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Kriyansh FF..Dance 'n 'Love..updated part 11..Pg21 (Page 8)

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Tonguenice FF...!!!! poor kria...sari gadbad ussi k saath hoti hai...!!! stupid sharon...!!!!! apne alava uske liye sab losers hai...!! idiot...!!!! Angry

BTW...i like ur writing style very much...!!!please update soon...!!! Smile

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Part 7...

Rey runs to the rehearsal room and bangs his head on the wall...thinking the disaster which has already been created by his team mates and the girl who he was finding to tell sorry is none other than kria...he faces the mirror of the rehearsal hall and says to himself...

Rey: oh no...oh God...!!!...woh sorrywali kria ko hi hona tha?...noway...ab rey tera kya hoga...yeh Bhagwan mere saath hi aise kyun karta hai...ab toh main margaya...sorry boloon toh problem...nahin boloon toh problem...ufff..agar uss ms.attitude ko yeh pata chalgaya na ki maine hi usse dhakka mara aur wahan idiot ki tarah bhaggaya toh woh pata nahin kya karegi...aur aaj mere mahaan team mates ne bhi toh koi kasar nahin chori usko insult karne ka...mere bare me aise bhi usko kitni misunderstanding he...rey how cn u be so dumb???...ab kya karoon?...kuch toh sochna hi parega na?...haan'. vicky..mera all time rescuer...

He calls up vicky and calls him to give the mindblowing news...on the other hand anushka and neha feel tensed for kria and frantically find her all over the college...kria on the other hand cries and remembers the humiliation she faced...

Kria:kaise log he iss colg me...kisike seene me dil nahin...dil ho bhi toh usme koi feelings nahin...aur colg ke baki log meri insult karne ke baad'. unko hassi aarahi thi aur mera mazak udarahe the...theek socha tha maine...yahan insaan kehne layak koi nahin he...woh dazzlers ...samajhte kya he apne aap ko...woh rey...sharon...kya bigara hai maine unka?...kaise karsakte he woh log aisi harkat...kya mazaa milta he unko...kisiko kisiki izzat ki koi parwa nahin he iss colg me...!!!

Anushka and neha keep on finding asking everyone that where is kria...

Anushka:pata nahin kria kahan hogi...kaisi halat me hogi...mujhe pata tha ki woh dazzlers zaroor kuch karenge kria ke saath...woh log kabhi nahin sudhrenge.she needs us neha...

Neha:neha feeling gussa on them...wanting to punch them ...thinking what they apne aapko...!

Anushka:woh toh humein kabhi pata nahin chalega...filhaal kria ko dhundna zyada zaroori hai!

While walking through the corridor,they hear someone crying in the fire escape...they thought it must be kria...they ran to console their best friend...

On the other hand, Vicky cums running after rey calls him...

Rey: (on the phone): vicky dude...abhi aaa...emergency...rehearsal hall..fast...

Vicky:okay dude coming...!!!

Vicky cums running thinking that rey is in danger...he runs so fast that he is panting...

Vicky:dude...kya hua?...what happened?...kahin tere peeche gunde toh nahin pare jo tere peeche peeche yahan aagaye...dnt wrry rey...tera bhai...vicky tujhe bachayega...bata...kahan chupe he woh log?

Rey:uff ho vicky ...tu bhi na!...kuch bhi haan...

Vicky:toh phir emergency?...kya hua dude?

Rey: dude...i'm in problem aur mujhe help chahiye...tujhe yaad hai woh sorrywali?...jisse main sorry bolna chahta tha?...haan woh na...

Vicky:woh kya?...pata nahin chala na tujhe?...pata tha mujhe...!

Rey:nahin yaar...aisa nahin he...woh mujhe...

Vicky:oh toh tune usse sorry kehdiya...kaun thi woh?...zaroor koi weakling hogi...tere muh se sorry sunke pagal hogayi hogi aur tujhse milke date pe jana chahti hogi tere saath aur tu chahta hai ki main teri madat karoon tera usse peecha churane me?...dnt wrry dude...yeh mere bayein haath ka khel he...tension not!

Rey:uff ho vicky...dude chill...aisa kuch nahin he ...maine kaha tha na ki mujhe uss ladki ke bare me pata chaljaega...?...

Vicky:haan toh?

Rey:toh kya'. mujhe pata chalgaya...

Vicky: kaun?

Rey: woh ladki koi aur nahin...kria he...KRIA!!!!

Vicky:kria?...kaun kria?...

