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beautiful ff yaar...added it to the media center:D

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nyc FFClap really like it 
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that was really good waiting desperately for the next part!

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Part 2...

Kria packs her stuff and is most excited...her mom tells her to make it fast as they need to reach the airport b4 time...

Smriti: kria...jaldi karo..late horahe he beta...flight miss hojaegi...

Kria: no way mom...aaj kuch bhi hojaye flight toh main pakar ke hi rahungi...mujhe koi nahin roksakta mumbai jane se...Aayi mom...

They pack all their stuff and leave...while leaving kria turns bk to look at her home for the last time but b4 she gets emotional she leaves...

Kria takes her flight right on time and the take off for kria's dreams finally happens...kria and her mom reach...they arrive to the airport...when kria puts her first step in mumbai...she smiles and looks arnd...

Kria:mere sapno ka sheher...badal jaegi meri zindagi...mom ab kahan?

Smriti:seedhe colg...dekho kria abhi dopeher ke ek baje he ...formalities poori karke tum second half se classes shuru karsakti ho..

Kria:mom par samaan rakhna hai ...ghar kaise...pehchanungi?

Smriti:uff ho kria...dnt wrry...main lene chali aaungi...sirf aaj ke din...char baje tak colg khatam bhi hojaega!

Kria:ok mom...(mind)...wow...st.louis...finally...!!!

Kria and her mom finally reach colg...kria steps down to enter into the colg of her dreams where the nation's best dancers have passed out from...she is living her dream...but reality cums into foray that her mom is against dancing...

Smriti:kria...tum admission ke formalities poore karlogi na?

Kria:yah mom...agar aapki zaroorat paregi toh bulalungi..aap jao...

Smriti:ok beta...tc...aur haan mahaul naya hai,log naye he...thodi problem toh hogi shuru shuru me par tumhe sirf apne sapno par yakeen karna hai...aur aage badhna hai!

Kria:haan maa...janti hoon...unn sapno ke liye hi toh aayi hoon...

Kria's mom leaves and kria begins her exciting journey in colg...she quickly takes her necessary documents out to complete her admission formalities..she enters the colg and is confused when she sees everyone busy in their own world...she never had any idea how the world outside her periphery is...she gets confused as she dsnt knw nethng abt d colg...she suddenly sees a boy walking down the corridor and asks him the way to principle's office...

Kria:excuse me...kya aap mujhe principle sir ke office ka raasta bata sakte he?

Boy:kyun batao...behenji?

Kria:behenji?...par main toh tumhari behen nahin hoon...?...aur tum ladke kabse ladkiyon ko behen banane laggaye haan?

Boy:tabse jabse tumhe dekha hai...kyunki aise jhalli type kapde pehenkar pehli baar aisi samplepiece dekhraha hoon...

The boy laughs and this enrages kria...kria who is known for her witty remarks gves it bk to the guy in his own lang...

Kria:actually...main bhi aise aadhe kapde pehne hue pehli baar ek masterpiece ko dekhrahi hoon...aur ek aisa piece jo dhundne par bhi duniya ke kisi museum me nahin milega...!

The boy feels dat she has answered her back and dsnt say nethng further...

Boy: princi ka office woh...

Kria:rehne dijiye...aur bhi he jo raasta batadenge...aapko taqleif karne ki zaroorat nahin...aur haan kal se na aap dhang ke kapde pehenkar aayiega ...thode se insaan lagenge...

The boy feels mocked at and makes his move from there...kria is searching her way when she suddenly sees a girl walking down the corridor...a bag behind her back,she is engrossed in reading a book...kria walks to her and walks in frnt of her to ask abt the way to princi's office...

Kria:excuse me...could u plz tell  me the way towards the principle's office?

The girl is so engrossed in reading dat she doesn't answer kria's question...kria feels her behavior strange...she tries once again...

Kria:hello...princi ke office ka raasta?

