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FF: New Beginnings? Updtd Chap 12 on pg 37 (Page 36)

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Posted: 04 December 2011 at 7:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by joliefille


Awww my Mrs.Thakur u dedicted this one to me cho-chweeet of u, 
Luv yaa dear     Love yaaa too my samosaEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 yaaa finaly m unreserveing  it hehe  hehehe... yeah finallyTongue
ok about the Updates first of all luv yaa Mrs, Thakur for updating two lovely parts Hug
about ud, yaar what a Update,each scene was just amazing Avita moments
Avi's love for her     Heart
but how dare that silly jerk dare to kidnap her,
u really scared me in last lines yaar ,
Poor Arpi Cry
update soon so Avi can rescue her plzzzEmbarrassed ahhhaa...!!! lets see what happens nextWink
Luv yaa dear  Love yaa tooEmbarrassed
muwwwaaahhh
  muaaahWink



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Posted: 06 December 2011 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Hey U.Big smile
N lots of thnks fr the double dose.StarStar
Liked Both the post. 'Ranjari' hehehe nice.LOLLOL
I m still praying       fr m dr. Arpi Confused , hope she resuced safely soon, by Avi of course.Wink
N requisting u 2 get Rajveer AngryAngry out their life sooon Approve (if possible, it be in ur next post).Day Dreaming
N thkns fr liking my FF postBig smile

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Posted: 07 December 2011 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MuktaJaiswal

Hey U.Big smile Hiiiee DiSmile
N lots of thnks fr the double dose.StarStar  ur most welcome diBig smileEmbarrassed
Liked Both the post. 'Ranjari' hehehe nice.LOLLOL
I m still praying  fr m dr. Arpi Confused , hope she resuced safely soon, by Avi of course.Wink   hope so she gets rescuedWinkWinkWinkWink cant sayOuch
N requisting u 2 get Rajveer AngryAngry out their life sooon Approve (if possible, it be in ur next post).Day Dreaming may be or may be not...Tongue
N thkns fr liking my FF postBig smile no thnks di... it was lovely... when r u updating ur FFEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 12 December 2011 at 6:54am | IP Logged
oh my GODDD...Clap.ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapI completed all the chapters in one strech and i am now dying to read teh next one...Please prashu update soonnn...

Ok...Reducing my excitement now...hehheheheLOL

The i9nitial Parts were too good,,,nurturing LOVE between Ranjariii, Avitha were tooo good...Ten Avi growing restless in her absence...And The evil [email protected]#$% Rajveer...Good going girl...


I like ur Naration Prashuuu...TC LUV and UPdate soonnn...am sure that kamina will never have Arpi...

Luv,
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Posted: 13 December 2011 at 11:35am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by yoga23priya

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I knew thtTongue
& she hasn't unresed it yet...ROFL

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Posted: 14 December 2011 at 7:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sunaha6

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Ok...Reducing my excitement now...hehheheheLOL

The i9nitial Parts were too good,,,nurturing LOVE between Ranjariii, Avitha were tooo good...Ten Avi growing restless in her absence...And The evil [email protected]#$% Rajveer...Good going girl...  Thnk u sweets.. glad u liked the FFEmbarrassed

I like ur Naration Prashuuu...TC LUV and UPdate soonnn...am sure that kamina will never have Arpi... sure... vil update sooon...i hope so toooEmbarrassed

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Posted: 31 December 2011 at 8:58pm | IP Logged
Hieee EveryoneHug

Its a beginning of new year, a new hope... Let us pray that juz like 2011, 2012 brings us new opportunities and new happiness...

Thank You for reading my FFs/Oss/SSs... Its very difficult to understand themLOLLOL I knwLOLLOL

and Thank You for liking it... It means a lot to meEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

So... Next Update in the Next post.. And to give you a news.. With a new year, there will be a new turn in FF... Get ready to read itTongue I hope you would like itSmile

Happy New Year Guys... Love you allHug



Edited by prash_t - 31 December 2011 at 9:00pm

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Thank You for liking all the chapters of my FF...

Here is the next update dedicated to the year 2012...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

   


"Oh My God!! Avi, your hands are bleeding. Let me bandage it and why are you getting angry?? We will surely find her" explained Manjari.Smile

In the Old Bungalow

Rajveer moved towards her. He came very close to her and whispered in her ears, "You are going enjoy every bit of this night" Deadand he took off her dupatta. He holds her mouth and she pleaded him while sobbing, "Please let me go...Why you are doing this to me??" Cry

Meanwhile Avdhesh got a call from one of his informers, "Sir, my boy has seen Rajveer taking a girl about five hours ago to the old bungalow at the outskirts of Delhi. It's near highway". Avdhesh quickly took a small gun which he had kept for defense and took a car. Ranvijay said" Manjari.. You be here. You are safe here. Avi, Im coming with you." ClapAvdhesh drove with as much as speed was possible. No Traffic signals, no one and not even God could stop him. There was only one thought in his mind, to save Arpita…, his love from the clutches of RajveerAngry. He overtook all the vehicles which came in his way.Embarrassed


