My first ever poem for this show!

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maris08

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 5:30am | IP Logged

Hi there, am back with to treat you all with my poem. For those of you who know me expect me to post more such poems and musings and odes about this new pair. For all others,am Maris a poet and writer( still cant be called that as I have a long way to go) trying to impress and leave an imprint in this IF.

This one was already written by me days ago and posted at BHPH forum, but just thought I will post it here too for all your benefit. If you like this and deem it fit and worthy of any merit please leave your valuable comments. Thanz.

Is pyar ko kya naam dun?

Jo bhi ho, jodi bahut achi hai.

Ummed hai ki yeh dono hame entertain karega.

Surili akhiyon wali, pyarisi surat hai aap ki.

Kushi, aap ki kushi ke liye dua karungi mein.

Oye sohneyo,Arnav! sundhar roop hai thera.

Hamesha ladkiyon ko phasa detha hai.

Dekhthe rahiye in dono ko,

Jaldhi hamare dil mein rehne wale hain.

Kyon ki hum sab har rozh kehethe rahen,

Is pyar ko kya naam dun?????

Sig courtesy :Sunaina

Edited by maris08 - 01 June 2011 at 5:35am

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Cinderella100

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 6:22am | IP Logged

Beautiful Maris. Looking forward to many more poems & FF by you.

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xTimax

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 6:24am | IP Logged

Amazing poem.

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-Kina-

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 6:28am | IP Logged

amazing poem

loved it

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sangeeta9

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 7:22am | IP Logged

wowww maris.. another amazing poem!!!! keep writing more..

also start an FF if possible.. i know u are already working on saaVan one, still u can giv a try...

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momma1128

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 8:05am | IP Logged

YAY!!!! Maris is making new poems!! I am expecting many more and will keep fingers crossed for a fan fic.

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soniasharmin89

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 8:06am | IP Logged

its really nice dear.keep posting poems.

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-Jahnvi-

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 8:07am | IP Logged

The plus about this show is that all of us will be watching it from the very beginning and enjoying the ride together.
Maris, what a beautiful poem! Hoping many more will be shared in future along with mind-boggling FFs, like Anu said! Smile