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Part 3...

Kria is dancing whole heartedly on the song 'O RE PIYA'..dats one of her fav songs.. Rey who is approaching towards hears the music while he is walking and gets suspicious that someone is in the rehearsal hall...he runs to see..

Rey:rehearsal hall me koi...who?...sharon toh iss waqt colg aayegi nahin...woh toh busy hai...toh phir rehearsal hall me hain kaun...??

Rey runs for his life and opens the door with full force...kria who is so engrossed in dancing doesn't notice dat sum1 else is dere arnd... Rey sees a girl dancing beautifully and gracefully and cant take his eyes off her...her dance moves appeal to him so much so dat, dat he cant think abt nethng else...he had seen many dancers b4 dis but not a dancer like her.she was just amazing...

Rey:(mind)...kaun he yeh ladki?...jo duniya ko bhool ke dance karrahi he...isse maine pehle kabhi nahin dekha...par iska chehra mujhe theek se kyun nahin dikhraha...itna achcha dance..aisa lagta hai ki yeh dance ke liye hi jeeti he...wow...what a dancer...amazing dude...!!!

Rey in his excitement to see d girl's face goes slightly near her but she is turning round and round and d end part of the song is playing...winds flying, Rey goes in a total trance...but cant see her face properly as d light is too dim...suddenly when kria is taking the last turn,he notices dat slight water has fallen on the ground and if kria turns towards dat side,she will fall...d moment she is abt to finish her round and is abt to slip, Rey goes and catches her and saves her from falling..d world stops dere with time for him...he holds her by the waist and kria's eyes are shut thinking dat she has fallen... the spotlight falls on them.. Rey finally sees kria's face and gets totally floored looking at it...with her eyes shut,kria looks even more beautiful than ever and Rey hasnt seen such a calm and a serene beauty b4...he gets totally lost in her (with our fav kriyansh bg music playing in d bg)... Rey thinks in his mind...

Rey:wow...jitni amazing dancer usse kahin zyada amazingly beautiful...aisi ladki pehli baar dekha hai...itni ladkiyan dekhi hai par aisa chehra poori duniya me bhi dhundo toh bhi nahin milega...par yeh he kaun aur yahan kya karrahi he???

Kria finally opens her eyes and to her horror sees a boy is holding her by her waist...she gets highly enraged...b4 rey cud say nethng,kria starts speaking...and moves him away from her at a distance...

Kria: hello..kaun he aap?...aur aapki himmat kaise hui mujhe choone ki...??

Rey: look girl...ur geting it all wrong...woh toh main bas...

Kria: haan...sab samajhti hoon main...pehle chup chup kar ladki ka dance dekhrahe the aur ab...tum ladko ko na bas bahana chahiye ladkiyon ko choone ka..par main koi aisi waisi ladki nahin hoon ...samjhe?...

Rey: listen...ur misunderstanding...aisi koi baat nahin he...aur haan tum kya thoda saans lekar baat karogi i cant follow what ur saying...!!!

Kria: dekho...zyada smart mat bano...how dare you touch me?...main tumhe janti tak nahin...aur tum...

Rey: pause and freeze and listen to me girl...tum tabse bolejarahi ho aur main sunraha hoon,iska matlab yeh nahin ki main bol nahin sakta ok...aur one mre thng galati maine nahin tumne ki he..chup chup ke rehearsal hall me tum practice karrahi thi...main toh bas wahi dekhne aaya tha...ki akhir iss hall me kaun he jo chori se ghuske practice karraha tha...

Kria widens her mouth...

Kria: how dare you?...ladkiyon se baat karne ki tameez nahin seekhi kya?...besharam...ek toh galalti karte ho upar se mujhe kehrahe ho ki main chor hoon...ek toh chori upar se seena zori...yeh toh woh baat hogayi...ulta chor kotwal ko daate...

Rey:whose kotwal?...koi naya naam hai kya?

Kria: huh!!..angrez chale gaye inko chodgaye...

Rey:listen..janta toh main bhi nahin ho tumko...janna chahta bhi nahin...main toh bas iss rehearsal hall ko check karne ke liye aaya tha...

Kria: kyun?...tum chaukidaar ho...?...jo rakhwali karne aaye the?

