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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 5:38am | IP Logged
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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 5:40am | IP Logged
Sam its Really nice do write more 

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 6:01am | IP Logged
nice poem, sam!
 
its really sad..how things just fall apart, right? the way you expressed your feelings is beautiful :)
 
i think its really good for first attempt!
 
thnx 4 d pm
do write more

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 8:08am | IP Logged
its so beautiful...Embarrassed

It wasn't supposed to end like this

But with time it just did

We were meant to have faith

But to be together was never our fate



these lines r so meaningful..i like them d mostSmile

keep writing more.thanx for PM

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 10:45am | IP Logged
its really lovely.. u should give ur poetic skills a try :)

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 12:43am | IP Logged
AweSomeLy Written..Keep it Up..Hug

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 6:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Fantasia.

it was beautiful sam!! .. a very sad topic though .. i was already feeling low reading a sad update of one of my fav FFs, and now this poem did it all !! .. beautiful it was ..
keep writing!

 
 
same here...
  
awsome poem...
keep writing
 
love
~karee
 


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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 6:38am | IP Logged
Cute one :D

Do write more

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