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Good going...

nice story...

update soon.

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nice update yaar
i loved vicky
and his songs...LOL

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really liking your FF... update soon... and add me to your PM list!

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Part 4...

Kria and Rey are looking at each other with fingers pointed... Kria after seeing him gets totally enraged and Rey is slightly lost in her...but he cums bk to reality...

Kria:tum?...tum yahan bhi aagaye?...kal mujhe pareshan karke tumhara jee nahin bhara jo tum yahan bhi aagaye vapas mujhe pareshan karne ke liye?...besharam...peecha karte karte yahan tak aagaya...

Rey:hello...ms.attitude...apni baaton ko zara sa brake do ok...bolte bolte tum thak nahin jaati?...aur btw main kisika peecha nahin karta...samjhi?...

Kria:haan...main toh bhool hi gayi thi tum ladkiyon ke peeche nahin,ladkiyan tumhare peeche bhagti hain...chor samajhke...

Anushka and neha are totally surprised at what they r seeing...

Neha:doing what they are?...iss colg me aisa never seeing...

Anushka:true...never seeing...!!!

Rey:look...tum kuch zyada hi bolrahi ho samjhi?...u dnt know me!!!

Kria: i dnt even wanna know u...aur ek baat..tumhe pata hai ki ladkiyan tumhare peeche kyun bhagti hai...kyunki woh tumhe marne ke liye tumhare peeche aate he kyunki tumhara face unke liye kitna bara torture he...jo roz isse jhelna parta hai...

Rey:what?...

Kria:tumhe samajh me nahin aaya?...how sad...kaise aayega sab kuch maine Hindi main jo kaha...maine kaha ki apni shakal ko zara aaine me dekhlena,tumhe sab samajh me aajaega...

Vicky who had gone to drink some water cums nd sees whats happening..he gets shocked when he sees Rey fighting with a girl that too which was not gud for his reputation...he jumps to save rey...

Vicky:guys...guys...yeh ho kya raha hai?...hey girl...tum kyun ladrahi ho Rey ke saath?...aur tum ho kaun?

Kria:pehle aap batao aap kaun ho...mujhse identity proof mangne se pehle aapki tareef kya hai bataiyye?

Vicky:tareef?...whats dat?

Rey:jane de na vicky...chal...

Kria:kyun?darke bhagrahe ho mr.chaukidaar?

Neha:kria calling rey chaukidaar...what happening dis is?

Anushka:samajh me toh mujhe bhi nahin aaraha he...

Rey turns behind and looks at kria...

Vicky:what?...chaukidaar...?how dare you?...

Kria:arey aap phir se...aapke muh me bohot zabaan he na...aur inke muh me nahin jo inke chamche ki tarah baat karrahe he...aapko baat karne ke liye bola..nahin... toh aap beech me parne wale hote kaun he?

Vicky:dekha guys...ek naye weakling ki entry...God...ab ek aur weakling ko jhelna parega...

Rey:vicky...stop it...kya karraha hai...

Kria:excuse me...kya kaha?...

Vicky:kyun ab tumhe sunayi nahin diya?..behri ho kya?

Kria: nahin...par mujhe lagta hai ki aapke dimag ki bohot kami hai isiliye meri baat aapke aur aapke dost ko samajh me nahin aayi...

Vicky:listen girl...tum kyun gale parke rey se ladai karrahi ho?

Kria:ab woh kaun he?...rey?

Neha and anushka run beside kria to save the situation...

Neha:kria...jiske saath u fighting dat is rey and yeh his best frnd vicky...

Kria:oh...toh tumhara naam rey he...aur tum vicky...aur btw u...mujhe kisike gale parne ka koi shauq nahin he..yeh toh tum jaise ladko ka kaam hota hai ladkiyon ke gale parne ka...

Rey:listen whoever u are...humein bhi shauq nahin he kisi ladki se ladai karne ka...tumne shuru kiya tha aur ab main isse khatam karunga...aur jahan tak mirror me apne aap ko dekhne ki baat he woh main roz dekhta hoon aur mujhe pata hai ki main kaisa dikhta hoon...mera face agar ladkiyon ke liye torture toh tumhara face...

