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FF(MANEET): DIL MIL GAYE Thrd1 upd prt 21 pg 141) (Page 83)

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 1:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Palak5922

PLS UPDATE SOON. WAITINGGG
will b updating right now palakTongue

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 5:15am | IP Logged
 
Banner: Shivangi (CIDManeetNaksh) & Sthuthi
 
 
I was watching old episodes of geet yesterday and hence I was in a romantic mood so I thought of updating "dil mil gaye" instead of "mere humsafar". Todays update is especially for those who were insisting on geet's confession but let me tell u frnds this is not geet's confession but kind of a trailer what you can expect when geet will confess her feelings. I have tried to make this part romantic and I hv added some pics as well so that u can get an idea about the entire situation I really hope each one of u will like it.

Love- Piya 

 
PART 15

Khurana Constructions

Adi: Are romeo ye tum kya dundne ki koshish kar rahe ho?

Romeo: Adi sir mujhe mera mobile mil nahi raha hai.

Adi: Yahi kahi hoga romeo zara dyan se dekho

Romeo: Sab jagah dekh liya sir kahi nahi mil raha

Tasha: Ofho toh isme kaunsi difficulty ki baat hai apne mobile pe ek call kar do wo jaha pe bhi hoga uski ring se tum usse locate kar sakte ho.

Romeo: Thanks tashaji u r so intelligent.

Adi: Waise romeo tumne apna mobile silent phe tho nahi rakha tha na?

Romeo: Nahi sir bilkul bhi nahi are mere mobile ka ringer tho aisa song hai jo ke kisi soothe hue insaan ko bhi fath se jagade.

Adi: Achha aisa kaunsa song hai

Romeo: Aap khud hi sun lijiye

Saying so he dials his mobile number from the office phone

Meanwhile Conference room

Maan: Geet ye kya bachpana hai aur ye girlfriend ka kya jhol hai?

 

Geet: Huh... Girlfriend tumhari aur jhol main kar rahi hoon

 

Maan: Geet tum ye ache se jaanti ho ke meri koi girlfriend nahi hai aur agar hothi tho kya main ye baat tumse chupatha?

 

Geet: Achha tho iska matlab hai ke tum mujhse koi bhi baat nahi chupate kyun?

 

Maan: Haan

 

Geet: Tho batau kyaa  tumhari life mein aisi koi bhi ladki nahi hai jisse ke tum jaan se bhi zyada pyar karte ho?

 

Maan silent

 

Geet maan ki taraf badti hai but then suddenly she loses her balance and she lands up sitting on maan's lap.

Just then romeo's mobile starts ringing he had left his mobile phone in d conference room

"Bahar se koi andar na aa sake" Maan n geet look in d direction from where d song was coming

Andar se koi bahar na jaa sake
 
 
Socho kabhie aisa ho tho kya ho
 
 
Socho kabhie aisa ho tho kya ho
 
Hum tum...
 
 
Ek kamre mein bannd ho
 
Aur chabi kho jaaye
 
 
hum tum ek kamre mein bannd ho aur chabi kho jaaye
 
 
Tere naino ki bhool bhulaiya mein
 
 
Bobby kho jaaye..
 
 
Hum tum ek kamre mein bannd ho
 
Aur chabi kho jaaye'"
 

Maneet eyelock.

It was bcming more and more difficult for maan to resist himself. Dil ke jazbaat maan par havi hone lag gaye the. woh ek dusare ke aur bhi nazdeek aane lage'. They were about to kiss

When maan opens his eyes and realizes what they were going to do

Maan: Geet...ye

Geet (opens her eyes and covers his mouth with her hand)
 
Geet: Nahi maan aaj kuch bhi mat kehna' aaj iss pal ko yahi tham jaane dho...

Geet: (removes her hand from his mouth) Apni girlfriend ka message nahi sunna chahoge

Maan nods his head in agreement.

