FF- Katra Katra- Part 25-141, Pt 26-145, Pt 27-148 - Page 49

Originally posted by: saaaz

Oye...Tuesday chal raha hai...Hey ram!!! mujhe confuse mat karo...

remember her classes were tuesday and thursday and she goes for paperwork on Monday..has the wada pav..dinner and gets sick???!!!

Thursday ke liye bahut time bosss...

yup saaz..i actually remembered that but got carried away with lana's comment n thought of confirming it..but in a hurry i didnt double check it..hereafter i'll be careful with the days..

loved it Saaz, keep it up! love their banter!

OMG saazy...loved the update...

Originally posted by: rooj-i

OMG saazy...loved the update...

the beach scene was really cute. finally they were alone. it was superbly done. not much to talk about but yet they said a lot with their silence. him taking interest and showing it to her in his own way and she taking interest back. 

what is with Tina? i dont want her there. 

i even loved the dharam scene. it was really cute. 

then the friends scene...that was the best. i loved that! the little secrets they share and that last look when she head to the room. wow!!!

then in the room. he was looking for her scrunchie right? it was sooo cute...then their little tiff. first it was confusing for me but then i got it. lol

i loved it! update soon!

No Rooji,

He was looking for Sooraj's photo which he had found earlier in her book along with the bookmark.

~Cheers,
Dish
Edited by dishbhan - 12 years ago

Hey that's an amazing FF...Loved it...😊

brilliant update saaz n its realy nyc dt dey hve startd developing feelings for each other now...bt who s dis tina who is asking shaan again n again to meet her n shaan becomes expressionless whenever he sees her msg so who is she pls disclose this mystery

It ws so funny shaan used her shampoo and their whole conversation in the room was really nice n funny

shaan:- good night khanak
Khanak:- jee...good morning
Dis s d best dialogue and if u imagine dis dialogue with shaan n khanak in d show it matches so well

Ok no concluding d whole thing...it ws a realy nyc, cute, sweet, funny and enjoyable part...pls continue soonEdited by shiksha_03 - 12 years ago

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~Cheers,
Dish

oye hoye saaz don't have words to describe ur excellent work ...my goodness u wrie so well ... (hats off) to u girl 👏

i can't write even 1% of what u write ...👍🏼

plzzz keep writing and thx for the pm :)


luv zara 

Originally posted by: aditee

You know what your story reminds me of?

 

A beautiful summer evening

Sitting on the wrought iron swing in my backyard, watching the setting sun, the breeze picking up the sky turning from pale blue to yellow to orange, hundreds of birds flying above in one formation or another.

 

Suddenly my sprinklers turn on and mix with the breeze, spraying me with water

 

Thats it!

 

 

Maybe I spoke too soon about this going too fast

no no don't slow down, warna everyone here may blame me for slow updates...I can always catch up 😛

So Shaan went to pick her up...thats sweet of him

And alot more talking..love it!!!

Friends are funny...looking fwd to the dinner

...and the little fight over shampoo was cute

Like how you are taking the story slowly...slow change in feelings...very nicely written