He stops in between as he gets lost in kria's face which he finds the most beautiful face in the world...

Kria:mera face kya haan?...

Rey(in his mind): beautiful...look main ladkiyon se itna baat karta nahin aur listen i have a rep to protect..tum jaisi ladkiyon se baat karke nahi mujhe apna time waste karna hai aur nahi mujhe apne rep ko barbaad karna hai...

Vicky:yah ryt...aisi ladkiyon se baat karke why r v wasting tym?

Kria:kamaal he ..aajkal chaukidaaro ko bohot attitude hogaya...aur aisi waisi ladki ka kya matlab...aise waise ladke toh tumlog ho samjhe?...

Neha:what doing you?...why fighting?

Anushka:guys koi mujhe batayega ki yahan ho kya raha hai?...main student president hoon..mujhe janne ka haq hai...whats happening...kria and rey...what happened?

Kria:issise poochlo ki kya hua!...

Rey:look anushka...nthng ok...

Vicky:haan yeh new weakling bohot bolrahi he isse chup karao...

Anushka:vicky...har maamle dnt interfere...let me handle...guys mujhe detail me janna hai ki akhir why r u both fighting so much?...hua kya?

Kria:anushka...dnt tell me tum inhe janti ho...yeh he kaun?

Anushka:of course kria...colg students ko main nahin janungi!

Kria:yeh colg students he!...mujhe laga yeh dono..

Anushka:enough kria...without knowing d matter main kuch bhi nahin kehsakti...aur haan Rey and Vicky...tumlog bhi kum nahin ho...just stop it ok...

Rey:u knw me anushka.mujhe fighting achchi nahin lagti woh toh yeh he ki third world war karna shuru kardi...

Kria:pareshan toh isne kiya mujhe...iska chehra dekhte hi mujhe...

Rey:look main aapne aap ko aur defend nahin karna chahta...kyunki tumhe samjhana is total time waste and its not Rey's style too...tum issi colg ki nayi student ho na toh tumhe dheere dheere pata chal hi jaega ki main kaun hoon aur baki sab bhi...samjhi ms.attitude...!!!

Vicky:yah ryt rey...!!!

Kria:huh..mujhe bhi koi shauq nahin he baki sab kaam chodke colg ke do loyal chuakidaars ke bare me janne ka...aur waise bhi tumhe aur tumhe sab kuch kitna late me samajh me aata hai isiliye koi faida nahin he tumlogo ko samjhane ka...!!!

Anushka:neway guys...chill now ok...rey and vicky tum dono jao yahan se...and kria plz..shant hojao...

Kria:shant?..isse dekhkar aur iske chamche ko dekhkar main shant..never...

Anushka:chalo..hum bhi chalte he classes shuru hone me abhi sirf 15 minute baki he..pichle 45 mins poore 3rd world war ka trailer dekhliya...

They leave...kria is walking towards the left talking to anushka and neha while rey and vicky walk towards the right talking abt kria...

Kria:uff God..aisa mere saath hi kyun hota hai..jab bhi mere life me kuch achcha hota hai tab aise kaise hojata hai...

Neha:u knwing rey so well?...when?...u toh colg joining from yesterday?

Kria:mat pooch neha...uske baare me sochte hi mera dimag  na reflex angle me ghoomjata hai!

Anushka:uff ho kria...par tum rey ko janti kaise ho?...jahan tak main janti hoon rey and u havnt met yet toh.kya tum usse pehle se janti ho?

Kria:chod na yaar...waise woh kya kehraha tha ki colg me rehkar dheere dheere mujhe pata chaljaega ki woh kaun hai aur baki sab...woh kya tha?..aur woh ladka mujhe kya bularaha tha...weak...kuch...

Anushka:weakling...

Kria:woh kya hota hai?

Neha:ussi ke bare me hi toh they talking...

