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awsoomme dudde man wenns da next updatee

will update very soon...!

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Part 10...

All are seated in the auditorium waiting for the announcement...kria who is seated with her friends is chatting with them...

Kria:guys...hum aage ...wahan kyun nahin bethrahe hai?

Neha:kyunki dazzler sitting there...only dazzler students sitting there...not weaklings...!

Kria:what?...yeh kya bakwaas hai?...bethne par bhi division...?

Neha:haan...everywhere division...!

Kria:kabhi kabhi na mujhe doubt hota hai...yeh college hai yah phir geagraphy map...!

Kria and neha exchange laughs...all this while rey is looking at kria who is laughing her hearts out...he admires her...he is constantly looking at her when sharon starts talking to rey...

Sharon:rey..where were you?...so late?

Rey does not seem to answer and is constantly looking at kria...sharon taps on his shoulders which brings rey back to reality...

Rey: yup sharon?...u were saying something?

Sharon: what rey?...main yahan tumse baat karrahi hoon aur tum ho ki ur not interested..!

Rey:sorry...what happened sharon?

Sharon:tum kahan the rey itni der...?..hum wait karrahe the..!

Rey gets flashes of the time he spent with kria...he smiles...sharon finds it strange...!

Sharon:rey...kya hua?...smile kyun karrahe ho?

Rey:nothing yaar sharon...kuch nahin..bas call main thoda busy hogaya tha...thats it!

Sharon:ok...!

All students are told to settle down...the announcement is about to be made...the dazzlers are excited as they know the reason why this announcement is  being made...

Sharon:guys..this is the moment...ab hum as official entries bheje jayenge!...humara naam announce hoga...ab inn weaklings ko ehsaas hoga ki dazzlers were, are and will always be the best!

Simi: as always..u r right sharon!

Rey:guys...pehle announcement hone toh do...excitement baad main dikhana!

The dazzler gang is waiting for the announcement to be made...they are super excited...just then Anushka comes along with RDX sir and starts making the announcement...

Anushka:Good morning everyone...!...aaj humlog yahan ek special announcement ke liye gather hue hai...it is a very important announcement...!...jaise ki aap sab logo ko yaad hoga ki chaar mahine pehle ek aisa dance competition hua tha jisme humara college winner bana tha...all thanks to the team dazzlers jin hone isse possible karke dikhaya!...we are proud of you dazzlers...

When the team dazzlers name is announced, the entire auditorium bursts into cheer.they all cheer which makes sharon feel very proud of herself...kria is unable to comprehend what is happening...

Kria:yaar yeh itne zor se kyun chillarahe hai...?...woh bhi inn dazzlers ke liye?

Neha:anushka telling you na that dazzlers dancing best...they the best dancing team..isiliye everyone shouting...!

Kria: really?..dazzlers itne popular hai?

Neha: hmm...the full college very proud of them!..coming first in dance always..!

Kria:.wow!..

Anushka continues the announcement...

Anushka: ok guys...relax...guys toh jiss dance competition ki main baat karrahi hoon...its back...yes guys its back...The Footloose dance competition is back with a bang guys...

The audience again bursts into cheer...making the dazzlers even more happier...

Anushka: yes guys..its back...aur jaise ki maine bataya ki chaar mahine pehle iss competition ko dazzlers ne jeetkar isse saabit kardiya ki dazzlers are the best dancing team...iss baar it is back with a difference...with a big difference...last time yeh competition sirf Mumbai ke colleges ke beech main hua tha...lekin iss baar yeh ek National level par horaha hai guys...so this time it is bigger and better...!

Hearing the name "dance"...kria has a wide smile on her face...she gets super excited to know all about the dance competition...she imagines herself to be on that stage and dancing...with everyone cheering for her...her only dream,passion dance..which she wanted to fulfill...she gets all engrossed to know more of the dance competition...

Anushka:so guys..before we make any further announcements, we would like to call the team dazzlers on stage please...team dazzlers...will you all please come on stage please...!

The team dazzlers get up to go to the stage...with the entire auditorium cheering for them...Swayam starts staring at sharon and looks at her lovingly..admires her...says in his mind...

