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FF- Katra Katra- Part 25-141, Pt 26-145, Pt 27-148 (Page 16)

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
Hey Dish...I want to believe that I am writing both Shaan and Khanak as close to reality as possible...in the sense..while one does not know what 'really' can happen in situations such as these...in no way do I want to paint him superhuman...he is a good friend..so he rose to the occassion..or as his mom said, he is impulsive..at the same time..now that he shares the room with his 'wife'..in his head, he treats her just as he would treat any other,,,no gloves nothing...and in so many ways Khanak is the same too...
Thank you so much for questioning...and analysing...thanks re, made me sooper glad...

Yes, this is the first time he has uttered her name after having called her wifey ...she has not..she has however acknowledged him as her husband...

he opts to go to Karthik..thinking maybe she needs time alone...but of course it was only she (her melodius voice) that changed his mind..made him selfish shall we say...

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
Hey saazy!!!
 
Read the last 2 updates! Superb girl!! Hats off, I love yr style, love Khanak's attitude, and the raat mein bistar par nok- jhok as cute as can be!!! Loved it!!:)

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
I love the guy-conversation you have in your updates...very real...did you eavesdrop??ROFL

The phone touch..very desperate, anger and helplessness mixed in one, and of course, grief.
I like the convo these two have each night. The attachment these two are slowly developing through it and through her singing..

My most fav part of the update was Shaan fixing her phone. How you brought it to this point, Clap

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
n here I am...Big smile
Today is sunday... N m readin this update with my cup of tea...(i got up at 10;30in the morning...)
Wink
hmmm... M lovin it...!!!!!!!!
Shaan hates blue n Khanak too is not too fond of it...*ahem ahem*

I hope shaan's fv colour is White...(cz dats my fv too)Wink

Nd I love it whenever Shaan stands up for Khanak...
The way he replied quickly to his frenz... dat she is adjusting n all...

Awww... mai sadke jaava...!!!

Thnx for the update... HugHugHug

Next part jaldi PUBLiSH karo...Big smile
Nahi toh mera Sunday nahi katega...Cry...(gosh... m such a nautanki...!!!!!!)

[well... m editin ma reply here...
Saaaz... Dn call me hotchpotch... Feels like Khichdi...Big smile
My name is Disha... dnt 4get]






Edited by hotchpotchRBO - 28 May 2011 at 11:53pm

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
ii read all the 3 parts last nite... Thank God u finally update it

cute and touching update

 i actually felt the pain wen i read she flung the cell
the best part he stayed there coz of her singing and fixed her fone

waiting for the next and a long update Smile

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 11:46pm | IP Logged

the phone braeking and wearing his t-shirt. completely had me!

its such a natural thing to do. to wear something of someone not there. to feel that closeness and warmth. gives that sense of comfort
 
the two people closest to him would be the only two to know what it feels like and the only two that could help each other counsel through the grief.
 
though you've not had either one mention or talk of it. its so evident in their actiosn and words. in their ease with each other.
 
as for the silsila. lol. no i didn't meet anyoen on way. just the whole best friends and being shocked at the death and then bam marraige. just brought the scenes to my mind. glad i was reading way too much into the preggo thing.
 
 

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
Oh my my... Dis is awesome...

Loved the guy talk...

And u knw when khanak said she flung her cell coz it dnt ring at 10 i was like hein???? Then it struk me ke suraj used to used ca her at 10... Awww... Poor khanak... That line was really nice...

Loved the talks between shanak... Little bt sweet... They r quiet comfy in each others presence... Thats nice...

Continue sooon... This was a small part... Next part i want big...

Edited by Roshni_M - 28 May 2011 at 11:48pm

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
Nice start
but waiting 4 the suspense that how they got married
loved shaan and his reaction towards the situation

love

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