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Nirvrithi

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
Sami..
I cannot believe its your first poem.. bcs it was perfect.. What if it was small, but it conveyed every idea behind it in beautiful and rhythmic way..  Also I liked Sabah's review too - She really explored each and every line ...Thank you Sabah..
 
Sami - do write more poems..

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 2:05am | IP Logged
Your poem's really cute! Do write more! :)

You're a wonderful writer and have a brilliant way with words! :)

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 2:26am | IP Logged
nice one spl starting to touchy 

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 2:29am | IP Logged
wow..!!TongueTongue
such a beautiful poem...was sad!!Cry
but come back with happy one..ok??
thnx 4 sharing...
 
payal_

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 3:33am | IP Logged
Hi Sam,
 
Its beautiful... and u know in very few words u have sumed it up well..for a first timer I must say it doesnt look like at all.. keep writing many more.. i am sure there is so much to share as thoughts will pour out..just dont force all beautiful things happen in creative mind when its set free to ponder on anything..
 
In the poem the love the unity and the breakup we could feel all and yes the disappointment too..
 
tc
Bhoomi
 

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 3:44am | IP Logged
lovely poem sam.
beautiful.
keep writing.
thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 4:54am | IP Logged
sam.. i am back and first thing i read after so long time is your first poetry... :D
and its just too good.. you should certainly write more and more...
Hug

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 5:22am | IP Logged
wao samm...beautifully played with words...welcum to this side of creative arts too...
 
do write more...though i know poems always cum GOD knows from where in mind...

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