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DANCE 'n' LOVE...

CHARACTERS...(are the same with slight changes here and there)

KRIA MALHOTRA-The protagonist of the story...a girl born wid an immense passion for dance...beautiful,smart,witty and extremely well in her academics...daughter of a single mother who has brought up her single handedly...born amidst the mountains of shimla,kria has never seen how the outside world is and is unaware abt the people living in the outside world but yet she is bold,extremely talented and confident that one day she will make it big in life...friendly and humble and obedient...kria is a rockstar...!!!

SMRITI MALHOTRA-A strong woman in the true sense who has faced it all in her life...brought up her daughter alone without any backbone...has had a troubled past of which her daughter kria is unaware of...she hates dance to the core with a reason to it...works as a general manager in a bank...has set up a well to do life for her and her daughter ...she hasnt kept devoid her of any comforts...loves her daughter dearly and wants her to be with her always...Strict when needed, she knows how to control her daughter...

REYANSH SINGHANIA-The hero of the story fondly known as 'REY'...a flamboyant character in the true sense...handsome,rich,smart...he has it all what makes girls fall for him at the first sight...but he doesn't believe in moving behind girls...a lil bit of attitude is in him of being the best dancer...but born with a golden heart and has immense respect in his heart for everyone...good student...captain of the best dancing team in college 'DAZZLERS'...sweet,humble,down to earth...he believes in true love and believes that one day he will find the perfect girl for him who is there somewhere in the world and has a picture of her set in his mind from the beginning...son of a rich businessman but doesn't care abt it as he loves the simple life of a human...basically he is the dream man for all girls...!!!

SHARON KAPOOR-Rich,arrogant,smart...u name it and she has it all...blessed immensely with good looks...she is an amazing dancer n thats a major factor for her being so proud of her dance...she feels that she is the best and that she has no competition...she looks down upon the weaklings and considers them no one and no threat...she fondly calls them 'LOOSERS'to satisfy herself...she feels that she owns the world...she is really an amazing dancer...and is the vice-captain of the DAZZLERS...she thinks her team to be the best as they have never lost...she is so proud abt her dance that she refuses to accept that there can be anyone better than her.she has a best frnd in Rey who cares for her but their relationship goes nowhere beyond pure frndship...beautiful,happening and extremely short-tempered...when she is angry she doesn't listen to neone other than Rey who cn nly handle her...everyone is scared of her in the colg and no one dares to answer her back...but somewhere beneath she also does have a nice heart wich even she dsnt knw abt...

VICKY MEHRA-Actually named Vikram..frnds fondly call him Vicky...he is a dazzler and a dancer...best friend of Rey and his childhood frnd too...he is 24 hrs with Rey and for Rey whenever he is in trouble ...he has only one mission in mind...'REY KI REP KO BACHAO'...he always makes sure that the reputation wich he has doesn't get hampered... Rey also totally depends on him...he is also proud to be a dazzler...he keeps on giving advices to Rey even if he doesn't need them... but both he and Rey are best of friends and more like brothers...!

NEHA SHARMA- Studious,cute...meet neha...she is a weakling but has dreams of becoming a dazzler one day as she totally admires them...she is also an amazing dancer but it is a hidden talent from others and she hides it from others as she knows her talent is of no use in d colg with dazzlers being the best and there is no point in showcasing it...she has a unique style of her speaking English as she loves the language and wants to be fluent in it one day...

SWAYAM SINHA- A studious guy too...simple boy belonging to a middle class family...swayam is a boy who is an extremely gud human being and thinks that everyone in the world arnd him is good like him..an amazing dancer ,he too is a weakling..he never wants to portray himself as a dancer...one more thing that sets him apart is his love for Sharon ..he loves Sharon from the core of hs heart inspite of knowing dat she is unaware of it and can never love him but he still loves her and can do nethng for her...it was love at first sight for him who believes that Sharon is not what she portrays to be..she is actually a gud person from beneath her heart...and believes dat he wud win over her one day with his love...!!!

