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FF-Meri nanhi Dulhan.-Thread -5-note-pg 154 (Page 40)

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                                       Chapter 59

next day :

Dadi invites priya and her mother for lunch without informing any one ''..
all family members came to know about it ,on guests arrival except maan who was still unaware.''''.
dadi introduces them to jaya and others'''.
vicky prem and geet exchanges worried looks as they were not prepared for this'.
after serving them geet was leaving when dadi called "mishti  go and call maan"''..
she got scared of maan's anger ,as he strictly ordered, not to involve him in all this'..now what?
She hesitatingly went to his study'''
he was working on his laptop'..
suniye '
'haa bolo'
guests  aaye hai,'U should meet them''..

 I don't have time for all this. geet.'''

How can U talk like that, how bad will dadi feel'.after all, its her best friend'''
when  dadi never cared for  my feelings,? Then why should I?
And u better don't defend dadi,,,I don't have any relation with her.?
How can U talk like that?
Shut up geet''..he said rudely
she turned around showing fake anger''''.

Maan closes his eyes'..he know what family means to her''
he got up ,'chalo'..but I will not staying  there long''.''
geet fumbles .  aap jaaoo'I will come later'''.
fine he left. To hall and''..
Greets every one '.
priya smiles at maan
ignoring her maan was about to sit when dadi introduced them'..
it angered him instantly'''.
he got up and shouts'.mishti'mishti'
hearing it, geet comes  running from stairs and ankle gets twist,    she cries  in pain''.
maan ran to her''.Vicky, prem and jaya  too followed'
dadi and guests sat watching them'''.
Making Geet sit, maan grips her feet slowly stretching her leg towards him'
.she pulls back
maan glare her angrily and pulls her leg forcefully'..
she screams'''.
aheyste maan'usko dard ho raha hai,'''jaya said with concern.
he moves  her lehanga little up'
Geet---babaji yeh kya kar rahe hai'?
she jerks away his hand'''
it angered him hell'''..
he picked her at once  carrying to her room '''.



Vicky stops jaya from  following them'''saying there is nothing to worry, maan will handle it.
priya'who is this girl dadi?
dadi'mishti, she works here as a care taker'..
oh ,ok'and murmurs'instead of she ,seems like maan is her care taker''.?

Maan took geet to her room and throws on bed angrily''..

Geet  eyes widened in fear''
maan----what the hell is going on'..?How dare U lie to me?
When did I lie, aren't they are dadi's friend'? She said in low tone..
'.he leans on her. Don't play games with me

U will regret it later''..he said looking deep into her eyes'',?
humm?
She nodes'.
he sat down took her feet, Placed  it on his lap,  and  moves her lehanga up'''geet close eyes,  hiding her   fear'''.
 he very'..slowly and gently massage her ankle''trying to ease her pains''.
''she bites her lower lip '.as his hand moved little up while massaging..
'.maan looks at her with concern,'.is it paining ?
she didn't answers''
he took her hand and placed it on his shoulder, "hold me, its going to be more painful"'''.

he massaged hard, she screamed and hugged him'..he hugged her back'..comforting her ''.hogaya shona''

But U need to take rest'..he laid her on bed''.
tucked her in blanket'and  moved closer to kiss her forehead,


 she clenches her eyes tightly ''
his heart ache seeing her rejection '.
and left room without kissing ''.. '..
her heart felt his pain, but her mind was completely taken over by fear.
Though she was regretting her acts, but couldn't voice it due to her fear'
she is going through''..
Guests left disappointed as maan refused to even meet them''.
dadi  '( I am not going to leave U maan, either it be now or later but U have to  re marry) agar aap ziddi hai toh, hum bhi aap hi  ki dadi hai..


Night:

maan came to geet's room'.found her studying''''
how are U feeling now?
Good'
he sat in front of her'..revising her portion''..

Both avoids closeness and only concentrates on
studies, till they fell tired and slept'''



Morning
maan got up hearing geet's scream from bathroom''..
he ran in without knocking''.
and found her in bathtub'crying''..
kya hua he asked with concern''..
my foot its hurting ''''
why U got up from bed U need more rest.. '..

I need bath''..
I would have given U sponge bath''.

Both looks at eachother shocked realizing, what are they talking? and in what situation''.?
his eyes slipped from her face to her body''.she is looking irresistible beautiful'.wrapped in thin red dupatta''which is completely drenched revealing her '''
she felt uncomfortable with his gaze''as his eyes were  filled with passion'..
he noticed her getting uncomfortable with him'he came close and sat beside tub watching her '''..



Trying to read her eyes''.

Why is U so uncomfortable?
I am not stranger to U'''.
we are married geet,''.

But for others our marriage was illegal'''
I don't care about world'geet
only your opinion matters to me.. what do u think?..

She didn't reply ' '
it hurts him. He left from there instantly'..

Geet cries'I am sorry maan, sorry to hurt U, but I am helpless 'please forgive me''''

(Precap---court marriage'.)

 

 Hi friends here is part 59...hope U all like it...
            sorry for mistakes
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Thanx 4 d awesum update
Plz geet dun do this 2 maan
Ur hurtin hm Wink

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Wating 4 next Shocked

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hope the court marriage is of maaneet not of priya hate dadi to the core Angry maan is doing right by not caring for dadi she deserves his hatred ness nice upate

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