Swayam: best of luck sharon.main janta hoon ki tum hamesha iss college ki best dancer ho...!

The dazzlers go up on the stage...they are extremely happy that now they will be declared as the official final entries to the dance competition...

Anushka:alright guys...like I said that ki iss baar competition ek higher level par horaha hai..iss baar National level par horaha hai...sirf Mumbai ke hi nahin balki poore India ke best colleges iss dance competition main participate karenge...this time it is tougher and harder...to make further announcements, I would like to call our Cultural Head...RDX sir...Sir please..!

Anushka hands over the announcements to RDX sir and stands beside the dazzlers...

RDX sir: good morning guys and welcome...guys jaise ki Anushka ne kaha ki iss baar competition ek bohot bare level par horaha hai toh iss baar the level of dancing bhi different hoga...guys jaise ki aap sab jante hai ki humare college ko har dance competition main dazzlers hi represent karte hai..and they win it...aur aap sab logo ko yeh bhi pata hai iss baar bhi hum dazzlers ko iss dance competition main as our official final entry bhejenge...lekin there is a slight twist in the tale...

The dazzler team wonder what it might be...they are confused..!

RDX sir: guys iss baar aisa nahin hoga...the dazzlers humari official final entry nahin banegi...

The entire auditorium becomes silent...the dazzlers become shell-shocked...as if a thunder fell on them...sharon and everyone else are absolutely stunned and surprised at this announcement...

RDX sir:yes guys...aap logo ne theek suna...lekin shayad theek se nahin..maine kaha ki dazzlers humari final entry nahin banegi...iska matlab yeh nahin hai ki woh log iss competition main participate nahin karenge..of course woh log participate karenge..lekin woh log directly entry nahin lesakte!...yes guys...dazzlers directly second round of auditions main nahin jasakte!

Sharon: what?...yeh RDX sir kya kehrahe hai rey?...hum direct entries nahin hai?..how is this possible?

Rey:even I dont know...pata nahin kya horaha hai!

Neha:oh God...dazzlers not entries..then who?

Kria:yeh kya?..yeh sab kya horaha hai!...pata nahin...!

RDX sir: guys relax...dont worry...guys what I meant is that ki official direct entries nahin hongi ka matlab hai ki instead we will have proper auditions conducted...yes guys...iss baar auditions honge...proper strict auditions...guys iss baar organizers ne yeh decide kiya hai ki har ek college team ko auditions dene parenge...matlab we want to explore talent...jo colleges iss competition ke liye regifter hue hai unn sab logo ko audition process se guzarna hoga...no direct entries...selection hoga based on proper auditions...and now baki ki details aapko anushka batayegi...!

Sharon is fuming with anger..she was about leave when rey caught her hand and told her to stay there with them...

Anushka:guys...auditions ka matlab yeh hua ki aap main se koi bhi agar dance karsakte hai...dazzlers ke alawa agar koi aur team hai jo apni team ke saath auditions karna chahti hai toh karsakte hai...iss baar sabko mauka milega...jo dance ke liye passion rakhte he unke liye this is the best thing...guys har college se do teams se zyada entries nahin bheji ja sakti hai...only two teams...lekin waqt bohot hi kum hai..only 7 days to register...yes saat din ke andar andar applogo ko register karna hoga apne team ke saath..tab hi aap auditions main part le payenge...varna nahin..iss baar three round of auditions honge... preliminary, eliminations and final round of auditions...preliminary auditions main hum apne hi college ki teams choose karenge...dazzlers ke saath saath baki ki teams auditions karenge jinme se do teams eliminations main jayenge to compete with the colleges of Mumbai..phir final round main desh ke baki colleges ke saath jo select hue hai!...then finals main sirf best 5 colleges participate karenge...so guys jo log preliminary auditions ka hissa banna chahte hai unki team ko 7 din main register karna parega kyunki the prelims are after one month..remember only two teams can go...so guys put on your dancing shoes...come and show ki St.Louis also has more talent..we want to see the best of the best from our college..im sure we will send the best teams...aur agar koi team reagister nahin karti toh dazzlers ko sirf prelims main as a formality audition karna parega...so guys...if u want to dance, this is the best opportunity for u guys..thank you.!