ANUSHKA AHUJA- A new character...she is a girl with a difference...smart,intelligent and the best student of the college makes her apart from everyone...she is the STUDENT PRESIDENT OF THE COLLEGE and she is the only one who everyone listens to as nobody can win over her where intelligence is concerned..she is neither a weakiling nor a dazzler becoz she dsnt believe in the discrimination and no one dares to call her one...she respects the dazzlers as they have won accolades and prizes for the colg..she is quite close to Rey and they are quite gud frnds...she dislikes Sharon as she believes that she is over confident abt her dance and does not appreciate others..she is the only one who is not afraid of Sharon and can answer her back...they are always at loggerheads...!!!

OTHER CHARACTERS...

SIMI AND RIMI- They are dazzlers and dancers...24hrs wid Sharon...sharon's best frnds...they are fondly known in college as 'SHARON'S ANGELS'...

TIA AND RIA- They are wannabe dazzlers who admire Sharon,simi and rimi and want to become Sharon's angels...follow them blindly and they are totally dumb...with no brains at all..they are always after Vicky and fight over him and Vicky runs away from them...!!!

Other characters such as Nilesh,Vishakha,Amar and Bharat and other characters will get introduced as the story proceeds...

SYNOPSIS-

A story about a girl called kria who breathes and lives for dance...dance is the identity with which she wants to be associated with...dance flows within her like blood..but there is one problem...her mom who hates dance...so to keep the secret away from her mom she projects to her mom dat she cannot dance at all...and lil does her mother know that she is actually and amazing dancer who dreams of making ti big in the field of dance...her mom believes in her daughter and feels content abt the fact dat her daughter is not addicted to dance...kria thinks dis is the nly way she can hide from her mom her love for dance...but she is also aware dat she is cheating on her and she will be heartbroken when she comes to know abt her real dream...but being the obedient girl she is she decides never to dance until her mother gives consent to it one day...so this is the story if kria and her dreams...following her dreams to make it big...how she comes to her city of dreams Mumbai to try and fulfill her dream...how she falls in love which changes d course of her life and how she makes best frnds...lil does she know too dat she will change the face of ST.LOUIS COLLEGE...where she wants to go and pursue her dreams...!!!




Edited by swthrtdevisha - 18 May 2012 at 9:26am

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 10:54am | IP Logged

So far the story line is gud, a bit like the actual story.

Do continue soon and add me in ur PM list . AM a die hard fan of Kriyaansh

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u r gng really well...the descriptions r really good do continue and if u cn just PM me

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Part 1...

The sunshine falls into the room of kria on her bed but where is kria?...she is nowhere to be seen...on the other hand kria's mom smriti is knocking on the door in order to wake her up...she thinks dat she is sleeping but actually kria is doing sumthng else...

Music on,kria is actually dancing...

Kria: one..two three..five six seven...

Her mom still knocking the door...

Smriti: kria...kria beta utho...bohot der hogayi...subha ke nau baje he...utho...aaj result nikalne wala he na...jaldi karo...

Kria cant hear but suddenly after sumtym she realises that her mom is knocking on the door...she quickly switches off the music...

Smriti:Kria beta kya hua?...utho jaldi...mujhe office ke liye late horaha hai!

Kria realises dat she has to act as if she is sleeping...

Kria: oh no...!!!...mom...agar unhone music sunliya hoga toh aaj mera music bajjayega...kuch kar kria kuch kar...haan mom ko lagta hai ki sorahi hongi...sone ki acting karti hoon...

Kria's mom keeps on knocking when kria opens the door with sleepy eyes...she rubs her eyes and yawns and says...

Kria:Mom...!!!...gud mrng...kya hua?...subha subha kyun uthaya?

Smriti:toh kya aaj raat ko uthati?...arey 10 baje junior college ke final results nikalne wale he...results nahin dekhne jana kya kria?...tumhe drop karke main office chali jaungiii...jao jaldi jake taiyyar hojao...!

