FF- Katra Katra- Part 25-141, Pt 26-145, Pt 27-148 - Page 83

Marne ka irada hai kya? jaan leni hai iss bachi ki kya?

Hey AWESOME author!
Got caught up on my dose of Katra Katra and i think i am willing to OD over this story happily because it's super addicting... Complete package with top-notch plot build up and characterization...The little gestures that your Shaantanu and Khanak pick up on are intense and i think as a reader i can honestly feel that in your word choice...Everything has a flow and the symbolism with which your proceed your storyline is well executed.
The "tumtum" ride and the whole experience of it was well done and I have a feeling that this Shaan cherishes the little moments they share even the ones that she is unaware of...So apt for their scenario...
Even the supporting characters contribute just the right amount of flavor to your special recipe of ShaNak and their journey as man and wife after the whole backdrop of Suraj's death...once again i am only pointing out the highlights that stand out to me the most as i know for a fact that there are several that i am overlooking but at the same time i am confident that most other readers have already praised you for them.
As always i will encourage you to write and update ASAP as you left me with quite a scene to imagine...it now needs the next installment soon. Thank you for your amazing story as i am enjoying every "katra" of it...
Muaaah!
-imane

Saaz, update kidhar hai? Weekend mein 5 updates please? Do you really have a life besides this FF, I have no idea and I refuse to accept it even if u have  one, I have lost mine... So please kripa kare. meherbani kare, aur iss Katra to aage badain.

Purvi dimaag ki batti achanak jal gayi!! 😆 I think I was right about Khanak's 'Shantanu main rahe jayoon?', she didn't mean about leaving their room at all! If u remember the bus incident it was Shaan who kept his hand over her dupatta, he didn't want her to leave but Khanak just looked at his hand, she didn't do anything. If she had kept her hand on his then the implication would mean a complete circle there. I think for her its not a question at all, no matter what she will stay behind in room # 201 in hostel 7. She didn't even have a doubt on this regard.

OMG SAAZ i am deaddd kiss in the broad day light hayeee main maar jaawa .give me some air thud fallen on the ground .this is really freaking hott man gr88 piece of writing .loved it .they have become so comfortable in just one week yar i am sooo loving it .thanks saaz

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Purvi dimaag ki batti achanak jal gayi!! 😆 I think I was right about Khanak's 'Shantanu main rahe jayoon?', she didn't mean about leaving their room at all! If u remember the bus incident it was Shaan who kept his hand over her dupatta, he didn't want her to leave but Khanak just looked at his hand, she didn't do anything. If she had kept her hand on his then the implication would mean a complete circle there. I think for her its not a question at all, no matter what she will stay behind in room # 201 in hostel 7. She didn't even have a doubt on this regard.

 

And another incident which stood out to me but forgot to mention was their complete understanding of their silent mood & thoughts. When she asked him who he missed he immediately became serious & quiet & she realised he was thinking about Suraj & she gently mentioned in his family & he went 'oh...' & carried on!! These small nuances r brilliant of Saaz which is so subtle that it almost misses u unless u r too keen to read & absorb everything like moi the great. 😃

 

Saazy tu shayad Kumbhkaran ki aadat ki mazaa le rahi hai abhi par main spamming kar rahi hoon bindaas! 😆

You know Lana another reason Shaan thinks that Khanak is thinking about Suraj is that pic, pehele book mein mili, then in pillow...I think the reason he finds it irritating is that he knows that she misses him, he is not sure if she is hiding, she is probably not, girls soemtimes do that.

oh saaz em speechless... i read last line and still cant get over it
dunno wht to say... i was 'ving goose bump i was blushing so much that couldn't take the risk last nite to read it again... i juz did it now nad em blushing blushing & blushing☺️
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blv me i took 15 min to think wht should i write so here it is 😳
it was fab splendid sweet romantic hot... ..👏👏

the whole convo starting from the standing point for tumtum to the last line "reh jaao khanak" was superb👍🏼
 
he's jealous & possessive cant stand any other guy getting frank wid here
Shaan:  (irritated): Arrey yaar.. I never get a minute with you..why did you go away when I came down for breakfast..? ...aww super cute😊

even dat chalo beta,,, puttiing her dupatta in his jansport getting dissapointed coz she's not staying i mean like i wanted to paste the whole part and comment

Khanak steps away..opens the door..turns to look at him..Shaan is in the enclave..his back towards her..she walks to his back..places her left palm on his shoulder..her right hand is holding her bag..

Khanak: (softly): Shaantanu..main reh jaaon..?☺️

Shaan immediately turns..stares at her..her hand moves from his shoulder..his left hand cups her right cheek and his right hand shuts the door loudly..and before he kisses her.☺️.

Shaan: (whispers into her lips): Reh jaao Khanak..☺️

And this time in broad daylight..lips don't miss..☺️😍

OMG... in the day time. Shaan is such a big liar he dont have patience... he couldn't wait... and i luv that ... this part was HAAWWTT

thx a ton luv u... continue soon cant wait yaar.👏

hey main ne dubara socha asn em still a non poona supporter let them stay at the hostel waise bhi shaan is not patient enough ...

but as always u write better than imagination and expectation...

i can imagine the song em in luv on them

 keep updating..
Edited by IF_rida - 12 years ago