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Heyyaa EveryoneHugHug

I know ...Its too late to start FFLOLLOL

But Let us keep the forum active and lively and make our bonds more strongerEmbarrassed

Everyone enjoy reading it...Embarrassed

Edited by PriyaSmile

FF is dedicated to Everyone here...Embarrassed

So...Here is my story of Avita...
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Summary:  Will Arpitha fall for him and start believeing in love again or will  cruel past haunt her which may effect her future with him? is he is the only man in her life or there was someone else whom she locked her heart?After Avdhesh coming to know about her past will he accept her  whole heartedly and unlock her heart or is it End for his love or New Beginnings for them?



 
                                         
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Avdhesh Singh Thakur: Owner of leading mobile service providers- "Voice". He is handsome, Charming entrepreneur. He is a self made man. He is very professional when it comes to his work. He fun-loving, out going person. In his social circuit, he has an image of  a "playboy".He loves to make friends. Girls fall for him and throw themselves on him. He never cared or loved anyone until he meets Arpita.

Arpita Rai- Young, talented, beautiful girl and owner of leading mobile manufacturers ' "Xpress" . She is heir to her father's company. She is very practical. She used to be fun-loving but one incident changed course of her life. She deceided to never to fall in love. But destiny had other plans for her.

Beena Singh Thakur- Mother of Avdhesh. She wants Avdhesh to get married but Avdhesh is not interested. Avdhesh respects her a lot. She made Avdhesh what he is now .After Avdhesh's father's death, She is both father and mother to Avdhesh.

Mahesh Chandra Rai- Father of Arpita. He loves his daughter very much. He has made "Xpress" mobiles where is it now.  He was founder of the mobile company. He is always worries abt his daughter.

Manjari- Only friend of Arpita. She knows her past. She wants her friend to be happy and tries to forget her past but all in vain.

Simple- Childhood friend of Avdhesh. She loves him but Avdhesh doesn't.

Few characters wil be introduced as story unfolds.



Edited by prash_t - 31 December 2011 at 9:20pm

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Chapters                                                  -                                                   Page No


Chapter 1                                                 -                                                 Page 4


Chapter 2                                                 -                                                 Page 8

Chapter 3                                                 -                                                 Page 13

Chapter 4                                                 -                                                 Page 17


Chapter 5                                                 -                                                 Page 21

Chapter 6                                                 -                                                 Page 24

Chapter 7                                                 -                                                 Page 26


Chapter 8                                                 -                                                 Page 28

Chapter 9                                                 -                                                 Page 31

Chapter 10                                               -                                                 Page 35

Chapter 11                                               -                                                 Page 35

Chapter 12                                               -                                                 Page 37


Edited by prash_t - 31 December 2011 at 9:21pm

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 Heya Prashu di first congrates for ur new FF

 d characters r awesome di realy excited for

 it uv yaaa diHugn ol d bestSmile


Edited by jasveensokhi - 09 June 2011 at 4:12am

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Heyyy GJ Hug Hug

 look who is editing post Cool

your story concept is very interesting and i am sure you will rock it Cool

Congo Shongo on your first FF Clap Star Clap


your gift my GJ Wink


Update Soon and also don't delay like me Angry


love you Hug

PS don't think i am kanjoos for giving you two gulab jumun only because i don't want you to doctor for your rotten teeth ROFL ROFL



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Ok i m the first one to unres the post Wink

about the story line , very interesting
n cheractors huun u have done ur home work sweeheart Wink
i m going to love this Avi for sure
n simple loves Avi but child hood friend hope she will b  positive after too,
will wait for ur update gve it soonEmbarrassed
do i need to tell u about ur writingWinkClapClapClap


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Sweetheart... Hug

wonderful FF.. loved the intro..




ps- put in lots of steamy AviTa romance..

you know na.. I love them.. Embarrassed

update soon..

Love you..



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great start dii ,
interesting background
thanks for the pm
update next part soon
and dont forget to pm me


Edited by rubal223 - 28 May 2011 at 2:20pm

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its going to be awesome prashu...Clap
continue it...
am already missin GKD !!!

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