Kria: ok mom...jati hoon...

After her mom leaves...

Kria: thank God...bachaliya...mom ko pata chaljata toh yehi pe parade karvadeti...aaj results nikalne wale he...achche se pass hogayi toh mom se mumbai jane ki baat karungi lekin achcha result karke bhi kya faida..mom ko toh Mumbai ke naam se aise nafrat he jaise ki billi ko chuhe se...mom ko toh manana toh sher ko saamna karne se bhi zyada khatarnak hone wala hai...mom ko toh pata bhi nahin ki main dance karsakti hoon...unhe lagta hai mujhe dance ka d bhi nahin aata par unhe yeh nahin pata ki mujhe dance a to z aata hai...aur apne iss dance ke sapne ko poora karne ke liye Mumbai jane ke alawa aur koi option hi nahin he...par aisa karne main meri madat kaun karega...haannn..ek hain na ...mere Bhagwan ji...

She folds her hands and prays...

Kria: Bhagwan ji...please kuch aisa chamatkar karo ki Ma khud manjaaye Mumbai bhejne ke liye...St.Louis College jane ke liye..jahan honge mere sapne poore  !...chal kria results dekhne ke liye...

Kria leaves with her mom...her mom drops her to her college...

Smriti:kria...all d best...aur haan results nikalne ke baad mujhe phone karna...

Kria: ok mom bye...

Kria checks her results and she is ecstatic wid joy...she has stood first in her class and thinks that on the basis of her results she can now convince her mom to go to her city of dreams...She calls her mom...

Kria: hello mom...

Smriti: kria...results ka kya hua?

Kria:maa main first aayii...

Smriti: wow!...congratulations beta...aur woh toh aana hi tha tum meri beti jo ho...achcha kria tum ghar jao aur haan shaam ko taiyyar rehna tumhare liye surprise he...

Kria: ok mom...bye...!!!!...mom toh mujhe surprise dengi lekin jab main mumbai jane ki baat karungi toh mom ko shock lagega...lagta hai mumbai jane ka sapna bhoolna hoga...

Kria reaches home...its evening and her mom comes back home...

Smriti: congrats kria...main janti thi aisa hi hoga...tum toh hamesha hi first aati ho...

Kria: thanks maa...achcha mama yeh batao ki surprise kya hai?

Smriti: arey ruko beta batati hoon...achcha kria yeh batao...tumhe yaad hai ki maine tumse ek promise kiya tha..

Kria: haan toh?

Smriti:toh uss promise ke hisaab se tumhare achcha result karne par main tumhe kuch gift karungi...

Kria: haan...toh kya gift dengi aap mom?

Smriti takes out tickets in her hands...

Kria: yeh kya ma?...tickets?...kahan ke?...hum kya holiday pe jarahe he?

Smriti: haan permanent holiday pe jarahe he...

Kria: permanent ?...matlab?

Smriti: matlab yeh ki yeh jo tickets he isse tumhare sapno ka permanent take off hojayega!

Kria(in her mind)...:sapne?...mom ko mere sapno ke bare me pata chalgaya...margayi kria!...mom mujhe kuch samjh me nahin aaraha...

Smriti: kria tumhe kya lagta hai tum mujhe nahin bataogi toh mujhe pata nahin chalega?...

Kria: kya mom?...

Smriti: yehi ki tumhara sapna kya hai!

Kria: what???...aapko pata chalgaya?

Smriti: haan isiliye toh yeh tickets...tum poochogi ki nahin ki kahan ke tickets he?

Kria: kahan ke mom? (mind)...lagta hai mom ko pata chalgaya hai aur ab yeh mujhe seedha desh se door bhejrahi hongi...mumbai toh kya kahin aur bhejne ki taiyyari karli mom ne...

