A very nice poem. started of vry cutely and ended sad... Byt oh well the topic indeed was sad.. But very well written poem Sam... Definetly one of the best I've come acroos... keep writing.. :)
I cannot believe its your first poem.. bcs it was perfect.. What if it was small, but it conveyed every idea behind it in beautiful and rhythmic way.. Also I liked Sabah's review too - She really explored each and every line ...Thank you Sabah..
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