adi - geet plz..tum kyu mera bhanda fod rhe ho...
manisha - kya adi sir apko pandey ji pasand hai ...unse accha toh mai hi hun ...
adi- kya ..???
geet laughed aloud...
adi - geet tum has rhi ho ..tumne mujhe iss muskhil mai fasaya hai ..ab tum mujhe nikalo...
geet - adi sir mai bol toh rhi hun ..aap jaaiye aur 'P" se baat kijiye ... ek romantic tarah se propose kariye ...
romeo - yeh kya geet aur adi sir aap bhi yeh 'p' hai koun ...???
geeet - romeo chup ... adi sir jaiye propose kijiye ..mujhe lagta coh haan kadegi...kuch help chahiye ya 'P' ko aapko kahi bulana ho toh mujhe btaiyega ..mai aapki help zarror karungi ..
romeo - bas bohot seh liye humne yeh atyacahar...agar agle 2 minutes mai apne nhi btaya ki yeh 'P koun hai ...toh mai poore office mai jaakr yeh baat fela dunga ki adi sir pandey ji ko pasand karte hai aur unhe propose karne wale hai ...
he laughed aloud wid his victorious smile ..
geet - soch lo romeo ... tumhe maan se koun bachayega ... she jst acted as she was complaining to maan about romeo ...maan apko kuch baat karni thi na romeo se yeh lijiye baat kar lijiye ...
romeo - nhi nhi geet plz..maan sir ko ,mat dena ..mai paka kuch nhi bolunga ...
geet - very gud romeo ...
adi - geet tumne yeh toh kaha ki mai usse propose karun ..lekin koi idea toh do ..
geet - .propose karne ka id .aap maan aur dev se kyun nhi lete bohot experienced hai dono ...thik hai mai unse poochke aap ko thodi der mai btati hun..
and she cuts the call... and laughs aloud ...and says pandey ji ..unhe laga 'P' se pandey ji ...omg ..!! kya hoga dono buddhu ka ...
maan - geet vaise yeh 'P' hai koun ...
geets expression failed ... and said- maan aap bhi ...
dev- han geet yeh 'P' hai koun ..??
geet - chalo thik hai ek clue 'P' ek ladki hai aur appke office mai hi kaam karti hai ..usse khana bohot pasand hai ..
dev and maan said in unison - PINKI ...
geet - chalo kuch toh dimag hai aap mai .. aap ko pehle kuch dikhaye nhi diya kya un dono ke biiich mai ...maan apko pata hai humare shadi ke din adi sir toh pinki ko dekhte hi reh gaye ... kitni cute lag rahi thi pinki..
maan - aur mai timhe dekhta reh gaya ..meri toh nazar hi nhi hat rhi thi tum se ...
geet lowered her head dut to shyness ...nandini hit her elbow to geet ...as she was teasing her ...
geeet - tum mujhe mat chidao nandini..dev ki nazar bhi nahi hat rhi thi tum par sai ...maine toh chupke chupke tum dono ki bohot saree photos li hai ..jisme yah toh phir tum dev ko ghoor rhi hoti ho ya phir voh tmhe ghoor rha hota hai ...aur sabh photos seedha dadima ke paas jayengi ...( and showed her tounge to her )
dev and nadini got shyed and lowered deir head ...
the 2 big steel gate opened ...and the guards saluted maan singh khurana ...
and dey enterd the mansion... nandini was shocked to see how big people dey were ...
as the car stopped before the mansion ... dere were guards welcoming dem ...
and daadi , annie , some important staff members , arjun were standing dere to welcome dem ...
geet ran and hugged dadi ... tears started flowing through both of deir eyes...
annie removed geet tears and said oho ..!! yeh toh khushi ka waqt hai aap dono nai rona shuru kar diya ... and maan removed dadima's tears ...
behind was dev and nandini ...
dadima caught geet hold of her hand and told her to stand outside ..and maan too...
she went at the entrance .. took the plate and started doing the pooja ... when geet said dadima pehle nandini ..mere loye toh yeh sabh pehle bhi ho chuka hai ... pehle nandini ki baari ...
nandini- nhi dadima geet di badi hai toh pehle unki baaari..
dey both started arguing ..whom to be first ..
when dadima interrupted and said bas bohot hua ...annie bete dusri thali lekar aayie...
annie brought 2nd thali...dadima applied tika on dev ' and nandini's forehead ..while annie did it on maan and geet ..
den dey changed deir places and dadima applied rice on maan and geet's forehead while annie on dev and nadini's forehead ..
two servants came and took the plates back from dem ... and maan and geet bended to touch dadima's feet and dev and nandini did the same...
next aanie came and hugged geet and nandini together ...
annie- geet i missed u so much ... aur ab toh aur bhi maza aayega nandini bhi humare group mai aa gaye dev bahi aur maan bahi ko parehsan karne ke liye ...
maan -oh ..!! toh ab tum teeno milkar humme pareshan karoge ..dekhte hai koun pareshan hota hai ..
annie- han ..han..bhai dekhte hain...
dadima - accha yeh sabh chodiye aur andar chaliye ...annie bete aap geet aur nandini ko lekar jaiye aur un dono ko taiyar ke jiye..aur adi bete aap maan aur dev ko leakr jaiye ..
maan- par dadima kyun...??
dadima- aap dono ki suhagraat ke liye ...get ready ...jaiye jaiye ...hum khane ke liye kuch bhijwate hain...dadima winked at both of dem ..
annie took dem in the guest room..and make dem wear the dresses dadi have bought for both of dem ...
geet's was dreesed like dis ...