Rey: what?...dekho pehle toh mujhe chauki whatever iska matlab nahin pata aur upar se tum itni baatein karrahi ho...!!!

Kria: baatein aur tumse?...forget it...main tum jaise ladko achche se janti hoon...sheher me paida kya hojate ho apne aap ko pata nahin kya samajhne lagte ho...

Rey: look..main aur justification nahin desakta apne liye...kyunki tum kabhi samjhogi nahin..kyunki tumhe lagta hai ki tum jo bhi kehti ho woh sahi he...

Kria:achcha...bohot acche se jangaye mere bare me?

Rey: plz...mujhe aur bhi kaam hai...

Kria:toh jakar woh kijiye na plz...mere peeche kyun pare he...bare aaye mujhe gyan dene wale...!!!

Rey:oh plzzz...main aur ladkiyon ke peeche???... never..ladkiyan mere peeche bhagti he...tarasti he mere ek look ke liye...

Kria smirks...

Kria: really?...aapko chor samjhkar bhagti hongi aapke peeche...

Rey: huh...!!!...waise meri baat chodo...yeh batao ki colg khatam hue toh kafi time hogaya ...akele dance?..woh bhi iss rehearsal hall me...??

Kria: kyun bataun?...mujhe bhi apna justification nahin dena...aur waise bhi iss rehearsal hall me aisa kya hai jo baar baar aise bolrahe ho...jaise hall nahin rajmahal ho jiske tum one and only chaukidaar ho ryt?

Rey:yah really...tum janti bhi ho main kaun hoon ?

Kria:kyun chengiz khan ho kya?...

Rey: now whose chengiz khan?...a new hindi film actor?

Kria:look...main janti nahin tum kaun ho aur janna chahti bhi nahin tum kaun ho...ever...aur main ajnabiyon se zyada baat nahin karti...samjhe?

Rey:look...ms.attitude...i also dnt know u okay...pata nahin kya kya bolrahi ho mujhe...adhe cheeze toh mujhe samajh me bhi nahin aarahehe...aur ek baat...main yeh bhi nahin janta ki tum yahan kya karrahi ho?...aur tum ho kaun..matlab is colg me pehli baar dekhraha hoon...pehle kabhi nahin dekha...!!!...listen now its enough...na tumhari baatein mujhe samajh me aayengi na meri tumko..so chilll...

Kria: dekha toh maine bhi kabhi nahin aur umeed karti hoon ki kabhi dekhoon bhi na ever...mr.chaukidaar...!!!..aur...

Kria's phone rings in the middle of the convo...its her mom who tells her to cum down...as she is waiting...

Kria:thank God..finally mom aagayi...!

Kria picks up her bag from the floor,looks at Rey for a long time with stern looks and leaves...after she leaves, Rey smiles...feeling gud abt d fight he had with her...

Rey:...dude...amazing girl..kya ladki he!...one and only masterpiece...seriously ms.attitude...kahan se aayi ho tum aur tum ho kaun??...pata toh karna parega...aur yahan ..aise dance?...sumthng is dre huh?...par kitna baat karti he lekin utni hi beautiful...y m i saying all dis...woh ladki tujhe itna attitude dikhake gayi aur tu...oh my God... Vicky...car...bhaag reyansh...!!!

Rey picks up his bag and runs... Vicky is waiting for him in d car for a long time...he gets highly irritated...

Vicky:...arey Rey, tu itni jaldi aagaya...tere 5 min kitne jaldi khatam hogaye...nahin?

Rey:plz vicky...im sorry yaar...woh bag kahin nahin milraha tha...dhundne me time laggaya...

Vicky: abbey toh kya Himalayas gaya tha bag lane?...aur tere 5 min kya 45 min ke barabar hote he?...jitna tym tune lagaya na utne tym me main ghar jake colg bhi aajata...

Rey: ab agaya na...ab chal...

Rey and vicky leave and kria reches home fuming of what happened...kria's mom asks how was her day...

Smriti: beta..pehla din kaisa tha?...mazaa aya?

Kria:mazaa?...colg nahin chiriyaghar he mom...ek se ek kisam ke log milenge aapko!

