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FF(MANEET): DIL MIL GAYE Thrd1 upd prt 21 pg 141) (Page 2)

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 7:44am | IP Logged

woww...nice one...quite different...radio jckey n alll...

loved it...
do continue fast...!!!

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Thanks a ton

mansijani21, Dreamy_Mystique, sofiya-, nosi, maansee, bhanu_rekhag, silkyarora, mona1992, ayesha_geetfan , kahkashansakina, am_sweet_pari

For your encouragement. It means a lot to meSmile 


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Nice part 
intersting
pls cont soon

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hey...

superb os

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Its A very Sweet & Lovely OS
Cont Soon
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Superb start
Do update soon
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hey 

nice start .. loved it 

continue soon and plzz add me to the pm list

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 12:33am | IP Logged

 
 
Banner: Shivangi (CIDManeetNaksh) and Sthuti
 
Thanks a lot for your encouragement friends.Smile Here is the 2nd part of my OS : DIL MIL GAYE

 
PART 2
Geet is ready to leave for work. She is busy packing her college bag since after her shift she needs to rush for her lectures.
Just when she was about to leave she stopped in front of the mirror and started singing.
 
Geet: Ye chand sa roshan chehra zulfo ka rang sunehera ye jheel si neeli aakhen koi raaz hai inme gehra. Taaref karu kya uski jisne MUJHE banaya.
 
Pata nahi aur kitne din mujhe ye gaana khud gaana padega. Apni apni kismat ki baat hai geet ab jab tak teri life mein koi special person entry nahi leta tab tak apne dil ki tasali ke liye tujhe khud ye gaana gungunna padega.
 
Savitri: Geet bete nashta ready hai
 
Geet: Jee mumma aayi.
 
Somehow geet manages to start her scooty and leave for work.
 
MEANWHILE IN Khurana mansion
 
Nakul: (selftalk) Mujhe aaj tak ye baat samaj mein nahi aayi ke office subah 9 baje start hota hai par pata nahi kyun hamare maan sahab subah 7 baje hi taiyar ho jaate hai. Jab bhi iske bare mein kuch pucchta hoon to ek hi jawab milta hai ke " mere sabse important client ke saath meri meeting hai"
Pata nahi ye kaunsa client hai jo har din thik subah 7 baje aa jata hai aur najaane ye kaisi meeting hai jo kabhi khatam hi nahi hoti.
 
Maan overhears this and smiles.
 
Maan :Nakul nashta ready hai?
 
Nakul: Ji sir
 
Maan finishes his breakfast in a hurry & leaves. Car mein baiththe hi he tunes into Just Chill Radio Station
 
Maan (selftalk): Thank God, Geet ka show abhi tak start nahi hua. Aakhir main apni sabse important aur khaas client se milne ke liye kabhi late ho hi nahi sakta.
Bus aur kuch lamho ka intezaar aur phir meri geet ki meethi si aawaj mere kaano par dastak de hi degi ( smiles)
 
RADIO STATION
 
Geet: Good morning Mumbai. Main aapki apni RJ Geet aap sabhika thahedil se aapke apne show " Gal meethe meethe bol " par swagat karti hoon.
 
Maan ( driving d car) : Finally I heard my angel's voice
 
Geet: Shayad aap log ye soch rahe honge aapke dusare not so popular RJ Yash kaha hai. To main aapko batadu ke as usual wo aaj bhi late ho chuke hai aur abhi tak radio station par nahi aaye. Ab kya kare saare ke saare meri tarah sincere to nahi hote na.
 
YASH CMS & SITS BESIDES GEET
 
Yash: O frnds aap sabhi to jaante hi hai ke aapke RJ geet ko mazak karne ka kuch zyaada hi shauk hai. Main aur late aisa na kabhi hua hai aur na hi kabhi hoga.
 
Maan: Ek number ka dramebaaz hai.
 
Before geet can speak anything yash controls d situation telling
 
Yash: Ok guys 3 back to back songs just for u.
 
Maan: Lagta hai dono mein phir se jung chidnewali hai.
 
Yash: Geet tumne aisa kyun kaha ke main popular nahi hoon?
 
Geet : Maine kaunsa jhooth kaha? Are yaar tumhari frnd hoon to mera farz banta hai ke main tumhe sacchaiye se rubaru kara du.
 
MEANWHILE GEET KE MOBILE PAR MAAN KA CALL. GEET LOUDSPEAKER ONKAR DETI HAI.
 