These words echo in kria's ears...she could not believe what was happening...was destiny giving her an opportunity to fulfill her dreams...she could not understand...!

On the other hand, the dazzlers could not believe what was happening...sharon could not believe that her team will have to audition with other teams...the announcement finishes and all the students start to leave...sharon leaves there fuming with anger...her angels go behind her...nilesh and vicky also go behind her...rey standing there with anushka talks it out with her...

Rey:anushka?...yeh kya?...auditions?...I m a little surprised...tumne bataya nahin?

Anushka:rey mujhe bhi subha college aate hi pata chala...isiliye toh subha se meeting main thi...batane ka mauka kahan mila...I understand ki sharon and you people were not prepared for this but rey isme main bhi kuch nahin karsakti...agar main batasakti toh zaroor batati..!

Rey:its ok anushka...its absolutely fine...mujhe koi problem nahin hai yaar...isme tumhari toh kya kisi ki bhi galati nahin hai..haan thoda surprising hai lekin isko ek bada issue banane ki koi zaroorat nahin...aur I'm happy ki pehli baar iss college main talent ko explore karne ka mauka diya jaraha hai!

Anushka:i know...the level of competition is so high...!...agar aur talent humein humare college se milta hai toh its good...!

Rey: yah ur right anushka...anyway main jake sharon ko pacify karta hoon...varna thode der main iss college main volcanoe burst hojaega..she must be upset.!

Anushka:(gives a slight laugh) yah ur right.tum jake sharon ko sambhalo aur mujhe jake rdx sir se milna hai...!

Rey:ok bye then..I'll see you!

Anushka: bye..!

Just when anushka is about to leave,she sees kria and neha waiting for her...anushka runs to meet them while rey who is about to leave stops to give a glance to kria...he looks at her for some time but then leaves to pacify sharon as she was extremely upset about the announcement...

Anushka: hey guys...sorry guys subha se tum logo se mil bhi nahin payi...woh meetings and all!

Kria: its ok anushka..we completely understand...tum student-president ho tum kaam main busy nahin hogi toh aur kaun hoga...waise yeh sharon wahan se chali kyun gayi?

Anushka:she is upset..announcement ko lekar...isiliye chali gayi...!

Kria:oh...achcha toh ab hum chalein?

Anushka: yah..but thodi der main...tumlog mera wait karo main rdx sir se milke aati hoon..yeh papers mujhe unhe dene hai... I will see you guys in sometime...!

Kria:ok...humlog bahar tera wait karte hai..!

Neha:coming fast...we waiting for you..!

Anushka:ok...(as she leaves)..wait karna...chale mat jana...humlog saath main ghar jayenge..bye..!

Kria and neha:bye..!

Neha:come kria..let us going...bahar waiting!

Kria:haan chal..!

Just when kria is about to leave with neha,she sees the stage and gets emotional...she slowly starts walking towards it,remembering her passion for dance...for once,she gets a thought that was this an opportunity for her too fulfill her dreams...

Kria: dance..yeh stage...yeh wahi stage hai jahan dance karne ka sapna maine hamesha se dekha hai..mera iss college main aana...mere dreams sab yehi stage hai...my dreams...my dance...kya yeh auditions ka announce hona is a sign...mere dreams poore hone ka sign?...yeh destiny mujhe finally woh opportunity derahi hai to fulfill my dreams...!

Suddenly reality strikes her...she remembers that without her mom's consent she cannot even think about dance...!

Kria:nahin...main dance ke bare main nahin soch sakti...jab tak main mom se baat nahin karleti apne real sapno ke bare main tab tak no dance...dance tab tak nahin karungi jab tak mom mere sapno ko unki manzoori nahin deti...mere sapne main zaroor poore karungi lekin mom ke bina nahin...mom ko dukhi karke main khush kaise hosakti hoon...isiliye abhi dance ke bare main mat soch kria kyunki mom ko manane ke liye bohot time lagega...tab tak door se hi main dance ke sapne ko dekhungi..!

Neha who is waiting for a long time calls kria...

Neha:kria..what happening?...what dreaming you are..?..not going or what?...!

