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NocturnalBeing

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 9:58pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by ar_sajan4evr

lovely concpt n a faaab start nivriti
pooor gnjn..
cont soon
n
thnx 4 d pm

Richa...:))

Hey Richa!
I am glad you liked it! I will try and continue Soon!...

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 9:59pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Joseph_A

Awesome OS Nivi...!! But,Very short part... Yaar thoda toh long karna tha naa... End point is very interesting... (I know,SAMRAT is just acting) Please,Update soon... Thanks for PM.

Joseph

Hey Joseph Bhai! I am glad you liked it! I know it is very short, but had to make the ending suspenseful na! Next time will try to update loonnggg...

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 10:01pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by ambikamuskaan

awesome...waiting fr sam's reaction..hope he's nt joking...

Hey Biks, I am really glad you liked it! But I am confused, why you want him to be not joking? Clear out please

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 10:02pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by SG-Obssession

What is this Nivi madame???

Beginning was so much beautiful and adorable and the end Shocked So, Sam is not kinda happy with his baby soon!!! But, I guess, he's just acting..since he is Samrat Shergill who never leaves a chance to tease his chashmish LOL

Continue Soon!

Thanks for liking it! Sam's reaction will be opened later! Will continue ASAP..!!

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 11:11pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by SajanRox

Originally posted by Bidz_cutegal

Hey Nivi..
Congrats for another OS!!
It was actually a surprise for me, I guess all of us!!
I loved the way you expressed Gunjan's feelings!!

"The place was so beautiful; it had red roses all over, a table for two with glasses and champagne. Suddenly, in a nick of seconds; I felt two strong arms encircle my waist and a sweet whisper in my ear!

"Happy Anniversary Shona! I love you!"

I blushed as he kissed on my cheek and started to nuzzle in my neck. I could feel his breath on my body which was shivering. But still I managed to smile.

"Happy Anniversary to you too Sam! I love you!"

He turned me and I blushed. What can I do? It is my habit! He held my waist and smiled naughtily. He then said.

"Shall we princess? The table is waiting!""

How romantic!!
Samrat jaisa hubby har kisi ko mile!!

S: Gunjan, don't you think it is too early?

I felt like crying. I turned my face to the other side...!

Par yeh kya? Sammy is regretting!!
Mujhe bhi Gunjan ki tarah rona aa raha hai!!

Please update really soon hey!! Now I am becoming a DS like you!!
I wanna know if Sam is really regretting or he's just joking!! I hope he's joking!!
Please write it before Monday!! I wanna read it soon!! Monday ke baad shayad kuch din ke liye online naa aa paayu!!
So you gotta make it fast!!

Anyways, take care and love ya!!

P.S. Tried my best to comment with detail!! But I could do this much only!! Actually, tumhara update kinda short tha, toh mera comment bhi kinda short hai!! Next time, long update dena toh long comment milegi!! Samjhi Ms. DS?

Thanks for the reply! I know maine bahut chota likha tha but I wanted to end somewhere people take interest! I am really Sorry I can't update today i.e Sunday as I have to go somewhere! But I will try my best to update at night! Best of Luck for your surgery!!

Love Ms DS!

Thanks dear!! Embarrassed

Love ya!!

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 12:19am | IP Logged

OMGGG...!!!!!

U wrote OS on this Concept...?!

I still cant belive it...i thot that ur dropping it...

but m really glad u wrote it...

OMG!! Its a Shocker...

but not for ME its for OTHERS coz i already knw wats gonna happen next...

& yeah it was vry small too...

want a longer part...

Poor Gunjan...must've felt so BAD...!!

do cont soon plzzz & thnx 4 the PM...

plzzz cont really soon coz i simply cant wait...

Luv,

Ekta...

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 12:41am | IP Logged

Originally posted by ekta_monaya

OMGGG...!!!!!

U wrote OS on this Concept...?!

I still cant belive it...i thot that ur dropping it...

but m really glad u wrote it...

OMG!! Its a Shocker...

but not for ME its for OTHERS coz i already knw wats gonna happen next...

& yeah it was vry small too...

want a longer part...

Poor Gunjan...must've felt so BAD...!!

do cont soon plzzz & thnx 4 the PM...

plzzz cont really soon coz i simply cant wait...

Luv,

Ekta...

How could I drop such a wonderful idea? I know it is a shocker for the others! I know it was really short but what could I do? I will continue ASAP...

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 1:05am | IP Logged

lovely!!

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