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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 5:50am | IP Logged
Hye prashu,
that was realy nice.
He he loved the way arpi taunted avi for cuming late.
I am curious to know arpi's past.

Will wait for Next part as the party will be there na.

Edited by Cuty16 - 17 June 2011 at 10:20pm

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 6:22am | IP Logged
Prashu that was brilliant...I love the adding of smilies after the
 sentences...
I loved Avi's dress...Blushing
Arpita's past seems really scary...Ouch
Update soon jaan...Hug


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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 6:57am | IP Logged
Heyyy GJ Hug

look who is editing post Cool

u made me fall for your writing Embarrassed

just loved the way you described the relationship between two friends and i hope Arpi will understand Avi and forget the past then new life or may be new beginning  for them Wink

ha ha ha every one is PMP on Avi like u Day Dreaming ROFL

btw liked very much Avi's professionality and Arpi's mysteryness  Clap Star Clap

abt dream  ROFL



 

love ya Hug


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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Prashu !!!!!!!!!!!HugHug

Congratulations Sis on your first FF!!! ClapClap



[Can't believe I am the last one to congratulate you..CryCry]

Coming to ur FF...I am in love with it !!StarStar

Loved each character...& the story is superb !!Thumbs UpThumbs Up

Both the parts are awesome !!ClapClap

Arpita's past sounds really haunting...OuchOuch

Looking forward for the story to unfold...Big smileBig smile

One more thing...The FF writer herself is blushing so much on the name of Avdesh...Aisa kaise chalega?? WinkROFL
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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Awesome dear ... update soon ...

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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chatterbox

hi prashu

sorry dear u know i dont read ffs though i applaud the efforts here by all writers.

u know my reasons. i cant keep track of characters so it becomes  khichdi in my head

hehe


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No problem Di...

I can understand DiBig smile

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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 9:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Cuty16

Hye prashu, Hiieee RupsEmbarrassed
that was realy nice. Thanks a lot yaarWink
He he loved the way arpi taunted avi for cuming late. HeheheWinkLOL
I am curious to know arpi's past. You vil come 2 knw fr sure...but you have 2 waitTongue

Will wait for Next part as the party will be there na.  Yup..Party coming upWink

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