Kria:oh sorry...chal neha...!

Neha:what happening?

Kria:kuch nahin...nothing...chal hum chalte hai...!

They leave...waiting in the college compound for anushka...on the other hand a furious sharon bangs the door of the rehearsal hall refusing to talk to anyone..her team comes behind her...

Sharon:how could they do this?...how could they?

Simi:sharon relax...hum sab bohot upset hai..I can understnd..in fact we all can understand...direct entries ke bajaye auditions..its really upsetting!

Sharon:simi...please..mujhe dobara yeh nahin sunna hai...main pehle se itni upset hoon.aur tum yeh sab baatein karke mujhe aur upset karrahi ho...so please guys u all just leave...!

Nilesh:sharon...hum sab tumhe yahan akele chodke kaise jasakte hai...we are your best friends yaar...!

Vicky:haan...he is right sharon...hum nahin jayenge tumhe chodke!

Rimi:sharon...please yaar..relax na...calm down yaar sharon...!

Sharon:calm down?..you are telling me to calm down...?..yeh sab hone ke baad how can you expect me to calm down!...this is not done...how can they do this to us?...humein direct entries promise karke seede auditions main daldiya...woh bhi humein ek baar bhi humein inform kiya nahin...!

Just then,rey comes in...

Rey: no sharon...your thinking wrong...isme kisi ki koi galati nahin hai...i know ki humein kaha gaya tha ki humein direct entries milengi lekin yeh organisers ka decision hai...isme na college ki galalti hai aur nahi kisi aur ki...all you need to do is relax sharon...just calm down...aur yeh ek bohot hi high level ka competition hai isiliye toh auditions compulsory hai...so all we need to do is just forget about it...competition par focus karte hai!

Sharon:focus?...competition par?...nahin hoga mujhse rey...nahin hoga mujhse focus!...hum dazzlers hai...humare alawa iss college ko kisi ne bhi dance competitions main represent nahin kiya hai!..jiss stage par hamesha humne dance kiya hai uss stage par hum kisi aur teams ke saath dance ke liye auditions denge.how can we rey?..its not possible...!..kaise karsakte hai hum kisi aur teams ke saath participate...humare alwa humare college se aur temas bhi auditions denge aur unke saath humein bhi?..no way rey...not at all!

Rey:sharon...there are only 7 days to register...7 days ke andar andar kaun apna dancing team bana payega...just think logically...yeh kaise possible hai ki koi apni team ko 7 din ke andar andar taiyyar karke register karein...aur agar pehle se koi team hai toh why should it bother us...beleive me sharon agar hum best hai toh why should we be bothered about other teams..we are the best..remember we are the dazzlers...humein sirf competition par..apne talent par...apne routine par concentrate karna chahiye...thats it...aur jahan tak auditions ka sawaal hai yeh organisers ka decision hai aur humein uski respect karni chahiye...hai na guys..aur auditions hi toh hai..im sure we will rock it as always...!

Vicky: yah rey..ur right...!

Simi: ur right rey...!

Sharon:yah i know that rey par anushka na ne humein pehle kyun nahin bataya?...

Rey:kyunki usse khud pehle se pata nahin tha...usse bhi subha subha pata chala..varna woh humein zaroor batati..!

Sharon:fine whatever...!

Rey:ok now listen to me guys humein poore hard work ke saath rehearsals karni hai...chahe auditions formality ke liye ho yah chahe aur teams ke saath...we will give our 1000 % as always...ok guys...!

The entire team shouts a big "yes"...rey tells sharon to cheer up and forget about it..he tells her to just concentrate on their own team and nothing else...

Rey:ok sharon..now dont be upset...smile?

Sharon smiles and finally is pacified...!

Sharon: anything for you rey...!

Rey:ok guys..i will see you all around..shaam ko milta hoon guys..!

Vicky and Nilesh leave along with rey..while sharon,simi and rimi are still in the rehearsal hall..