Rey:arey wahi jisse tumlogo ne abhi thodi der pehle itna mindblowing welcome kiya tha...remember..?

Vicky:oh...woh...weakling gang ki nayi member...?...WHAT??????...WOH?...woh warrior queen..tujhe koi aur nahin mili dhakka marne ke liye?...

Rey:vicky...shut up...ab bata main kya karoon?...

Scene shifts to the fire escape where anushka and neha sit beside kria and console her...

Anushka:kria...are you okay?...tum theek toh ho na?...sorry hum thode late hogaye...varna aisa hota hi nahin...!

Kria:isme tumhari koi galti nahin he anushka...aur main theek hoon...mujhe aisi childish pranks se koi farq nahin parta...

Neha:kria...but why u crying?

Kria:neha...main ro isiliye rahi hoon kyunki mujhe yeh sochkar dukh horaha hai ki iss colg ke kuch logo me insaaniyat baki hi nahin rahi...

Anushka:kria...main inhe janti hoon...main janti hoon...yeh log kabhi nahin sudhrenge...inko sudharna is impossible...u dnt wrry...u just dnt cry...kyun apne aansoon unpar waste karrahi ho tum?

Kria:aisa kuch nahin he anushka'. main theek hoon...main apne tears unpar waste karungi bhi nahin...bas aisa mere saath kabhi nahin hua...kyunki main unke jaisi nahin hoon...meri soch unke jaisi nahin he...main bohot hi simple ladki hoon  jisse yeh sab mazak-vazak samajh me nahin aata hai... neway anushka...neha...main ghar jarahi hoon...mujhe thodi der ke liye akele rehna hai...dnt wrry...main kal zaroor colg aaungi...aur main theek hoon...ghar pohochke phone karti hoon...okay...?...take care guys...bye...!

Anushka and neha: bye...

Anushka:apna khayal rakhna...!

Anushka and neha feel sad for kria but believes that she will not breakdown with all these silly pranks...but anushka feels highly enraged...she decides to do sumthng for kria...while walking through the corridor...

Anushka: pehle toh mujhe lagta tha ki dazzlers sirf baddimag he...par aisi harkat...poore colg ke saamne...sharon ek ladki hokar dusre ladki ke saath aisa kaise karsakti hain...arrogance ne inke andar ke feelings ko maardiya he...par itni asaani se main unhe chodhungi nahin...kuch toh karna parega...iss harkat ka jawab toh dena hi parega...sharon se baat karke toh koi faida nahin hoga...rey...haan rey hi sahi hoga...usse baat karni paregi!

Neha:but what if rey also involved in all dis...after all best friends they are all?

Anushka:nahin neha...I believe rey...main usse janti hoon...woh aisi harkat kabhi nahin karega...!...but usse baat karna zaroori hai...chal rey ko jake dhundte hai!

They go on finding rey while vicky and rey are in discussion...

Vicky:toh tu kyun itna ghabra raha hai...usse sorry hi toh kehna hai...woh kria he toh kya hua?

Rey:achcha...tune uska gussa dekha hai...kaise hum dono ki class lerahi thi uss din class me...warrior queen hi he woh sach me...

Vicky:haan yaar...woh toh he...gussa hai yah volcanoe samajh me nahin aata...par isme problem kya hai...tu sorry bolke achcha kaam karega...woh gussa nahin karegi...

Rey:really...tujhe pata nahin...woh humare team ke bare me kya sochti hai...aur main usse sorry keh bhi deta...usse koi problem nahin hoti lekin problem yeh he ki aaj jo tumlogo ne uska grand welcome kiya na colg me uske baad toh she will not even see my face...

Vicky:toh chor na yaar...kya tu bhi sorry? aur woh bhi uss weakling ko...woh deserve nahin karte he...and woh kria...woh toh ek aur he...kaise attitude derahi thi...

Rey:nahin yaar...u know me vicky!...main kisike saath bhi bura nahin karsakta...yeh meri mistake he aur mujhe isse sudhaarna hai...tujhe samajh me nahin aayega ki yeh sorry bolna bohot kitna important he...par problem yeh he ki agar main saamne se usse sorry kahoon toh reputation badhne ke bajaye ghatjaega kyunki usse lagega ki maine uske saath jaan boojhke...choregi nahin woh mujhe...aur nahin kahunga toh bhi problem...tu samajh raha hai na?