Geet: Tumhari girlfriend tumhara shuriya aada karna chahti hai ke tumne usse iss layak samjha ke tum usse apne zindagi mein shaamil kar sako... (caresses maan's face) apne jeevan ka ek atuth hissa bana sakho

Geet: (maan ke haatho ko apne haatho mein lekar) Maan wo tumse kehna chahti hai ke agar tum uska haath nahi thamthe tho tanhaiye mein uska jeena behat hi mushkil ho jaata

Geet: (kisses maan's eyes) Tumne usse apni nigahoon mein basakar usse iss baat ka ehsaas dilaya hai ke sapne bhi haqeeqat ka rukh iktiyaar kar sakte hai.

Geet: (places her head on maan's chest) Har lamha har pal jab usse ye mehsoos hota hai ke tumhare seene mein ek bus wahi hai jo dil bankar dhadakti hai tab uska jii ek matwale saawan mein khushi mein naachte hue mor ki tarah dolne ko karta hai.

Geet: (hugs maan and maan hugs her back) wo tumse ye kehna chahti hai ke jab bhi tum usse apne baho ke panaho ke ghere mein rakhte ho tab uske dil se bus ek hi dua nikalti hai ke agar maut aaye to wo tumari baaho mein hi aaye

Geet: (kisses maan's cheek) Tumhare chehre ko dekhe bina uske dil ko ek pal ke liye bhi chain nahi milta

Geet: (looks lovingly into maan's eyes) Tumhari aakhon mein apne liye pyar dekhkar uski nigahon ko bhi thandak milti hai

Geet: (closes her eyes) uska bus chale tho wo tumhe apni aakhon mein kuch iss tarah bassa le ke uski zindagi ki har ek dastaan tumse shuru ho aur tumhi pe khatm'

Geet: (opens her eyes and kisses maan on his forehead) tumhare mathe ki lakeero par wo apna naam kuch iss tarah sajadena chahti hai ke marke bhi wo tumhari kasmo ko bhula na sakhe

Maan lifts geet's face

Geet: jab kabhie bhi tum usse choothe ho tab uski khoobsurati aur bhi nikhar jaati hai.

 

Maan caresses geet's face

Geet: jab tum usse apne pyar ka ehsaas dilate ho tab uska ussike dil pe koi zor nahi chalta usse har manzar har zarre mein bus tumhari hi talash rehti hai' agar tum nahi rehte tho mehfil mein bhi tanha hone ka ehsaas hota hai'

Geet gives a tight hug to maan

Geet: agar uska bus chale tho wo hawa ko bhi tumhare aur uske darmiyaan na aane de...kaash usse aisi kismat mil jaaye ke har pal wo bus tumhari baho mein hi rahe aur har lamha wo bus tumhara hi nazara karti jaaye

Geet: Maan, kaash tum kabhie uski khamoshiyaan pad paate tho tum jaan jaate ke wo tumse bepana mohabbat karti hai' ek bus tumhara hi naam hai jo ke uske dil mein samaya hua hai...Shamoseher ek bus tumhara hi chehra uski nigahoon ke saamne mandratha rehta hai..Tumhari pyar mein ek aisi sacchai hai jise paane se uski zindagi mein khushiyoon ki barsaat ho gayi hai...Tumne usse apne zindagi mein shamil karke usse ek khara sona bana diya hai maan

Geet: Tum uski zindagi ka ek aisa anmol tohfa ho ke jisse wo kissi bhi keemat  mein kho nahi sakti... Tum bus usike liye banne ho maan aur wo tumhare liye

Mahi... Mahi...( background music)

 