She dsnt respond and kria waves her hand in frnt of her but she is engrossed...she has no other option other than taking her book away because she is getting late to fulfill the formalities...she takes the book away...the girl rises her head up and its none other than NEHA...

Neha:what behave dis way is?

Kria dsnt understand in the beginning...she tries to explain...

Kria:sorry...mera aapka book chinne ka iraada nahin tha..woh kya hain na...jabse iss colg me aayi hoon tabse principle sir ka office dhundrahi hoon...par yahan sab ajeeb log hai...poochti hoon toh seedha seedha jawab nahin dete aur badle me behenji bulate he...aur ab tumko poochrahi hoon toh tum book padhne me itni busy ho ki meri baat hi nahin sunrahi ho...isiliye...could u plz tell me the way to the principle's office?

Neha: u speak fluent English???...wow!!!...neha too wants to speak...!!!

Kria:ok...par plz kya tum mujhe raasta bataogi?

Neha: sorry...woh book reading me khogayi..kya hai ki English book hai na...neway chalo main tumhari help kardeti hoon!!!

Kria returns the book and they both start walking together while talking...

Neha: new admission?

Kria: haan...aaj hi aayi hoon mumbai...seedhe land karke colg...

Neha: par first half classes toh getting over...u join in second half...?

Kria: hmmm...woh kya hai ki humein aane me thodi der hogayi...mom ne principle se baat karli he...

Neha: waise dint ask ur name...what ur name?

Kria: mera naam ...mera naam kria hai...kria malhotra...

Neha: me...neha sharma...first yr b.com...!!!

Kria: ok...nice to meet u neha...same...first yr b.com...

They shake hands and become frnds...

Neha: par why u join in mid term...???

Kria: kyunki mere results deri se nikle isiliye...results nikalne ke baad seedhe yahan pe...admission ke baaki formalities poore karne he...

Neha: see...principle office ryt in frnt it is...all d best...!!!

Kria successfully fulfills all her formalities and while leaving the principle says...

Principle:welcome to st. Louis kria...all d very best...

Kria: thank u sir par all d best...???

Princi: kyunki iss colg me iski zaroorat tumhe paregi...

Kria: ok sir... 

Kria feels a lil strange at dis but leaves...she finally becomes a student of d colg and is extremely happy...she carries her documents in her hands and sees dat neha is still waiting for her...reading the same book...

Kria: hey neha...tum abhi bhi mere liye wait karrahi ho?

Neha: oho...dosti ke liye toh neha itna toh doing na...waise saari formalities hogayi poori?

Kria: haan...ab aagey kya?

Neha: class toh starting in half an hour...we cn do talking...!!!

Kria: ok...

Neha: ok...par neha need to go to the library...book returning...mujhe 15 mins lagenge...u waiting till then..?

Kria: ok...

Neha goes to the library to return her book...while kria waits for her outside...she looks arnd the colg...she is walking down the corridor wid her documents in hand...

introducing REYANSH...or better known as REY has a heroic entry... Rey cums to colg and is a head turner...girls swooning over him.  he gets off his Mercedes and he walks with VICKY...his childhood frnd beside him...they are running as they are in a hurry after looking at their watches...they enter the colg...running and climb the stairs..kria who is walking down the corridor is looking here and there...on the other hand Rey and Vicky are running..they cross the corridor and Vicky runs a lil further than Rey,shouting...

Vicky:jaldi kar rey...we are late...!!!

As Rey is running kria is walking... Rey tries to catch up to Vicky and in haste gves a push to kria...the push comes like a big storm to kria from whose hands all her admission papers fly and fall here and there... Rey stops to look back what he did but cant see kria's face as she is facing her back because she is engrossed in picking up her papers...

Kria: God...saare papers girvadiye...kaise log he iss colg me..dhakka deke saare papers girvadiye...

Kria is busy picking up her papers and assimilating them...while rey is abt to go and apologise to her for his act...he wants to help her but cant see her face...when he is abt to go, vicky cums dere and...