Vicky:haan sab kuch toh samajh me aagaya lekin ek baat bata ...tu usse sorry kehne ke liye itna deperate...aur itna tensed kyun horaha hai'haan???...dekh dude...tu usse sorry kehede...aur baki sab uspe chorde...usse agar maafi nahin deni toh na de...who cares??...aur agar tu jaake usse sorry kahega toh usse tujhe badle me thank you kehna chahiye kyunki Reyansh Singhania usse sorry kehraha hai!

Rey: no vicky ...this is wrong...mistake kisi ke saath bhi ki ho..a mistake is a mistake...aur kuch bhi karke sorry toh kehna hi parega...par kya woh mere sorry par yakeen karegi...???...tu hi kuch bata na yaar...main kaise usse sorry boloon...taaki usse gussa bhi na aaye aur hosake toh woh mujhe maaf karde...???u know!

Just when vicky and rey are involved in their discussion, anushka enters with neha there...angry...

Anushka:rey...kya tum free ho...?...I need to talk to u...

Rey:hey anushka...im always free for u yaar...aana andar...sure sure...cum in na...!!!

Anushka and neha give a cold look to vicky...she turns to rey and says...

Anushka:rey...i hope tum jante ho ki aaj colg premises main kya hua?

Rey feels a lil ashamed...

Rey:haan anushka...i know...iss vicky aur meri baki teammates ne milke jo kiya...woh unhe nahin...they just crossed the line...

Anushka:just crossed the line...???...it was way too much rey...aaj saari limit cross kardi tumhari team ne...pehle me tumhari team ki yeh saari harkate unka bachpana samajhkar ignore karleti thi...lekin nahin...i was wrong...ignore karne ka nateeja dekhliya maine...yeh colg he rey...circus nahin...haan woh alag baat he ki tumhare team ke members jokers hi hain...jo apne entertainment ke liye ulti-seedhi harkate karte rehte he... ek tumhare team me tumhi samajhdar ho..isiliye tumhari team ke inn harkato ko tolerate karti aayi hoon ab tak..aur main janti hoon ki aisi harkato ki planning tum kabhi nahin karsakte...isliye main tumse baat karne aayi thi...ki apni team ko samjhao...ki woh log apne limit me rahe...aisi harkat dobara agar tumhari team ne ki na rey toh main tumhare baare mein bhoolke apni limit se bahar chali jaungi...phir kuch mat kehna'..last warning to ur team rey...apni team ko samjaho varna bohot bura hoga...

Rey: okay...okay anushka...u relax...i assure u...aisa phir se nahin hoga...main baat karunga sharon se...and i promise ke vapas aisa kuch nahin hoga...trust me!...

Vicky:oh hello...yeh sab kya kehraha he tu?...what samjhana?...

Rey:vicky tu bahar ja...main baad mein baat karta hoon...mujhe anushka se baat karni he'akele mein!

Anushka:neha...tu bhi thodi der ke liye bahar ja...main abhi aayi!

They both leave...leaving anushka and rey to talk...they sit down and talk...

Anushka:look rey...i believe u...isilye toh main tujhse baat karne aayi thi yaar...kyunki mujhe poora yakeen he ki tu aisi harkato main involved nahin hosakta hai...i trust u completely...and i knw ki tu kaisa hai...main yeh nahin kehrahi hoon ki tum aur tumhari team kria se jake maafi mange'kyunki woh kabhi bhi possible nahin hosakta aur usse koi faida nhain hoga'..par tumhare team ko plz samjhao akhri baar ke liye ki thoda mature behave kare..aur  main yeh isiliye nahin kehrahi kyunki  kria meri achchi friend he isilye...colg ke kisi bhi student ke saath main aisa nahin hone desakti..u knw dat rey... aur btw rey...iss incident ke waqt tu kahan tha?

Rey:main disaster management karraha tha...

Anushka:disaster management?...

Rey:haan...actually sach bataun toh mujhe pata tha ki sharon kuch plan karrahi he kria ke against...par kya..yeh nahin pata tha...isiliye main isse hone se rokne ki koshish karraha tha taki koi problem na ho colg me...taki main kuch toh prevent karpaun''

Anushka:i knw rey...i cn understand...par sharon kahan kisiki sunti he...woh agar dusro ki baat sunti toh itni problem kabhi nahin hoti...

Rey:but i'm sure...tune sharon ki class toh zaroor li hogi...!!!...kyun?...true na?

Rey smiles while saying this and anushka returns her answer with a smile...

Anushka:haan woh toh maine le li...achche se...ekdam acche se class le li uski...itni achchi golden oppurtunity miss kaise karti...

They laugh together...

Anushka:neway rey...main ab chalti hoon...bohot late hogaya hai..