Sharon:sirf rey ke waje se main calm down hui hoon lekin itni asaani se i will not forget this...agar koi aur team humare against khadi hui iss college main toh those teams are in for some serious trouble...simi and rimi..just make sure ki humare alawa kya waqai main koi aur team part lerahi hai yah nahin...i need to know...agar koi aur team hogi toh mujhe achchi tarah se pata hai ki unhe yeh kaise realise karvana hai ki dazzlers ke saath competition kitna mehenga parega.humare rehte koi aur team jeetna toh door participate bhi nahin karpayegi...!

Simi: dont worry sharon...hum sab pata lagayenge...u relax...!

Rimi:yah sharon...u relax...!

Saying this,sharon,simi and rimi leave...while anushka,neha and kria are also going home...anushka is driving while kria is sitting in the front seat and neha back...

Anushka: yeh swayam aur baki sab ghar chale gaye kya?

Kria:haan announcement khatam hone ke baadtab hi nikal gaye...swayam ko kuch kaam tha...aur bharat aur amar uske saath gaye hai...!

Anushka:achcha..!...

Kria:anushka...kya yeh dance competition waqaimain itna high level ka hoga...?

Anushka:haan...bohot high level ka..jitna bada level utna hi zyada kaam...!

Kria: aur yeh auditions?...jab dazzlers direct entry karne wale the toh yeh auditions ka kya matlab?

Anushka:haan...direct entries hone wali thi lekin organisers ne last minute yeh decide kiya ki proper auditions hone chahiye..saare participating colleges ko har round of auditions se guzarna hi hoga...no direct entries..they want the best talent to participate...waise dekha jaye toh yeh best oppotunity hai unn logo ke liye jo apna talent dikhana chahte hai...iss baar sabko chance milraha hai participate karne ka...wow..!

These words echo in kria's ears and she gets a feeling again that this is the right opportunity to showcase her talent...she for one time decides to talk to her mom tonight...realising this might be her chance to show her talent...to dance and live her dream...!

Kria (in her mind) : anushka is right...shayad yehi woh mauka hai jisse main apne dance ke spane ko poora karsakti hoon...i know mom ko manane main bohot time lagega leki shuruvat toh karni paregi na...mom se baat karungi..unhe samjhaungi mere sapne ke bare main toh shayad..shayad woh manjaye...haan aaj shaam ko jab mom office se vapas aayegi tab mom se baat karungi...haan...right...!

Anushka:kria...kria...kya hua?..ur ok?

Kria: I'm fine...!

Anushka:ok...!

Anushka drops kria home,telling her that she would pick her up next morning also...kria goes home,freshens up and waits for her mom to come home...!

Kria: Bhagwan ji...aaj mom ka mood achcha rakhna...agar mom ka mood achcha ho toh hosakta hai mom maanjaye...lekin agar mom ka mood kharap hua toh sara plan gaya...!

Just then the bell rings...kria gets excited as it is her mom...

Kria:yeah...finally mom aagayi...God i hope mom ka mood achcha hai...!

Kria opens the door...its her mom..she smiles at her but her mom looks angry...furious..thus in a very bad mood..opposite of what kria expected..she enters the house shouting.!

Kria: hi mom...how was your day?

Smriti:day?...sabse worst day...the most bad day!

Kria:kyun mom?...aisa kya hua?

Smriti:nothing...aur tum...tum padhai nahin karrahi ho?..kya karrahi ho tum?

Kria:woh mom main aapka wait...main andar padhai hi karrahi thi!...thode der pehle hi college se aayi hoon...

Just then kria's phone is ringing in the room...kria's mom gets more upset...

Smriti: phone se free ho toh padhai karogi na?

Kria:no mom...main phone pe nahin lagi thi...woh shayad anushka ka phone hoga...!

Smriti:ab yeh anushka kaun hai?

Kria:friend mom...bohot achchi dost hai meri...anushka ahuja naam hai uska...student-president hai college ki...brilliant student...2nd year main padhti hai mom..!

Smriti:good..very good...kria..yeh ghar ki halat aisi kyun hai?...such a mess kria..!

Kria:mom main isse abhi saaf kardeti hoon...!...abhi safai karti hoon..i will clean up evrything mom..ab fiqar mat karo!...

Smriti:hmm...jaldi...main fresh hoke aati hoon...!

Kria:mom mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai...

