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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 1:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jiya_angel

wow!! that's a real cute poem sam :)
i liked it!!
well, i don't understand much about poems, so i won't be able to give you a detailed opinion, but as a commoner, i liked it.. and i think you should write more :)
thnx for the pm!! <3 <3
~jiya~


Thanks Jiyu :) I guess the poem was simple and easy to understand Embarrassed
I'll try to write more sweetheart Hug
Take care :)

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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 1:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kheya-mayur

lovely sam...


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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 1:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maria-soniarti

Beautiful poem
 
do write more


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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 1:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahakmev

really nice:D


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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 1:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ayesha_LuvSaJan

Cute peom! (:


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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 9:03pm | IP Logged
Sam, its just beautifully written.. WAH!!!
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Posted: 08 June 2011 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Ohk...Sam you really know how i feel about this poem, don't you?

I mean...my school life finished off just now...so yeah, even i am remembering everything...

But this poem...it's different...

And i seriously loved it, despite the lack of rhyming...

It's really good...keep it up sis...

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 1:08am | IP Logged
That's a wonderful poem...and can't believe its  ur first one...
I loved the way it flowed and u know...I just felt it was incomplete as in..I wished there was something more and I din want it to end on a sad note...but the effect it left was something surreal!

I loved the whole plot...and yeah did u have a break up recently :P
and u din temme also..ehehe

anyways keep it up..would love to hear more from u:)

Take Care,
Love Fatima

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