Rey:okay'..and you don't wrry...i will make sharon understand...aur baki team ko bhi!...and i promise aisa kabhi nahin hoga phir se...tu janti he na anushka'. sharon bhi meri best frnd he...uska dil nahin dukhana chahta me...isilye main usse apne tareeke se samjha dunga!...

Anushka:hmmm...okay...i trust u yaar..i'm sure u will do it..bye rey...!!!

Suddenly rey remebers that kria was crying badly...she was hurt..he cud nto consle her or do nethng for her...and anushka being her friend must have met her'. And talked to her regarding all this that happened...he pretends to ask abt her...he stops anushka from the back...

Rey:hey anushka...!!!...listen...!

She turns back and says...

Anushka:haan bol rey...kya hua?

Rey:woh...woh...woh...

Anushka:kya woh woh woh...???...woh woh woh kya karraha hai...seedhe seedhe pooch kya hua?

Rey:haan woh teri frnd he na...woh ladki he na...jiske saath u knw sharon ne aaj woh prank...kya naam he uska...haan kria...kria kaisi he?...hws she?...she must have been hurt and upset na?...is she ok now?

Anushka:kria?...haan milne gayi thi main usse...usse sambhalna zyada zaroori tha...usse humari zaroorat thi'rorahi thi woh... but she is ok now'I guess so...woh toh yehi kehrahi thi ki woh theek he...but bohot upset aur bohot hurt toh lagrahi thi... obviously...koi bhi upset hojaega aise bure din ke baad...isiliye she wanted to be alone thodi der ke liye...upset thi isiliye ghar chali gayi...phone pe baat karungi usse...usse better feel karane ke liye...better toh feel karana hi hoga'itni upset jo thi'.

Rey: woh kal'. colg?

Anushka:of course aayegi...kya rey tu bhi...aise childish harkato se kria jaise ladki kabhi nahin daregi...i'm sure she will be okay in a while...bohot strong he woh...main janti hoon...she just needs sum time off...woh theek hojayegi...upset he...par i'm sure she will be fine...neway rey...i need to go...!...bye rey...see u...!!!

Rey:bye...see u...!

Anushka leaves and rey talks to himself alone...

Rey:mere saath hi aisa kyun hota hai.kyun'kyun'kyun...kaise kahoon kria ko sorry...aur wahan sharon se baat...anushka ko promise kiya hai.woh bhi toh dearest frnd he na meri...kria wahan upset aur main yahan idiot ki tarah betha hoon...kuch toh sochna hi parega...kria ko better feel karana hi hoga aur saath me usse sorry kehna hi parega...par kaise...oh God...wat do i do???!!!

Rey lies down on the floor looking up while anushka leaving gives vicky a cold look and takes neha from there...vicky runs in to know what hapnd where rey says nthng and they both leave for home too...

On the other hand kria reaches home furious and upset and shuts the door of her room hard, throws her bag on the floor and jumps on the bed lying over the pillow crying...tears roll down through her cheeks remembering her humiliation...kria's mom gets apprehensive as to what hapnd...

Smriti:kria beta?...kya hua beta???...u ok na?

Kria:nthng mom...i'm okay...bas lil tired...thodi thakgayi hoon...need sum rest...

Smriti:ok beta...!!!

Kria cant forget her insult and constantly remembers how humilated she felt...she keeps on crying but suddenly she realizes that she cannot cry and be weak...she has to be strong and face the world as she has to fulfill her dreams...the sole purpose she came to the city...other things dnt matter to her...she has to stand up and forget everything and move on...she cant loose and cannot feel so low...she has to have self-confidence in her and not give up for these things...

Kria: mom ne kaha tha ki zindagi me kisi bhi cheez se haar nahin manni chahiye ...aur main aise stupid cheezo se kyun daroon?...bhale hi woh dazzlers ho aur woh kuch bhi kare...mujhe kya farq parta he...mazak unhone udaya he mera...par mujhe aise mazak se darr nahin lagta...woh sharon apne aap ko jo samjhe par usne abhi tak kria ko nahin samjha...agar usse lagraha hai ki main ek kone me bethke roungi aur afsos karungi...aur shayad kal colg nahin jaungi...par aisa bilkul nahin hoga...main yahan apne sapno ke liye aayi hoon..aur mujhe sirf uspar focus karna hai...par iska matlab yeh nahin ki main apni insult bhool jaungi...watch out dazzlers...here comes kria...!!!