Vicky: chal na rey...kya hua dude?...v r geting late!

Rey: par vicky...maine uss ladki ko dhakka dediya yaar...mujhe usse sorry kehkar uski help karni chahiye!

Vicky: uff ho...yeh social work tu baad me karlena ...ab chal...

Just when they leave,kria gets up and shouts...but they cant hear as they are far off...

Kria:oh hello...aandhe ho kya...dikhai nahin deta...dhakka dekar..mere papers girvakar bhaggaya...chodungi nahin...

Neha finishes her work and comes out and sees her shouting...

Neha: why you shouting kria?...happening what?

Kria: dekh na neha...ek sarphira ladka mujhe jor se dhakka deke,mere papers girvake bhaggaya..sorry bolne ke bajaye...battameez ki tarah bhaggaya...iski toh main...!!!

Neha: oho...why worrying?...humare colg me aise many ppl are dre...who care abt nobody..neway chalo hum jake baatein karte he...!

Neha and kria go down and sit on the bench to talk..they are talking...

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In the rehearsal room...

Rey:thank God yaar hum sharon aur uski angels se pehle pohochgaye..varna woh toh humein...!!!

Vicky:haan yaar...chal practice karna shuru kardete he...waise bhi sharon shayad ek ghante late aayegi...uske aane se pehle steps rehearse karlete he varna agar hum sync me nahin naache toh woh humara sync bigardegi...

Rey and Vicky start practicing...

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Kria and Neha are talking when kria thinks of going and washing her face...neha sits on the bench...waiting for her...while kria walks towards the wash basin, she suddenly dashes into a girl with all her papers and books falling down...

Kria: oh..im so sorry...mujhe dekhkar chalna chahiye tha...

The girl raises her head and its none other than ANUSHKA...wearing a smart black specs...short kurti and jeans with a pair of slippers...meet anushka...

Anushka: what?...what did u say?

Kria: sorry...kyun?

Anushka: really...mujhe believe nahin horaha hai...

Kria: kyun...yahan sorry kehna manaa hai..galti ki hai toh sorry toh kahungi na...

Anushka: haan usually galti karne par sorry kehte he par iss colg me yeh shabd zyada toh kya kabhi bhi sunne ko nahin milta hai...kyunki yahan ke log manners ke alawa baki sab sikhkar aate he...

Kria: actually u r ryt...kuch logo ko chodkar yahan ke logo me manners he hi nahin...sorry kehne me unko aise taqleif hoti hai jaise ki Sanskrit bolne ko kehdiya ho...

Anushka(laughs): yah ryt...tum nayi admission ho na? mid-term?...name is kria ryt..kria malhotra?

Kria: haan..par tumhe kaise pata?

Anushka: mujhe sab pata hota hai students ke bare me...yehi toh mera kaam hai...

Kria: kaam?kaisa kaam?

Anushka: student president hoon colg ki...mera kaam he students ke bare me enquiry karne ka...!!!

Kria:ok... hi...nice to meet u...and sorry for that..!!!

Anushka: its ok...nice to meet u too kria...welcome to st. Louis...agar koi problem ho toh seedha mere paas aana...anytime...main 2nd yr b.com main hoon!

Kria: ok...

Anushka:ok bye..tc...!!!

Anushka leaves from dre...neha cums dre...

Kria: nice girl huh...itni der main tumhare alawa koi aur itna smart aur intelligent mila hai...student president wow...!!!

Neha: hmmm...her name anushka ahuja...student president and senior to us...loves d colg..superb student...gud in evrythng...very intelligent she is...!!!

Kria: hmmm...chal chalte he...

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In the rehearsal room...

Rey and Vicky are rehearsing when suddenly Rey remembers him pushing the girl in the corridor which was actually kria...

Vicky: abbey kya sochraha hai?

Rey: yaar...woh ladki...

Vicky: ladki?...kaunsi ladki?...tu kabse ladkiyon ke bare me sochne laggaya?