Smriti:yeh tickets kahin aur ki nahin...mumbai ke he...tum yakeen nahin karogi na?

Kria cant believe what her mom said...

Kria: what mom???...kya kaha aapne?...aapne mumbai kaha yah phir mere kaan bajrahe he?

Smriti: no kria...yeh tickets mumbai ke hi hain...

Kria: mom...i cnt believe dis(taking the tickets in her hand)...mumbai ke tickets...!!!

Smriti: haan yakeen toh hona bhi nahin chahiye...maine hi kaha tha ki mujhe Mumbai se nafrat he...par parso raat jab maine tumhare study table par woh dekha toh main samajhgayi ki tumhara sapna kya hai...

Kria: kya??...

Smriti:uspe tumne yeh likha tha...MUMBAI AUR STUDIES...tab mujhe samajh me aagaya ki tum mumbai jaana chahti hoon further studies karne ke liye...wahan ke best colg me?...isiliye maine tickets katvaliye...yeh tickets sirf tickets nahin tumhare sapne he beta...

Kria:kya??..mom aap iski baat karrahi thi...?(mind) woh toh maine aise hi scribble kardiya tha...mom kya samajh bethi...mom aap mere dreams ke bare me nahin janti... studies nahin dance he mere dreams...jiske bare me aapko pata nahin...

par maa..yeh sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi..aap akele kaise rahoge mere bagair?

Smriti:beta main tumhe akele kaise jane desakti hoon woh bhi mumbai jaise sheher me?...main bhi tumhare saath aarahi hoon...

Kria: kya aap bhi..??..par mom aapke job ka kya?..yeh ghar?

Smriti: job ka transfer maine leliya hai...ghar ka kya hai...ghar choddenge...agar tum mujhe khush karne ke liye apne mumbai jane ke sapno ko chupa sakti ho toh kya main tumhare liye inn cheezo ke saath compromise nahin karsakti kya?beta kabhi kabhi kuch haasil karne ke liye kuch sacrifices karne parte he...aur mumbai me maine ghar bhi dekhliya hai...job bhi wahi he bas jagah alag he aur tumhara admission bhi maine wahan ke sabse best college main kardiya hai...

Kria: kahan mom...??

Smriti:ST.LOUIS COLLEGE...wahan ka best college...jab meri beti best toh colg bhi toh best hona chahiye na...!

Kria cant believe what is happening...may be for the wrong reasons but her dreams are slowly getting fulfilled...

Kria: what st.louis?...par maa admission itni jaldi?

Smriti:admission ki tum fiqar mat karo...wahan ke principle se maine baat karli he...unko maine apne boss ke madat se manaliya ki woh tumhari admission ke liye considerate ho..unhone kaha ki tumhe bas wahan jake admission ki formalities poori karni hai...unhone kaha ki agar tumhare results achche ho toh woh tumhe direct admission dedenge...toh mujhe meri beti par poora bharosa tha ki tum achche marks leke aaogi isiliye sab preparations pehle se karliye...

Kria gets ecstatic...wid joy ...hugs her mom and says "thanks mom"

Smriti: chalo ab jake sojao...kal humein dopeher ke flight se jana hai...!

Kria: ok mom...(smiles...looks up to the sky)...thank you Bhagwan ji...mom ko toh patane ki zaroorat bhi nahin pari...yeh toh waqai me chamatkar hogaya...main janti thi aap hamesha mera achcha karenge...sab aise hi hogaya...bas ab Mumbai jane ki deri hai...Mumbai...here i cum..!!!

Kria goes to sleep waiting desperately for the next day when her life is gonna change forever...her journey of dreams to start the next day...!!!!

Hey guys..hope u all like it..if u all like it i will continue with it...dis ff is going to be fun and extremely romantic... if u comment and like it,will add u all to the PM list...hope u all like me and my ff and welcome me with open arms...love u all...Smile!!!





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wow...!!!this is awesome...& u r writing really well do continue

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U ve Written it really well
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