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ff-The beginning of something

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 8:20pm | IP Logged

Part 1

It was a dark and rainy night. There a few boys that are at the corner drinking and looking for trouble. Suddenly they see a girl walking. She looked like she came from a wedding. They look at her she notices them the boys try to talk to her saying "hey beautiful what are you doing here walking by yourself at night". She doesn't say anything but then gets really scared so she just keeps walking. Then the boys start following her she notices this and starts to walk faster but no matter what they were still following her then she starts to run as fast as she can. The boys run after her. She can't catch her breath. It's becoming hard for her to breath they are still chasing her. Finally she finds a place to hide behind a car the boys try to look everywhere for her she is trying so hard not to make a sound and then suddenly a cockroach is on her clothes she screams. The boys hear it and find her. They say "oh you can't run away from us" she screams "Help someone please Help!!!!!!! One of the boys says "there is no one that can help you" they all start to laugh she still screams Help Someone please Help!!!!! The boys grabs her hand and tries to take her away she tries to fight and struggle but can't. She still screams Help!!!!!!!!!! As the boys are taking her away they notice a car coming and all of them look to see who it is. The car stops and this man gets out. He is wearing a suit and takes off his glasses.

Can anyone guess who this mystery man is? I know I am new to this forum but after reading all the wonderful ff I wanted to really write one please do let me know what you think and if I should continue.

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
Welcome to the forum love

Your fic sounds really interesting. I can't wait to read some more

Yuks
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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
its very intresting. eagerly waiting for part 2
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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 2:00am | IP Logged
hey very nice liked it pls continue soon
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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 2:11am | IP Logged
So, another fic wow...Welcome and do continue soon..

Luv atop
zozo143 Newbie
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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 6:16am | IP Logged
[QUOTE=queenyuks]Welcome to the forum love

Your fic sounds really interesting. I can't wait to read some more

Yuks
Oh my god compared to yours mine is nothing i have read yours and they are so wonderful you should seriously consider writing for real lol anyways thanks i thought it kinda sucked but i am glad you liked it
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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 6:17am | IP Logged
[QUOTE=atop]So, another fic wow...Welcome and do continue soon..

Luv atop
Thanks i am happy that you like it
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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shobi12500

its very intresting. eagerly waiting for part 2

thanks

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