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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 9:23am | IP Logged
can't believe that its ur 1st poem.Very touchy & sad.well written..beautiful

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 2:20am | IP Logged
Sami nice start as 

just one line "change was shown in a very simple way but means lot "

Aruna

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Spellbound.. splendid!
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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 9:44am | IP Logged
Samidha... wht should i say to u dear.
Golden was the time this title itself sumup whole meaning of dis poem. And sabah had reviewed it beautifulIy.
It wasn't supposed to end like this

But with time it just did

We were meant to have faith

But to be together was never our fate

Actually I loved whole poem but above lines are just mindblowing.
 
very well written Sam...keep it up.
 
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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
Sami Hug
 
I logged on IF after weeks today and saw your scrap. And I was curious what was the link about?
 
And I was pleasantly surprised by your poem.
 
I love simple poems which touch my heart. And this one is exactly that kind of poem. It conveys a sad tale in simple heartfelt words. Poem for me is an art of expressing yourself. And every art has its own colors and beauty to it. Your poem stands out for the beauty of expressing in simple and well choosen words.
 
Loved it.
 
Do write more.
 
Love
-Archana Di
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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 1:23am | IP Logged
This is really wonderful poem... Splendid!!!!
Its really touching... <3
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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 1:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -shan-

Awww a poem? It's so cute! I never come across a poem here! Well done!
I love how you compared time as gold, like they say ''old is gold'' like time is gone, and it's gold -- always to be treasured. && then how memories and then the you connect the two hearts//people. & then it changes it into a sad phase how everything's changed and you explain how no one's at fault.. and ending how they loved eachother!

It's beautiful <3 I loved your POEM (:


Hey Shan, Thanks a lot dear for such a lovely comment! I am glad to know that you loved it!
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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 1:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Fantasia.

it was beautiful sam!! .. a very sad topic though .. i was already feeling low reading a sad update of one of my fav FFs, and now this poem did it all !! .. beautiful it was ..
keep writing!



Hey Kinzz, thanks a lot dear :)
I am glad my poem lit up your mood :)
Take care :)

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