Geet: Hey maan what's up dude?
 
Maan: Hello geet, maine socha ke phir se tum dono mein mahayudh chid gaya hoga to tum dono ka bst frnd hone ke naate main peeche kaise reh jaata.
 
Yash: Exactly, maan ab tu hi geet ko bata ke main youth population mein especially girls mein kitna popular hoon.
 
Maan: Are ye main kaise bata sakta hoon, main koi ladki thodi na hoon?
 
Geet: Well said maan
 
Yash: Are yaar kabhi to mera bhi saath diya kar jab bhi dekho geet ki maala jabta rehta hai.
 
Geet :Hey hello, tumhe itni takleef kyun ho rahi hai. Maan usi ka saath deta hai jo ki sahi ho & maan knows ke maine jo kuch bhi kaha wo 100% right hai. Kyun maan?
 
Maan: Geet tum kabhi galat ho hi nahi sakti
 
Yash: Hey hello, agar sirf geet ke kehne se ye baat proove ho jaati hai ke main popular nahi hoon tho main bhi seena tankar ye keh sakta hoon ke meri khafi badi female fan following hai.
 
Geet :Chup duffer. Tujhe mere aur maan ke alawa koi bhi zyaada der tak bardasht nahi kar sakta.
 
Maan: Ok guys I have a solution. Humhe agar kisi tarah ke conclusion par pouchnna hai tho humhe kisi 4th person ki rai leni hi padegi.
 
Geet:  (on hearing this smiles) O maan u r just too good. Tumhari wajah se ek brilliant idea aa gaya.
 
looks at yash and tells : ab aayega utt pahad ke neeche.
 
Maan: Kaisa idea geet?
 
Geet: Uske liye tumhe show ke end hone ka intezaar karna padega.
 
Maan (thinking) : Tumhare liye to main puri zindagi intezaar kar sakta hoon to ye show ka end kya cheez hai.
 
Geet: Ok maan, I'll just b back. Aur shaamko to hum roz ki tarah apne adde par mil hi rahe hai na. See u there. Bye.
 
SAYING THIS GEET GETS UP AND FOR A FEW MINUTES JUST GOES OUT GIVING A WICKED SMILE TO YASH.
 
Yash: Are maan ye tune kya keh diya pata nahi ab geet ke dimag main kya chal raha hai
 
Maan: Dont worry yash. Geet bahut hi cute aur innocent hai wo kuch galat kar hi nahi sakti. Haan thodi shararati hai lekin ye sharaarate uspar kitna jajhti hai.
 
Yash: My dear frnd. Yaha meri band bajnewali hai aur tu hai ke apna geet puran lekar bait gaya hai.
 
Maan:(smiles) Ok fine, ab situation pura geet ke control mein hai. We can Just wait and watch
 
Yash: Hmmm...
 
CALL ENDS
 
Geet cms back. Yash is desperately waiting for the show to end. Geet is happy watching yash in this situation
Last 5 minutes left for the show
 
Geet: Ok guys i have a very important announcement to make
 
Yash: Pata nahi kya karnewali hai
 
Geet: Kal show ke waqt hum aap logo ke saath ek contest khelenge jiska naam hoga "WIN A DATE WITH YASH CONTEST"
Yes girls u heard it right.
Basically i would be asking u 10 questions about yash and the girl who gets all of them right would win a dream date with one of the most popular bachelors in Mumbai that is none other than our very own RJ Yash
 
So girls here is a lifetime oppourtunity for all of u. Do ur homework well. Till then this is RJ Geet and RJ Yash signing off. Have a rocking day guys. Bye
 
YASH STILL IN A STATE OF SHOCK.
 
Geet (realizes this & smiles): Ok yash tho kal tumhari popularity ke charche puri mumbai mein mashoor ho jaayenge. Right now i have to leave see u in d evening
 
GEET CMS OUT AND CALLS MAAN
 
Geet: Hey maan kaisa laga mera plan?
 
Maan: ( laughs) tumne to yash ko dharamsankat mein phasa diya
 
Geet: Hmm... geet ke saath pange lenewalo ki haalat aise hi hoti hai. ok maan filhaal i need to go see u in the evening
 
Maan: Bye and take care
 
Maan (selftalk): Pata nahi shaam tak waqt kaise gujarega (smiles)
 
PRECAP: Meera: Yash and romantic songs u must b joking geet"
 
Part 3: pg 6
 
 


Edited by piya- - 09 July 2011 at 2:46am

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