while nandini like dis
 
maan like dis

dev like dis

both the girls were looking sexy and both the boyz were looking handsome ..
dadima came to seee the girlz and took some kajal from her eyes ..and applied behing deir ears ...
den she went to boyz room..and did the same wid dem ..
all of dem were looking fab ...
well deir rooms were some wat like dis ...

annie first drooped geet in her room... and helped her to sit on the bed
den she took nandini and helped her ..
on the other side dadima was sitting wid the boyz waiting for annie to come back...
annie came and said- chaliye maan bhai apni dulhan ke paas ..she iz waiting for u ..
maan got up ... and dev too got up...
annie-aap kahan chale bethiye abhi mai abhi dubara aati hun apko lene...
maan and annie leave .. dey were standing .. ahead of thr door of maan's room...
annie came foward and showed her palm to maan ..for money if he want to go inside ..
maan didn't understand wat she was upto ..and kept his palm on her hand ...
annie got shocked and said yeh kya hai ...mujhe aapka haath nhi paise chahiye ..jaldi nikliye 50,000 rs..varna bhul jaiye ki aaj apki suhagraat hai ...
maan unwantedly give her a cheque of 50,000 ..and den annie opened the room for maan so dat he can go inside ...
den annie went back to dev and took money from him too... den she yawned and moved to her room to sleep ..
in maaneet's bedrrom
maan entered the room his eyes were filled wid naughtineess ...and geet was geeting nervous as he made his step forward towards geet ...he sat beside her ..lifted her ghungat and found her eyes closed and her cheekss were pink ..due to blush ..
wid his index finger he raised her chin ..den an eye lock .. he moved forwardd ...and den a small lip kiss which became paasionate deir tongues palyed wid each other tongue and finnaly dey moved apart gasping for air ...
den maan helped geet in laying down and dey slept wid geet's head on maan's chest and deir hands interwined wid each other ...
in dev and nandini's room
dev entered the room ...nandini was siiting on the bed ...
he moved closer to her ...and said aap yahan so jayie ..i will sleep on the couch ..nandini got up from the bed .. and said nhi aap yahn so jayie ..i will go and sleep dere ...dey both started arguing who will sleep where ..suddenly nandini said bas..ek kaam karte hain dono bed par so jate hain ..dev agreed ..sey both slept on different corners of the bed...
next dey when dey got up found dat nandini was sleeping and dev had hugged her from behing..and nandini had hold his hands so dat he will not go ...

PRECAP  ----- annie teasing maan and dev for SR
                   ------- adi proposing pinki ..


Edited by shivikasavvy - 07 June 2011 at 12:54am

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for ur second os...

hope u write more like these...ur just Awesome...
... os ...

Waiting for ur next update...



Edited by gunjar - 01 June 2011 at 10:31am

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interesting...

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awesome ... 

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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awesome ... Clap

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wow
great shivi
really love dthe way u written
waitng for the precap

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hey...awsme...luved it...n xcited after seeng precap plz update it soon...

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brilliant update
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keep it up

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