Kria:mujhe kuch samajh me nahin aaraha hai guys...plz tell me..

Anushka:ok...chalo...chalke baat karte he...

On the other hand,rey and vicky are talking abt d incident...

Vicky:my God rey..yeh tha kya??...aur yeh thi kaun?

Rey:mujhe bhi nahin pata...ki yeh tha kya aur yeh thi kaun?

Vicky:par woh toh tujhse aise baat karrahi thi jaise woh tujhe bohot pehle se janti he...aur woh tujhse aise kaise baat karsakti he??...i think she dsnt knw who are you...!!

Rey:kuch nahin yaar...tu janta hai na ki ladkiyan jab mere peeche parjati he toh kya hota hai...ulte seedhe bahane he..u knw na yaar!

Vicky:haan chal...

Rey and vicky leave while the three girls go the canteen...

Kria:hain kaun yeh log?...baatao na guys...!!!

Anushka:three cappuccinos to go please...look kria...yeh colg baaki colgs se different he ...yahan pe sab kuch different he...

Kria:matlab?

Neha:look kria...she meaning to say that yahan student me ek bohot bara division there is...

Kria:division?..kaisa division?

Anushka:neha sahi kehrahi he...ek bohot hi bara division he...yahan ke students do hisso me divided he...

Kria:hissa?...

Anushka:haan...yahan pe jo students happening,rich,fashionable and most importantly jo fabulous dancers hote hai ,woh students dazzlers kehlate he...

Kria:what?...

Neha:right she is saying...pichle 7 months se...dis is happening...

Kria:dazzlers...?...toh tumlogo ka matlab yeh he woh jo do namoone the woh log dazzlers he?

Anushka:hmm...jiske saath tum jhagra karrahi thi uska naam rey he...reyansh singhania... India ke sabse bare industrialist ka ek lauta beta...aur woh vicky...yani vikram mehra jo rey ke papa ke dost ka beta he...dono business partners he... 

Kria:really?... 

Neha:right she is telling..true it is...rey is the captain of dazzler team...aur vicky fabulous dancer...aur bhi he unke team me...

Kria:matlab jo rich ,smart aur fashionable aur cool nahin hote he par phir bhi achche dancers hote he woh log dazzlers nahin he?

Anushka:hmmm...

Kria:matlab yahan dance aur dancer status dekhkar tay kiya jata hai...yeh kaisa ajeeb kisam ka...

Anushka:hmmm..ajeeb logo ke ghazab rules...!!!

Neha:right...

Kria:aur jo unki tarah nahin hote he woh?

Neha:unhe weaklings kehte he...

Kria:weaklings?...matlab kamzor?

Anushka:haan..

Kria:toh tum dono kaun ho?

Anushka:neha ko toh woh weakling bulate he aur mujhe kuch nahin...kyunki kisi ki himmat nahin he yahan pe ki mujhe kuch bhi kahe...main nahi weakling hoon aur nahi dazzler...mujhe iss division se koi farq nahin parta hai...par rey,rey mera achcha dost hai...vicky bhi achcha hi hai!

Kria:achche?...aur woh dono?..plz...never!

Anushka:colg me nayi ho na?...rehte rehte sab pata chaljaega ki kaun achcha hai aur kaun kaisa hai!

Kria:rich aur cool huye toh kya hua...galat baat usne ki aur uske uss chamche ne...jitne bare log utni hi choti baatein!...mujhe yakeen nahin hota hai iss dumb division ke waje se woh itne hawa main udrahe the...huh!

Neha:one mre thng...yahan dazzlers ke alawa no one dancing well...matlab dazzlers ke alawa koi aur dance team colg ko represent nahin karta...

Anushka:isiliye toh main dazzlers ko respect karti hoon..ki unke superb dancing ne humare colg ko har dance competiton me number one rakkha hai...other than that nthng else...

Kria:u mean to say ki woh dono aur unki team itna achcha dance karte he?

Anushka:woho u have no idea kria ki woh log kitna achcha dance karte he!

