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marvee-khan Senior Member
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Posted: 08 June 2011 at 11:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anushaarja

leukemia oh no!!!! agar sach ka pata chal gaya toh...wat sawera will b outta pic or wat?? r u making her die??

haha i really don't know yet Tongue maybe she'll stay...maybe she'll go

Cheers,
-Marvee

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Posted: 08 June 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged

VERY NICE UPDATE

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Posted: 08 June 2011 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
Fab update. I jst loved it...
Cont soon

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Posted: 08 June 2011 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by itsreallyreal

Originally posted by deniac

Marvee... nice update... but i dint like that maan made her agree to marriage coz of his mom... if he had just reasoned with her that she wont lose freedom... if she aint gonna fall for anyone then y not marry someone who loves her so much ...someone who understands that she doesnt love him n wants her freedom... somehow i dint like that he almost emotionally blackmailed her

Hi!!!

See the thing  is she thinks she's marrying him because of him mom but actually she's just marrying him b/c she can't see him sad. As I said in the story, she doesn't really remember his mom but it's when she sees tears in his eyes that she breaks down.

She doesn't even realize why she's marrying him...maybe she will i the future Tongue

Hope this clarifies your pointSmile

Cheers
-Marvee
Marvee,
 
am not saying she said yes coz of his mom... she definitely said yes coz she cudnt bear to see pain in his eyes... but he used the pain to make her say yes... his pain came coz he wanted to fulfill his mom's last wish... that he cud hv done by marrying any gal... y geet... i just dint like it that he showed his pain n lachari to her... thats it yaar... mera PoV hai... when u r in love... u shud show ur love n win someone over...not show ur lachari n bebasi n win them... or atleast make them think that they r bending coz of ur lachari...
 
anyway its ur story... n u r writing it very well... i just told what i felt bout it... TongueBig smile
 
cheers!!!
 
Gouri

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Posted: 08 June 2011 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
loved the update... it was emotional... but i loved the part when she cant stand his tears... it was amazing... somewhere down the line deep in her heart she loves him... as u can never see the person u love in tears afer all... :)

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Posted: 08 June 2011 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
awesome update dear
loved it...
cont soon

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Posted: 08 June 2011 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
awesome do continue soon

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Posted: 08 June 2011 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
nice part
plz continue soon

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