In the Old Bungalow

Rajveer raised his voice, "Don't you know Why am I doing this?? I rotted in jail because of you..! My life is ruined because of you..! My father left me in jail because of you.. Do you think Ill let you go after what you did to me? I want your life. I'm going to destroy it as you destroyed mine."OuchOuchOuch

Arpita pleaded," Im sorry for whatever happened." She was feeling weak and wasn't able to respond. Her leg wound started bleeding again. She screamed for help but there was no one to help her out. In that place, there were only two people, one was she and the other was her death. Rajveer continued," And after you... It's the turn of your lovable friend, Manjari. Ill deal with your two other friends.. Will kill them into pieces. How can I forget her, huh?"Angry Arpita immediately replied," You wont do anything to them..Im the culprit. She just saved me". After what was happening to her and what happened in her past, she didn't trust her luck, her life..She went with the flow. She made herself stronger from outside but was actually very weak emotionally. How much ever she tried to gear up her strength, somehow she became weaker. And that's why she broke down in front of Rajveer. Surrendered her as she couldn't fight more.


Meanwhile Avdhesh was still on the way. Speed didn't matter to him, overcoming all the hurdles. He had called up his security men to protect Manjari while they went to rescue Arpita.ClapClapClap

Rajveer said lustily, "So, if that's all you want. Then Fine. Ill have you. Before I kill you, let me enjoy this night with you." Arpita tried to move away. She shouted twice,"Help me please". She sensed someone has come….The sensed Avdhesh ahd come… "Avi….. Help me…" This made him angrier Rajveer closed her mouth tightly with the cloth. By then Avdhesh & RV had killed most of Rajveer's men ruthlessly. He didn't spare anyone. His one punch & Rajveer's man went unconscious and started bleeding badly. He had heard Arpita's scream and went towards that direction. ClapClapDancing

Meanwhile Rajveer was ready to attack the. He saw from a small hole that one by one his men were falling down. He didn't had anything to do except kill them on his own. He hid behind the door and when they would open the door, he would shoot them from behind. That's what he had planned. The door opened and he shot two men. He felt sense of relief but when he saw their faces, he was completely shocked. Unfortunately for him, they were his men & he knew he did a big mistake. He sensed someone was behind him; he gave a punch from his elbow.Angry Due to this, Avdhesh's gun fell down. Rajveer and Avdhesh fought. For sometime, Avdhesh looked at Arpita. She was sitting in the corner, completely worn out, bleeding badly, tied up with chains and partial unconscious and looking back at him with tears in her eyes. CryCryHer condition triggered him to kill Rajveer. There was rage in his eyes, determinacy to remove her tears, to take revenge of hurting her so much. Never had he been so angry. RV carefully went towards Arpita to open the chains of Arpita while Avdhesh dealt with Rajveer. He caught hold of Rajveer's neck & pushed him hard against the wall. In return, Rajveer caught Avdhesh's arms & kicked him on his bare chest (In the fight before Avdhesh & Ranjvijay shirt buttons broke).* Can I drool now?? How can girls stop looking at Avi when he is in bare chestDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming*


They fought like bitter enemies. Rajveer hit badly on Avdhesh's arm badly again and then he punched on Avdhesh's face. He fell down and his mouth bleeded.AngryAngryAngry Rajveer got the gun & in spilt of second tried to shot Arpita but RV to save her, got the bullet on his leg. Rajveer came towards Arpita & said Avdhesh "So Mr Avdhesh… She is the one for whom you are fighting so much, huh!!!! Baby (looking towards her) your friend is wounded now & now the turn is yours…" AngryAngryAngryAngryRajveer was about to shoot her when Avdhesh saved her & forcefully took the gun. Rajveer threw Arpita down. Avita's eyes met. For the first time, there was concern in her eyes for him. EmbarrassedEmbarrassedAvdhesh looked at Rajveer, he clenched hid fists& teeth. With anger in his eyes, he punched, kicked him hard again and again. Avdhesh made him fell on the ground through his neck & beat him up on his chest (from his leg) hard enough. ClapClapClapIt was so hard that blood came out of Rajveer's mouth. Avdhesh made him stand and gave a final & harder blow on Rajveer's face. By now, rajveer gave up totally & went unconscious.DancingDancing He made RV sit up and carefully put RV and Arpita one by one in his car. Police came there & took Rajveer into their custody.Party

*************************End of Part 12******************************



Thats all by me...Smile

I hope you liked this tooEmbarrassedEmbarrassed I know its short... Cry But from next update there will be different turnWink

Please let me know your views, suggestions and feedback.. Im waiting for themEmbarrassed

Feel free to commentEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed and hit 'like ' if you like the partSmileSmileSmile




Edited by prash_t - 31 December 2011 at 9:18pm

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