On the other hand Rey is rehearsing in front of the mirror in his room as to how to tell kria sorry...he is extremely nervous...

Rey:kria...woh kria...main..main woh..woh main...uff ho rey...aise bakre ki tarah main main karta rahega na toh subha hojaegi...cmon dude...tu karsakta hai...vicky sahi kehraha hai...sirf dil se sorry kehna hai...cmon u cn do it...

Kria...woh mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha...kuch baat karni thi...haan this sounds good...kria i needed to tell u dat...dat i am...oh no main itna nervous kyun horaha hoon...main rey hoon..one and only reyansh singhania...toh mujhe itna kyun darr lagraha hain...cmon rey go for it...kria...kal jo kuch bhi hua uske liye aur tumhe yeh batana tha uss din corridor main dhakka maine hi mara tha...uske liye i'm really very ...

Just when he is about to say the word sorry..he is interrupted by a phonecall...he gets irritated...

Rey:urghhh...uff yeh kaun yaar disturb karrahah hai...kiska itna achcha timing hai interfere karne ka...

He sees that its non other than sharon's call..the phone almst slips of his hand...

Rey:oh no!...sharon!...Oh God...phone nahin uthaya toh yeh kal apne sar pe poora colg uthalegi...

Rey picks up the call and speaks to her...

Rey:hey sharon...hi...wats up?

Sharon:dnt wats up me rey...yeh kya kahan ho tum?...

Rey:ghar me...at home...kyun kya hua sharon?...wat hapnd yaar?

Sharon:nthng...rey hum sab yahan lounge me enjoy karrahe he aur tum ho ki ghar pe bethe ho...cum na yaar...!

Rey:sharon...woh kya he na ki im a lil tired...aaj non stop rehearse kiya maine toh plz aaj aane ka bilkul mann nahin he..hope u understand yaar!

Sharon:ok yaar...nethng for u...ofcourse i understand..u take care...kal colg me milte he...bye rey...

Rey:bye sharon!

He keeps the phone and jumps on his bed...

Rey:waah...kya mindblowing life hai meri...ek taraf sharon se karni he baat..aur wahan anushka se kiya hua promise bhi nibhana hai aur phir kria se kehna he sorry...oh God...saari problems ek saath hi aati hai...God plz help me...pata nahin kal mera kya hoga...!!!..btw vicky sahi kehraha tha ki main uss ms.attitude ko sorry kehne ke liye itna desperate kyun horaha hoon...aisa kya hai usme...but sorry toh kehna hi parega...chahe jo bhi ho..!!

Saying this rey goes to sleep...so does kria...on the other hand sharon and her friends celebrate as their plan was successful...

Sharon:hey guys what r u all waiting for?...lets start the party guys...

Simi:par rey?...wheres he?...uske bina how cn we have fun...

Sharon:woh rey ne kaha ki woh tired hai...he needs rest...kal colg me milega...neway...lets celebrate guys...

Vicky:(in his mind)...zaroor uss weakling ko sorry kehne ki rehearsal karraha hoga...yeh rey bhi na...kabhi nahin sudhrega...i hope sharon ko iss bare me kuch pata na chale...!!!

Sharon:cheers guys...finally guys...we did it...uss behenji ko aisa sabak sikhaya ki zindagi bhar kabhi attitude dikhane ke guts nahin honge usme...mujhse panga huh?...sahi punishment milgayi usse...ab woh kal im sure colg nahin aayegi...infact kuch din baad khud hi colg chordegi...achche se janti hoon main aise ladkiyon ko...thodi si self-respect hurt hojane ar bohot dukh hota hai...aur itni insult ke baad toh koi bhi sensible insaan vapas ussi jagah nahin aayega...toh guys...lets celebrate...!!!

The next morning...

In Rey's house...while getting ready...

Rey:rey cmon...aaj tujhe ms.attitude ko sorry kehna hi parega...nthng dng...aur haan sharon se baat bhi karni paregi...!!!

In Kria's house...

Kria:unn dazzlers ko lagraha hoga ki main darr ke chup ke ghar me bethi hoon...rorahi hongi...par unhe bhi pata nahin ki iss baar unhone galat ladki se panga liya hai...bohot mazaa aaraha tha na unhe...mazaa toh ab aayega...jab unn dazzlers ka sahi me aisa tamasha banega ki zindagi bhar pachtayenge ki galat ladki se panga leliya...bohot bari galti kardi tumne sharon...ab dekho kria kaise tit for tat karti he...cmon kria...dikhade inhe...ki mazak hota kya hai!