Rey: Vicky...uss ladki ko jisse maine dhakka diya corridor me..bechari ke saare papers girgaye meri waje se...usse sorry tab hi kehdena chahiye tha...teri waje se nahin kehpaya...

Vicky: abey tu kya sorry ki rag bajaraha hai...udhar tu uss ladki ko sorry bolega aur uske baad hum dono ko Sharon ko sorry bolna parega...aur tere rep ka kya hoga...samjha???

Rey: oho vicky...tujhe hamesha mere rep ki pari rehti hai?...aur tu sharon ki fiqar mat kar..i ll manage..par sorry kehna toh banta hai...aur sorry na kehne se rep ghategi nahin balki bigad jaegi...!!!

Vicky:kya tune uss ladki ka chehra dekha?...

Rey: nahin...!!!

Vicky: waah without ladki ka chehra dekhkar tu sorry ka board lagake ghumega!!!...aur chilla chillake bolega ki kya maine kisiko dhakka mara?..tu bhi na Rey...pagalpanti mat kar..chal practice karte he...sharon aati hogi!

Rey:(mind)tu kuch bhi keh vicky...sorry toh main uss ladki ko bolke hi rahunga chahe woh colg ke kisi bhi kone me ho...usse toh main dhundkar hi rahunga...!!!

Suddenly there is a call on Rey's phone of Sharon dat she wont be coming as she got up late and is gyming so she cant make it to colg...simi and rimi r obviously wid her...rey and vicky decide to leave but in a hurry rey forgets to take his bag and closes the door slightly of the rehearsal room and leaves...

On the other hand it is announced that there will be no more classes due to prof being absent...Kria and neha decide to go home but kria insists on staying in colg as she dsnt knw d way to home. and her mom will pick her up...neha tells her to be careful and tells her to leave b4 5 as colg gates close after dat...anushka along wid neha leave...kria goes up to explore the colg as she cudnt see d colg properly...she runs up and while walking she cums across her dream place where she always wanted to be...THE DANCE REHEARSAL HALL...she is unaware of the truth abt d rehearsal hall...she cant control herself and she pushes open d door...she looks arnd and walks to the centre...the spotlight falls on her...

Kria: mera sapna..mera dance...yehi woh rehearsal hall hai jahan mere saare role models dance karte the...janti hoon ki mom ko diya hua vaada poora karna hai ki main kabhi dance nahin karungi...unki khatir maine unhe yeh kaha hai ki main dance nahin karsakti hoon..par aaj shayad ekbaar iss jagah par dance kar hi leti hoon ..may be for the last tym kyunki shayad dobara yahan par akele dance karne ka mauka na mile...

Kria puts on her dancing shoes...keeps her bags aside..she switches on the music and just lives her dream...of DANCE...on the other hand Rey and Vicky are walking towards Rey's car..suddenly b4 Rey is abt to sit in the car, he realises dat he has left his bag in the rehearsal hall...

Rey: Vicky main apna bag toh rehearsal hall me hi bhoolgaya...main leke aata hoon...

Vicky: abey tu ruk...main leke aata hoon...

Rey: nahin yaar..tu gari me beth main leke aata hoon...5 minute lagenge...

Reyansh walks towards d rehearsal hall unaware dat kria is dancing and kria is dancing wid her full heart unknowingly dat Rey is cuming towards the hall...they both are unaware abt each other and dnt knw dat they are destined to meet...!!!

 



Edited by swthrtdevisha - 06 November 2011 at 11:57am

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reserved...just read half and its mindblowing...I'll read the other half 2mrw & comment

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Awww just read part 1 and 2, the beginning was quite similar to the show but now it's definitely going your way.. Can't wait for KriYaansh's first (technically second) meeting! Big smileDay Dreaming
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You're doing an awesome job babes, keep it up Thumbs Up

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Awesome update plz jaldi nxt part likhna m dying 2 read it

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beautiful update yaar
do continue

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