Smriti: toh tumne koi dost nahin banaye?...

Kria: haan kuch log hain jo insaan kehlane ke layak he par kuch...pata nahin unko kya kahoon?

Smriti: uff ho beta...aisa hota hai...chalo...ab fresh hojao...main dinner ready karti hoon...

Kria:ok...

She gets flashes of her and Rey's convo and gets irritated...

Kria:urghhh...battameez...besharam..mr.chaukidaar...!!!

On the other hand Rey while driving...and dropping Vicky home...says...

Rey:sweet...beautiful...pagal..ms.attitude...!!!

Kria has her dinner and goes to sleep awaiting d next day at colg...!!!

                        ---------------
In colg...anushka and neha are discussing sumthng when kria cums to colg and sees them...still angry at yesterday's incident...she cums and says...

Kria:kya iss colg me sab pagal he kya?

Anushka and Neha surprised...

Anushka and neha:...helloo...hum pagal he?

Kria:nahin tum dono nahin ...baki sab!

Neha:who baki?...now what?

Kria:kuch nahin..jane do...mood kharap hojaega..btw tumlog kya karrahe ho?

Anushka:nthng...main toh kuch council ka kaam karrahi thi aur neha meri help karrahi thi...

Kria:achcha...btw classes kabse he?

Anushka: yehi koi 1 ghante me...

Kria:ok...achcha chalo na upar chalte he...

Anushka:tum log jao..main zara office me papers jama karke aati hoon...

Kria:ok...chal neha...!

Kria and neha go upstairs while anushka is on her way to the office... Rey and Vicky cum to colg and discuss...

Rey:yaar...woh ladki kahan milegi?

Vicky:abbey kaunsi ladki?

Rey:arey wahi jisse ..u knw sorry...

Vicky: achcha woh...woh ladki toh tujhe aise hi miljaegi...

Rey:achcha kaise?

Vicky:bas tu ganaa ga...'WOH LADKI HAI KAHAN ??'...!!!(laughs)...

Rey:vicky...mazak nahin ok...im serious...it was not good...dis is not rey's style...sorry toh banta hai yaar!!!

Vicky: tujhe colg nahin...kisi ngo me bharti hoke social work karna chahiye tha...jab dekho tab dusro ke liye charity karne nikal parta hai...!!!

Rey:no vicky...pata karna parega...woh ladki thi kaun...

Vicky:haan bina ladki ka chehra dekh ke tu chilla chilla ke usse dhundega...'TUM KAHAN?...MAIN YAHAN???...'..tab toh woh bhagte bhagte filmy style me aayegi aur kahegi..'MAIN YAHAN HOON...YAHAN...HOON YAHAN..HOON YAHAN...'...(laughs again)...

Rey:shut up Vicky...dnt joke...its serious...kaise pata lagaun??..!!!

While they r talking..anushka who is cuming bk from office sees them engrossed in a convo... Vicky feels a lil scared of anushka because she always overshadows him wid her intelligence but he still considers anushka a gud frnd...

Anushka:hey...d for dazzlers...tumlog yahan?...mujhe laga hamesha ki tarah tum dance karahe honge...!!!

Rey:hey anushka...looking gud...nahin yaar aaj practice nahin thi subhe subhe...isiliye...aur batao...tum yahan?

Anushka: office me kuch zaroori papers dene gayi thi?...aur bata vicky...tia aur ria kaise he?

Vicky:what?...mujhe kaise pata hoga?

Anushka:kyun?...ek wahi toh he tumhari permanent girlfrnds...

Rey:haah!!!...bohot khichai karraha tha na meri...ab iski khichai karke dekh...

Vicky::marna he kya...arey anushka kuch nahin...permanent grlfrnds aur woh...permanent toh kya...temporary bhi banne ke layak nahin he woh...dimag toh he hi nahin unme...wannabe dazzlers

Anushka:par woh toh tumse kuch zyada hi pyar karte he vicky...u knw what?...ek advice deti hoon...tumhe life me toh koi ladki milne wali he nahin..toh tia-ria tumhe thoda sa bhao dete he toh woh lelo...aur tumhara toh double faida hai...ek ke saath dusra free...muft...wow...guranteed offer ke saath...!!!

