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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ar_sajan4evr

lovely concpt n a faaab start nivriti
pooor gnjn..
cont soon
n
thnx 4 d pm

Richa...:))
Hey Richa!Smile
I am glad you liked it!EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed I will try and continue Soon!...
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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 9:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Joseph_A

Awesome OS Nivi...!!Clap Clap Clap But,Very short part...Ouch Yaar thoda toh long karna tha naa...Wink LOL End point is very interesting... (I know,SAMRAT is just actingWink) Please,Update soon...Embarrassed Thanks for PM.

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Hey Joseph Bhai! I am glad you liked it!Smile I know it is very short,Embarrassed but had to make the ending suspenseful na!LOL Next time will try to update loonnggg...
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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 10:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ambikamuskaan

awesome...waiting fr sam's reaction..hope he's nt joking...
Hey Biks, I am really glad you liked it!Smile But I am confused, why you want him to be not joking?Confused Clear out pleaseEmbarrassed
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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SG-Obssession

What is this Nivi madame???

Beginning was so much beautiful and adorable and the endShocked So, Sam is not kinda happy with his baby soon!!! But, I guess, he's just acting..since he is Samrat Shergill who never leaves a chance to tease his chashmishLOL

Continue Soon!

Thanks for liking it!Embarrassed Sam's reaction will be opened later!Wink Will continue ASAP..!!Smile
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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SajanRox

Originally posted by Bidz_cutegal

Hey Nivi.. Hug
Congrats for another OS!! Party
It was actually a surprise for me, I guess all of us!! Embarrassed
I loved the way you expressed Gunjan's feelings!! Clap


"The place was so beautiful; it had red roses all over, a table for two with glasses and champagne.  Suddenly, in a nick of seconds; I felt two strong arms encircle my waist and a sweet whisper in my ear!

"Happy Anniversary Shona! I love you!"

I blushed as he kissed on my cheek and started to nuzzle in my neck. I could feel his breath on my body which was shivering. But still I managed to smile.

"Happy Anniversary to you too Sam! I love you!"

He turned me and I blushed. What can I do? It is my habit! He held my waist and smiled naughtily. He then said.

"Shall we princess? The table is waiting!""

How romantic!! Heart
Samrat jaisa hubby har kisi ko mile!! Blushing


S: Gunjan, don't you think it is too early?
 
I felt like crying. I turned my face to the other side...!

Par yeh kya? Sammy is regretting!! Shocked
Mujhe bhi Gunjan ki tarah rona aa raha hai!!
Cry

Please update really soon hey!! Now I am becoming a DS like you!! LOL
I wanna know if Sam is really regretting or he's just joking!! I hope he's joking!! Confused
Please write it before Monday!! I wanna read it soon!! Monday ke baad shayad kuch din ke liye online naa aa paayu!! Ouch
So you gotta make it fast!! Tongue

Anyways, take care and love ya!! Smile


P.S. Tried my best to comment with detail!! But I could do this much only!! Actually, tumhara update kinda short tha, toh mera comment bhi kinda short hai!! ROFL Next time, long update dena toh long comment milegi!! Wink Samjhi Ms. DS? LOL
Thanks for the reply!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed I know maine bahut chota likha tha but I wanted to end somewhere people take interest! I am really Sorry I can't update today i.e Sunday as I have to go somewhere! But I will try my best to update at night!Smile Best of Luck for your surgery!!SmileSmile
Love Ms DS!Embarrassed


Thanks dear!! Embarrassed Love ya!! Hug
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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 12:19am | IP Logged
OMGGG...!!!!!
U wrote OS on this Concept...?!
I still cant belive it...i thot that ur dropping it...
but m really glad u wrote it...Embarrassed
OMG!! Its a Shocker...Shocked
but not for ME its for OTHERS coz i already knw wats gonna happen next...Wink LOL
& yeah it was vry small too...
want a longer part...
Poor Gunjan...must've felt so BAD...!!Cry
do cont soon plzzz & thnx 4 the PM...
plzzz cont really soon coz i simply cant wait...Embarrassed

Luv,
Ekta...Hug
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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 12:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ekta_monaya

OMGGG...!!!!!
U wrote OS on this Concept...?!
I still cant belive it...i thot that ur dropping it...
but m really glad u wrote it...Embarrassed
OMG!! Its a Shocker...Shocked
but not for ME its for OTHERS coz i already knw wats gonna happen next...Wink LOL
& yeah it was vry small too...
want a longer part...
Poor Gunjan...must've felt so BAD...!!Cry
do cont soon plzzz & thnx 4 the PM...
plzzz cont really soon coz i simply cant wait...Embarrassed

Luv,
Ekta...Hug

How could I drop such a wonderful idea?Smile I know it is a shocker for the others!Wink I know it was really short but what could I do?Ouch I will continue ASAP...Embarrassed

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 1:05am | IP Logged
lovely!!

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