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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 4:45am | IP Logged
Lovely start, great introduction to setting and waiting for next part eagerly.
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awesome yaar...
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Part 2

Next Morning:

Modi Mansion wakes up with the daily aarti sung by their Gopi Vau. As they came down, they saw Mani filling up the dining table with a breakfast filled with a favorite dish of everyone. Enhancing the aroma of breakfast was Gopi's welcoming smile. After breakfast was cleared, Gopi went to Koki to discuss about lunch and other remaining chores. She in the meantime has neatly packed a few sarees, her Kanha ji, and the shagun money that was given along with the necklace taht Koki had once so bought with so much love for her. Gopi was not a materialistic person, but leaving the necklace behind would mean that she is leaving, returning her mother-in-law's love; and was one thing that she could not do. She carefully placed her bag hidden in the front lawn and went back to business as usual. After spending sometime massaging Baa's feet, she went to enquire if Koki and Hetal needed anything. As the day progressed, Gopi's resolve strenghtened as well. She knew very well what a Herculean task she had at hand. Even the evening dinner appeared to be a rich 5 star restaurant buffet. th ebuffet all the rich Gujrati dishes along with a few signature enhanced dishes of Gopi's like her special methi theplas. Gopi felt content seeing the smiles on everyone's face, and yes including Ahem as well. He just just kept a small smile which escaped his lips once in a while when he eyelocked with Gopi unintentionally.

As everyone retreated to their rooms,Gopi cleared up everything. She even dismissed Rashi and teased her to go spend time with Jigar. Rashi just gave a small forced smile hearing Jigar's name, and left been given the much sought after break that she wanted.

At night, when Gopi came in her room, she saw Ahem fast asleep. she took his photo out of the frame, and silently came out. As she going out she saw Kokila's room and peaked into it. there lay her parents-in-law who became her parents in a rightful sense. She did a pranam to them from far, and a few tear drops escapd her eyes knowing how much her saas had tried to patch things between Ahem and her.

Gopi made her way out of MM, and picked up her bag. She took a one last look at the house that was to be her home till her breathed her last breath, but alas destiny had other plans for her. Silently crying Gopi headed out on the road.

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Wow ... Gopi taking care of everyones needs - so selfless as ever.
 
Update soon.
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great update loved it...cont soon
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That was a beautiful chapter and Gopi was a dutiful daughter in law right until the end
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Part 3:

The members of Modi mansion were sleeping a peaceful except for Kokila who woke from a bad dream. She took Lord Krishna's name, prayed for the wellbeing of the family and went back to sleep. She kept tossing and turning in bed as if something wasn't right.

Gopi on the other hand had taken a cab to the train station. She had learnt to distinguish money by the different colors, so at least that way no one would be able to dupe her greatly. Once reaching the train station, the cab driver asked for Rs. 300. Gopi carefully distinguished a Rs. 500 and gave it to the driver. The driver gave her back two Rs. 100 notes. Gopi thanked the driver and headed out for the ticket counter.

After asking numerous people fro directions, Gopi finally came to the ticket counter. The ticket vendor asked her where she wanted to go. Gopi became thoughtful, wondering what to say. Then she asked "Which train is coming right now?" The ticket vendor said "RajkotShimla Express". Gopi bought the ticket, and looked utterly lost as which platform to get onto. This state of confusion reminded her of the time when she felt lost in Switzerland. She soon saw a young couple with a small child. She went over to them to seek help with tears brimming in her eyes. The young couple attentively listened to Gopi's plea, and they guided her to the right location. The young man even led her to her seat, and made sure she was comfortable.

 

Gopi thanked the gentleman, and prayed to Kanha that her decision would bring happiness to her family especially Ahem ji. Soon after a middle aged elderly nun came and sat besides Gopi. The train sped away with Gopi going to face a new struggle in her life.

 

 

A little into the journey, Gopi and the nun Sister Margaret or Sister Maggie as she would prefer to called, became quite at ease with each other. With Sister Maggie affections, Gopi's eyes weld up, and she opened up to her voyaging companion. Sister Maggie urged Gopi to speak her story. Soon Gopi started narrating her whole story from the moment she entered her Mama-Mami's house to the moment where she had to take a drastic step to leave her sasuraal. It took no time for Sister Maggie to deduce who were the culprits that ruined the poor orphan's life. Sister Maggie calmly asked Gopi "Gopi my child did you not once wish to study when you were a child?"

Poor innocent Gopi asked back, "Well yes, but Mami said that it was not my cup of tea".

Sister Maggie began to understand that the young girl in front of her had been cheated, and abused mentally, verbally and physically. She thanked God that she met this girl, or who knows what would happen Gopi in today's cruel world where there are vultures like Gopi's Mami ready to feast on a prey, or worse yet what if some man tried to…. Thinking this, Sister Maggie felt a shiver realizing that she out of humanity could not leave this poor girl at the hands of fate. She would help this girl, and have this girl fight and change her fate.


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I know part 3 has some grammar mistakes. I was in a hurry to type. Please ignore them. Thanks!

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