Kria leaves for colg...so does rey...scene shifts to the colg canteen where evryone is sitting having a noce time as there is time for class to start...the dazzlers r sitting and having fun when rey enters...

Sharon:hey rey...wats up??...hii...

Rey:hey sharon...wats up...!!!

Rey exchanges high fives wid sharon and sits down but has a tensed look on his face...

Vicky:(whispers in rey's ears)...kyun??...kar li apne sorry ki poori grand rehearsal...script ke saath...

Rey:shut up...tu chup reh samjha...!!!..

Sharon:hey rey...tujhe kal bohot miss kiya yaar...kya celebrate kiya humne...we had a rocking party...

Rey:i knw yaar but what to do...was way too tired...!!!...btw celebration?..for wht?

Sharon:rey...humara uss weakling ke against ka plan successful hogaya...aur ab i dnt think so ki woh behenji colg me aayegi...!(laughs)...

Rey:toh uske liye celebration ?...cmon sharon...aisi lame si reason ke liye party?

Sharon:lame?...what lame?...tumhe yeh sab lame lagta hai?

Rey:mera matlab yeh hai ki this reason dsnt call for a party...i mean ke weakling ke liye party...

Sharon:uske liye party nahin?...uske colg chorne ki khushi me party karrahe the...

Rey:WHAT??...LEAVING THE COLG?...mmm..i mean kya woh waqai me colg chorrahi hai?

Sharon:dnt knw rey...but im sure she wont cum back...aisi ladkiyon ko main achche se janti hoon...thodi si insult hojaye toh bardasht nahin hota unhe..aur wahi par phir se apni insult karvane toh nahin aayegi na..toh im sure she wont cum...!

Rey:(in his mind)...aisa nahin hosakta...kria colg chorke nahin jasakti...agar woh ms.attitude he...aur agar me ms.attitude ko thoda sa bhi janta hoon toh woh yahan zaroor aayegi...cmon kria...tum colg zaroor aaogi...mera dil kehraha hai!!

On the other hand while all dis is gng on in the canteen, anushka and neha are waiting for kria to cum...they getting tensed whether she will cum or not...

Anushka:hey neha...tumhari kria ke saath baat hui...?...kya kaha usne?...woh aarahi he na?

Neha:no talking with kria neha ne...geting tension neha...

Just when they are discussing all dis they kria cuming...kria cums to colg all confident...

Anushka:thank God kria...thank God ke tum aagayi...really!

Neha:really..bohot tensioning we are...!!!

Kria: arey hua kya?...maine kal tumlogo se kaha tha na ki main colg aaungi...aur aisa kya hua...sirf prank hi toh khela he na...main chahoon toh unko unki harkat ka jawab kal hi desakti thi...par aisa main karungi nahin...

Anushka:toh tum kuch nahin karogi uss sharon ko sabak sikhane ke liye?

Kria:karungi na par kria ke style me...uss sharon ki tarah childish pranks khelkar nahin...!...just wait and watch!...btw woh zoo ke creatures he kahan?...dekha tumlogo ne unn sabko?

Anushka:aur kahan honge woh sab...subha subha dazzlers canteen ke darshan karte he...!!!

Neha:but kria what gng to do u r?

Kria:neha...be patient...chal pehle hum dazzlers ke darshan karke aate he...

They exchange high fives and laugh...they go to the canteen...

In the canteen...

Sharon: guys...i'm really happy...finally uss behenji se chuthkara mila...so happy she wont cum...!!!

Kria:WRONG SHARON...U R ABSOLUTELY WRONG SHARON...!!!

Sharon and her team are shell shocked to see kria back to colg...but on the other hand rey is extremely happy to see kria back to the colg...he smiles but pretends in frnt of his frnds...

Sharon:tttum?...tum phir se yahan?...

Kria:kyun?...kyun tumne yeh expect nahin kiya tha?..actually main janti hoon ki tum expect kya karrahi thi!!..yehi na ki kal jo insult aur kamaal ka humiliation kiya tumne mera uske baad main bohot hurt feel karungi aur upset houngi aur apne ghar ke kamre apne aap ko band karke roungi..par aisa kuch nahin hua...afsos ki jiske liye tumne itna achcha plan banaya tha wohi nahin hua...aur tumhara plan ultimately fail hogaya...how sad!!!

Sharon:how dare u?...how dare u talk to me like this?...

Kria:dare...dare ki baat tum nahi  karo toh achcha hai...dare toh mujhme bohot hai par tumhara luck achcha hai ki maine abhi tak dare dikhaya nahin...