Smriti:abhi nahin kria...not now...i need to freshen up...aur waise mera mood kuch achcha nahin hai...!

Kria:i understand mom...work pressure.theek hai...baad main baat karte hai...aaj main dinner banau?

Smriti:ok...!

Saying this, smriti goes to her room to freshen up and shuts the door...kria stands there and curses her bad luck...

Kria: kya Bhagwan Ji?...mom ka mood roz toh theek hi rehta hai..kitna achcha mood hota hai unka...aapko aaj hi unka mood kharap karna tha jab mujhe unse baat karni thi...woh bhi dance ke bare main...lagta hai jab bhi main dance ke bare main unse baat karne jaungi toh unka mood kharap hi rahega...aise main toh main kabhi bhi unse theek se iss bare main baat hi nahin karpaungi.mera bad luck kitna achcha kaam karta hai..wow..!

Kria sees that anushka has called her up...she could no take the call...she calls her up...anushka tells her hat she has some reference books which would help kria work on her assignments...!

Kria is having her dinner with her mom...

Smriti: kria beta...im really very sorry...maine apna kaam ka gussa tumhare upar nikal diya!

Kria:its ok mom...i understand...work pressure...!

Smriti:thanks beta...!...anyway tumhara college kaisa chalraha hai?

Kria:good mom...!

Smriti:ok...!

Kria wanted to talk to her mom but she sees that her mom is already stressed out and tired...she decides to talk to her the next day...!

Kria goes to sleep...on the other hand, rey who is enjoying with his friends is thinking about kria...vicky notices that rey is lost...

Vicky:hey rey!..chal dance karte karte hai!

Rey:nahin..tu jaa na!..mujhe nahin karna..!

Vicky:bas..phir se..vapas tu uss warrior queen ke bare main sochraha hai na?

Rey:tujhe hamesha aisa kyun lagta hai ki main uske bare main sochraha hoon...!

Vicky:lagta nahin hai...aisa hi hai..mujhe toh lagta hai ki tu uske bare main kuch zyada hi concerned hai...!

Rey:arey aisa kuch nahin hai yaar vicky...!

Vicky:tu kuch bhi keh...tu change horaha hai rey..tu humara woh dost rey nahin raha...tu badal gaya hai..!

Rey: of course not vicky...kuch change nahin hua hoon..i m still the same rey..got it...?

Vicky:yah got it..but meri baat maan...change toh tu hua hai...!

Rey:no way vicky...aisa kuch nahin hai!

Vicky:nahin manna toh mat maan...lekin tu pehle jaisa nahin raha..jab dekho tab lost rehta hai...hum logo ke saath kum bahar aata hai...rehearsal main bhi lost tha...!

Rey:aur tu yeh kehraha hai ki yeh sab kuch uss warrior queen kria ke waje se horaha hai?

Vicky: arey...maine aisa kab kaha...yeh toh tu khud kehraha hai...maine toh sirf yeh kaha ki tu thoda changed behave karraha hai..yeh nahin ki yeh sab kuch uss warrior queen ke waje se hua hai..waisa yeh sach hai kya?

Rey: upp...no way vicky...bakwaas mat kar..aisa kuch bhi nahin hai...nothing like that ok...main uss warrior queen ko theek se janta bhi nahin hoon aur woh mere life main..mujhe yani ki reyansh singhania ko change karegi...main jaisa tha waisa hi hoon...wahi reyansh singhania...rey 'the dazzler'...samjha?

Vicky:theek hai...tu kehraha hai toh main maanleta hoon par ek baat yaad rakh main tujhe tujhse zyada achchi tarah se janta hoon...aur main tujhme changes notice karraha hoon...anyway rehne de...!

Vicky goes away putting rey into thoughts...rey starts thinking that has he really changed...and is it kria who has changed him?...he really thinks that whether vicky was right or not...he could not seek answers to these questions...he needed to talk to someone..he decided he would talk to anushka...he decides to call her up...

Kria who had gone to sleep could not sleep properly as she was constantly thinking about what to do..whether she should participate or not...whether she should speak to her mom about it now or later...she was confused and did not know what to do...she also decides to call up anushka...!