The bell rings...its class time...

Anushka:neway lets forget abt it...i m gng to my class...

Kria:haan chal...neha...!

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On the other hand, arrives in colg, the diva and the super fashinable snob sharon...with her angels...she gets off the car and enters the colg with the entire colg staring at her...she is moving arnd with immense pride when the two dumb girls tia and ria move arnd sharon and her angels...moving arnd like butterflies...

Tia and Ria:hey sharon...hii...how u dng today?...and how do we look today?

Sharon is least bothered to answer on behalf of whom simi answers...

Simi:look u dumb chicks...u r sensible enough to know how u look...ok?...humara aur especially sharon ka time waste mat karo...!!!!!!

Saying dis sharon leaves with her angels...sharon and her angels are walking down to the corridor and kria,anushka and neha are walking to class...suddenly,both of them engrossed in chatting when suddenly they bump into each other...kria falls down while Sharon dsnt hurt herself but is furious...

Sharon:hey you...!!!...aankhen he ya blinkers lagake chalrahi ho?...

Kria gets up and turns...anushka asks is she is alright...kria walks towards sharon and says...

Kria:i'm so sorry...aapko lagi toh nahin na?

Sharon:sympathy and all huh?

Kria:ji nahin..main giri toh mujhe laga aapko bhi chot lagi hogi...im really sorry...

Sharon:sorry toh tumhe hona chahiye...kyunki tumne mujhe push kiya...aur btw tumme itni himmat kaise aayi ki mujhe push karo huh?

Kria:dekhiye main kabse aap se tameez se baat karrahi hoon aur aap hai ki aise...maine kaha na im sorry...isme himmat ki baat kahan se aayi?

Sharon:oh really!...tum jaiso ko main achchi tarah se janti hoon ...sharon ko dhakka dene ke liye yahan har koi wish karta he..aur tum bhi ussi mentality ko lekar jaan-boojh kar dhakka mara..ryt?

Kria:what?...ab bohot hogaya..tab se maafi mangrahi hoon aur aap he ki kuch bhi bolejarahi he...main toh aapko janti bhi nahin...bina jaan-pehchaan ke main jaan-bujh kar dhakka marungi?...logic hi nahin isme!

Neha:what happening this is?...sharon-kria fighting...lagta hai aaj kria's fighting day it is...

Anushka:ruk na neha...pehli baar iss colg me mere alawa sharon ko koi jawab deraha hai...ab aayega mazaa aur bajegi sharon ki band!

Sharon:toh muh me zabaan bhi he huh?...mujhe back answer karrahi ho tum?...tum janti ho main kaun hoon?

Kria:uff ho not again...yeh kya yahan ke colg ke students ka favorite dialogue he kya?...main kaun?...main kaun?...kya yaadasht kamzor hai kya ki bhooljaate he ki woh kaun he?...huh?

Sharon:how dare you?just stay in ur limits...

Kria:ab tak toh sab kuch limit me horaha tha par aapne limit cross kardi...kab se sorry kehrahi hoon par aap he apne bare me profile diye jarahi he...sensible log aise situation ko aage nahin badhate balki khatam karte he..lagta hai yahan ke students ko bimari he ..pehle toh yaadasht ki aur uske baad bina baat banaye baat ko aage badhane ka...

Sharon:hey hello..tum hoti kaun ho mujhe yeh sab kehne wali?

Kria:kria...the name is kria...ab isse mat bhool jana aur kal mat poochna ki tum ho kaun?...

Neha and anushka laugh...sharon,simi and rimi gve them a look...

Sharon:look jab tum janogi na ki main kaun hoon tab bohot pachtaogi!

Kria:thanks but no thanks par mujhe aapko aur janne me koi interest nahin he...jitna janti hoon utna kafi he mere liye...

Sharon:really now...ab tum mujhe jaan bhi gayi ho huh?..kya?

Kria:yehi ki tum ek sarphiri aur battameez ladki ho jisse ek bohot hi gambhir yaadasht ki bimari he!