Geet: (thinking) Maan aaj maine apne dil ki baat tumse keh di lekin tum isse kahi zyada deserve karte ho' Tumne mujhe aisi khushi di hai ke agar mera bus chale tho main har din hazaar baar apne pyar ka izahaar tumse kar du magar tab bhi wo tumhare pyar ke saamne bahut hi chota lagega' maine ab tak jho bhi baat tumse ki usse tumhe khushi zaroor hui hogi lekin mujhe maaf kar dena maan ab main tumse ek jhooth kehne ja rahi hoon jo ke tumhari khushi ko tumse shayad cheen le' magar apni geet par bharosa rakhna maan main tumhe apne dil ki baat ek special tarike se batana chahungi lekin uske liye tumhe thoda intezaar karna hoga' Lafz kam pad jaayenge maan tumhe ye batane ke liye ke main tumse kitni mohabat karti hoon' I love u maan' I love u so much'.

Geet wipes her tears

Geet: So maan kaisi lagi mere show k naye segment ki theme?

Maan: (opens his eyes and breaks d hug) Nayi theme kya matlab main kuch samjha nahi?

Geet: Ofho ye jo main dialoguebaazi kar rahi thii na yahi tho mere show ka na naya segment hai jiska naam hai "izhaare mohabbat"

Maan still confused

Geet: tum abhi bhi nahi samjhe' iss segment mein hum logo se puchenge ke wo apne pyar ka izhaar apne style mein kaise karna chahenge' ab dekho maine jaise ek nakli confession ka demo diya ab mera shaiyrana andaz hua right similarly alag alag logo ka alag andaz hoga' u know I m so sure ke this segment will b a big hit especially among youths tumhara kya khayal hai maan?

Maan: o tho ye demo tha' main tho samjha ke'

Geet: kya samjhe maan

Maan: kuch nahi geet' ya u r right sabko ye naya segment zaroor pasand aayega.

Just then once again romeo's mobile starts ringing' bahar se koi andar na aa aske'.

Geet gets up from maan's lap and goes and takes the call

Geet: hello

Romeo: Hello ye mera mobile hain aapke paas ye kaha se aaya

Geet: Aap kaun janab baat kar rahe hai

Romeo: Waise khud ke muh se apni taarif kya karu miss phir bhi aap itni utawali ho hi rahi hai mera naam jaaneke liye tho main bata du myself "Romeo"

Geet: Romeo main geet bol rahi hoon aur tum apna mobile conference room mein bhool kar chale gaye ho

Romeo: Geet !!! o I m so sorry geet pls maan sir ko mat batana ke main tumhare saath flirt kar raha tha

Geet: thik hai tum office mein hi ho na wahi rukho main tumhara mobile lekar aati hoon.

Romeo: thanks geet

Call ends

Geet: maan bahar chale mujhe tumse apne naye segment par thodi salah leni hai

Maan: (smiles) haan chalo

Precap 1: Maneet scooty ride

Precap 2: Pari: "Meera koi bhi rishte ki neev agar jhooth ho tho wo rishta zyada der tak thik nahi sakta"

 PART 16: PAGE 100

 


Edited by piya- - 09 July 2011 at 3:03am

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 5:27am | IP Logged
amazing part...waiting for geet's asli waala confession...cont soon n thnx fo d pm

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 5:33am | IP Logged
waiting for geet confession . awesome

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 5:35am | IP Logged
Omg Geet's semi confession brought tears to my eyes. It was amazing'n

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 5:39am | IP Logged
no piya...!!
i hate u for this...it was so so so dreamy...and finally u made it part of geet's new segment...!!
par haan agar trailor itna mast hai to confession to pata nahi kya hoga...!!!
it was purely magical yar...!!!!
continue soon...!!
waiting for maaneet scooty ride now...!!!
loved the update to the core

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 5:42am | IP Logged

ogod it was very rometic but last mai geet ne Angry sab badal diya... i hate her for this... poor maan kuch bhi samgh nahi paya...

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 5:43am | IP Logged
awesome update...
loved the confession but sad that she changed it as a show themeCry...
loved all the pics...
waiting very eagerly to know how she is gonna say ilu to maan...
pl cont soon

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