Anushka,who is still awake at 12 o' clock of the night is working on her college projects...rey knows that anushka studies and works at night so he decides to call her up whereas kria is apprehensive that whether she should call or not as it was too late...she finally decides that she will call up as she needed to speak to someone...

Rey calls up anushka on her phone...anushka is working on her projects on her laptop when rey calls her up...her phone rings...she sees its rey...

Anushka:rey?..itni raat ko?...(picks up the phone)...hello...rey?

Rey:hey anushka...i hope im not disturbing you...

Anushka:no yaar not at all...woh main...

Rey:college projects par kaam karrahi thi...right?

Anushka:yah right..par tumne itni raat ko phone kiya?...apni party chodkar mujhe phone?..everything is ok na?

Rey:yah sab theek hai...woh actually mujhe tujhse kuch poochna tha...

Anushka:haan pooch na?

Rey:sach sach batana...

Anushka:haan rey main sach hi bataungi...pehle sawaal toh pooch!

Rey:woh kya main...

Just when rey is about to talk to anushka,her landline rings as kria could not get through her phone...she found it busy...she knew that anushka was awake and she could talk to her about her confusion...anushka tells rey to hold for sometime...

Anushka:oho..yeh landline ko bhi abhi bajna tha...rey..just hold on for a while na...

Rey:yup...!

Anushka picks up the call..she is surprised to know its kria...anushka's phone is on one ear and the landline on the other...

Anushka:hello...

Kria:hi anushka...

Anushka:kria?..tum itni raat ko?

Kria:haan woh...

Rey:anushka main kria nahin rey hoon...

Anushka:haan rey..woh main..

Kria:rey?...main rey nahin kria hoon...

Anushka:haan kria...

Rey:arey anushka im rey...!

Anushka:yah rey i know..

Kria:phir se rey?..main kria hoon...kria...

Anushka:haan mujhe pata hai...rey landline par kria hai aur kria mere phone par rey ne call kiya hai...tumlogo ki timimg kitni kamaal ki hai...dono ne ekdum same time pe phone kiya...wow...!

Kria:kya?..uss rey ne tumhe phone kiya?

Rey:woh kria dusre line par hai..?

Anushka:haan...right...!

Kria:well anushka...usse kehdo ki mujhe tumse pehle baat karni hai...meri baat zyada important hai!

Rey:anushka..usse kaho ki maine pehle phone kiya tha...toh tum meri baat pehle sunogi..because meri baat zyada important hai..!

Kria:anushka..just tell him that ki tum meri dost ho...!

Rey:anushka:just tell her that ki tum meri dost ho..!

Amidst all this conversation of kria and rey coming from both the phones,anushka tries to speak but both of them do not let her talk...they constantly bicker...

Kria:pehle main baat karungi...

Rey:pehle main baat karunga...

Kria:me...

Rey:me...

Kria:mujhe baat karni hai...

Rey:mujhe baat karni hai...

They are going on bickering when anushka becomes fed up and shouts...

Anushka: KEEP QUIET...QUIET GUYS...STOP IT...!

They both stop for a moment and listen to her...

Anushka:my God!...tumlog pagal hogaye ho kya...?...ek hi time par baat karrahe ho dono...kitna jhagadte ho tum dono...agar main thodi der tumlogo ki baatein sunti na toh main pagal hojati...uff...now listen to me..ek ek karke baat karo please...rey pehle tumne phone kiya toh main pehle tumhari baat sunti hoon..kria,please tum thodi der ke liye hold karo?

Kria:okay...sirf isiliye ki tum kehrahi ho...!

Anushka:thanks...haan rey poocho kya poochna tha?

Rey:haan woh mujhe poochna tha ki tum toh mujhe bohot achchi tarah se janti ho na?

Anushka:haan...

Rey:bohot dino se janti ho?

Anushka:haan!

Rey:toh phir tum batao ki kya tumne inn dino main mujhme koi changes notice kiye hai?...mere behaviour main?..kya main badal gaya hoon kya?

Anushka:kya?...behaviour main change?...tum kyun change hoge aur kisliye?...no...mujhe nahin lagta tumhare behaviour main koi change hua hai..tum hamesha jaise the waise hi ho...!...and I know you will never change...!

