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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 10:25am | IP Logged

Its my first poem :)

Had to remove it

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Thank you for reading it :)

Its my first poem,...

I used to always wonder, why I cant just play with words in poetic way...

or rhyme it up...

and today this just came out... though I don't know how it is...

but I am happy as it did :)

Now I kindly request you all

to please leave in your honest comments..

as its my first and

I really want to write more :)

-Samidha :)

Edited by -sam- - 24 September 2011 at 10:48pm

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 10:43am | IP Logged

Awww a poem? It's so cute! I never come across a poem here! Well done!
I love how you compared time as gold, like they say ''old is gold'' like time is gone, and it's gold -- always to be treasured. && then how memories and then the you connect the two hearts//people. & then it changes it into a sad phase how everything's changed and you explain how no one's at fault.. and ending how they loved eachother!

It's beautiful <3 I loved your POEM (:

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 10:45am | IP Logged

it was beautiful sam!! .. a very sad topic though .. i was already feeling low reading a sad update of one of my fav FFs, and now this poem did it all !! .. beautiful it was ..
keep writing!

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 10:47am | IP Logged

wow!! that's a real cute poem sam :)

i liked it!!

well, i don't understand much about poems, so i won't be able to give you a detailed opinion, but as a commoner, i liked it.. and i think you should write more :)

thnx for the pm!! <3 <3

~jiya~

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 11:01am | IP Logged

lovely sam...

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 11:04am | IP Logged

Beautiful poem

do write more

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 11:10am | IP Logged

really nice:D

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 11:13am | IP Logged

Cute peom! (:

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