Sharon:oh really now...ab tum mujhe dare dikhaugi...mujhe?...wishful thinking weakling..!!!

Kria:thinking?...thinking ke bare me mujhe ek baat pata chali he...yehi ki tum logo ki thinking kaisi hai..kitni nichi level ki thinking he tumhari aur tumhari team ki...

Sharon:just shut up..u understand...tum mujhse panga logi?...mujhse?...itna status hai tumhara?

Kria:understand karne me toh tumhe problem hogayi he sharon...mujhe...tumne mujhe jaise samjha main waisi nahin hoon...aur  mujhe koi shauq nahin he tumse befizool ka panga lene ka par umne mere saamne aur koi option hi nahin rakha aur jahan tak status ki baat hai...tumlogo ne apna status khud hi dikhadiya kal...aur tumne ab ak samjha hi kahan he mujhe...mera naam kria malhotra hai...aur maine aaj tak haarna sikha nahin he...

Sharon:oh really...toh itna hi attitude he toh kal kuch kyun nahin kiya? huh?

Kria:kal tumhari uss low level ke harkat ke liye dnt think ki mere pass jawab nahin he...main chahoon toh tumhare style me..tumhare level tak girke main tumhe abhi jawab desakti hoon...chahoon toh main bhi kichar phekke hisaab barabar karsakti hoon par main aisa nahin karungi..kyunki mujhe tumhare level tak nahin girna...toh phir tumhare aur mujhme difference kya rahega sharon...aur haan tumlogo ne mujhpar kichar isiliye pheka kyunki jinke dil kichar ki tarah gande hote hai woh kichar se beyond kuch soch hi nahin sakte...

Sharon:dnt u dare...aur waise bhi tumhe tumhare harkat ka jawab mila...mujhe dhakka markar bohot kuch sunaya tha tumne mujhe woh uska jawab diya maine tumhe kal...aur ek dazzler se panga lene ki sazaa mili tumhe...

Kria:bas...bas bohot hogaya...jab se iss colg me aayi hoon...dazzler yeh...dazzler woh...thak gayi hoon main yeh word sun sun ke...yeh st.loius colg he...dazzler colg nahin...aur haan bohot ghamand he na tumhe aur tumhare team ko dazzler hone ka...bohot shauq he na dazzle karne ka...main tumhe promise karti hoon sharon agar maine tumlogo ke dazzle ko kum nahin kardiya toh mera naam bhi kria malhotra nahin aur haan maine toh dekhliya ki ek dazzler kya karsakti he par ab tum dekho ki ek weakling kya karsakti he...ab kria tumhe apne style me jawab degi...

Neha:anushka...neha getting tensed...what panga kria taking again wid sharon...

Anushka:no neha...kria bilkul sahi karrahi he...inhe track pe lane ka yehi achcha tareeka hai...cnt believe ki wohlog kisike colg chorne par celebrate karrahehe...dumb!

Sharon:tum...mujhe challenge karrahi ho?...suno tum ek weakling ho yani ki weak...kamzor...tum kuch nahin karsakti...aise dialogues filmo me achche sound karte he lekin real life me it dsnt matter at all...

Kria:weak?..yehi toh tumhari galat faimi hai sharon...misunderstanding ki weaklings kamzor aur weak hai...dusro ko kamzor woh samajhte he jo khud kamzor hote he...aur darr unhe hi lagta hai jo haarne se darte hai par iss baar tumne galat ladki ko target kiya hai...sharon kapoor...tumhe pata bhi nahin chalega ki main kab tumhe aur kahan jawab dungi..u just wait for the surprise sharon...!

Sharon:ok ...bring it on then...main bhi toh dekhoon ki tum aisa kya karti ho...dazzlers ko weakling ke barabar karne ka sochrahi ho tum...dreams me poora hoga...huh!

Kria:dreams tum dekhti raho sharon...main dreams ko poora karne me believe karti hoon...aur jahan line equal karne ka sawaal he toh woh main nahin chahti kyunki humein aapke equal hona bhi nahin he...u just wait and watch sharon..tumhe apne aap pata chaljaega ki main kya karsakti hoon...phir mat kehna ki maine tumhe warning nahin di...ok???...neway...maine bohot bolliya aur ab mujhe class jana hai kyunki tumlog toh class jate nahin ho par mujhe toh class attend karna hai...isiliye all d best sharon...tc bye everyone..have a nice day...