Rey:thanks yaar anushka..tumne meri bohot badi confusion door kardi.main bhi toh yehi kehraha tha...woh vicky baar baar kehraha tha ki main change hogaya hoon...isiliye maine tujhe phone kiya...Im sorry yaar..tujhe tni raat ko disturb nahin karna chahiye tha...!

Anushka:its ok rey...dost hote kisliye hai...!

Rey:thanks anushka! 

Anushka:thanks kisliye?

Rey:for always being there for me...for being my best friend...

Anushka:you are always welcome rey..aur haan dobara thank you mat kehna please...!

Rey:anyway...bye...kuch der aur baat karunga tumse toh woh warrior queen kria phone se bahar nikalkar chillana shuru kardegi...!

Anushka:(smiles)..rey...tum bhi...anyway bye rey...good night..!

Rey:bye...good night...!

Anushka keeps the phone and talks to kria now...

Anushka:haan kria..sorry tumhe wait karna para...now tumhari bari...tum bolo?..

Kria:no its ok anushka...woh mujhe tumse kuch poochna tha..!

Anushka:tumhe bhi kuch poochna hai?..

Kria:tumhe bhi ka matlab?

Anushka:kuch nahin...tum poocho!

Kria:anushka agar kisiko apna sapna poora karna ho aur uske saamne bohot opportunities aati hai toh usse yeh kaise pata chaega ki yehi uski right opportunity hai uska sapna poora karne ka?

Anushka:its simple...jab apne sapno ko poore karne ke liye pehli opportunity aati hai toh usse haath se jane nahin dena chahiye...aur agar iss baat ka confusion ho ki wahi opportunity sahi hai yah nahin...uss opportunity ko use karni hai yah nahin toh uske liye God tumhe bohot simple se signals denge tumhare sapne ko lekar ..woh signs tumhe yeh samajhne main madat karenge ki woh oppportunity tumhare liye sahi hai yah nahin...simple...

Kria:oh achcha..seriously aisa hota hai?

Anushka: jo dil se chahte hai ki unka sapna poora ho toh Bhagwan unki help zaroor karte hai..I know...I m sure...by the way yeh tum kyun poochrahi ho?...tumhara koi sapna?

Kria:upp kuch nahin...har kisi ka koi na koi sapna hota hai toh mera bhi hai..iske liye poochrahi thi...tumhari yeh advice mere hamesha kaam aayegi..thanks anushka...!

Anushka:tum bhi..?

Kria:tum bhi kya?

Anushka:thanks mat kaho...dost hoon na!

Kria:ok...ok ab main phone rakhti hoon...bye anushka and good night!

Anushka: bye kria..kal college main milte hai...!

Kria:yah ok..bye anushka!

Kria keeps the phone...anushka in her room...!

Anushka: dono ekdum same baatein karte hai...wow...!

Anushka goes to sleep after some time...kria in her room...

Kria:signals?...matlab mujhe dance se related signals agar mile toh matlab yeh mauka mere liye ekdum sahi hai...uski advice toh sahi hai..agar mujhe signals mile toh main iss competiton main participate karne ke liye pehle mom se baat karungi aur phir participate karungi...aur agar nahin toh iske bare main mujhe bhoolna hi hoga...aur shayad yeh mere lie sahi mauka nahin hai..mujhe signals chahiye bhi aur nahin bhi..agar signals milenge toh mom se baat karni paregi...oh no...yeh toh sabse zyada difficult kaam hai aur agar nahin toh dance ko bhoolna hoga..shayad yeh mere liye woh mauka nahin hoga jo mera sapna poora karegi...pata nahin kya hoga...Bhagwan ji..pata nahin aap mujhe signals denge yah phir nahin...mujhe pata hai aap jo karenge mere liye sahi hi karenge...!

Kria prays to God and goes to sleep...waiting to see if the next day she gets signals related to her dreams...on the other hand,rey comes back home. In his room,he thinks about kria,his mixed feelings...what vicky told him was constantly echoing in his ears..and then suddenly he puts his thoughts away...he goes to sleep too...Kria awaits the next day to see whether she really gets the signals which will lead her to her dreams...!



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