Rey laughs at dis...

Rey: gud one anushka...

He gives a high-five to her...

Vicky:bohot mazaa aaraha he na!!!!

Anushka:hum mazak nahin karrahe ...v r serious...neway rey listen...tumhe mera ek chota sa kaam karna hai...

Rey:haan bolo na...!!!

Anushka:tumhare first half ke classes khatam hojaye toh mere classroom me chale aana...

Rey:why?...

Anushka: woh jo rough participants ki list banayi he usme tumlogo ke naam...each round ke hisaab se theek he yah nahin usse check karne ke liye...final list ke participants bane usse pehle tumlogo ke naam theek se round wise check karlena...main sharon ko toh yeh kehne se rahi aur vicky...no way..yeh sab sensible logo ka kaam hai...and neway ur the captain of the team...so..!!!

Vicky:toh kya main sensible nahin hoon...???

Anushka:itni jaldi samajh me aagaya?...wow vicky..tu toh intelligent bangaya!!!..neway guys...main chalti hoon...classes u knw...see u later...rey dnt forget haan...

Rey:yah ok bye...aur vicky muh phoolana band kar...tu janta hai na...usse koi nahin jeetsakta...

Vicky:haan...par achchi ladki hai...

Rey:hmmm ab chal...

Vicky:kahan?...

Rey:meri madat karne...uss sorry wali dhudne me?

Vicky:abhiii???

Rey:haan...!!!

Vicky:classes ke baad chalein?...

Rey:theek he...anushka se milne ke baad...ok?

Vicky:chal done...!

Rey and Vicky decide to bunk the classes as they will attend classes nly aftr sharon cums...coz sharon feels bad when they attend without telling her...on the other hand,kria and neha meet anushka...

Kria:hey anushka...

Anushka:achcha hua tumlog milgaye...

Kria:kyun kya hua?

Anushka:suno...tumlogo ke first half ke classes khatam hojane ke baad chale aana...

Kria:kyun?

Anushka:mujhe kuch kaam hai...usko khatam karke aur papers office me deke..uske baad ek ghante ka break he...saath me canteen jake chill karenge...second half ke classes shuru hone se pehle...wat say..??

Neha:hmmm...nice idea it is...

Kria:ok...hum aajayenge...chal neha...bell bajgayi...ok bye anushka...

Anushka:bye...see you...!!!

                          -------------
Rey and Vicky are chilling in the canteen waiting for sharon to cum while kria and neha are attending classes...kria and neha finish their classes and even anushka finishes with her first half of classes... Rey and vicky both go to anushka's classroom... Rey starts helping anushka wid d paperwork while kria is cuming towards the classroom..kria and neha enter the classroom but cnt see Rey as he is facing down,engrossed in the paperwork and writing sumthng. while anushka is guiding sumthng to him...kria and neha cum near to anushka's table and stand...anushka looks up but rey dsnt as he is engrossed in work...anushka smiles at them and says...

Anushka:hey kria...hi...!!!

The moment she says dis rey turns his head up and to his shock he sees its d girl who he met yesterday...kria's eyes widens up with shock when she sees rey and realises its d same boy from last day... Rey gets up and both point their fingers at each other and say...together loudly..."TUM"...sum ppl in the class and including neha and anushka are shocked too...they wonder...what's happening...????...!!!










Edited by swthrtdevisha - 06 November 2011 at 12:09pm

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Im the first one to comment LOLLOLLOL
Hey !!! awesum update!!!
luking forward for next part
update soonWink


Edited by prernahazra - 03 June 2011 at 2:34am
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thank youuu sooo much Clap for a lovely and long update. missing D3 very badly so thank godness your here! LOL

very interesting plz continue cant wait what happens next Wink
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HHAHA liked the ending a lot reminds me of when they met at college for the first time plz continue!
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awesomely written...m smitten by yr FF...its just mindblowing...its ineluctable
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N'Aww really loved the update, kriyaansh's first meeting was so interesting! LOL
Seriously loved it! Can't wait to see what happens after the "TUM" LOL
Update soon and thanks for the pm (:


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nice one Smile thanks for the pmSmile
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