Just when she was about to leave,she decides to even talk to rey...she turns back and walks towards rey...rey is looking at her...feeling a lil scared but also getting mesmerized by her at the same time...she cums and stands in frnt of him...gives him a cold look but rey keeps on looking at her mesmerized...woth their background music being played behind...

Rey:(in his mind)...kitni cute...kitni sweet he yeh...so nice...

Kria:mr.reyansh singhania...captain of the dazzlers...right?...main tumhe ek message dena toh bhul hi gayi...apne team ko na control me rakhna ..kahin woh out of control hogaye toh bohot problem hojaegi...isiliye last warning...limit main rahoge toh tum sab ke liye achcha hoga...samjhe mr.dazzler?

Rey:fine...ms.kria...woh toh dekha jayega...!!

Saying dis kria is about to leave...as she turns to leave her hair dashe  through rey's face and rey closes his eyes...bg music plays and rey opens his eye slowly...gives a sweet smile and says...

Rey:waqai mein ms.attitude...saabit kardiya tumne ki tum sach me ms.attitude ho...wahi spark...wahi aggression...wahi gussa...tum itne gusse main hote hue bhi kitni sweet aur achchi lagati ho...oh hello rey...what u speakin dude?...remember usse sirf sorry kehna hai...aur woh bhi jaldi...God bless me...!!!

Kria leaves along with anushka and neha...sharon and other dazzlers are stunned with her behaviour...sharon fumes wid anger...

Sharon:how dare she speak with me like this?...how dare she?...uss weakling behenji achanak kal ke baad zyada par nikal aaye...kuch sabak nahin sikha uss weakling ne...usse toh me...how dare she!

Simi and Rimi: relax sharon...relax...class chale guys...sharon lets go to class...aur uss behenji ka toh kuch na kuch hum karlenge...cmon sharon lets go!

The girls are walking when nilesh speaks...

Nilesh:yaar uss weakling behneji main itne guts ki woh sharon ko challenge kare?

Vicky:apne aap ko bari warrior queen samajhti he...but she dsnt knw ki usne galat logo se panga liya he...

Rey:hey nil aur vicky...just keep quiet yaar...rehne de na...dnt start again phir se...

Vicky:haan mujhe pata hai ki tu yeh sab kyun kehraha hai...

Nil:kyun?...why?

Rey:arey kuch nahin...yeh vicky toh kuch bhi bolta rehta hai...chal lets go to class...geting late yaar...!!!

They move to class..while kria,neha and anushka celebrate...

Neha:waqai me..kria what zabardast panga u take...band bajadi unki...shakal pe 12 o clock bajgaya!

Anushka:bilkul sahi kiya kria ne...par kria tumhe nahin lagta ki kuch jaldi hi tumne unhe challenge kardiya...aur tum karogi kya aisa?

Kria:nahin anushka aisa kuch nahin hoga...God mere saath he...aur main janti hoon...bohot jald wohi mujhe unko sabak sikhane ka koi raasta dikhayenge...

Anushka:ok...neway need to go to class..bye guys...see u later...

Kria goes to class along with neha...rey is waiting for kria to cum...all r settling down when rey tries his level best to keep the chair beside him empty to make kria sit there so that he can talk to her...but vicky tries to sit but rey stops him...

Rey:oh vicky...plz yaar tu jake udhar beth na...keep this palce empty...

Vicky:kyun?...kya problem hai?

Rey:vicky...this chair is defective...isme mat beth...iska balance thoda kharap he dekh!

Vicky:ok...!!!

All settle down and then kria and neha enter...sharon and kria exchange cold looks but kria passes by wid neha...neha sits in her usual place but kria does not find ne place to sit...she sees only one place empty that is beside rey..rey keeps on looking at her smiling...she gets irritated as she has no where else to sit and class is about to start soon...reluctantly she sits beside rey...rey looks at her and smiles while kria gives her a stern look...they speak in their minds...

Kria:bara aaya mr.dazzler...ghamand toh dekho...samajhta kya he apne aap ko...inki ghamand ko agar maine toda nahin na toh mera naam kria nahin...

Rey: sweet pagal ms.attitude...jitni bari warrior queen tum ho na usse kya zyada tum cute ho...main janta hoon...aur aaj main tumhe sorry kehkar hi rahunga...!!!

They both keep on looking at each other with different agendas in their minds for each other...!!!...



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it took me  a long time to read but it was worth it. u always cum with a bang awesome update. its worth the wait

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kya baat hai yaar very nice update liked the whole kria taking panga thing kria is really panga lena wali in this ff :)

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