Simi:how dare you ?...tum sharon se aise baat nahin karsakti!

Rimi:ryt...tum aise nahin baat karsakti..!

Kria:sharon?...tumhara naam sharon...?

Anushka:haan kria...yehi he unn dazzlers ki vice-captain...

Kria:oh toh yeh bhi?...wow...dats good...dazzlers ko ek aur bimari he..chamcho ki...wow!

Sharon:just shut up you...lagta he tum nayi ho...isiliye aise baat karrahi ho mujhse...one thng get it straight u newbie ki jab tumhe yeh pata chalega ki main kaun hoon tab tum really bohot pachtaogi...

Kria:kisse kab aur kahan pachtana hai yeh toh waqt hi batayega!

Anushka:kria is ryt...sharon...plz huh..tumhara yeh roz ka drama hai...ab plz haan...act khatam karo aur class ke liye..oops class nahin apni whatever jagah me jao aur chill karo...kyunki classes aur tumhara door door ka koi rishta nahin he...aur waise bhi tum colg me ab afternoon walk karne aayi ho toh woh karo aur dimag ko zara 0 degree pe thanda karo...!!!...c'mon kria..lets go..hum sab already 10 min class ke liye late hogaye...

Neha,kria and anushka leave...sharon is furious to the core...

Sharon:pehle yeh anushka aur ab yeh newbie...samajhti kya he yeh apne aap ko?mujhse..?...sharon the rockstar se panga...anushka toh phir bhi theek he par yeh new girl...par nikal aaye anushka ka dost banke huh...toh isse bhi toh pata chale ki ek dazzler se ulajhna kitna mehenga parta hai...cheer up guys...ek nayi weakling..ek naya plan...issko toh main bataungi ki she dsnt knw what trouble she has invited for her...guys,hum class nahin rehearsal room jayenge...mera mood nahin he...

Simi and Rimi:yah ok sharon...

The grls leave while kria and neha are running to go the classroom...sharon is informed that rey and vicky are attending classes...because they heard she has come but since thy are in class now they cnt be informed that she is not attending classes...while they r all attending classes rey is lost in the deep thoughts of kria...a girl which has taken away rey's thoughts to herself unknowingly...rey resting on one elbow on his table is deeply thinking abt her ...the thoughts from the beginning he met her to the fight they had...when vicky brings him out...

Vicky:abey rey...phir se dreamland ke bahar chalagaya kya?..kya soch raha hai...?...class chalraha hai yaar...prof gussa hogaya toh boring lecture dena shuru hojaega..plz...!!!

Rey:plz vicky...kya tu bhi!...hey sunn...class ke baad uss sorry wali ko dhundna hai!

Vicky:theek he guru ji ..jaisa aap kahe!

They are all attending classes when kria and neha running reach class and shout loudly,breathing heavily...

Kria and Neha:may we come in sir...!!!

Rey looks at kria and gves a faint smile...

Rey:ms.attitude...mere class me?..ok...ab toh mazaa ayega!

Vicky looks at them gvng stern looks...

Vicky:yeh nayi wekling humare class me...bas...ab yeh sarphira prof inhe chodenge nahin...good...saara attitude bahar nikal jaega

Rey:(mind)...oh no!!!...really..ab kya hoga!

The prof looks at his watch and looks at them sternly...kria and neha look at the professor with shocked expressions...!!!



 



Edited by swthrtdevisha - 14 March 2012 at 1:25am

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nice dailogues! esp of Kria...

btw dude, itna lamba update likha kaise!?

amazing!

update soon... loving the characters and the storyline!


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nice update i loved how rey kept getting lost in the middle of the arguement but i also wish kriya would stop getting mad at him par asa tho hona hi tha kyun ki agar misunderstandings nahi huyi tho story aga kaisa badegi LOVED THE UPDATE THOUGH plz continue writingSmile

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awesome...Smile
dialogues amazing!Thumbs Up
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awesomely written...feels like m reading a serial...its mindblowing

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